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Week 5　优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 Monday　跟着名著学续写 　　《大卫·科波菲尔》是英国小说家查尔斯·狄更斯创作的长篇小说,是他“最偏爱的孩子”。小说讲述了主人公大卫从幼年至中年的生活历程,融进了作者本人的许多生活经历。 阅读下面的节选部分(有改动),学习仿效文中利用(肢体)动作、神态、语言等描写表现人物的绝望的手法。 　　I knew that Aunt Betsey would storm out when she discovered I was a boy not a girl. But I also knew that she was my only hope. Maybe if I told her about everything, she’d feel sorry for me and take me in.① I wrote to Peggotty asking for Aunt Betsey’s address and for half a guinea to set me on my way. Peggotty replied quickly, enclosing the money and telling me Aunt Betsey lived near Dover. I packed my things into a heavy box and clasped (攥紧) the shiny half guinea coin in my hand.② All I needed was some way of getting to Dover, and soon enough, I spotted a man with a horse and cart. “Excuse me!”I called out, putting the coin in my mouth and putting the heavy box down.③“Can you help me? I want to get to Dover.”The man walked over and in a flash, he leaped at me and grabbed my throat.④ The coin flew out of my mouth and landed in his hand.⑤ Then he snatched my box off the ground and jumped onto his cart with it. “Give me my things, you thief!”I yelled, running after the cart and choking back sobs of fury and desperation.⑥ I chased him for several minutes but I was no match for his horse. I fell further and further behind, until the cart completely disappeared from view. I slumped down (瘫坐) at the side of the road.⑦ The half guinea and all my belongings were gone. I was now in total despair.⑧ ①心理活动描写:贝特西姨母成了“我”唯一的希望 ②具体动作描写:双连动词构成动作链 ③具体动作描写:动词+非谓语动词+非谓语动词,构成动作链 ④具体动作描写:三连动词构成动作链 ⑤运用拟人的修辞手法,描写钱被抢走 ⑥语言描写+动作描写+神态描写+情感词汇,刻画了“我”的绝望和愤怒 ⑦场景描写+动作描写,表现“我”的难过、绝望和无奈 ⑧直接用情感词汇表现“我”的绝望无助 仿效再背诵　尝试仿效上文中的描写方式补全短文,并背诵 　　I panicked. ①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我绕着营地跑着,喊着, 动词+非谓语动词), but there was no one there. ②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我感到很无助和孤独). I realized how much I’d relied on them. How was I going to survive on my own? ③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我绝望地一屁股坐在地上). “I’m going to die here!” I ④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (强忍住绝望的哭泣). Then I calmed down a bit and tried to think. (改编自《失落的世界》)  Tuesday　黄金素材巧背练/默写 素材5　失望、绝望、羞愧、尴尬 必背好词 名词/动词 disappointment, hopelessness, desperation, despair, shame, embarrassment, disappoint, embarrass 形容词/副词 disappointed, desperate, hopeless, ashamed, embarrassed, awkward face/ cheek/ eye ①sb. blush/flush with shame羞愧得脸红　②one’s face/cheeks burn(s)/be hot/(be) flushed with embarrassment脸/双颊窘得发烫/通红　③blood rushes to/colour floods one’s face脸通红　④give sb. a look of desperation绝望地看了某人一眼　⑤drop/lower one’s eyes垂眼 voice ①in an embarrassed voice/tone; in a voice/tone of embarrassment以尴尬的语气　②hear the despair in one’s voice听出某人声音中的绝望　③give an embarrassed cough尴尬地咳了一声　④weep bitter tears of disappointment失望得痛哭流涕　⑤erupt into desperate sobs绝望地啜泣 head hang/drop/lower/bow one’s head in shame/embarrassment羞愧/尴尬地低下头 heart ①sink into despair陷入绝望　②be overcome/overwhelmed/seized by hopelessness非常绝望　③abandon oneself to despair陷入绝望 必背佳句　先背诵再完成《6分钟素材默写》默写5 Ⅰ.用面部和眼睛+情感词汇描写失望、羞愧和尴尬 1.He stared at me, disappointment written all over his face. 他满脸失望地看着我。 2.A look of embarrassment spread/flashed across/crossed his face. 他的脸上掠过尴尬的神情。 3.I froze. I felt the heat rising into my cheeks. 我呆住了。我感觉我的脸颊滚烫。 4.The girl sat there, ashamed, the blood rushing to her face.女孩羞愧地坐在那里,满脸涨得通红。 5.His face glowed with embarrassment.他窘得满脸通红。 6.Her expression showed her disappointment.从她的表情可以看出她很失望。 7.Charley blushed and looked away, embarrassed.查理脸红了,难为情地掉头看向别处。 