内容正文:
小作文-投稿类
第一段:I’m writing to submit an article to your column, which focuses on ________(填写话题).
【翻译】我写信向贵栏目投稿,文章围绕________展开。
Nowadays, the phenomenon, a heated topic among students, has attracted wide attention, so I’m writing to express my personal viewpoints.
【翻译】如今该现象作为学生间热议的话题,受到广泛关注,因此我写下此文表达个人看法。
第二段(可能会用到的):
每条观点开头引导句(替换普通to begin with/besides)
1. As far as I’m concerned, …
【译】在我看来,……
2. First and foremost, …
【译】首先首要的是……
3. From my perspective, …
【译】依我的看法而言,……
第二段(可能会用到的)
观点写完,补充好处
1. … , which enables us to broaden our horizons.
……,这能帮我们拓宽眼界。
2. … , which plays an essential role in our daily study and life.
……,这在我们学习生活中至关重要。
3. … , by means of which we can cultivate good qualities.
……,借此我们可以培养优良品质。
第二段(可能会用到的)
建议类专用高级句式(适合写做法、倡议)
1. It is strongly recommended that we should do…
强烈建议我们应当做……(主语从句,虚拟语气)
2. It is of great importance for us to do…
做某事对我们意义重大(of+抽象名词高级写法)
3. We ought to spare no effort to do…
我们应当全力以赴去做……
4. Only by doing so can we achieve our goals eventually.
只有这样我们最终才能达成目标。
第三段:
I would appreciate it if you could publish my article in your column.
【翻译】若您能将我的稿件刊登在栏目中,我将不胜感激。
假如你是校报记者李华,上周你和学校志愿者去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)慰问老人。请你按下列要点给校报投稿,报道此次活动并呼吁大家关爱老人。
(1)活动情况(打扫卫生、表演节目等);
(2)活动评价;
(3)你的呼吁。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Students Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
By Li Hua,School Newspaper
第一段(开篇交代事由)
1. 上周,我和学校志愿者去了阳光敬老院。
2. 我们开展了慰问老人的志愿活动。
第二段(写活动过程+活动感受)
1. 到达之后,我们帮忙打扫房间和庭院。
2. 我们还给老人们唱歌、表演节目。
3. 老人们十分开心,脸上满是笑容。
4. 这次活动带给我们很深的感触。
第三段(活动评价+发出呼吁)
1. 尊敬关爱老人是我们的传统美德。
2. 我们应该多抽出时间陪伴老人。
3. 希望更多同学参与志愿活动,传递温暖。
Last week some student volunteers and I went to see the old people in Sunshine Nursing Home.
Upon our arrival, we were warmly welcomed by the elderly, and we brought them some gifts. After chatting with the old people, we started cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Besides, we sang a song for the elderly who sat in the yard . When it was time to leave, the old people thanked us for our kindness, saying it was such a wonderful day that they would remember forever.
Respecting the elderly is a traditional Chinese virtue. Please start to care for the elderly with us!
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