周6-6-Saturday 提分读后续写（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢应用文+读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语同步教学课件，围绕“生活趣事”主题开展读后续写训练，包含原文情节解析、续写技巧指导、美文诵读示例及语料积累等学习支架，助力学生完成续写任务。 资料特色突出核心素养培养，通过家庭生活叙事提升语言表达能力，借助文化差异与接纳主题渗透文化意识，以情节逻辑分析训练思维品质，提供实用语料增强学习能力。如美文过渡句和短语积累实例，能有效提升学生续写水平，为教师教学提供结构化资源，适合高三备考及高一高二基础训练。

Saturday　提分读后续写 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 　　阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I could smell garlic and other Italian spices before I opened the front door. Mom was cooking because Uncle Vince was coming for dinner. As the only non-Italian in the family, she wanted to make a good impression on Uncle Vince, who was a very traditional Italian. Mom opened the fridge, where lay two bags of food, one for meatballs and the other for cake balls. She hurriedly took out the bag of “meatballs” which she had cooked and frozen before. However, she didn’t realize that she had made a mistake, but later it became a surprise. 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 Mom carefully put the meatballs into the boiling pot of sauce and tried to make them expand, just like my Italian grandma used to do. The salad was ready, covered with a wet towel to keep it fresh. The table was set; the garlic bread was waiting to be put into the oven; the water for the spaghetti was almost boiling. Uncle Vince arrived in time for dinner. We greeted each other just like Italians usually do. Then, he and Dad sat in the living room, chatting casually while Mom and I served the food. “Come on in, guys. Food is almost ready,” Mom said, with a confident smile on her face. 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 I passed Uncle Vince the bowl full of spaghetti, and then Dad handed him the plate of “meatballs” that had been heated in the sauce. When Uncle Vince saw the size of the “meatballs”, his eyes widened, and he couldn’t help licking (舔) his lips. He helped himself to three “meatballs” while Mom held her breath. Then he picked up one of the “meatballs” with his fork and took a big bite. He stopped for a moment and said, “The taste and spices of this ‘meatball’ are quite interesting. It is different but really good.” Mom finally relaxed. In fact, the “meatballs” were so good that after eating three, Uncle Vince had two more. Mom felt very happy, and the atmosphere of the family dinner was so harmonious. 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 　　The next morning, when Mom opened the fridge for breakfast, she froze, finding the bag of ____________________________meatballs was just there.____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 　　Mom closed the fridge and whispered to Dad and me, “Don’t tell anyone. Wait for further response _______________________from Uncle Vince.”______________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 请参考附录二~六 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 基本要素 主要人物Mom:非意大利人,渴望通过传统美食融入家庭文化,给Vince叔叔留一个好印象,细心(提前准备冷冻食物);Uncle Vince:非常传统的意大利人,对非常规“肉丸”的包容(味道有趣但很好);I:观察者角色,客观描述事件。 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 原文情节线妈妈为迎接传统意大利人Vince叔叔的到来,精心准备晚餐,试图通过地道的意大利菜(肉丸、意面等)给他留一个好印象→她误将冷冻的蛋糕球当作“肉丸”使用,但未察觉错误→妈妈按传统方式烹饪“肉丸”(实为蛋糕球),布置餐桌,营造温馨的家庭氛围→Vince叔叔到来后,家人以意大利式礼仪互动,妈妈和“我”端上食物→Vince叔叔品尝“肉丸”时,发现其味道“不同寻常但很好”,并连吃五个,妈妈从紧张转为放松。 主题家庭生活;文化身份;家庭关系与接纳 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 续写情节 第一段 衔接①:衔接首句中的“当妈妈打开冰箱准备早餐时,她惊呆了,发现那袋肉丸仍在冰箱”,可写妈妈发现弄错食物,感到恐慌。过渡句:妈妈揣摩Vince叔叔有无发现这个错误,是否出于礼貌假装喜欢。衔接②:尾句衔接第二段首句“妈妈关上冰箱,压低声音对爸爸和我说:‘先别告诉任何人,看看Vince叔叔的反应。’”,可写妈妈想象Vince叔叔知道实情后的反应。 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 第二段 衔接③:衔接首句“妈妈关上冰箱,压低声音对爸爸和我说:‘先别告诉任何人,看看Vince叔叔的反应。’”,可写“我”和爸爸妈妈三人之间的眼神互动。过渡句:早餐期间,妈妈悄悄观察Vince叔叔的反应→Vince叔叔仍沉浸在晚餐的愉快中,未识破真相→家中温馨的气氛→妈妈决定下次说出实情。尾句:(协同原文第二段中的later it became a surprise+主题升华)将“意外”与“回忆”并置,点明家庭温馨聚餐的核心是“共同创造的回忆”,而非完美无缺,意外反增趣味。 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 　　The next morning, when Mom opened the fridge for breakfast, she froze, finding the bag of meatballs was just there. It dawned on her that (她突然明白) the “meatballs” Uncle Vince had enjoyed so much were actually cake balls she had mistakenly taken out of the freezer. Panic filled her (一阵慌乱涌上心头) as she recalled how Uncle Vince had praised a lot about them. She wondered if he had noticed the mix-up or if he was just being polite. The realization was both funny and worrying, leaving her in disbelief as she imagined Uncle Vince’s reaction if he found out the truth. 美文诵读 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 Mom closed the fridge and whispered to Dad and me, “Don’t tell anyone. Wait for further response from Uncle Vince.” We exchanged amused glances (交换……的眼神), the secret creating a bond between us. As breakfast progressed, I could see Mom stealing glances at (偷偷瞄向) Uncle Vince, who seemed unaware of the mix-up, still enjoying the happy feeling of last night’s dinner. The air was filled with laughter and casual and cheerful talk, but Mom’s mind was racing (屋里充满欢声笑语,唯 美文诵读 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 独妈妈心绪不宁,“无灵”主语句). Finally, she decided to come clean (坦白) to Uncle Vince the next time he visited. After all, the joy of family meals was in the memories we created together, even if they were mixed with unexpected surprises (毕竟,家庭聚餐的快乐在于我们共同创造的回忆——哪怕这些回忆里,偶尔夹杂着意想不到的惊喜). 美文诵读 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 佳句　The realization was both funny and worrying, leaving her in disbelief as she imagined Uncle Vince’s reaction if he found out the truth. (现在分词短语作结果状语+时间状语从句)  原文续写语料积累　①help oneself/sb. to 为(自己或某人)取用　②hold one’s breath 屏息以待;焦虑地等待;闭气;屏气 第 1 页 Week 6　询问信&“生活趣事”读后续写 $