2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---真诚善意，双向温暖 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题核心考点，涵盖文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）、情节构造、语言表达等模块，通过细节问答、情节线梳理等问题导向设计，引导学生自主构建续写逻辑框架，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于自主诊断与思维引导结合，如开篇设置细节问答自测文本理解，情节构造环节通过衔接句任务培养思维品质，续写框架分步骤指导提升语言能力。每个模块配有综合概括（中英）和句式分析，帮助学生个性化提升，教师可通过学情精准指导，支持因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Kelly Schilling needed a few last-minute groceries before the weekend and placed an order through an online platform. Like any routine order, delivery driver Lisa Burnett accepted the request, picked up the items, and dropped them off at Schilling’s home. But the next day, Burnett noticed something surprising. Her earnings showed an extra $130. Concerned it might be a mistake, she contacted the company but was told the payment was listed as miscellaneous (杂项的). Still worried someone might have been accidentally overcharged, she checked the order details through the platform and found out it was Schilling who had paid. So she decided to do something many people might not have done — she went back to return the money. When Burnett arrived at Schilling’s home and explained why she came, Schilling checked her bank statement. Her eyes widened. She had indeed tipped $ 130 by accident — a careless click she hadn’t even noticed. “You came all the way back to return this?” Schilling said in surprise. The moment was captured on Schilling’s home security camera. Before Burnett left, Schilling asked for her phone number. That night, Schilling watched the video again. Burnett’s honest face and worried explanation stayed with her. “She could have very easily taken the tip, and I would never have heard from her,” Schilling thought to herself, “but she didn’t.” Touched by Burnett’s honesty, Schilling wanted to show her gratitude in a meaningful way. A few days later, Schilling invited Burnett back and surprised her with a new jacket and $250 in gift cards. “I can’t take this,” Burnett protested, but Schilling insisted. As they talked, Burnett finally opened up. Her voice trembled (颤抖) as she spoke: She had lost her daughter five years ago and was now raising her granddaughter alone. “She loves to draw,” Burnett added quietly, “but we can’t afford art supplies right now.” The words hung in the air, heavy with years of grief (悲伤) she had carried silently. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Out of sympathy, Schilling decided to do more. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Days later, Burnett found a small package on her doorstep. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Kelly ordered groceries online and driver Lisa finished delivery--- _________________ --- Lisa found an extra $130 tip and confirmed it was Kelly’s mistake--- _________________ --- Lisa returned the money honestly and the whole process was recorded--- _________________ --- Kelly was touched and rewarded Lisa with gifts--- Lisa opened up about her tough life and granddaughter’s love for drawing 4. 细节问答 Why did Kelly place an online order? ：___________________________________ What surprising thing did Lisa notice the next day?：_________________________________ What did Lisa do after finding the extra money?：________________________________________________ How did the extra $130 tip happen?：__________________________________________ Why was Kelly deeply touched by Lisa?：_____________________________________________ What reward did Kelly prepare for Lisa at first?：_________________________________________________ What tough experience did Lisa share with Kelly?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 凯莉网购日用品，外卖员丽莎正常完成配送→_________________ →丽莎发现一笔多出的130美元小费，多方核实为凯莉误操作→_________________ →丽莎专程上门归还钱款，诚信举动被监控拍下→凯莉深受触动，主动准备礼物回馈丽莎→_________________ →丽莎敞开心扉，诉说丧女、独自抚养孙女、无力购买美术用品的艰难处境→（续写）凯莉心生同情，决定给予更多帮助→（续写）暖心礼物送达，双向善意温暖彼此，传递美好 6．情感线 Kelly: ordinary and casual→___________→grateful and moved→___________→sympathetic and warm→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情善意类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Out of sympathy, Schilling decided to do more. 衔接句1——What more plans did Kelly make? How would she help Lisa’s granddaughter?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Days later, Burnett found a small package on her doorstep. 衔接句2——What was in the package? How did Lisa feel? What was the ending and theme?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：出于同情，凯莉决定做更多事情。→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：几天后，丽莎在门阶上发现了一个小包裹。→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Out of sympathy, Schilling decided to do more. