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2026年上海市中考英语写作范文
书面表达题目:
假设你是初三学生李华,你的好朋友Jim对中国文化很感兴趣,制定了一个阅读计划:每个月读五本中文小说。一个月后,他觉得计划实施很困难,于是向你请教2个问题:
1. 是否自己做得不够好?
2. 是否应该放弃这个机会
要求:
1. 请你回答他的两个问题;
2. 给予他两条建议,并说明理由。
写作范文
(1) 范文 1
Dear Jim,
I received your letter and I understand your problem. First, I want to tell you that you are not doing it badly. It is normal to find something difficult at the beginning. So please do not give up this chance.
Here is my advice for you. To begin with, why not change your plan a little? You can start with five short stories every month instead of five long novels. This way, you can finish them more easily. Secondly, you should read with a purpose. You can make some notes while you are reading. These notes will help you remember the stories better.
I believe that you can make it if you keep trying. Chinese culture is wonderful and you will enjoy it more if you find the right way.
Yours,
Li Hua
【好词汇】
· received 收到
· It is normal to ...是正常的
· give up 放弃
· To begin with 首先
· instead of 代替,而不是
· with a purpose 有目的地
· while 当...的时候
· make it 成功,做到
【写作句子结构】
· I want to tell you that + 从句
· 翻译:我想告诉你...
· 例句:I want to tell you that you are not doing it badly.
· 例句翻译:我想告诉你,你做得并不差。
· why not + 动词原形?
· 翻译:为什么不...呢?
· 例句:why not change your plan a little?
· 例句翻译:为什么不稍微改变一下你的计划呢?
· ..., while you are ...
· 翻译:...,当你...的时候
· 例句:You can make some notes while you are reading.
· 例句翻译:你可以在阅读的时候做些笔记。
· I believe that + 从句 if ...
· 翻译:我相信...如果...
· 例句:I believe that you can make it if you keep trying.
· 例句翻译:我相信如果你继续努力,你一定能做到。
【范文翻译】
亲爱的吉姆:
我收到了你的来信,也理解你的困难。首先,我想告诉你,你做得并不差。刚开始觉得某件事困难是很正常的。所以请不要放弃这个机会。
这是我给你的建议。首先,为什么不稍微改变一下你的计划呢?你可以每个月从五个短篇故事开始,而不是五本长篇小说。这样,你能更轻松地完成它们。其次,你应该有目的地阅读。你可以在阅读的时候做些笔记。这些笔记能帮助你更好地记住故事。
我相信如果你继续努力,你一定能做到。中国文化很精彩,如果你找到了正确的方法,你会更加享受它。
此致
李华
(2) 范文 2
Dear Jim,
I was glad to hear from you. As for your questions, my answer is no to both of them. You are not doing something wrong. It just means that you need a better way. Also, you should not give up this valuable chance.
Now let me offer you two suggestions. First, you can try to read easier books. There are many Chinese novels for beginners which are not too hard. Second, why not ask your Chinese teacher for help? He or she may give you some useful materials. If you do so, you will find reading becomes more interesting.
In my opinion, learning a new culture takes time. Just be patient and take one step at a time. I am sure that you will make great progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
【好词汇】
· hear from 收到...的来信
· As for 至于
· valuable 有价值的
· offer 提供
· beginners 初学者
· ask ... for help 向...求助
· materials 材料,资料
· take one step at a time 一步一步来
【写作句子结构】
· There are many ... which ...
· 翻译:有很多...它们...
· 例句:There are many Chinese novels for beginners which are not too hard.
· 例句翻译:有很多适合初学者的中文小说,它们不太难。
· If you do so, you will ...
· 翻译:如果你这样做,你将...
· 例句:If you do so, you will find reading becomes more interesting.
· 例句翻译:如果你这样做,你会发现阅读变得更有趣。
· I am sure that + 从句
· 翻译:我确信...
· 例句:I am sure that you will make great progress.
