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Studying abroad in Canada, I never thought that the small chopsticks would become a unique barrier in my cross-cultural adaptation.
For a Chinese student, using chopsticks to eat is the most natural thing. But here, every time I ate in the cafeteria and skillfully picked up food with chopsticks, the foreign classmates around me always cast curious and slightly confused looks, and from time to time, there were whispers: “How do they do that?” At first, I would smile and briefly explain how to use chopsticks to them. But as the number of times increased, the sense of strangeness brought about by cultural differences gradually made me feel uncomfortable. Even for a moment, I hesitated to switch to a knife and fork to eat in order to fit in.
During a group dinner, everyone sat around the restaurant. I habitually reached out for chopsticks. Jack, who was in the same group, saw this and exclaimed excitedly: “Hey, let’s see your magic with chopsticks!” As he spoke, he also picked up a pair of chopsticks and clumsily imitated. But before he could pick up anything, the chopsticks slipped from his hand. The other classmates laughed, and my face burned. I lowered my head to eat awkwardly, but my heart was in a mess. I realized that in their eyes, chopsticks were just a novel “performance prop (道具)”, and I, as a “foreigner” using chopsticks, seemed to have become an object of observation.
After that, when facing others’ curiosity about chopsticks, I lost the initial enthusiasm to share and just casually smiled. I was afraid of this excessive attention, afraid that my cultural habits would become an “outsider label” in the eyes of others. I even began to deliberately reduce the number of times I used chopsticks in public, trying to make myself “fit in” with the local dining style.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Until one day, the school held an international cultural festival.
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Paragraph 2: I started to patiently explain how to hold chopsticks and what they symbolize.
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一、文本分析
1.角色
讲述者(中国留学生):________________________________________________________
Foreign classmates & Jack:________________________________________________________
2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
I studied abroad in Canada and faced cross-cultural adaptation problems--- _________________ --- My chopstick-using skills drew foreign classmates’ curious attention--- _________________ --- A group dinner embarrassment made me feel like a performing outsider--- _________________ --- I became hesitant, avoided using chopsticks and tried to blend into local culture--- _________________ --- the school held an international cultural festival
4. 细节问答
What became a barrier for the author’s cross-cultural adaptation? :___________________________________
How did the author feel about others’ curiosity at first?:_________________________________
What happened during the group dinner?:________________________________________________
Why did the author avoid using chopsticks in public later?:__________________________________________
What change will the cultural festival bring to the author?:_____________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
我在加拿大留学,小小的筷子成为跨文化适应的阻碍→我熟练使用筷子引来外国同学围观议论,内心渐感不适→聚餐时Jack模仿失败引发哄笑,我沦为被围观的对象,倍感尴尬→为融入当地、避免特殊标签,我刻意减少当众用筷子→学校举办国际文化节,迎来转机→(续写)_________________________________→(续写)_________________________________
6.情感线
I: natural and willing→___________→embarrassed and confused→___________→brave and proud
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式
摘抄文中核心句式(定语从句、状语从句、非谓语、宾语从句):
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9. 本文主题
文化自信类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Until one day, the school held an international cultural festival.
衔接句1——What idea did the author get? What did she decide to do?
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Paragraph 2: I started to patiently explain how to hold chopsticks and what they symbolize.
衔接句2——What did the author introduce? What change and insight did she gain?
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三.段落续写框架
第一段:直到有一天,学校举办了国际文化节。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:我开始耐心讲解筷子的用法与文化寓意。
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。
4、 段落续写
Paragraph 1: Until one day, the school held an international cultural festival.
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Paragraph 2: I started to patiently explain how to hold chopsticks and what they symbolize.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
讲述者(中国留学生):身处异国、因文化差异自卑拘谨、最终重拾文化自信、勇于传播本国文化的留学生;
Foreign classmates & Jack:对异国文化充满好奇、无心之举造成他人尴尬、最终理解并尊重中国文化的外国学生。
2.视角
第一人称
3.时空线
I studied abroad in Canada and faced cross-cultural adaptation problems---chopsticks, the daily cultural symbol, became my adaptation barrier --- My chopstick-using skills drew foreign classmates’ curious attention--- I felt uncomfortable amid repeated stares and whispers --- A group dinner embarrassment made me feel like a performing outsider--- I was extremely awkward and regarded chopsticks as a burden --- I became hesitant, avoided using chopsticks and tried to blend into local culture--- I chose to hide my cultural habit to avoid being labeled an outsider --- the school held an international cultural festival
4. 细节问答
What became a barrier for the author’s cross-cultural adaptation? :The small chopsticks and others’ curious stares made her cross-cultural adaptation difficult.
