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2026·全国一卷
高考真题
--Continuation Writing
高考英语 · 写作专项突破
1.
审题并勾画
2.
阅读并预测
3.
故事展开与语言润色
目录
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Warming up
What’s important for a story?
character
plot
theme
(葛文山,2022)
Lead in
Q1:What’s important for a story?
Q2:What’s important for writing a story
(/continuation writing)?
(衡很亨,2023)
character
plot
theme
character
portrait
plot
design
theme
exposition
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Emily Sanders, a 25-year-old from Detroit, Michigan, set out on December 23rd with high hopes of reaching Toronto to meet her boyfriend for Christmas. Although she had heard warnings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn’t give it much thought. She assumed that much like in Michigan, police would simply detour (使绕道) traffic around any closed sections of the highway. But that didn’t happen. As the snow came down more and more heavily, Emily was directed off the highway. She drove on for a while and found herself on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town.
The blinding whiteout made driving nearly impossible. At one point, Emily’s car got stuck. After a struggle, she managed to free the vehicle and continued inching along the snow-covered road. As night fell, panic set in. While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road, her car slid into a ditch (沟). She tried to call for help but found no signal on her phone. Seeing no hope of immediate rescue, Emily decided to spend the night in her car. She wrapped herself in a blanket, waiting for morning. To stay warm, she ran her engine for a few minutes every now and then. Eventually, she fell asleep.
Emily awoke to a gentle knock on her car window. Standing outside were Daniel and his wife Rachel, who noticed the stranded (被困的) vehicle on their way home and stopped to see if they could help. When Emily rolled down the window, Rachel asked if she was okay and told her it was not safe to stay overnight in the car. With genuine warmth in her voice, Rachel said they could take Emily to a nearby cafe they knew. Grateful and relieved, Emily accepted the offer.
In the cafe, the couple bought Emily a hot chocolate and listened patiently as she explained her desperate situation: she was about a hundred miles from her destination, her car was completely stuck, and her entire holiday plan could be ruined.
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注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1.审题并勾画(Read for setting)
character
plot
theme
“人与社会”
Daniel and Rachel suggested,好心夫妇主动提供破局方案,确立“接受帮助”的叙事方向;continue by train,暗示汽车已无法修复或道路彻底封死,必须转换交通工具完成圣诞赴约
Three days later,预设了三天的时间跨度,暗示雪灾平息与车辆维修所需的合理周期;returned to get her car,证明危机彻底解除,且隐含“成功赴约后返回”的圆满结局
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Emily Sanders,Daniel and his wife Rachel, Emily’s boyfriend
December 23rd,Christmas,
two weeks later (过去时)
an unfamiliar road cafe
Emily’s car got stuck on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town. Emily fell asleep.
Daniel and his wife Rachel took Emily to a nearby cafe.
time
(When)
place
(Where)
character(Who)
background
(What)
setting
2.阅读并预测
2.1 Read for setting
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2.2 画故事山,构情节线和情感线(Read for plots and emotions)
rising action
falling action
ending
plots
beginning
emotions
climax
Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train.
Emily set out from Detroit to Toronto to meet her boyfriend for Christmas, ignoring the snowstorm warning.
Emily’s car slided into a ditch;
she can't call for help due to no signal.
Three days later, Emily returned to get her car.
Daniel and Rachel find her, offer help, and take her to a cafe.
Hopeful
desperate
Grateful
Hope renewed
Deep gratitude
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2.3 根据故事山,预测情节和主题(Predict the plots and theme)
rising action
falling action
ending
plots
beginning
emotions
climax
Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train.
Emily set out from Detroit to Toronto to meet her boyfriend for Christmas, ignoring the snowstorm warning.
Emily’s car slided into a ditch;
she can't call for help due to no signal.
Three days later, Emily returned to get her car.
Daniel and Rachel find her, offer help, and take her to a cafe.
Hopeful
desperate
Grateful
Hope renewed
Deep gratitude
衔接句
主题句
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Paragraph 1:
Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train.
Paragraph 2:
Three days later, Emily returned to get her car.
衔接句
1.Did Emily agreed the suggestion?
2.What did Emily do by train?
2.3 根据故事山,预测情节和主题(Predict the plots and theme)
1.What would happen when Emily get her car?
2.What will Emily do to say thanks?
主题句
续写线索:采纳建议—热心相助—乘车赶路—顺利团聚—返程取车—登门致谢—感悟善意
2.3 根据故事山,预测情节和主题(Predict the plots and theme)
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
口诀:
两段首句定一框,二框二首正能量
从咖啡馆到火车站再到多伦多:外在动作为解决交通困境,完成圣诞赴约的叙事任务;内在情绪为感激、期待、如释重负 (relieved, grateful)
聚焦重逢瞬间:外在动作为表达感恩之情,实现陌生人善意的闭环;内在情绪为温暖、感动、深刻领悟 (touched, profound)
第一段具体细节刻画人物:
描写艾米丽采纳夫妇的火车出行建议,二人热心送她乘车,她顺利抵达多伦多与男友团聚。
第二段具体细节刻画人物:
描写风雪过后艾米丽回来取回车辆,登门致谢好心夫妇,感悟陌生人善意的珍贵。
行为类核心词汇:
①走上:walk onto /step onto
②表达:express /convey
情绪类核心词汇:
①感激:gratitude/thankfulness
②欣喜:joy/elation/gladness
评分标准参考
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Tips for writing
口诀:人物时态和事件,语言特色不要变
Tip 1: 58细节添加法
Tip 2: To show, not to tell.(王初明“写长法”)
Tip 3: 语言协同:创造性的模仿(原文风格)
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小试身手
请你将自己的习作写在题目的横线上。
Paragraph 1:
Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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参考范文
Paragraph 1:
Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Realizing the wisdom in their advice, Emily agreed without hesitation. The kind couple immediately drove her to the local station and even helped her purchase a ticket. Wrapped in their thick coats, Emily boarded the train, her heart filled with immense gratitude. Hours later, she finally arrived in Toronto. Walking onto the platform, she was instantly enveloped in her boyfriend’s tight embrace, tears of joy and relief welling up in her eyes as she recounted her perilous adventure and the heartwarming rescue by strangers.
Paragraph 2:
Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. The fierce storm had completely passed, leaving the streets blanketed in sparkling white snow. With the assistance of local police and tow truck drivers, her vehicle was successfully pulled out of the ditch. Holding a small gift box, Emily visited Daniel and Rachel’s home to express her heartfelt thanks. They smiled warmly, insisting that helping others was simply what neighbors do. This unforgettable experience taught Emily a profound lesson: while reckless judgment can lead to danger, the unexpected kindness of strangers can melt the coldest winter.
过去分词短语作状语以及独立主格结构作状语
现在分词短语作状语
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