8.I dropped my eyes and stared at my feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed I was.我垂下眼,盯着自己的脚,希望没人注意到我有多么尴尬。 Ⅱ.嘴巴、声音里透露的失望和绝望 9.“Sure,” I said cheerfully, keeping the disappointment from my voice. “当然。”我高兴地说,努力不让失望从声音里流露出来。 10.She swallowed her disappointment, saying, “That’s OK.” 她抑制住自己的失望,说:“没事。” 11.She uttered a cry of despair.她发出了绝望的叫声。 12.Despair choked her words. 她绝望得说不出话来。 Ⅲ.用心等描写羞愧、失望和绝望 13.He felt a deep sense of shame.他深感羞愧。 14.Her heart was torn with despair.她绝望得心都碎了。 15.After a few weeks, our confidence gave way to hopelessness. 几周过后,我们信心破灭,取而代之的是绝望。 16.A feeling/sense of disappointment/despair seized/overwhelmed/swallowed him.(“无灵”主语句) 他深感失望/绝望。 17.Feelings of shame and anger boiled up inside me, but just as I felt I could not bear it any longer, Helen Burns walked past me and lifted her eyes to mine. 我心中充满羞愧和愤怒,但是我正觉得再也无法忍受时,海伦·伯恩斯从我面前走过,抬起头来看着我。(《简·爱》) 18.My hopes were all dead, and my future was empty. I lay on bed, while darkness swam around me. 我的一切希望都破灭了,我的未来成了泡影。我躺在床上,黑暗慢慢将我笼罩了起来。 Ⅳ.用肢体动作描写羞愧、尴尬和失望 19.Embarrassment rooted her to the spot. 她尴尬得呆住了。 20.He rubbed his hands together with embarrassment. 他尴尬地搓着手。 21.His shoulders sank with disappointment. 他失望得双肩都耷拉下来了。 22.The boy hung/lowered/bowed his head in shame.男孩羞愧地低下了头。 23.Phil stood, his head bowed in shame.菲尔站在那儿,羞愧地低下了头。 Ⅴ.融情于景/场景描写 24.The heavy rain mirrored his disappointment. 滂沱大雨映照出他内心的失望。 25.A cold wind carried his despair. 刺骨寒风裹挟着他的失望。 26.Feeling as if the whole world were watching her, she was filled with embarrassment. (夸张) 她感觉全世界都在注视着她,窘得要命。 27.An embarrassed silence fell in the room, and there was a rather unpleasant look in Becky’s eyes. 房间里陷入一阵尴尬的沉默。贝姬的眼神颇显不悦。(牛津英语6 《名利场》) 练能生巧 Ⅰ.利用并仿效素材补全以下各句,并背诵 1.她羞愧难当,脸涨得通红。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ (so ... that倒装句) 2.杰克呆住了,他窘得脸发烫。 __________________________________________________ 3.他感觉全世界都在看着自己,他羞愧地低下头。 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ Ⅱ.按要求完成以下各题 1.一切似乎都不顺利,丹绝望了。 (1)先尝试概括描述,将意思表达清楚。 Everything seemed to be going wrong. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　. (形容词/介词短语)  (2)在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。 ①Everything seemed to be going wrong. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(绝望得心都要碎了)  ②Everything seemed to be going wrong. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(灿烂的笑容变为绝望的表情)  ③Everything seemed to be going wrong. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(深感绝望,“无灵”主语句)  2.根据所给情节,用一句话续写描写“我”的尴尬。注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。 I was watching the stranger secretly when he met my eyes with the strangest expression on his face. (1)__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________(垂眸看着脚,希望无人注意自己的尴尬) (2)__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________(脸上掠过尴尬) (3)__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________(满脸尴尬) (4)__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________(迟疑,揣摩如何掩饰尴尬) Ⅲ.续写微作文 请根据所给情节,尝试续写Jenny在比赛中摔倒在地后的情节。利用动作、神态和语言描写等表现人物的尴尬、羞愧、绝望等(词数80个左右) Jenny tripped and fell heavily on the running track. Kids laughed. ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ Wednesday　续写句式多维练 　　情感描写句式——面部表情/眼睛里的情感 高分句式13　(A look/An expression of+)情感名词+特定动词(短语)+one’s face　……的神色从某人脸上…… 特定动词(短语)有cross, come over, flash across, register on, spread across,主语可改为a(n)+情感形容词+look/expression。 ①Shock registered on everyone’s face.人人都面露震惊之色。 ②They shook hands briefly and a strained, unfamiliar look of embarrassment came over Gatsby’s face.两人短暂地握了握手,盖茨比的脸上掠过一抹局促又生疏的尴尬神色。 高分句式14　情感名词+was written all over one’s face　某人脸上满是…… 该句式可升级为with+情感名词+written all over one’s face,主语+谓语。 