2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习 高龄奶奶健身的励志故事 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统整合了读后续写专题的核心考点，涵盖文本分析（角色、视角、时空线）、情节逻辑构建、语言表达策略等模块，通过问题链（如细节问答）和任务单（如情节构造）设计，引导学生从文本要素出发自主梳理续写规律，形成完整的续写思维框架。 亮点在于诊断性自测与分层任务设计，如开篇设置细节问答诊断文本理解漏洞，续写框架按“问题分析-情节构建-语言润色”分层引导，培养学生的思维品质与学习能力。每个模块配有情节线梳理表和情感线分析任务，帮助学生建立个性化续写策略，教师可通过学生在文本分析中的表现精准指导，实现因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Evelyn Donohue is a 65-year-old grandma. She only started to exercise seven years ago after having a wake-up call. She’d been struggling with eating disorders and health issues, which ultimately led her to getting surgery. After that experience, she knew that she needed to make a change. Determined to turn her life around, Ms Donohue began to work out and follow a healthy lifestyle, before discovering a passion for weightlifting. Since setting out on the journey, the fitness lover has not only managed to grow an impressive set of muscles but also a huge following on social media. The well-liked grandma regularly posts workout content, explaining there’s no reason others can’t look this good. She said it was all down to some key aspects. “Hold on: Consider failure as a stepping stone to success and never give up. Stick to your plan,” she said. “Help others: Lift others up on your journey. Success is sweeter when shared.” She previously explained that “you do not need to have an amazing body to exercise... the goal is to feel good, not look good.” Ms Donohue used to be laughed at for being too old to work out, but she has proved the doubters wrong in the best possible way and has indeed become an inspiration for many social media users. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 One day, a young girl sent Ms Donohue a private message, pouring out her worries. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Touched by the girl’s progress, Ms Donohue decided to do more to help those in need. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 Evelyn Donohue：________________________________________________________ the young girl：________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 65-year-old Ms Donohue suffered health problems and received surgery--- _________________ --- she decided to change lifestyle and fell in love with weightlifting--- _________________ --- she shared fitness videos online and gained popularity--- _________________ --- she stuck to her beliefs of perseverance and helping others--- _________________ --- she overcame doubt and became an inspiration online 4. 细节问答 Why did Ms Donohue start exercising? ：___________________________________ What sport did Ms Donohue finally fall in love with?：_________________________________ What are Ms Donohue’s key principles for success?：________________________________________________ What is the real goal of exercise in Ms Donohue’s opinion?：__________________________________________ What did other people think of her workout at first?：_____________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 65岁的Evelyn奶奶饱受疾病困扰，手术后决心改变人生→她坚持健身，爱上举重，养成健康生活方式→她在社交媒体分享健身日常，收获大量粉丝，传递健身理念→她秉持坚持不懈、乐于助人的人生准则，认为健身重在身心愉悦而非外表→她无视嘲讽，用实力证明自己，成为全网励志榜样→（续写）_________________________________→（续写）_________________________________ 6．情感线 Life: painful and helpless→___________→determined and persistent→___________→warm and inspiring 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 摘抄文中核心句式（非谓语、定语从句、状语从句、并列句、宾语从句）： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 励志成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: One day, a young girl sent Ms Donohue a private message, pouring out her worries. 衔接句1——What was the girl’s trouble? How did Ms Donohue help her? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Touched by the girl’s progress, Ms Donohue decided to do more to help those in need. 衔接句2——What did Ms Donohue do later? What inspiration did she bring to others? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：一天，一个女孩给Donohue奶奶发私信，倾诉自己的烦恼。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：被女孩的进步深深打动，Donohue奶奶决定帮助更多需要帮助的人。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 4、 段落续写 One day, a young girl sent Ms Donohue a private message, pouring out her worries. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Touched by the girl’s progress, Ms Donohue decided to do more to help those in need. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Evelyn Donohue：年过花甲、历经病痛、意志坚定、自律乐观、乐于分享、温暖励志的健身奶奶； the young girl：深陷身材焦虑、自卑迷茫、渴望改变、最终勇敢突破自我的年轻女孩。 