· 例句翻译:我确信你会取得很大的进步。
【范文翻译】
亲爱的吉姆:
很高兴收到你的来信。至于你的问题,我对这两个问题的答案都是否定的。你并没有做错什么。这只是意味着你需要一个更好的方法。而且,你不应该放弃这个宝贵的机会。
现在让我给你两条建议。首先,你可以尝试读一些更简单的书。有很多适合初学者的中文小说,它们不太难。其次,为什么不向你的中文老师求助呢?他或她可能会给你一些有用的资料。如果你这样做,你会发现阅读变得更有趣。
在我看来,学习一种新文化需要时间。保持耐心,一步一步来。我确信你会取得很大的进步。
此致
李华
(3) 范文 3
Dear Jim,
I have read your letter carefully. To answer your first question, I do not think you are not good enough. Maybe your reading plan is too big for a beginner. For your second question, you should certainly not give up this chance. It is too good to miss.
Here are two pieces of advice for you. On one hand, you can reduce the number. Reading three novels a month might be easier for you. On the other hand, you can read some picture books or comics first. They are fun and can help you build your vocabulary. As long as you keep reading every day, you will improve.
Remember that every great learner once started from zero. Just keep going and you will see the beauty of Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【好词汇】
· carefully 仔细地
· beginner 初学者
· certainly 当然,肯定
· too ... to ... 太...而不能...
· On one hand ... On the other hand ... 一方面...另一方面...
· reduce 减少
· build 建立,增强
· As long as 只要
【写作句子结构】
· I do not think + 从句
· 翻译:我认为...不...
· 例句:I do not think you are not good enough.
· 例句翻译:我认为你并不是不够好。
· It is too ... to ...
· 翻译:它太...而不能...
· 例句:It is too good to miss.
· 例句翻译:它太好了,不能错过。
· As long as you keep doing ..., you will ...
· 翻译:只要你坚持做...,你将...
· 例句:As long as you keep reading every day, you will improve.
· 例句翻译:只要你坚持每天阅读,你就会进步。
· Remember that + 从句
· 翻译:记住...
· 例句:Remember that every great learner once started from zero.
· 例句翻译:记住,每个伟大的学习者都是从零开始的。
【范文翻译】
亲爱的吉姆:
我已经仔细读了你的信。关于你的第一个问题,我认为你并不是不够好。也许你的阅读计划对于一个初学者来说太大了。关于你的第二个问题,你当然不应该放弃这个机会。它太好了,不能错过。
这里有两条建议给你。一方面,你可以减少数量。一个月读三本小说可能对你来说更容易。另一方面,你可以先读一些绘本或漫画。它们很有趣,也能帮你积累词汇。只要你坚持每天阅读,你就会进步。
记住,每个伟大的学习者都是从零开始的。坚持下去,你就会看到中国文化的美丽。
此致
李华
(4) 范文 4
Dear Jim,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your reading plan. But do not worry. The answer to your first question is no. It is not that you are not doing well. It is the plan that needs to be changed. And of course, you should not give up.
I would like to give you two suggestions. First, you can choose books that you are really interested in. When you enjoy the story, reading does not feel like a task. Second, you can set a smaller goal for yourself. For example, you can read for just 20 minutes every day. This small step can lead to a big change.
I hope my advice can help you. Keep up your good work and enjoy your reading journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【好词汇】
· have trouble with 在...方面有困难
· worry 担心
· of course 当然
· suggestions 建议
· be interested in 对...感兴趣
· task 任务
· set a goal 设定目标
· lead to 导致,通向
【写作句子结构】
· It is not that ... It is ... that ...
· 翻译:不是...而是...
· 例句:It is not that you are not doing well. It is the plan that needs to be changed.
· 例句翻译:不是你做得不好。而是计划需要被改变。
· ..., you can choose books that ...
· 翻译:...,你可以选择...的书。
· 例句:you can choose books that you are really interested in.
· 例句翻译:你可以选择你真正感兴趣的书。
· When you do ..., ... does not feel like ...
· 翻译:当你...时,...不像是...
· 例句:When you enjoy the story, reading does not feel like a task.
· 例句翻译:当你享受故事时,阅读不像是一项任务。
· This small step can lead to ...
· 翻译:这个小步骤能通向...
· 例句:This small step can lead to a big change.
· 例句翻译:这个小步骤能带来巨大的改变。
【范文翻译】
亲爱的吉姆:
听说你的阅读计划遇到了困难,我很难过。但是别担心。你第一个问题的答案是否定的。不是你做得不好。而是计划需要被改变。当然,你也不应该放弃。
我想给你两条建议。第一,你可以选择你真正感兴趣的书。当你享受故事时,阅读不像是一项任务。第二,你可以为自己设定一个更小的目标。例如,你每天只读20分钟。这个小步骤能带来巨大的改变。
希望我的建议能帮到你。继续加油,享受你的阅读之旅吧。
此致
李华
(5) 范文 5
Dear Jim,
I fully understand how you feel. Let me answer your questions directly. For the first one, you are not doing badly. Reading five Chinese novels in a month is a big challenge for anyone. So it is not your fault. For the second one, you should hold on to this chance because it is a great way to learn.