How did the author feel about others’ curiosity at first?:She was willing to explain patiently and share her culture actively.
What happened during the group dinner?:Jack clumsily imitated using chopsticks and failed, causing classmates’ laughter and the author’s great embarrassment.
Why did the author avoid using chopsticks in public later?:She feared excessive attention and being labeled as an outsider different from locals.
What change will the cultural festival bring to the author?:She will bravely show and spread chopstick culture, regaining her cultural confidence.
What does the story tell us?:Cultural differences need communication rather than avoidance. True integration lies in cultural confidence and mutual respect.
5.情节线
我在加拿大留学,小小的筷子成为跨文化适应的阻碍→我熟练使用筷子引来外国同学围观议论,内心渐感不适→聚餐时Jack模仿失败引发哄笑,我沦为被围观的对象,倍感尴尬→为融入当地、避免特殊标签,我刻意减少当众用筷子→学校举办国际文化节,迎来转机→我鼓起勇气报名展示中国筷子文化,主动布置展台、准备讲解内容→我耐心科普用法与深厚寓意,收获认可,重拾文化自信
6.情感线
I: natural and willing→uncomfortable and uneasy→embarrassed and confused→inferior and hesitant→brave and proud
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:留学加拿大的作者因使用筷子屡屡遭受围观,为融入当地刻意隐藏本国文化,最终借国际文化节主动传播筷子文化,摆脱自卑、重拾文化自信,读懂文化包容与交流的真谛。
英文:Studying in Canada, the author felt embarrassed and tried to hide her chopstick-using habit due to others’ strange stares. Finally, she actively displayed and spread Chinese chopstick culture at the cultural festival and regained cultural confidence.
8. 句式
1. 非谓语动词:Studying abroad in Canada, I never thought small chopsticks would be a barrier.
2. 定语从句:Jack, who was in the same group, saw this and exclaimed excitedly.
3. 状语从句:As the number of times increased, I felt more and more uncomfortable.
4. 宾语从句:I realized that chopsticks were just a novel performance prop in their eyes.
5. 并列句:I was afraid of excessive attention, and I tried to fit in with the local style.
9. 本文主题
文化自信类:文化无优劣、差异需交流,主动展示本国文化、坚守文化自信,才是真正的文化融合。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Until one day, the school held an international cultural festival.
衔接句1——What idea did the author get? What did she decide to do?
Inspired by the festival’s theme of cultural exchange, I decided to bravely showcase Chinese chopstick culture instead of hiding it. I prepared chopsticks and cultural posters for my booth.
Paragraph 2: I started to patiently explain how to hold chopsticks and what they symbolize.
衔接句2——What did the author introduce? What change and insight did she gain?
I introduced chopsticks’ history and cultural meanings, guiding classmates to try. I finally understood that cultural integration needs communication rather than avoidance, and regained my cultural pride.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:直到有一天,学校举办了国际文化节。
→①文化节以多元交流为主题,给了我展示自我的契机→②我一改往日退缩心态,主动报名展示筷子文化→③我精心准备道具与海报,期待传播中国文化
第二段:我开始耐心讲解筷子的用法与文化寓意。
→①我细致讲解使用技巧,阐释筷子承载的团圆、和谐寓意→②外国同学认真倾听、积极尝试,真诚赞美中国文化→③我摆脱自卑心结,领悟文化自信,坦然接纳文化差异
四、段落续写(150词左右 标准满分范文)
Paragraph 1: Until one day, the school held an international cultural festival. Featuring cultural display and mutual communication, the event encouraged every international student to present their unique traditional culture. Suddenly, an idea struck me. Instead of hiding my custom to fit in, I should let others truly understand it. I plucked up my courage, set up a booth for Chinese chopstick culture, and prepared delicate posters introducing its history and proper using methods. Many students were attracted to my booth out of curiosity.
Paragraph 2: I started to patiently explain how to hold chopsticks and what they symbolize. I told them that chopsticks stood for harmony and reunion in Chinese culture, far more than a simple dining tool. I also guided interested classmates to practice holding and using them step by step. No one laughed or treated it as a performance. Instead, they praised the profound Chinese culture warmly. This experience made me realize that true cross-cultural adaptation is not blind integration, but confident cultural presentation and sincere communication.
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