内容正文:
英语应用文写作讲解与练习
一、回复信:当运动遇上AI主题活动
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校上个月开展了“当运动遇见AI”(When Sports Meet AI)的主题活动,你的外国好友Jim对此很感兴趣,发来邮件询问有关情况。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:1. 活动内容;2. 你的收获。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般过去时和一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段交代写作目的——介绍一个上个月开展的主题活动;第二段介绍活动内容(要点1);第三段写自己的收获(要点2)并表达期待。
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
Learning that you take great interest in the “When Sports Meet AI” activity held at our school last month, I’m writing to share it with you.
During basketball practice, AI cameras could capture our shooting movements in real time, replay them as “stick figure” animations on a big screen, and even give scores for each move. What amazed us most was the AI ping-pong ball machine, which could tailor its ball speed and landing points to our level, giving us the feeling of playing against a real robot.
Thanks to this activity, AI is more of a real game-changer that makes sports both fun and smart than a sci-fi fantasy. Hopefully, you will also come and experience it for yourself one day. (122 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
亲爱的吉姆:
得知你对上个月我们学校举办的“当运动遇见AI”活动很感兴趣,我写信想和你分享此事。
篮球练习中,AI摄像头会实时捕捉我们的投篮动作,然后在大屏上用“火柴人”动画回放,还能给动作打分。最神奇的是AI乒乓球发球机,它能根据我们的水平调整球速和落点,感觉就像和机器人对练!
这次活动让我觉得AI不再是科幻片里的东西,而是真的能让运动变得又好玩又聪明。希望有一天你也能来体验!
李华
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为回复信;
(2)因两人是好友关系,故李华的身份不必交代;
(3)因文本的主体部分为介绍上个月的一项主题活动及其收获,故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时和一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1)I hope this email finds you well! 运用无灵主语结构:见信好
(1)take great interest in对...感兴趣
(2)What amazed us most was主系表结构
(3)tailor its ball speed and landing points to our level根据...量身定制
(4)AI is more of ... than ...与其说...倒不如说...
(5)Hopefully=I hope that
二、投稿:My Dream Campus Day
假设你是晨光中学的李津,你校英语学习俱乐部决定举办主题为“My Dream Campus Day”的英文征文活动,请从下列选题中选择一个进行投稿。内容要求:1.你期待设立的校园主题日?2.你希望安排的特色活动?3.设立这个主题日的意义。
征文选题:
握手日 Handshake Day
点赞日Thumbs-up Day
角色互换日 Role-switching Day
注意:1.词数不少于100;2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;3.题目已给出,不计入总词数。
My Dream Campus Day
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段阐明观点——期待设立的校园主题日(要点1);第二段阐述希望安排的特色活动(要点2);第三段阐述设立这个主题日的意义(要点3)。
【参考范文】
My Dream Campus Day
The campus theme day I look forward to is “Thumbs-up Day”.
On this very day, each and every student is given five “thumbs-up stickers”, which can be put on anyone they feel grateful to or admire. Plus, there will be a “Like” Wall on campus, where anonymous messages of encouragement and praise for peers can be posted. The midday broadcast will also feature a “Praise Moment”, sharing sweet little stories.
Thumbs-up Day is set up so that we might learn to discover what shines in others and to express appreciation with authenticity. Not only can this enhance our mutual confidence, but it can also foster a school environment brimming with kindness and positive energy. After all, a sincere compliment is enough to brighten up the entire day! (127 words)
【中文翻译】
我梦想中的校园日
我期待的校园主题日是点赞日。
这一天,每位同学都会领到五张“点赞贴纸”,可以贴在你想感谢或欣赏的人身上。此外,校园里还会设立一面“点赞墙”,大家可以匿名写下对同伴的鼓励与赞美。午间广播也会增设“点赞时刻”,分享暖心小故事。
设立点赞日,是为了让我们学会发现他人的闪光点,并用真诚的方式表达欣赏。这不仅能增强彼此的自信心,更能营造一个充满善意与正能量的校园氛围。一句真诚的赞美,足以让一整天都明亮起来。
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为投稿;
(2)因文体是投稿,故李津的身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为阐述自己希望安排的特色活动及设立这个主题日的意义,故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时和一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1)On this very恰好的,正是的 day
(2)each and every强调作用 student
(3)Plus此外
(4)The midday broadcast will also feature以...为特色 a “Praise Moment”
(5)with authenticity真诚地
(6)Not only can否定词置于句首产生部分倒装结构 this enhance our mutual confidence
(7)foster促进,提升 a school environment brimming with用作后置定语,意为“充满” kindness and positive energy
三、投稿:“感恩学校”的英语征文活动
你校正在举办主题为“感恩学校”的英语征文活动。请你以“Thank You, My School”为题写一篇短文,内容包括:1. 你眼中的学校;2. 老师的辛勤付出;3. 你感激之情。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thank You, My School
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段阐述自己眼中的学校(要点1);第二段写老师的辛勤付出(要点2);第三段表达感激之情(要点3)。
【参考范文】
Thank You, My School
My school is not only a paradise brimming with the fragrance of books, but also a harbor where dreams set sail. Within this campus are bright classrooms, a spacious playground, and close friends who stay with me day and night.
Nothing is more memorable than the teachers' tireless efforts. Like gardeners, they nourish us with the dew of knowledge, and like candles, they burn themselves to illuminate our way ahead.
It is the teachers' instruction -- like the spring breeze and drizzles -- that silently and gently moistens my heart. May our school be blessed with countless outstanding graduates across the globe, and may every teacher be rewarded with good health and everlasting happiness. (114 words)
【中文翻译】
谢谢您,我的学校
我的学校,是书香弥漫的乐园,更是梦想起航的港湾。这里有明亮的教室,宽阔的操场,还有朝夕相处的同窗好友。
最难忘的是老师们的辛勤付出。他们像园丁,用知识的甘露浇灌我们成长;像蜡烛,燃烧自己照亮我们前行的路。
老师们的教诲如春风化雨,滋润我心。无论将来走到哪里,我都会记得在这里度过的美好时光。愿学校桃李满天下,愿老师们幸福安康!
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为投稿;
(2)因文体是投稿,故作者的身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为描述自己眼中的学校及老师的辛勤付出并表达感激之情,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1)a paradise brimming with后置定语,充满 the fragrance of books
(2)Within this campus are完全倒装结构 bright classrooms, a spacious playground, and close friends who stay with me day and night.
(3)Nothing is more memorable than否定词+比较级=最高级 the teachers' tireless efforts.
(4)nourish us with用...滋润
(5)It is the teachers' instruction -- like the spring breeze and drizzles -- that强调句型 silently and gently moistens my heart滋润我的心灵.
(6)be blessed with幸运地拥有
(7)be rewarded with被奖励以
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