Berg tilted his head and curiosity was written all over his face.伯格歪着脑袋,脸上满是好奇。 高分句式15　Sb. saw/noticed/could see/notice+the情感名词+in one’s eyes/on one’s face　某人注意到/看到…… I could see the doubt on his face, but it didn’t deter me.我能看出他脸上的迟疑,但这并未打消我的念头。 高分句式16　One’s eyes were full of/were filled with+(tears of+)情感名词　某人眼里满是……(泪水) 该句式可升级为with复合结构或独立主格+主语+谓语。 “I thought you wanted a phone,”Mother said, (with) her eyes full of surprise.“我还以为你想要一部手机呢。”母亲开口说道,眼神里满是诧异。 练能生巧 Ⅰ.用括号内单词的正确形式或根据汉语提示补全以下各句,并背诵 1.　　　　 (amaze) again registered on Rodney’s face.  2.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (他满脸激动和自豪) as he crossed the finish line.  3.　　　　　　　　　　　 (难以置信的表情), then a grin, spread across his face.  4.Excitement 　　　　(write) all over his face as he unwrapped the birthday present.  5.She 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(注意到了他眼里的悲伤) when he shared his past.  Ⅱ.对Ⅰ中各句进行一对一仿写,并背诵 1.听到那声吼叫,玛丽的脸上露出了惊恐的神色。 __________________________________________________ 2.他满脸愧疚。 __________________________________________________ 3.恼怒的神色从她脸上掠过。 __________________________________________________ 4.听到儿子已经平安到家的消息时,她的脸上满是欣慰。 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 5.当她站起身准备演讲时,我们能看到她脸上的坚定。 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ Ⅲ.微续写 根据汉语提示或用所给词的正确形式补全下面的“优秀品行”类续写片段,并诵读背诵 It helped me see my worth wasn’t in grades, but honesty and effort. Eventually, I told my parents everything, my heart pounding. I ①　　　　 (admit) my mistakes, my fears, and how I had let them down. I also shared how ChatGPT had helped me realize the importance of honesty. As they listened, ②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (他们脸上流露出欣慰的表情). As my dad put a hand on my shoulder, ③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我能看到他眼神里的那份理解). He said, “We’re disappointed, but we’re glad you’re owning up. We’ll help you get back on track.” My mom wiped away a tear and nodded. The weight on my chest lifted.  Thursday　巧学续写微技能 好题探索　陌生司机的善意　(2024·新高考Ⅰ卷) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 为何此次经历令人难忘? 　　I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.① That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.②After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.③ →人物互动场景描写,画面感很强 Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face.④“We made it,”he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.⑥ He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out (散去).⑦ At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine.⑧ I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message:“Out of order. Sorry.”⑤ →三连动作链(跳下、狂奔、迅速放卡) +不定式作结果状语: 渲染情势紧急和“我”的焦虑 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 　　I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. (请参考素材6,素材8,主题素材7,高分句式1-55,附录二-三) 理6要素 ①Who I, Gunter ②When a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September→four days later ③Where airport→the bus station ④What Despite catching the last bus to Prague, I failed to pay the taxi fare to Gunter. ⑤Problem 无法支付出租车费 ⑥Theme problem→solution:陌生人的善意、诚实守信 微技能1　读原文和首句　理2情线 微技能2　思续写情节　“以旧带新”2原则(“321”原则——3衔接、2过渡、1主题;“CARE”原则——coherence, action, response, emotion) Para. 1　I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. ◆衔接1　衔接首句中的“告诉Gunter坏消息”: “我”说了什么(“我”的解释、计划)? ◆过渡句1　Gunter听到“我”的解释后的反应(担忧、安慰)(可添加神态描写)→“我”许诺四天后回维也纳支付车费(协同段二首句)→Gunter同意“我”的解决办法。 ◆衔接2　尾句衔接段二首句中的“给Gunter打电话”:交换电话号码,“我”登上巴士。 Para. 2　Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. ◆衔接3　衔接首句中的“如约给Gunter打电话”:Gunter接到“我”电话的反应(高兴、惊喜)。 ◆过渡句2　见面后发生了什么(拥抱→“我”支付车费, 按照诺言支付小费→Gunter拒绝小费→成为朋友)? ◆结尾+主题　协同原文首段中的a cold, wet and unforgettable evening 和 take a bus to Prague+感悟:Gunter的善意把“我”送到目的地,使在一个寒冷夜晚发生的故事成为“我”温暖而难忘的回忆。 