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Twenty years ago, I drove a taxi. One time, I was called at midnight to pick someone up. When I arrived, the building was completely dark except for one light in a window.
I walked to the door and knocked. After a long wait, the door opened. A small woman in her 80s stood before me. By her side was a small suitcase.
“Would you carry my bag out to the car?” she said. I took her suitcase and gave her my arm. We walked slowly to the street. She kept thanking me for my kindness.
“It’s nothing,” I told her. “I try to treat my passengers how I want my mother treated.”
“You’re such a good boy,” she said. When we got in the taxi, she gave me an address. Then she asked, “Could you drive through the downtown?”
“It’s not the shortest way,” I answered.
“I don’t mind,” she said. “I’m in no hurry. I’m on my way to a hospice (临终安养院).”
I saw her eyes shining with tears.
“I don’t have any family left,” she continued. “The doctor says I don’t have very long.”
I quietly turned off the meter. “What road do you want me to take?” I asked.
For hours, we drove through the city. She showed me the building where she had once worked. We drove through the neighbourhood where she and her husband had lived. Sometimes she asked me to just slow down while she sat staring into the darkness, saying nothing.
As the sun was coming up, she suddenly said, “I’m tired. Let’s go now.”
We drove in silence to the hospice. As we pulled up, two nurses were waiting for us. They helped her into a wheelchair.
“How much do I owe you?” she asked me, reaching for her purse.
“Nothing,” I said. Without thinking, I leaned down and gave her a hug. She hugged me tightly.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After a short while, the old woman let go of me slowly, wearing a peaceful smile as the nurses wheeled her inside. ________________________________________________________________
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That night has stayed with me ever since, a quiet reminder of what kindness truly means.__________________________________________________________________________
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一、文本分析
1.角色
讲述者“我”:________________________________________________________
年迈老太太:________________________________________________________
2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
I worked as a taxi driver twenty years ago--- _________________ --- I picked up an 80-year-old lonely lady at midnight--- _________________ --- the lady told me she was going to a hospice with little time left--- _________________ --- I drove around the city accompanying her to recall old memories--- _________________ --- I refused her payment and gave her a warm hug
4. 细节问答
What was the author’s job twenty years ago? :___________________________________
Why did the old woman want to drive through the downtown?:_________________________________
What was wrong with the old woman?:________________________________________________
What did the author do when knowing the lady’s situation?:__________________________________________
What did the author do at last before the lady entered the hospice?:_____________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
二十年前,我是一名出租车司机→深夜接到接单任务,接送一位年迈老人→老人无亲人相伴,即将前往临终安养院,时日无多→我心生悲悯,关掉计价器,陪老人绕城重温过往回忆→抵达安养院,我拒绝车费并拥抱老人→(续写)_________________________________→(续写)_________________________________
6.情感线
I: ordinary and professional→___________→sympathetic and gentle→___________→warm and moved
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式
摘抄文中核心句式(状语从句、定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语、并列句):
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9. 本文主题
温情治愈类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: After a short while, the old woman let go of me slowly, wearing a peaceful smile as the nurses wheeled her inside.
衔接句1——What did the author do after the lady left? What was the lady’s state?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: That night has stayed with me ever since, a quiet reminder of what kindness truly means.
衔接句2——What did the author learn from this experience? What’s the ending and reflection?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三.段落续写框架
第一段:片刻后,老太太缓缓松开我,带着平静的笑容被护士推进安养院。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:那个夜晚一直萦绕在我心头,默默提醒我善良的真谛。
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。
4、 段落续写
After a short while, the old woman let go of me slowly, wearing a peaceful smile as the nurses wheeled her inside. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That night has stayed with me ever since, a quiet reminder of what kindness truly means.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
讲述者“我”:善良温柔、共情力强、乐于助人、心怀温暖的出租车司机;
年迈老太太:孤独无依、看淡生死、温柔感恩、眷恋过往岁月的老人。
2.视角
第一人称
3.时空线
I worked as a taxi driver twenty years ago--- I received a midnight pickup order --- I picked up an 80-year-old lonely lady at midnight--- the lady asked to pass through downtown instead of the shortest way --- the lady told me she was going to a hospice with little time left--- I turned off the meter and accompanied her to revisit old places --- I drove around the city accompanying her to recall old memories--- we arrived at the hospice at dawn --- I refused her payment and gave her a warm hug
4. 细节问答
What was the author’s job twenty years ago? :He worked as a taxi driver.
