Week 1 Wednesday 续写句式多维练（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语同步教学课件，聚焦“比赛表演 & 高兴篇”主题，以“无灵”主语句为核心学习支架，包含高分句式讲解、“有灵”动词短语归纳、经典文学例句（如《简·爱》选句），配套填空练习、一对一仿写及微续写任务，助力学生掌握情感表达的生动句式。 资料特色突出，融合核心素养：引用《简·爱》《秘密花园》等文学作品提升文化意识，通过“填空-仿写-微续写”分层练习培养语言能力与思维品质，结合表演场景描写与主题升华（如挫折转化为转机）促进学习能力。能帮助学生提升情感表达的生动性，为教师提供系统的句式教学与实践支架。

Week 1 比赛表演&高兴篇 Wednesday　续写句式多维练 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 巧用 “无灵”主语句 (一) 运用“无灵”主语句,能突出人物的心理、情感,使续写语言更加生动形象。 高分句式1　(a burst/wave/sense of +)情感名词+seize等“有灵”动词+sb. (+like ...)　某人感到(一阵)……(像……) 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 用于该句式的“有灵”动词(短语)有seize/take hold of (抓住;攫住), defeat (击垮), sweep/flood/wash over (袭来), creep upon (慢慢产生), fail (使失望;有负于)等。 ①Suffering and despair defeated me, and I fell sobbing on the doorstep.痛苦和绝望击垮了我,我倒在门阶上哭泣。(《简·爱》) ②Mary felt a wave of anger sweep over her.玛丽感到一阵愤怒。(《秘密花园》) 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 高分句式2　身体部位/音容笑貌类名词+brighten等“有灵”动词 用于该句式的名词有face, eye, heart, hand, finger, laughter, smile, tear, voice等;动词(短语)有brighten/light up (照亮), well up (涌出), spread/flash across (浮现), cloud over (显得阴沉)等。 ①My fingers shook with anger, so that I could not go on sewing.我气得手指发抖,没法继续缝了。(《简·爱》) ②I was relieved when a bright, sweet voice interrupted us.一个清亮甜美的声音打断了我们,我松了一口气。(《简·爱》) 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 练能生巧 Ⅰ.根据汉语和提示用“无灵”主语或“有灵”动词填空, 并背诵 1.他一看到熟悉的字迹,便泪如泉涌。 The moment he saw the familiar handwriting, 　　　　(主语) 　　　　(动词短语) in his eyes.  2.内疚和担忧一阵阵涌上她的心头。 　　　　　　　　 (主语) 　　　　(动词) over her in waves.  3.她在比赛前突然失去了信心。 Before the competition her 　　 　　(主语) suddenly 　　　　(动词) her.  tears welled up Guilt and worry flooded confidence failed 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 4.看到那头可怕的狼,我吓得喉咙发紧,两腿发软。 At the sight of the frightening wolf, I felt so scared that 　　　　　　(主语) 　　　 　(动词) and 　　　　　　(主语) felt weak.   my throat tightened my knees 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 Ⅱ.对Ⅰ中各句进行一对一仿写,并背诵 1.当老人多年后回到家乡时,他激动得泪如泉涌。 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 2.他开车驶过那座桥时,阵阵孤独感与悲伤涌上心头。 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ When the old man returned to his hometown after so many years, tears of excitement welled up in his eyes. Loneliness and grief flooded over him in waves when he drove by the bridge. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 3.她想坚持,却鼓不起勇气。 __________________________________________________ 4.看着那头发怒的北极熊,我们吓得心脏狂跳,两腿发软。 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ She wanted to hold out, but her courage failed her. At the sight of the angry polar bear, we felt so scared that our hearts pounded/thumped and our knees felt weak. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 Ⅲ.微续写 根据汉语提示利用“无灵”主语句补全下面的“表演”场景描写+主题升华,并诵读背诵 Finally came the big moment. Taking a deep breath, I stepped onto the stage, enveloped in the glow of the lights. At first, ①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我的声音因紧张而发抖), but as the song progressed, ②　　　　　　　　　　　 (我信心大增,soar). I poured my emotions into the performance, letting my voice carry my feelings into the air. The crowd watched in awe, my voice trembled with nervousness my confidence soared 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 ③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (他们的掌声和欢呼声在大厅里回荡). Facing the overwhelming response, I realized that I had conquered my fears. Yes, ④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 (如果我们相信自己,永不放弃梦想,意想不到的挫折也会成为转机).   their applause and cheers echoing in the hall the unexpected discouragement can be a blessing in disguise if we have a belief in ourselves and never give up our dreams 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 $