微技能3　思伏笔巧协同　原续更融洽 捕捉原文所设伏笔,充盈细节并合理协同,以使续写情节围绕主题,且在逻辑、内容上更符合原文基调。 可协同处 原文伏笔(线索) 续写部分协同设置 人设的协同 Para.2 Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. (warm-hearted, kind) Para.3 Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. (标志性笑容) 段一协同描写Gunter接受“我”四天后支付车费的请求 段二协同描写Gunter大大的笑容 情节的协同 Para.1 I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. I ran like crazy→时间紧急 段一协同描写“我”不能支付车费的原因和赶车的急迫性 Para.1 The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi ... (见面地点) 段二交代“我”和Gunter在机场见面,并协同the moment时间状语表达法 主题的协同 Para.1 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. (3个形容词描写环境) 段二尾句协同cold (利用warm对比描写), unforgettable (memorable),并协同地点Prague 微技能4　协同原文语言特点　写3好表达(准确、丰富、地道) 原文语言特点　1.动作链+修饰结构(介词短语/非谓语结构/时间状语从句):双连动作链(原文①②③)、三连动作链(原文④⑤)和时间状语从句(原文⑥)生动呈现人物动作。2.“无灵”主语句(原文⑦)。3.全部倒装句(原文⑧)。4.夸张修辞:like crazy, what seemed like a century。5.地道的具体化动词(短语):fish out, roll into, play along, flash, pop等。6.镜头切换互动交替描写人物互动(原文中已标)。7.简洁的人物对话:直接引语很简洁,大部分为间接引语。 续写第一段(场景1 解释困境　场景2 Gunter应允　场景3 互留电话号码) 场景2　Gunter应允(肢体动作+神态描写) 1.一阵尴尬的沉默后,他只是点点头,说:“好,我接受这个解决方案,也相信你。”我向他灿烂一笑。 After an uncomfortable pause, he simply nodded, 　　　　, “OK. I accept this solution and trust you.” I 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.   场景3　互留电话号码(时间状语从句过渡) 2.我们交换了电话号码后,我上了车,向他挥了挥手。(双连动作链) After we exchanged our phone numbers, I boarded the bus and 　　　　　　　　　　　　.   续写第二段(场景4 电话约见　场景5 机场相见　场景6 拒酬约酒) 场景5　机场相见 3.我们一在机场碰面,我就大步走向他,伸出手紧紧地拥抱他。 (三连动作链) The instant we met at the airport, I strode to him, 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.   场景6　拒酬约酒 4.“下次你到维也纳的时候给我打电话,请我喝杯啤酒。”他笑着说。我高兴地点点头。 “Call me and buy me a beer next time you are in Vienna,” __________________________________________________. 吸睛结尾句 主题升华式 5.Gunter的善意不仅把我送到了目的地,而且把一个寒冷的夜晚变成了一个温暖且令人难忘的夜晚,我会在未来的岁月中珍惜它。 Gunter’s kindness had not only got me to my destination 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　I would cherish for years to come.  I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. I explained to him the urgency of catching the bus, emphasizing that otherwise I would be forced to stay overnight and buy a new ticket the next morning. He looked at me with concern. I then added I would return to Vienna in 4 days and that I would pay him then with an extra 10. After an uncomfortable pause, he simply nodded, saying, “OK. I accept this solution and trust you.” I flashed him the biggest smile. After we exchanged our phone numbers, I boarded the bus and gave a huge wave to him. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Recognizing my voice, he sounded pleasantly surprised. The instant we met at the airport, I strode to him, reached out and hugged him tightly. I handed him the taxi fare and gave him the extra 10 tip I had promised, which he would not accept. “Call me and buy me a beer next time you are in Vienna,” he said with a big smile. I happily nodded. Gunter's kindness had not only got me to my destination but also turned a cold evening into a warm and memorable one I would cherish for years to come. 原文续写语料积累 ①　　　　　　　　　　　 降落;着陆　　　　　　　②　　　　　　　　　　　 掏出,摸出  ③　　　　　　　　　　　 向他露出抱歉的微笑 ④　　　　　　　　　　　 配合;假意顺从  Friday　练续写最新好题 读后续写　老师的白裤子 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mr. Such wore the same old baggy trousers to school, day in and day out. “I wish he’d get some new ones,” Janey sighed. Derek sighed too. Then entered Mr. Such in a white brand new suit. Janey and Derek’s mouths fell open. Just then Mrs. Venn came out of the kitchen with a bowl of custard (蛋奶糊). Shocked at Mr. Such’s new suit, she gave a little jump. The custard looped (划一道弧线) into the air, straight for Mr. Such. Derek saw it coming