Why did the old woman want to drive through the downtown?:She wanted to revisit the places full of her old memories before she passed away.
What was wrong with the old woman?:She had no family and was seriously ill, with little time left to live.
What did the author do when knowing the lady’s situation?:He turned off the meter and patiently accompanied her to travel around the city to recall memories.
What did the author do at last before the lady entered the hospice?:He refused to take her money and gave her a warm hug.
What does the story tell us?:Small acts of kindness can bring warmth and comfort to people in despair and have profound meaning.
5.情节线
二十年前,我是一名出租车司机→深夜接到接单任务,接送一位年迈老人→老人无亲人相伴,即将前往临终安养院,时日无多→我心生悲悯,关掉计价器,陪老人绕城重温过往回忆→抵达安养院,我拒绝车费并拥抱老人→我目送老人离去,内心满是触动,久久不愿离开→这段经历让我终身受益,始终坚守善意、温暖待人
6.情感线
I: ordinary and professional→surprised→sympathetic and gentle→touched and solemn→warm and moved
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:二十年前的一个深夜,出租车司机偶遇一位孤独年迈、时日无多的老人,放弃营收全程陪伴她重温旧日回忆,无偿相送并给予温暖拥抱,用微小的善意慰藉了老人最后的时光。
英文:One midnight twenty years ago, a taxi driver met a lonely elderly lady who was dying. He gave up his income, accompanied her to revisit old memories for free and offered her a warm hug, comforting her last days with sincere kindness.
8. 句式
1. 定语从句:She showed me the building where she had once worked.
2. 状语从句:When I arrived, the building was completely dark except for one light in a window.
3. 宾语从句:The doctor says I don’t have very long.
4. 非谓语动词:Without thinking, I leaned down and gave her a hug.
5. 并列句:I don’t have any family left, and I don’t have much time left.
9. 本文主题
温情治愈类:平凡的善意最动人,真诚的陪伴与温柔,能治愈孤独与绝望,温暖人间。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: After a short while, the old woman let go of me slowly, wearing a peaceful smile as the nurses wheeled her inside.
衔接句1——What did the author do after the lady left? What was the lady’s state?
The old lady faced her final days peacefully. I stood there watching her disappear, feeling a mix of sadness and warmth before driving away silently.
Paragraph 2: That night has stayed with me ever since, a quiet reminder of what kindness truly means.
衔接句2——What did the author learn from this experience? What’s the ending and reflection?
I realized true kindness is selfless companionship and gentle warmth, which has guided me to treat every person with sincerity all my life.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:片刻后,老太太缓缓松开我,带着平静的笑容被护士推进安养院。
→①老人眼神平和,坦然面对余生最后的时光→②我伫立原地目送她离开,内心满是感慨→③沉默良久后,我转身驱车离开
第二段:那个夜晚一直萦绕在我心头,默默提醒我善良的真谛。
→①我彻底明白善良无关回报,只为温暖他人→②这份特殊的经历深深影响了我→③此后我始终温柔待人,坚守纯粹的善意
四、段落续写(150词左右 标准满分范文)
After a short while, the old woman let go of me slowly, wearing a peaceful smile as the nurses wheeled her inside. She turned back and waved at me weakly, her eyes filled with gratitude and peace. I stood rooted to the spot, watching her figure fade away in the corridor. A sense of warmth and sorrow welled up in my heart. I didn’t leave immediately until I could no longer see her. Then I walked back to my taxi and started the engine quietly, leaving the quiet hospice behind.
That night has stayed with me ever since, a quiet reminder of what kindness truly means. I used to think kindness was about big deeds, but this experience taught me that true kindness is selfless companionship and gentle comfort for those in loneliness and despair. Over the years, I have always kept this memory in mind. I choose to treat every stranger with sincerity and warmth, hoping to pass on the little kindness that once brightened a lonely old lady’s final days.
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