Week 4 Wednesday 续写句式多维练（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语同步教学课件，聚焦“战胜挑战/歧视等&恐惧”主题，以情感描写为核心学习支架，包含高分句式10-12讲解（如形容词作状语、心跳描写及情感体验表达结构）、文学与高考真题例句、补全句子、一对一仿写及微续写分层练习。 资料特色突出，通过清晰的句式结构解析（如“形容词短语+情感名词”“with复合结构”）和《秘密花园》选句、高考真题实例，融合语言能力培养与思维品质提升，分层练习助力学习能力发展，能帮助学生生动表达情感、提升续写水平，为教师提供系统教学资源。

Week 4 战胜挑战/歧视等&恐惧篇 Wednesday　续写句式多维练 第 ‹#› 页 Week 4　战胜挑战/歧视等&恐惧篇 情感描写句式——身心 高分句式10　形容词(短语)/to one’s+情感名词,主语+谓语...或主语+谓语...,形容词(短语) 形容词(短语)在句中作状语,表达人物做某个动作的原因、结果或状态,可放在句首或句末,增强感染力,使描述更生动形象。 ①Exhausted, he flopped down into a chair.他筋疲力尽,一屁股坐到椅子上。(《秘密花园》) ②Fortunately, we got in the helicopter, safe and sound.幸运的是,我们安然无恙地上了直升机。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 4　战胜挑战/歧视等&恐惧篇 高分句式11　One’s heart+pounded/thumped/raced (+with+激动/害怕等情感名词)　某人的心怦怦跳 该句式可升级为with+one’s heart+非谓语结构或独立主格/one’s heart+非谓语,主语+谓语。 ①Deep inside, I felt a fury welling up. My heart started to pound.内心深处,一股怒火骤然涌起,我的心开始狂跳。 ②With my heart beating a mile a minute, I stood back for a brief second.我的心狂跳不已,不由得向后退了一小步。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 4　战胜挑战/歧视等&恐惧篇 高分句式12　Sb.+特定动词(短语)+(a wave of+)情感名词　某人感到…… 该句式可升级为特定动词(短语)(分词作状语)+情感名词,主语+did sth. 特定动词(短语)有felt (感到), be overcome with/by/be seized by (受……影响), be overwhelmed by/with/be full of/be filled with (充溢着/充满)等。 ①I felt such a wave of loss that my knees nearly buckled.一阵强烈的失落感如潮水般涌来,我双腿发软,几乎站立不稳。 ②Overcome with guilt and regret, I was desperate to make things right.我既愧疚又悔恨,拼命想要弥补过错。(2025·全国一卷) 第 ‹#› 页 Week 4　战胜挑战/歧视等&恐惧篇 练能生巧 Ⅰ.用括号内单词的正确形式或根据汉语提示补全以下各句,并背诵 1.Extremely 　　　　(worry), they waited where they were, eager for the news.  2.　　　　 (help) and exhausted, Jane knelt down, tears rolling down her cheeks.  3.　　　　　　　 　　　 (满心欢喜), she dashed out like a happy bird.  worried Helpless Filled with/Full of joy 第 ‹#› 页 Week 4　战胜挑战/歧视等&恐惧篇 4.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (他紧张得心怦怦跳) as he approached the stage for his presentation.  5.　　　　　　　　　　 (令我们如释重负的是), Diana finally returned home, white-faced but safe.  His heart pounded with nervousness To our great relief 第 ‹#› 页 Week 4　战胜挑战/歧视等&恐惧篇 Ⅱ.对Ⅰ中各句进行一对一仿写,并背诵 1.她很兴奋,立刻拿出手机,急切地想把这段经历告诉朋友们。 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 2.我又生气又失望,转过身面对着她,泪水顺着脸颊滚落下来。 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 3.她满腔怒火,冲出房间。 __________________________________________________ Extremely excited, she immediately took out her phone, eager to share the experience with her friends. Angry and disappointed, I turned to her, tears rolling down my cheeks. Filled with/Full of anger, she stormed out of the room. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 4　战胜挑战/歧视等&恐惧篇 4.我激动得心怦怦跳。 __________________________________________________ 5.让玛丽感到非常高兴的是,每个人最后都爬上了山顶,累得气喘吁吁。 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ My heart was thumping/pounding/racing with excitement. To Mary’s great delight/joy, everyone finally made it to the peak, tired and breathless. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 4　战胜挑战/歧视等&恐惧篇 Ⅲ.微续写 根据汉语提示用高分句式10-12或所给词的正确形式补全下面的“战胜挑战”类续写片段,并诵读背诵 I stared at the biscuit with that oyster, ①　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (既紧张又犹豫). ②　　　　　　　　　 (我的心跳得飞快), but I took a deep breath, and popped the whole thing into my mouth. At first, its slimy texture made me wrinkle my nose, but ③　　　　　　　　　 (令我惊讶的是), as I chewed, a rich, ④　　　　 (salt) flavor exploded on my taste buds. nervous and hesitant　 My heart raced to my surprise salty 第 ‹#› 页 Week 4　战胜挑战/歧视等&恐惧篇 ⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(我心中满是惊讶与愉悦). “Oh!” I exclaimed, “It is the most delicious thing that I have ever had.” My aunt and the others cheered, and I realized I ⑥　　　　　　 (overcome) my strange fear.  I was overcome/overwhelmed with a mix of surprise and delight had overcome 第 ‹#› 页 Week 4　战胜挑战/歧视等&恐惧篇 $