and stepped smartly in the way. Derek was covered in custard, but the new suit was saved. Mr. Such changed back into his old trousers, and hung his new suit on the cupboard door in case of any accidents. The last lesson of the day was art. Janey painted a green monster, but Derek accidentally upset her green paint. He reached behind him and rubbed his hands on the towel. But it wasn’t the towel. It was Mr. Such’s new trousers! Shocked, Janey grabbed some paper and rubbed at the green marks, but they got worse. Janey whispered, “We can clean them up after school.” When Mr. Such came over, the suit was still on the cupboard door. “Oh,” he said. “I love your green monster. That’s a lovely colour.” Then he wandered off. Derek threw the trousers into the sink, squirted (喷) “washing-up liquid” hard at them. It was glue! They secretly took the trousers to Derek’s house. They covered them with hot water, and washing powder, washing-up liquid and scrubbed (擦洗) them with a brush. The water foamed into a pile of bubbles as high as their elbows. Nothing worked. They went to the dry-cleaner’s by bus, but they left the trousers behind. When they found the bus, the driver was wiping his hands on an oily rag and threw it into a box. As it sailed through the air, they spotted it was the trousers. They saw the oil from the bus, the glue and the green paint. “We have to tell the truth.” sighed Janey. On Monday Derek and Janey found Mr. Such in the hall. “Mr. Such,” Janey said bravely, the suit on its hanger from Janey’s finger, “We’ve got something to tell you.” 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 　　But before she could say another word, Mrs. Venn burst in screaming, “The chips in the kitchen ____________________________________________________________ are on fire!”____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 　　The headmaster promised Mr. Such another brand new suit. ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ (请参考素材5,素材13,素材9,素材1,主题素材1,主题素材11,主题素材4,高分句式1-55,附录二-三) Saturday　练续写最新好题 读后续写　“可怕的”动物救援者 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night. I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room, I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off. It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers—very big, tough-looking bikers. I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men—all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club—standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event? A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 　　I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 　　When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ (请参考素材1-13,主题素材4,高分句式1-55,附录二-三) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Week 5　优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 Monday　跟着名著学续写 仿效再背诵 ①I ran round the camp, shouting ②I felt so helpless and lonely ③I slumped down to the ground in despair ④choked back sobs of desperation Tuesday　黄金素材巧背练 练能生巧 　 Ⅰ.1.So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face./So ashamed was she that the color flooded her cheeks. 2.Jack froze, and his face burned with embarrassment. 3.Feeling as if the whole world were watching him, he hung/dropped/lowered his head in shame. Ⅱ.1.(1)Dan was desperate/hopeless/in despair/in desperation (2)①Dan’s heart was torn with despair. ②Dan’s bright smile was replaced with a look of total despair. ③A feeling of despair seized/overwhelmed/swallowed Dan. 2.