内容正文:
Unit 2 Teenage problems
话题解读
1. 核心话题:描述青少年常见问题,撰写问题求助信或建议信(以给Mr Friend写信为例,可迁移至给朋友、老师写建议信等场景)
2. 写作要求:① 能清晰描述青少年遇到的学习、人际交往等问题;② 正确使用if/whether及疑问词引导的宾语从句;③ 建议合理,语气恰当;④ 字数要求:80-120词
3. 中考定位:本话题属于“应用文-书信”范畴,是中考高频写作话题,常以“倾诉成长烦恼”“给朋友提建议”等形式命题,核心考查问题描述、建议表达及宾语从句的运用。
写作任务
本单元的写作任务是围绕“青少年问题与解决方法”核心主题,结合教材中Kitty和Simon给Mr Friend的求助信实例,写一封问题求助信或给有烦恼的朋友写一封建议信,清晰阐述问题或给出具体可行的建议。
审题指导
本单元相关写作题目可延伸为“给有考试焦虑的朋友提建议”“分享自己的成长烦恼”“给沉迷手机的同学写建议”等。写求助信时要真实具体地描述问题及自己的感受;写建议信时要语气委婉,建议具有可操作性。
内容一般从以下几方面着手:
· What problem do you/your friend have?(你/你的朋友遇到了什么问题?)
· How does this problem affect you/him/her?(这个问题带来了什么影响?)
· What have you tried to do to solve it?(你尝试过什么解决方法?)
· What advice can you give?(你能给出什么建议?)
· What do you hope will happen?(你希望得到什么结果?)
写作步骤
◆ 步骤一:开头点明写信目的,引出要倾诉的问题或要给出建议的话题。
◆ 步骤二:正文详细描述问题的具体表现及影响,或分点给出2-3条具体建议,每条建议说明原因。
◆ 步骤三:结尾表达希望问题得到解决,或鼓励对方积极面对困难。
写作框架
写作部分
核心内容
推荐时态
连接词/过渡语
开头(总起)
问候对方,说明写信目的(倾诉问题/给出建议)
一般现在时
I am writing to tell you about my problem...,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble with...,
I know you are feeling stressed these days because...
中间(分述)
详细描述问题及影响 / 分点给出具体建议及原因
一般现在时
The problem is that..., Moreover..., What's worse...,
First of all..., Secondly..., Finally..., You should..., It is a good idea to..., Why not...?
结尾(总结)
表达希望得到帮助 / 鼓励对方,相信问题会解决
一般现在时+一般将来时
I hope you can give me some advice.,
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.,
I believe you will get through this difficult time soon.
素材宝库
词汇积累
问题类
情绪类
建议类
连接词类
stress 压力
tired 疲惫的
manage 管理
because 因为
exam 考试
lonely 孤独的
control 控制
so 所以
homework 作业
sad 难过的
cut back on 减少
however 然而
mobile phone 手机
worried 担心的
communicate 沟通
besides 此外
argue 争吵
angry 生气的
share 分享
what's more 而且
fall behind 落后
nervous 紧张的
relax 放松
first of all 首先
stay up late 熬夜
stressed 有压力的
plan 计划
finally 最后
bully 欺凌
shy 害羞的
ask for help 求助
in this way 这样
句型积累
1. I have some problems with... and I don't know what to do.
我在……方面有一些问题,不知道该怎么办。
2. I am under a lot of stress because...
我压力很大,因为……
3. I wonder if/whether I should...
我想知道我是否应该……
4. I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with...
听说你在……方面遇到了困难,我很遗憾。
5. First of all, you should...
首先,你应该……
6. It is a good idea to...
……是个好主意。
7. Why not try...?
为什么不试试……呢?
8. I hope my advice will be of some help to you.
我希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。
写作模板
求助信模板
Dear [收信人姓名],
I am writing to tell you about my problem. I am feeling very stressed these days because [具体问题].
The problem is that [问题的具体表现]. What's worse, [问题带来的影响]. I have tried [尝试过的解决方法], but it didn't work. I wonder if/whether I should [困惑的事情].
I really don't know how to solve this problem. I hope you can give me some useful advice.
Yours sincerely,
[你的姓名]
建议信模板
Dear [收信人姓名],
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble with [对方的问题]. I know you are feeling bad now. Here is some advice for you.
First of all, [建议1]. [建议1的原因]. Secondly, [建议2]. [建议2的原因]. Finally, [建议3]. [建议3的原因].
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. I believe you will feel better soon.
Yours,
[你的姓名]
参考范文
A Letter to Mr Friend
Dear Mr Friend,
I am writing to tell you about my problem. I am feeling very stressed these days because of my schoolwork.
The problem is that I never have enough time to finish all my homework. I often have to stay up late to do it, so I feel tired in class the next day. What's worse, I sometimes waste time on my mobile phone when I should be studying. I always regret it later, but I don't know how to control myself. I wonder if I should cut back on my hobbies to spend more time on study.
I really don't know how to manage my time well. I hope you can give me some advice.
Yours sincerely,
Luo Yang
变式训练题目
你的朋友Tom最近因为考试压力太大而感到焦虑,晚上睡不着觉,学习效率也下降了。请你给他写一封建议信,帮助他缓解压力。要点如下:
1. 制定合理的学习计划,不要熬夜;
2. 每天花一点时间运动,放松身心;
3. 遇到困难时和父母或老师沟通。
要求:语句通顺,意思连贯,词数80-100,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I am sorry to hear that you are feeling stressed about the coming exams.
Yours,
Li Hua
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