Week 6 Wednesday 续写句式多维练（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语同步教学课件，聚焦Week 6“合作共赢 & 情感篇”主题，构建情感描写学习支架，包含声音情感表达（如“voice held/full of+情感名词”）、情感变化与消失（如“gave way to/replaced by”）等4个高分句式，配套补全句子、一对一仿写及“合作共赢”微续写练习。 资料特色突出，融合新课标核心素养，引用《哈利·波特》《你当像鸟飞往你的山》等文学例句，提升语言能力与文化意识，通过分层练习（补全-仿写-续写）培养思维品质与学习能力，微续写场景强化合作主题。能帮助学生掌握情感描写技巧，为教师提供系统教学资源，尤其适合高三学生应对升学考试中的写作提升需求。

Week 6 合作共赢&愤怒篇 Wednesday　续写句式多维练 第 ‹#› 页 Week 6　合作共赢&愤怒篇 情感描写句式——声音里透露出的情感/情感的变化、消失 高分句式17　Sb.’s voice held/was full of/was filled with+情感名词/There was+情感名词+in one’s voice “Mrs. Thompson?”His voice held unexpected warmth, as if he had known me for years rather than seconds.“汤普森夫人?”他的声音里带着一丝出人意料的暖意,仿佛我们相识多年,而非仅仅数秒。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 6　合作共赢&愤怒篇 高分句式18　Sb. could hear/heard/perceived+the+情感名词+in one’s voice ①He knew I wasn’t telling him something—I could hear the hurt in his voice.他知道我有事瞒着他——我能听出他声音里的那份难过。(《你当像鸟飞往你的山》) ②She perceived such great sadness in the voice of the unfortunate man that she didn’t have the strength to say a word. (外研选B3)她从这个不幸男人的声音里听出了深重的悲伤,一时间竟连一句话也说不出来。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 6　合作共赢&愤怒篇 高分句式19　情感名词A+gave way to/was swept away by/was replaced by+情感名词B　……变为……/……把……一扫而空/……为……所取代 The pain in his eyes when he talked of his father gave way to the firmness and determination.当他谈起父亲时,眼中的痛楚渐渐退去,取而代之的是坚定与决绝。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 6　合作共赢&愤怒篇 高分句式20　情感名词+melted away/faded (away)/was erased from one’s mind/face　……烟消云散/变淡/消失 The anger faded from Hagrid’s face. He looked suddenly anxious.海格脸上的怒气消了,他突然显得焦虑不安。(《哈利·波特》) 第 ‹#› 页 Week 6　合作共赢&愤怒篇 练能生巧 Ⅰ.用括号内单词的正确形式或根据汉语提示补全以下各句,并背诵 1.There was 　　　　(hesitate) in his voice.  2.I could 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(听出他声音里的坚定) as he said,“I’m gonna run.”  3.Her previous calm 　　　　　　　 　　(变为) terror.  4.The beautiful sunset 　　　　　　　　　　　　(消除了他所有的忧虑) and brought him peace.  5.My excitement suddenly 　　　　　　　 　　　(消失).  hesitation hear the determination in his voice　 gave way to/was replaced by erased all his worries faded (away)/melted away 第 ‹#› 页 Week 6　合作共赢&愤怒篇 Ⅱ.对Ⅰ中各句进行一对一仿写,并背诵 1.他的声音发颤,语气里满是焦虑。 His voice trembled. __________________________________________________. 2.当他走近我们时,我听出了他声音里的恐慌。 __________________________________________________ 3.随着比赛的临近,他的兴奋变成了紧张。 __________________________________________________ There was anxiety in his voice As he approached us, I heard the panic in his voice. His excitement gave way to/was replaced by nervousness as the competition approached. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 6　合作共赢&愤怒篇 4.他心中所有的疑虑突然烟消云散了。 __________________________________________________ 5.听到这消息,她所有的失望都不见了。 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ All doubts were suddenly erased from his mind. All her disappointment faded(away)/melted away as she heard the news. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 6　合作共赢&愤怒篇 Ⅲ.微续写 根据汉语提示或用所给词的正确形式补全下面的“合作共赢”类续写片段,并诵读背诵 　　Out of the minibus jumped coach Schultz and the kids from the team. Ethan stared in shock, and then ①　　　　　　　　　　　 (他的震惊变为了喜悦)—he hadn’t expected them to come. The coach dashed towards Ethan and declared, “The whole team can’t wait to lend a hand. A team helps each other, right?” his shock gave way to/was replaced by delight　 第 ‹#› 页 Week 6　合作共赢&愤怒篇 ③　　　 　 (immediate), the kids split up: some shook corn buckets to attract the goat, others blocked the woods. Soon, the goat bounced over, and ultimately Ethan tied the rope tightly. ④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (他所有的焦虑和紧张都烟消云散了). An unshakable inner voice told him that with this team, he could handle anything, even his very first game.  ②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (伊桑从他的话语里听出了满满的真诚). Ethan heard the sincerity in his voice Immediately All his anxiety and nervousness were erased from his mind 第 ‹#› 页 Week 6　合作共赢&愤怒篇 $