(1)I dropped/lowered my eyes and stared at my feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed I was. (2)I froze, and a look of embarrassment passed/spread across my face. (3)I stood there clumsily, embarrassment written all over my red/burning face. (4)I hesitated for a moment, wondering how to hide/disguise/mask my inner embarrassment. Ⅲ.Jenny tripped and fell heavily on the running track. Kids laughed. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. Feeling as if the whole world were laughing at her, she felt the heat rising to her cheeks. How stupid I was to fall over in the race! Embarrassment and the feeling of failure flooded over her. She slumped on the ground, tears of despair streaming down her face. Wednesday　续写句式多维练 练能生巧 　 Ⅰ.1.Amazement　2.Excitement and pride were written all over his face　3.A look of disbelief　4.was written　5.noticed the sadness in his eyes Ⅱ.1.As Mary heard the roar, fear registered on her face. 2.Guilt was written all over his face. 3.A look of annoyance flashed across/spread across/crossed her face. 4.Relief was written all over her face when she heard that her son had arrived home safely. 5.We could see the determination on her face as she stood up to give the speech. Ⅲ.①admitted　②relief registered on/crossed/flashed across/spread across their faces　③I could see the understanding in his eyes Thursday　巧学续写微技能 微技能4 1.saying; flashed him the biggest smile 2.gave a huge wave to him 3.reached out and hugged him tightly 4.he said with a big smile. I happily nodded 5.but also turned a cold evening into a warm and memorable one 原文续写语料积累 ①touch down　②fish out　③flash him an apologetic smile　④play along Friday　练续写最新好题 读后续写 　 基本要素 主要人物 Derek, Janey, Mr. Such, Mrs.Venn 原文情节线 Mr. Such整天穿着同一条旧裤子,这一天他穿了一套新衣服,却意外连连→衣服差点被蛋奶糊弄脏→下午最后一节课后,Derek打翻了Janey的颜料,无意中在Mr. Such的新裤子上擦了手→Derek粗心地把胶水当成了洗衣液,后来裤子在公交车上又被弄上了油污。 主题 诚实 续写情节 第一段 衔接①:衔接首句中的“厨房中的薯条着火了”,再结合第二段首句“校长答应给Mr. Such另买一套新衣服”,可写Mr. Such 是否跑去厨房查看,如何灭火。过渡句:是否用衣服灭火?火是否被扑灭了?两个学生是否说明真相?衔接②:尾句衔接第二段首句中的“另买一套新衣服”,可写衣服是否被毁,Mr. Such是什么反应。 第二段 衔接③:衔接首句“校长答应给Mr. Such另买一套新衣服”,可写Mr. Such是什么反应。过渡句:两个学生是什么反应?尾句(对话式结尾):两个学生对衣服颜色的建议。 美文诵读 　　But before she could say another word, Mrs. Venn burst in screaming, “The chips in the kitchen are on fire!” Mr. Such dashed to the kitchen. A cloud of blue smoke rolled into the hall. He cried, “I need a cloth to put out the flames.” Seeing the suit on its hanger from Janey’s finger, he grabbed the suit and covered the flames. The suit was completely ruined. Janey tried to tell Mr. Such about the green stains and how they tried to clean them off. But Mr. Such didn’t really listen. “Never mind,” he kept saying. Mr. Such was the hero of the hour so he was rather pleased with himself. The headmaster promised Mr. Such another brand new suit. He was wild with happiness (十分高兴). “Good,” said Mr. Such in a happy voice,“I can get a nice, bright white one.”“Oh, don’t do that,” said Janey quickly. Mr. Such was confused. Janey explained with a smile,“Well, we think green would suit you better, don’t we, Derek?”“Much better,” Derek nodded with a wide grin. “We think green’s a lovely colour.” 佳句　Seeing the suit on its hanger from Janey’s finger, he grabbed the suit and covered the flames. (非谓语动词,肢体动作描写) 原文续写语料积累　①day in and day out 日复一日　②loop into the air 在空中划了道弧线 Saturday　练续写最新好题 读后续写 　 基本要素 主要人物 I, the bikers 原文情节线 “我”因看到动物救援纪录片的广告想去观影支持→途中却被一群外表强悍、看起来令人生畏的摩托车手吓到,内心犹豫、恐惧→“我”确定了地点与时间无误后,还是心怀忐忑地进入了电影院,并希望电影结束后,这些摩托车手能够离开。 主题 不以貌取人、关爱动物 续写情节 第一段 衔接①:衔接首句中的“看到更多的摩托车手”,可写他们在做什么,“我”的反应是什么(感到更害怕,协同原文的my heart was pounding,可描写心脏跳得更厉害)。过渡句:“我”找个角落的位置坐下,心里会想什么(协同原文的warning bells,可描写心理活动)?衔接②:尾句衔接第二段首句中的“当电影开始时”,可写灯光暗下来,影片要开始播放了。 第二段 衔接③:衔接首句中的“摩托车手是动物救援组织的成员”,可写“我”在纪录片里看到了他们俱乐部帮助无家可归的狗狗。过渡句:“我”从害怕变为了感动。尾句:(协同原文的the hotel和I would be safer inside the theater)回宾馆的路上,“我”经过摩托车手们的身边时感觉很安全。 