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Days later, Burnett found a small package on her doorstep. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Lisa Burnett（诚实守信、生活艰辛、隐忍善良的外卖员）；Kelly Schilling（懂得感恩、心怀善意、乐于助人的普通人）；Lisa’s granddaughter（热爱画画、天真纯粹的小女孩） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Kelly ordered groceries online and driver Lisa finished delivery--- Lisa accidentally got an extra $130 tip from Kelly’s wrong operation--- Lisa found out the truth and returned the money honestly--- Kelly was touched by her integrity and prepared gifts to thank her--- Lisa opened up about her painful life and her granddaughter’s unmet dream of drawing 4. 细节问答 Why did Kelly place an online order? ：She needed a few last-minute groceries before the weekend. What surprising thing did Lisa notice the next day?：She found an extra $130 in her earnings. What did Lisa do after finding the extra money?：She checked the order, confirmed it was Kelly’s mistake and returned the money in person. How did the extra $130 tip happen?：Kelly made a careless click and tipped $130 by accident without noticing it. Why was Kelly deeply touched by Lisa?：Lisa chose to return the extra money honestly though no one would know the mistake. What reward did Kelly prepare for Lisa at first?：She gave Lisa a new jacket and $250 in gift cards to show gratitude. What tough experience did Lisa share with Kelly?：She lost her daughter five years ago and had to raise her granddaughter alone, unable to afford art supplies for the girl. What does the story tell us?：Honesty wins kindness, and sincere goodwill can warm others’ tough lives and form beautiful mutual warmth. 5．情节线 凯莉为备周末物资网购日用品，外卖员丽莎顺利完成配送→次日丽莎发现账户多出130美元小费，主动核查溯源→确认是凯莉误操作后，丽莎专程上门归还钱款，坚守诚信→凯莉被丽莎的善良正直打动，准备新衣和礼品卡致谢→交谈中丽莎吐露心酸，独自抚养孙女、无力满足孩子画画的爱好→（续写）凯莉心生怜悯，决心全力帮助小女孩实现绘画心愿→（续写）暖心包裹送达，满载画具与善意，双向奔赴的温暖治愈人心 6．情感线 Kelly: ordinary and casual→surprised and grateful→moved and warm→sympathetic and soft-hearted→sincere and fulfilled（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：外卖员丽莎主动归还顾客误付的大额小费，用诚信打动对方，得知丽莎祖孙的艰难处境后，心怀感恩的凯莉用善意回馈温暖，上演了一场双向奔赴的美好。 英文：Delivery driver Lisa returned the accidentally overpaid tip with great honesty, which deeply touched Kelly. Learning about Lisa’s tough life, Kelly repaid her kindness with sincere help, creating mutual warmth between strangers. 8. 句式 状语从句：Like any routine order, delivery driver Lisa Burnett accepted the request, picked up the items, and dropped them off at Schilling’s home. 非谓语动词：Touched by Burnett’s honesty, Schilling wanted to show her gratitude in a meaningful way. 宾语从句：She found out it was Schilling who had paid the extra money. 定语从句：She had lost her daughter five years ago and was now raising her granddaughter alone, who loved drawing very much. 9. 本文主题 温情善意类：诚信是最珍贵的品格，善意双向奔赴，平凡的温暖足以治愈生活的苦难。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Out of sympathy, Schilling decided to do more. 衔接句1——What more plans did Kelly make? How would she help Lisa’s granddaughter? Kelly planned to prepare various professional art supplies for the little girl and help her stick to her drawing dream. Paragraph 2: Days later, Burnett found a small package on her doorstep. 衔接句2——What was in the package? How did Lisa feel? What was the ending and theme? The package was full of exquisite art supplies, which moved Lisa deeply, and the two strangers formed a warm bond based on honesty and kindness. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：出于同情，凯莉决定做更多事情。→①凯莉十分心疼祖孙二人的处境，牢记小女孩爱画画的心愿→②她精心采购全套专业画具、画纸和颜料→③同时附上暖心便签，鼓励小女孩坚持热爱、勇敢追梦； 第二段：几天后，丽莎在门阶上发现了一个小包裹。→①打开包裹，丰富崭新的美术用品映入眼帘，让她无比动容→②孙女收获心爱礼物，满心欢喜、重拾绘画快乐→③丽莎深切体会善意的力量，诚信换温暖，善意终双向奔赴。 四.段落续写范文 Out of sympathy, Schilling decided to do more. She was deeply touched by Lisa’s suffering and selflessness. Remembering the granddaughter’s unfulfilled love for drawing, she immediately went to buy various professional art supplies, including crayons, sketchbooks, watercolor paints and brushes. She also wrote a warm note, encouraging the little girl to keep drawing and holding fast to her dream. She hoped these small gifts could bring warmth and joy to the poor girl’s life. Days later, Burnett found a small package on her doorstep. Curious and confused, she opened it and was instantly overwhelmed with warmth. Seeing the complete set of delicate art supplies and the sincere note, tears welled up in her eyes. Her granddaughter jumped with joy, holding the new brushes tightly and unable to wait to create. Moved deeply, Burnett realized honesty was never in vain. The two strangers’ mutual kindness wove the warmest story, proving that sincerity and goodwill could always light up ordinary lives. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $