读后续写技能提升篇（十三）-2027届高三英语二轮复习写作备考专项讲义

该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写核心考点，整合情感、品质、动作描写等教材语料与眼睛动作描写等话题素材，按“语料积累—话题拓展—场景应用”逻辑架构知识体系。通过考点梳理、方法指导（如独立主格结构运用）、分层场景训练（学以致用、趁热打铁、拔高提能）等环节，帮助学生构建续写衔接框架，突破表达难点。 资料特色在于将语料积累与情境写作深度融合，设计“考试失利”“组建球队”等真实场景训练，引导学生运用such…that句型、动词联动描写等策略，提升语言能力与思维品质。分层练习配合参考答案即时反馈，保障复习效率，助力学生掌握续写技巧，为教师把控二轮复习节奏提供系统指导。

读后续写技能提升篇（十三） 2027高三二轮写作专项备考 一、积累教材续写语料 —— 有效强化考场衔接 【词汇积累】 情感描写：mood；amusement；long face；emotive 品质描写：witty；mischievous；cruel；gentle；enthusiasm 动作描写：entertain；cheer up；grin；crack a smile；flatter 【佳句积累】 1.Anxious parents do what they can to comfort nervous and crying children. 焦虑的父母会竭尽所能，安抚紧张哭闹的孩子。 （情感描写） 2.I spent much of the time when I was there feeling frightened and more than a little bored! 待在那儿的大部分时间,我内心惶恐不安,还倍感枯燥乏味。（情感描写） 3.Although she is clearly still in some pain, her scared and anxious look has been replaced — first by a small smile, and then by loud laughter as I “magically” produce her sock from out of my pocket. Seeing their daughter so much happier has in turn made Lara's parents more relaxed. 尽管她明显依旧有些疼痛，但脸上惊恐焦虑的神情已然消散：先是浮出一抹浅笑，紧接着当我像变魔术一般从口袋里掏出她的袜子时，她放声大笑起来。看着女儿心情大好，劳拉的父母也随之松了口气。 （情感描写） 4.I speak with the on-duty nurse, who tells me that Lara's parents rushed her to the hospital after she fell off her bicycle. Since getting here, Lara has spent her time crying in pain. 我和值班护士聊了几句，她告诉我，劳拉从自行车上摔下来后，父母就急忙把她送来了医院。自打入院后，劳拉就一直因为疼痛不停哭泣。 （人物描写） 5.Laughter is the best medicine. 笑是最好的良药。 （主旨升华） 6.Humour isn't just about laughter, but it is a way of life and a tool that can be used to illuminate the world. 幽默不只是欢声笑语，它更是一种生活态度，亦是点亮世间万物的利器。 （主旨升华） 7.Humor is mankind's greatest blessing. 幽默是人类最珍贵的馈赠。 （主旨升华） 二、拓展续写话题素材 —— 精准构建表达基石 动作描写：眼睛（一） 【经典词汇】 1. glance v. 瞥一眼 2.scan v. 浏览 3.wink v. 眨眼示意 4.peep v. 窥视，偷看 【靓点语块】 1.meet sb's eyes 与某人对视 2.raise/lift one's eyes 抬起眼睛 3.fix/focus one's eyes on 盯着看 4.lower/drop one's eyes 垂下眼睛 5.stare into one's eyes 凝视某人的眼睛 6.one's eyes glitter/sparkle/shine with excitement眼里闪烁兴奋的光芒 7.gaze at …with innocent and curious eyes带着天真好奇的眼神凝视… 【出彩佳句】 1.John sat beside the window, with his eyes fixed/focused on a book. （with 复合结构） 约翰坐在窗边，眼睛盯着一本书。 2.Gazing at the surroundings, he sang happily, with innocent and curious eyes. （动词 - ing 短语作状语） 他带着天真而好奇的眼神凝视着周围的环境，愉快地唱着歌。 3.When he recognised who the visitor was, John opened his mouth wide, his eyes glittering/sparkling shining with extreme thrill.（独立主格结构） 当约翰确认出来访者是谁时，他张大了嘴，眼睛里闪烁着极度兴奋的光芒。 4.The desperate woman lifted her eyes and focused her eyes on the ceiling, tears welling up in her eyes. （动词的联动） 那位绝望的女士抬起眼睛盯着天花板，眼里涌出了泪水。 5.Tears ran down her cheeks and soon her eyes were red from crying. 泪水顺着她的脸颊流下来，很快她的眼睛就哭红了。 6.His eyes brimming with/filled with tears, he lowered his head. （独立主格结构） 他的眼里充满了泪水，低下了头。 3、 重拳锤炼续写场景 —— 积累内化应用提升 【学以致用】 场景导入：“我” 被诊断出患有重病后，心情低落。