美文诵读 　　I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They filled most of the seats and were chatting heatedly. Their insignia shone under the light, making my heart pound even more violently. I quickly found an empty seat in a corner, hoping to stay unnoticed. Warning bells sounded in my mind again. Why would these tough⁃looking men be interested in a film about helping dogs? Should I rush out immediately? Just at that moment, the lights in the theater dimmed (剧院里的灯光暗下来) and the bikers quieted down, signalling the start of the film. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The documentary showed the efforts of animal shelters across the country and featured a touching scene where a motorcycle club actively supported local shelters, rescuing and caring for abandoned dogs. The bikers cheered and laughed proudly as they saw themselves on the screen. My fear gave way to relief and a great sense of admiration (我的恐惧变成了如释重负和巨大的钦佩) for these large tough⁃looking men with the gentlest hearts. On my way back to the hotel, I felt extremely safe when passing by the bikers, aware that people’s actions speak much louder than their appearances (人们的行为比外表更有说服力). 佳句　The documentary showed the efforts of animal shelters across the country and featured a touching scene where a motorcycle club actively supported local shelters, rescuing and caring for abandoned dogs. (定语从句+分词短语作状语)  原文续写语料积累　①brave v. 勇敢面对;冒(风险);经受(困难)　②feel an urge to do 渴望做　③resign oneself to doing 听任;只好接受　④Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. (“无灵”主语句)我脑海中警铃大作,心怦怦直跳。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 默写 5 　 先背诵P040素材5必背佳句,再默写 A组 1.He stared at me, disappointment __________ (write) all over his face. 2.________________________________________他的脸上掠过尴尬的神情。 3.I __________ (freeze). I felt the heat __________ (rise) into my cheeks. 4.The girl sat there, ashamed, the blood __________ (rush) to her face. 5.________________________________________他窘得满脸通红。 6.________________________________________从她的表情可以看出她很失望。 7.Charley __________ (blush) and looked away, __________ (embarrass). 8.I dropped my eyes and stared at my feet, hoping no one would notice ________________________________________ (我有多么尴尬). 9.“Sure,” I said cheerfully, ______________________________ (努力不让失望从声音里流露出来). 10.She ________________________________________(抑制住自己的失望), saying, “That’s OK.” 11.________________________________________她发出了绝望的叫声。 12.________________________________________她绝望得说不出话来。 13.________________________________________他深感羞愧。 B组 14.________________________________________她绝望得心都碎了。 15.After a few weeks, ______________________________ (我们信心破灭,取而代之的是绝望). 16.________________________________________他深感失望/绝望。 17.Feelings of shame and anger __________ (boil) up inside me, but just as I felt I could not bear it any longer, Helen Burns walked past me and ____________________ (抬起头来看着我). 18.My hopes were all dead, and my future was empty. I lay on bed, while darkness __________ (swim) around me. 19.________________________________________她尴尬得呆住了。 20.________________________________________他尴尬地搓着手。 21.________________________________________他失望得双肩都耷拉下来了。 22.________________________________________男孩羞愧地低下了头。 23.Phil stood, ________________________________________(羞愧地低下了头). 24.________________________________________滂沱大雨映照出他内心的失望。 25.________________________________________刺骨寒风裹挟着他的失望。 26.________________________________________ (感觉全世界都在注视着她), she was filled with embarrassment. 27.________________________________________ (房间里陷入一阵尴尬的沉默), and there was a rather unpleasant look in Becky’s eyes. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $