Week 12 Wednesday 续写句式多维练（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语同步教学课件，聚焦“志愿服务/社区力量”主题，以构建画面感的倒装句为核心学习支架，包含高分句式讲解、例句示范、原句升级练习、一对一仿写及微续写任务，助力学生掌握续写表达技巧。 资料特色突出，创新采用“结构解析+实例示范+分层练习”模式，通过方向副词、地点短语等倒装句式训练，提升语言表达生动性（语言能力），培养情境转化与逻辑衔接能力（思维品质），适合高三学生应对升学考试写作需求，为教师提供实用教学素材，帮助学生打造写作亮点。

Week 12 志愿服务/社区力量&哭泣篇 Wednesday　续写句式多维练 第 ‹#› 页 Week 12　志愿服务/社区力量&哭泣篇 构建极具画面感的倒装句 续写中适当用一些倒装句式能使表达更生动,让阅卷老师眼前一亮。 高分句式40　表运动方向的副词away, off, down, up, in .../地点副词短语+go/flee/run/rush/dash等表运动的谓语动词+名词 在描写人或物空间位置变化时,可灵活使用这类倒装句作为衔接过渡。 ①Down the hill ran the children.孩子们跑下山了。 ②Hearing the dog barking fiercely, away fled the thief.听到狗狂吠,小偷逃走了。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 12　志愿服务/社区力量&哭泣篇 高分句式41　表地点的副词/介词(短语)+ be/lie/stand/sit等静态动词+主语 这个句式可用来描写静态的场景,非常生动,有画面感,使读者身临其境。 In front of her was another long passage and she just managed to catch sight of the rabbit hurrying down it.在她的前面是另一条长长的通道,她正好看到兔子匆匆沿着通道跑去。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 12　志愿服务/社区力量&哭泣篇 高分句式42　so+情感形容词+be+主语+that ... 该句式中的so也可修饰表情感的副词,如happily, angrily等。 So scared was I that I could hardly move an inch.我吓得寸步难行。 高分句式43　not until +从句/时间状语+助动词/情态动词/系动词+主语+谓语 注意该句式从句不倒装,主句用部分倒装,可用于衔接过渡。 Not until then did a smile light up George’s face.直到那时,乔治脸上才露出喜色。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 12　志愿服务/社区力量&哭泣篇 练能生巧 Ⅰ.用倒装句升级以下各句,并背诵 1.During the exam, I was so nervous that my mind went blank. __________________________________________________ 2.A deep voice came out of the darkness. __________________________________________________ 3.Tom rushed off without so much as a “goodbye”. __________________________________________________ During the exam, so nervous was I that my mind went blank. Out of the darkness came a deep voice. Off rushed Tom without so much as a “goodbye”. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 12　志愿服务/社区力量&哭泣篇 4.A small stream runs at the foot of the mountain. __________________________________________________ 5.An expression of horror stood on his face. __________________________________________________ At the foot of the mountain runs a small stream. On his face stood an expression of horror. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 12　志愿服务/社区力量&哭泣篇 Ⅱ.对Ⅰ中各句进行一对一仿写,并背诵 1.她非常绝望,哭得死去活来。 __________________________________________________ 2.从山谷中传来美妙的歌声。 __________________________________________________ 3.车突然停下,从车里走出一个女孩儿。 __________________________________________________ So desperate was she that she cried her heart out. From the valley came the beautiful song. The car suddenly stopped and out stepped a girl. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 12　志愿服务/社区力量&哭泣篇 4.蓝天下,河水在阳光下闪闪发光。 __________________________________________________ 5.他涨红的脸上满是尴尬。 __________________________________________________ Under the blue sky glitters the river. On his red face was a look of embarrassment. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 12　志愿服务/社区力量&哭泣篇 Ⅲ.微续写 根据汉语提示,利用倒装句填写空白部分,使之构成一个完整的故事。 As night fell, ①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (简太累了,她得停下来过夜). Jane climbed onto a rock. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom. Jane rose at dawn, hungry and thirsty. ②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 [从远处传来水滴落(trickling)的声音]. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, so tired was Jane that she had to stop for the night At/From a distance came the sound of water trickling 第 ‹#› 页 Week 12　志愿服务/社区力量&哭泣篇 ③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (然后传来一个熟悉的声音). Jane was wild with joy. ④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (Tom站在一棵大树下) who was anxious when she was nowhere to be found.  then came a familiar voice Under a big tree stood Tom 第 ‹#› 页 Week 12　志愿服务/社区力量&哭泣篇 $