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 65-year-old Ms Donohue suffered health problems and received surgery--- she realized the importance of health and decided to change --- she decided to change lifestyle and fell in love with weightlifting--- she kept working out and built a healthy figure --- she shared fitness videos online and gained popularity--- she summed up her life and fitness principles --- she stuck to her beliefs of perseverance and helping others--- she ignored others’ mockery and made great achievements --- she overcame doubt and became an inspiration online 4. 细节问答 Why did Ms Donohue start exercising? ：She suffered from eating disorders and health problems and had to receive surgery, which made her determined to change her life. What sport did Ms Donohue finally fall in love with?：She finally developed a passion for weightlifting. What are Ms Donohue’s key principles for success?：Never give up in face of failure, stick to plans and be willing to help and lift others up. What is the real goal of exercise in Ms Donohue’s opinion?：The goal of exercise is to make people feel physically and mentally good rather than pursuing a perfect appearance. What did other people think of her workout at first?：Many people laughed at her, thinking she was too old to work out. What does the story tell us?：Age is no limit to self-improvement. Persistence and kindness can light up our life and inspire others. 5．情节线 65岁的Evelyn奶奶饱受疾病困扰，手术后决心改变人生→她坚持健身，爱上举重，养成健康生活方式→她在社交媒体分享健身日常，收获大量粉丝，传递健身理念→她秉持坚持不懈、乐于助人的人生准则，认为健身重在身心愉悦而非外表→她无视嘲讽，用实力证明自己，成为全网励志榜样→迷茫女孩私信倾诉身材与自卑困扰，奶奶耐心开导、鼓励陪伴→女孩成功蜕变，奶奶深受触动，投身公益帮助更多迷茫的人 6．情感线 Life: painful and helpless→determined and ambitious→determined and persistent→positive and influential→warm and inspiring 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：65岁的Evelyn奶奶在病痛手术后幡然醒悟，坚持健身举重、重塑人生，不惧他人嘲讽，在网络分享励志理念，用坚持与善意治愈、鼓舞了无数迷茫的年轻人。 英文：65-year-old Evelyn rebuilt her life through persistent fitness training after suffering severe health problems. Defying others’ doubt, she shared positive ideas online and inspired countless lost young people with perseverance and kindness. 8. 句式 1. 定语从句：She’d been struggling with eating disorders and health issues, which ultimately led her to getting surgery. 2. 非谓语动词：Determined to turn her life around, Ms Donohue began to work out. 3. 状语从句：Since setting out on the journey, she has gained a huge following. 4. 宾语从句：She explained that the goal is to feel good, not look good. 5. 并列句：Hold on and never give up, and success will come eventually. 9. 本文主题 励志成长类：年龄从不是自我突破的限制，坚持自律重塑自我，心怀善意传递温暖，平凡人生亦可绽放光芒。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: One day, a young girl sent Ms Donohue a private message, pouring out her worries. 衔接句1——What was the girl’s trouble? How did Ms Donohue help her? The girl suffered from severe body anxiety and low self-esteem. Ms Donohue comforted her patiently, shared her own experience and encouraged her to keep exercising for inner strength. Paragraph 2: Touched by the girl’s progress, Ms Donohue decided to do more to help those in need. 衔接句2——What did Ms Donohue do later? What inspiration did she bring to others? She launched online sharing sessions and free fitness guidance, spreading positive energy and helping more people get rid of anxiety and reshape themselves. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：一天，一个女孩给Donohue奶奶发私信，倾诉自己的烦恼。 →①女孩深陷身材焦虑，自卑迷茫，不敢运动、否定自我→②奶奶温柔共情，分享自身病痛逆袭经历→③在奶奶鼓励下，女孩坚持运动，慢慢变得自信阳光 第二段：被女孩的进步深深打动，Donohue奶奶决定帮助更多需要帮助的人。 →①奶奶开启线上公益分享，免费指导健身、疏导心理焦虑→②她持续传递坚持与善意的人生理念，圈粉无数→③她用行动证明，年龄无碍成长，善意与自律永远治愈人生 四、段落续写（150词左右 标准满分范文） One day, a young girl sent Ms Donohue a private message, pouring out her worries. The girl was troubled by serious body anxiety. She dared not exercise for fear of being laughed at and gradually fell into low self-esteem. Having read the message carefully, Ms Donohue felt great sympathy for her. She replied patiently, sharing her painful experience of fighting illness and public doubt. She told the girl that exercise served to bless life rather than please others. With continuous encouragement and guidance, the girl plucked up courage to work out every day and finally became positive and confident. Touched by the girl’s progress, Ms Donohue decided to do more to help those in need. She started regular online live streams, sharing free fitness tips and positive life attitudes. She patiently answered questions from anxious followers and encouraged them to break through self-limits. More and more people got rid of anxiety and regained confidence under her influence. Ms Donohue proved that it is never too late to change. Her persistent spirit and selfless kindness have always been lighting up countless people’s lives. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $