Week 7 Wednesday 续写句式多维练（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语同步教学课件，围绕“逐梦人生 & 悲伤过渡篇”主题，聚焦时间与空间衔接过渡句训练，包含高分句式讲解、补全练习、仿写及微续写片段，为学生构建从基础到应用的学习支架。 资料特色突出，融合教材与《哈利·波特》等经典文本例句，通过“讲解-练习-仿写-应用”分层设计，提升语言表达连贯性（语言能力），培养逻辑衔接思维（思维品质），助力学生掌握高分句式，也为教师提供系统教学资源，有效提升教学效率。适合高中生，尤其帮助需强化写作衔接能力的学生应对考试续写等题型。

Week 7 逐梦人生&悲伤难过篇 Wednesday　续写句式多维练 第 ‹#› 页 Week 7　逐梦人生&悲伤难过篇 巧妙衔接过渡句 时间衔接除了利用表时间的衔接过渡词汇,如at the moment, at the same time, meanwhile, then, in the end等,也可以利用时间状语从句进行过渡,以使语句间更连贯。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 7　逐梦人生&悲伤难过篇 高分句式21　As soon as/Once/Immediately/Directly/Instantly/The moment(minute/second/instant)等引导的时间状语从句,主语+谓语　一……就…… ①The summer heat hit me as soon as I got off the flight.我刚下飞机,夏日的热浪就扑面而来。(译林B2) ②“Where’s my letter?”said Harry, the moment Uncle Vernon had squeezed through the door.“我的信呢?”弗农姨父刚刚挤进门,哈利就问。(《哈利·波特》) 第 ‹#› 页 Week 7　逐梦人生&悲伤难过篇 高分句式22　主语+had no sooner done ... than+主语+did .../主语+had hardly done ... when+主语+did ... 　刚……这时…… 主语+be about to do/be doing/be on the point of doing ... when ... 　正要/正在/刚要……这时…… I was looking at the photos on the noticeboard when I heard a voice behind me.“New here?”我正在看布告栏上的照片,这时身后忽然传来一个声音:“你是新生吗?”(外研B1) 第 ‹#› 页 Week 7　逐梦人生&悲伤难过篇 高分句式23　主语+谓语+as/when/while/before时间状语从句...　当…… It didn’t take long before .../It was not long before ...　没过多久就…… ①He rolled over and fell asleep again, and when he woke next day, he didn’t remember the dream at all.他翻过身去,又睡着了。第二天醒来时,他一点儿也不记得这个梦了。(《哈利·波特》) ②It didn’t take long before the two dogs played around the house, cheerfully running after each other.没过多久,这两只狗狗就在房子周围玩耍起来,高高兴兴地追着对方跑。(浙江高考) 第 ‹#› 页 Week 7　逐梦人生&悲伤难过篇 空间衔接除了用下面的句式,还可以利用全部倒装句过渡到下一场景。 高分句式24　On/Upon+动名词/On/Upon arrival,主语+谓语　一……就…… On stepping into the room, a familiar bark came into my ears.刚走进屋子,一阵熟悉的犬吠声就传入了我的耳中。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 7　逐梦人生&悲伤难过篇 练能生巧 Ⅰ.用括号内单词的正确形式或恰当的衔接过渡词汇补全以下各句,并背诵 1.　　　　　　　　　　 he moved, the sheep scattered, their eyes wide with unease.  2.Harry was on the point of 　 　　　(unfold) his letter when it was jerked sharply out of his hand.  3.　　　 　 he came to the last question, he sighed desperately.  4.He had hardly stepped out of the house when it 　　　　(begin) to pour.  5.It didn’t take long 　　　　the firefighters put out the big fire.  As soon as/Immediately/Directly/Instantly/The moment/The minute/The second/The instant unfolding When/As began before 第 ‹#› 页 Week 7　逐梦人生&悲伤难过篇 Ⅱ.对Ⅰ中各句进行一对一仿写,并背诵 1. 我一看到Tom,心就沉了下去。 __________________________________________________ 2.我正打算放弃,就在这时,有个东西吸引了我的目光。 __________________________________________________ 3.教室里安静下来时,杰克回到了自己的座位上。 __________________________________________________ As soon as I saw Tom, my heart sank. I was on the point of giving up when something caught my eye. As the room quieted, Jack returned to his seat. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 7　逐梦人生&悲伤难过篇 4.她刚结束演讲,观众就爆发出了掌声。 __________________________________________________ 5.没过多久,这个小女孩就适应了新的校园生活。 __________________________________________________ She had hardly finished her speech when the audience burst into applause. It was not long/didn’t take long before the little girl adapted to the new school life. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 7　逐梦人生&悲伤难过篇 Ⅲ.微续写 根据汉语提示或用所给词的正确形式补全下面的“逐梦人生”类续写片段,并诵读背诵 ①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (乔希一让父母在餐桌旁坐下), he took a deep breath, and said, “I’ve decided to keep chess as a passion, not a profession.” His mother’s smile ②　　　　 (fade), but Josh continued, “I love chess, but I also want time for friends, school, and other things that make me happy.” He added, “If I force myself to only play chess, I might end up hating it.” The moment/minute/instant/second/Immediately Josh sat his parents down at the kitchen table faded 第 ‹#› 页 Week 7　逐梦人生&悲伤难过篇 ③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (他话音刚落,母亲便叹了口气), “I just want you to succeed.” Josh reached for her hand. “I will—but in my own way.” ④　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　 (父亲点头表示赞同时), a look of relief spread across his face. “Balance is success too,” he said, ⑤　　　　 (pat) Josh’s shoulder.  He had hardly/no sooner finished speaking when/than his mum sighed As/When his dad nodded in agreement patting 第 ‹#› 页 Week 7　逐梦人生&悲伤难过篇 $