在得到好朋友的鼓励后，“我” 振作起来，明白了 “笑是最好的良药”…… Diagnosed with a serious illness, I dropped my eyes, 1. ____________（我的眼里充满了泪水；独立主格结构）. A few moments later, 2. ____________（我擦干眼泪，抬起眼睛盯着天花板；动词的联动）, tears welling up in my eyes again. In fact, 3. ____________（我的心情很糟糕，一整天都板着脸；such … that …）. Nothing 4. ____________（能让我感到快乐，让我振作起来）. Worried and anxious, my best friend tapped me on the shoulder gently and stared into my eyes, saying some witty and humorous words to me. Finally, I 5. ____________（笑了起来） and my eyes sparkled with hope. Just as the famous saying goes, “6. ____________（笑是最好的良药）.” 【趁热打铁】 场景导入:考试遭遇重大失利，我情绪消沉、整日闷闷不乐。在好友风趣开导后，我展露笑颜，豁然明白笑是治愈低落情绪最好的良药…… Having failed the crucial exam badly, I lowered my head, 1._____________（我的眼中噙满泪水；独立主格结构）. A little while later, 2.___________（我擦去泪珠，抬眼呆呆望着窗外；动作联动描写）, tears welling up in my eyes once more. As a matter of fact, 3.________________（我心情无比低落，以至于一整天都愁眉苦脸；such…that… 句型）. Nothing 4.________________（能够让我心生愉悦，让我振作起来）. Noticing my gloominess, my close companion patted my back softly and gazed straight into my eyes, telling me plenty of witty and funny stories. Eventually, I 5.___________________（展露笑颜）and my eyes glittered with renewed confidence. Just as the well-known proverb puts it, “6.___________________（笑是最好的良药）.” 【拔高提能】 场景导入：我一心想要组建班级足球队，四处邀约队友却屡屡碰壁，组队计划彻底落空，我满心失落。好友察觉我的沮丧后，用风趣话语开导我，我慢慢展露笑容，懂得了笑是最好的良药…… Eager to build a class football team, I hung my head low, 1._______________（我的眼里蓄满泪水；独立主格结构）. A few moments later, 2.________________（我拭去泪水，抬眼呆呆盯着空荡荡的操场；动词的联动描写）, tears welling up in my eyes again. In fact, 3.___________________（我心情格外糟糕，一整天都愁眉苦脸；such…that…句型）. Nothing 4.________________（能让我心生欢喜，让我振作起来）. Noticing my low spirits, my best friend patted me on the arm softly and stared into my eyes, sharing plenty of witty jokes with me. Finally, I 5._________________（露出了笑容）and my eyes sparkled with new hope. Just as the famous saying goes, “6._________________（笑是最好的良药）.” 参考答案 （一） 1.my eyes brimming with tears 2.I wiped away my tears，lifted my eyes and focused my eyes on the ceiling 3.I was in such a terrible mood that I wore a long face the whole day 4.could entertain me and cheer me up 5.cracked a smile / grinned 6.Laughter is the best medicine (二) 1.my eyes brimming with tears 2.I wiped away my tears and lifted my eyes to fix them on the window 3.I was in such a terrible mood that I wore a long face all day long 4.could fill me with joy and cheer me up 5.cracked a smile / grinned 6.Laughter is the best medicine (三) 1.my eyes brimming with tears 2.I wiped away my tears and lifted my eyes to focus on the empty playground 3.I was in such a terrible mood that I kept a long face the whole day 4.could bring me joy and cheer me up 5.cracked a smile / grinned 6.Laughter is the best medicine 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $