Week 5 Wednesday 续写句式多维练（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语同步教学课件，聚焦Week 5“优秀品行与失望尴尬”主题，以情感描写句式为核心学习支架，涵盖面部表情/眼睛情感的高分句式（如“A look of+情感名词+特定动词”“情感名词+was written all over one's face”等13-16句式）及升级用法，配套补全句子、一对一仿写、微续写等练习模块。 资料特色突出，注重语言能力培养，通过结构化句式解析（如with复合结构升级）和实例（“Shock registered on everyone’s face”）提升表达准确性，结合“优秀品行”续写任务渗透思维品质，练习设计循序渐进助力学习能力养成。能帮助学生掌握情感描写技巧，为教师提供系统的同步教学资源，适合高一学生夯实基础、培养细腻情感表达能力。

Week 5 优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 Wednesday　续写句式多维练 第 ‹#› 页 Week 5　优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 情感描写句式——面部表情/眼睛里的情感 高分句式13　(A look/An expression of+)情感名词+特定动词(短语)+one’s face　……的神色从某人脸上…… 特定动词(短语)有cross, come over, flash across, register on, spread across,主语可改为a(n)+情感形容词+look/expression。 ①Shock registered on everyone’s face.人人都面露震惊之色。 ②They shook hands briefly and a strained, unfamiliar look of embarrassment came over Gatsby’s face.两人短暂地握了握手,盖茨比的脸上掠过一抹局促又生疏的尴尬神色。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 5　优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 高分句式14　情感名词+was written all over one’s face　某人脸上满是…… 该句式可升级为with+情感名词+written all over one’s face,主语+谓语。 Berg tilted his head and curiosity was written all over his face.伯格歪着脑袋,脸上满是好奇。 高分句式15　Sb. saw/noticed/could see/notice+the情感名词+in one’s eyes/on one’s face　某人注意到/看到…… I could see the doubt on his face, but it didn’t deter me.我能看出他脸上的迟疑,但这并未打消我的念头。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 5　优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 高分句式16　One’s eyes were full of/were filled with+(tears of+)情感名词　某人眼里满是……(泪水) 该句式可升级为with复合结构或独立主格+主语+谓语。 “I thought you wanted a phone,”Mother said, (with) her eyes full of surprise.“我还以为你想要一部手机呢。”母亲开口说道,眼神里满是诧异。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 5　优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 练能生巧 Ⅰ.用括号内单词的正确形式或根据汉语提示补全以下各句,并背诵 1.　　　 　 (amaze) again registered on Rodney’s face.  2.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (他满脸激动和自豪) as he crossed the finish line.  3.　　　　　　　　　　　 (难以置信的表情), then a grin, spread across his face.  Amazement Excitement and pride were written all over his face A look of disbelief 第 ‹#› 页 Week 5　优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 4.Excitement 　　 　(write) all over his face as he unwrapped the birthday present.  5.She 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(注意到了他眼里的悲伤) when he shared his past.  was written noticed the sadness in his eyes 第 ‹#› 页 Week 5　优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 Ⅱ.对Ⅰ中各句进行一对一仿写,并背诵 1.听到那声吼叫,玛丽的脸上露出了惊恐的神色。 __________________________________________________ 2.他满脸愧疚。 __________________________________________________ 3.恼怒的神色从她脸上掠过。 __________________________________________________ As Mary heard the roar, fear registered on her face. Guilt was written all over his face. A look of annoyance flashed across/spread across/crossed her face. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 5　优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 4.听到儿子已经平安到家的消息时,她的脸上满是欣慰。 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 5.当她站起身准备演讲时,我们能看到她脸上的坚定。 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ Relief was written all over her face when she heard that her son had arrived home safely. We could see the determination on her face as she stood up to give the speech. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 5　优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 Ⅲ.微续写 根据汉语提示或用所给词的正确形式补全下面的“优秀品行”类续写片段,并诵读背诵 It helped me see my worth wasn’t in grades, but honesty and effort. Eventually, I told my parents everything, my heart pounding. I ①　　 　　 (admit) my mistakes, my fears, and how I had let them down. I also shared how ChatGPT had helped me realize the importance of honesty. As they listened, ②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (他们脸上流露出欣慰的表情). As my dad put a hand on my shoulder, admitted relief registered on/crossed/flashed across/spread across their faces 第 ‹#› 页 Week 5　优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 ③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我能看到他眼神里的那份理解). He said, “We’re disappointed, but we’re glad you’re owning up. We’ll help you get back on track.” My mom wiped away a tear and nodded. The weight on my chest lifted.  I could see the understanding in his eyes 第 ‹#› 页 Week 5　优秀品行&失望尴尬篇 $