Now, my advice for you is as follows. Firstly, you can read during your free time, such as before going to bed. This helps you form a habit. Secondly, you can watch some Chinese movies or TV shows based on the novels. This will make the stories more lively and easier to understand.
I am looking forward to hearing about your progress. Believe in yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
【好词汇】
· fully 完全地
· directly 直接地
· challenge 挑战
· fault 过错
· hold on to 坚持,抓住
· as follows 如下
· form a habit 养成习惯
· based on 基于
【写作句子结构】
· ... for anyone.
· 翻译:...对任何人来说都是...的。
· 例句:Reading five Chinese novels in a month is a big challenge for anyone.
· 例句翻译:一个月读五本中文小说对任何人来说都是一个大挑战。
· ..., such as ...
· 翻译:...,例如...
· 例句:you can read during your free time, such as before going to bed.
· 例句翻译:你可以在空闲时间阅读,比如睡觉前。
· This will make the stories + 形容词 + and + 形容词
· 翻译:这会让故事更...更...
· 例句:This will make the stories more lively and easier to understand.
· 例句翻译:这会让故事更生动,也更容易理解。
· I am looking forward to ...
· 翻译:我期待...
· 例句:I am looking forward to hearing about your progress.
· 例句翻译:我期待听到你的进步。
【范文翻译】
亲爱的吉姆:
我完全理解你的感受。让我直接回答你的问题。关于第一个,你做得并不差。一个月读五本中文小说对任何人来说都是一个大挑战。所以这不是你的过错。关于第二个,你应该坚持这个机会,因为这是学习的好方法。
现在,我的建议如下。首先,你可以在空闲时间阅读,比如睡觉前。这能帮你养成习惯。其次,你可以看一些基于这些小说改编的中国电影或电视剧。这会让故事更生动,也更容易理解。
我期待听到你的进步。相信自己。
此致
李华
(6) 范文 6
Dear Jim,
I got your email and I know you are worried. In my view, you are doing a good job just by trying. So for your first question, you are not doing it poorly. It just takes time to get used to reading in Chinese. For your second question, do not even think about giving up. Every step you take is useful.
Let me share two ideas with you. To start with, you can change your reading order. Read the first chapter of several books and then pick the one you like best to finish. Also, you can join a reading club. Discussing the stories with others will make the experience more enjoyable.
Learning is a journey, not a race. Take it easy and have fun. I am always here to support you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【好词汇】
· In my view 在我看来
· poorly 糟糕地,不好地
· get used to 习惯于
· think about 考虑
· To start with 首先
· pick 挑选
· join 加入
· support 支持
【写作句子结构】
· In my view, you are doing a good job just by + 动词ing
· 翻译:在我看来,仅仅通过...你就做得很好。
· 例句:In my view, you are doing a good job just by trying.
· 例句翻译:在我看来,仅仅通过尝试你就做得很好。
· It just takes time to + 动词原形
· 翻译:做...只是需要时间。
· 例句:It just takes time to get used to reading in Chinese.
· 例句翻译:习惯用中文阅读只是需要时间。
· ... and then pick the one you like best ...
· 翻译:...然后挑选你最喜欢的那一个...
· 例句:Read the first chapter of several books and then pick the one you like best to finish.
· 例句翻译:读几本书的第一章,然后挑选你最喜欢的那一本去读完。
【范文翻译】
亲爱的吉姆:
我收到了你的邮件,我知道你很担心。在我看来,仅仅通过尝试你就做得很好。所以对于你的第一个问题,你做得并不差。习惯用中文阅读只是需要时间。对于你的第二个问题,甚至不要考虑放弃。你走的每一步都是有用的。
让我和你分享两个想法。首先,你可以改变你的阅读顺序。读几本书的第一章,然后挑选你最喜欢的那一本去读完。另外,你可以加入一个阅读俱乐部。与他人讨论故事会让体验更有趣。
学习是一场旅程,不是一场竞赛。放轻松,享受其中。我永远在这里支持你。
此致
李华
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