2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---兄妹短片比赛，诚信救赎 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写题型，系统梳理文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）、情节构造、续写框架等核心考点，通过细节问答、情节线梳理等问题导向设计，引导学生自主构建续写逻辑链，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于自主学习支持与思维品质培养，如设置“细节问答”自测诊断文本理解漏洞，“续写框架”任务驱动学生分析情节发展，培养逻辑推断能力。每个模块配有情感线梳理表助反思总结，教师可通过学生续写练习精准把握学情，支持个性化复习，提升学生自主复习能力。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I'd always been told to take care of my older brother, Brian, who was born weak and small. I'd often tie his shoes or prepare another glass of water for him. My mom saw my larger size and strong body as a sign that I was to be a kind of guardian angel for Brian. However, that was not the case. One day our school sponsored a short film competition. First prize was $100, and I knew just how I would spend it. There was a brand-new tablet I was dying to own. So I decided the first place bonus definitely had to land in my pocket. When it came to making the film, I realized my clumsy hands and lack of editing skills would surely screw it up. I thought of Brian's talent for video editing and his steady hands, and knew he was the man for the job. I immediately begged Brian. Unexpectedly, he asked for a cut. That was fifty-fifty. Quickly doing the math in my head, I figured out even if I split the first prize, I'd still have enough cash for the tablet. So I gave in to Brian's demands. With skillful editing, Brian turned our simple footage into an amazing short film, and we had the best entry ever. Then the unexpected happened: We came in second. Unfortunately, second prize was only $50, and I needed every penny of that to buy the tablet. The day of the awards ceremony, the principal handed over the money to me because Brian was home, sick with cold. If he really wanted to win, he would have been here today, I thought to myself, justifying stealing the cash from under poor Brian's runny nose. With hardly a thought, I ran to the store and bought my dream tablet. That night when Brian asked if we had won, I denied, afraid to look into his eyes. The whole thing was never mentioned again until the day Brian was packing for college. I played my usual role in helping him pack when I came across an old US B drive labeled "School Projects". 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I was looking through the files on the US B drive when one video caught my eye. Paragraph 2: "You actually knew and didn't say anything?" I was shocked. 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The author was supposed to guard his weak elder brother Brian--- _________________ --- The author desired a new tablet and decided to win the film competition prize--- _________________ --- Brian edited perfectly and they won the second prize of $50--- _________________ --- The author took all the money, bought the tablet and lied to Brian--- _________________ --- Years later, the author found an old USB drive while helping Brian pack for college 4. 细节问答 What was the author supposed to do for Brian? ：___________________________________ What was the author’s goal for the film competition?：_________________________________ Why did the author turn to Brian for help?：________________________________________________ What agreement did the two brothers reach?：__________________________________________ What prize did they finally win?：_____________________________________________ Why did the author get the prize money alone?：_________________________________________________ What selfish thing did the author do?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者自幼被嘱托照顾体弱的哥哥布莱恩→_________________ →作者想要新平板，决心拿下校园短片比赛一等奖奖金→_________________ →作者剪辑能力不足，求助擅长剪辑的哥哥，双方约定奖金五五分→作品精良获得二等奖，奖金仅有50美元→_________________ →哥哥生病缺席颁奖，作者独得奖金、私吞全款买平板并撒谎隐瞒→多年后哥哥收拾行李准备上大学，作者翻到旧U盘→（续写）作者浏览U盘视频发现真相→（续写）得知哥哥早已知情却默默包容，作者愧疚醒悟 6．情感线 I：selfish and greedy→___________→guilty and restless→___________→remorseful and mature（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 亲情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1 衔接句1——What was in the video? What truth did the author find? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 衔接句2——How did Brian respond? What did the author realize? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我浏览U盘文件时，一个视频吸引了我的注意。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：“你其实一直都知道，却从未说破？”我震惊不已。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 I was looking through the files on the USB drive when one video caught my eye. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ "You actually knew and didn't say anything?" I was shocked. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（年少自私、贪图小利、最终醒悟成长的弟弟）；Brian（体弱温柔、才华出众、包容大度、深爱弟弟的哥哥） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 The author was supposed to guard his weak elder brother Brian--- He was expected to take good care of his frail brother from an early age --- The author desired a new tablet and decided to win the film competition prize--- He planned to use the prize money to buy his dream tablet --- Brian edited perfectly and they won the second prize of $50--- The bonus was far less than expected and could not be split --- The author took all the money, bought the tablet and lied to Brian--- He kept the secret for years with hidden guilt --- Years later, the author found an old USB drive while helping Brian pack for college 4. 细节问答 What was the author supposed to do for Brian? ：He was told to take care of his weak and frail elder brother Brian. What was the author’s goal for the film competition?：He wanted to win the $100 first prize to buy his dream new tablet. Why did the author turn to Brian for help?：He was clumsy and poor at editing, while Brian had great editing talent and steady hands. What agreement did the two brothers reach?：They agreed to split the prize money fifty-fifty. What prize did they finally win?：They won the second prize with a $50 reward. Why did the author get the prize money alone?：Brian stayed at home sick with a cold and missed the awards ceremony. What selfish thing did the author do?：He took all the prize money to buy the tablet and lied to Brian about their award result. What does the story tell us?：Family love is tolerant and selfless, and we should cherish kinship, be honest and learn to take responsibility. 5．情节线 作者自幼被嘱托照顾体弱的哥哥布莱恩→母亲认为作者体格强壮，理应守护、照顾哥哥→作者想要新平板，决心拿下校园短片比赛一等奖奖金→一等奖100美元的奖金足够购买心仪平板→作者剪辑能力不足，求助擅长剪辑的哥哥，双方约定奖金五五分→作品精良获得二等奖，奖金仅有50美元→奖金数额不足平分，作者心生贪念→哥哥生病缺席颁奖，作者独得奖金、私吞全款买平板并撒谎隐瞒→多年后哥哥收拾行李准备上大学，作者翻到旧U盘→（续写）作者浏览U盘视频发现真相→（续写）得知哥哥早已知情却默默包容，作者愧疚醒悟 6．情感线 I：selfish and greedy→guilty and uneasy→guilty and restless→astonished and ashamed→remorseful and mature（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：弟弟为买平板和擅长剪辑的哥哥合作参赛，获奖后私吞全部奖金并撒谎隐瞒，多年后意外发现哥哥早已知晓一切却选择包容，弟弟满心愧疚、幡然醒悟。 英文：To buy a dream tablet, the author cooperated with his brother to attend a film competition but selfishly took all the prize money and lied. Years later, he accidentally found his brother had known the truth all along but chose to forgive silently, making him deeply remorseful. 8. 句式 定语从句：I'd always been told to take care of my older brother, Brian, who was born weak and small. 结果状语从句：I figured out even if I split the first prize, I'd still have enough cash for the tablet. 宾语从句：I denied, afraid to look into his eyes. 时间状语从句：When it came to making the film, I realized my clumsy hands would screw it up. 非谓语动词：I came across an old USB drive labeled "School Projects". 9. 本文主题 亲情成长类：亲情是包容与救赎，直面自己的过错、懂得珍惜与感恩，方能实现自我成长，不负温柔亲情。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1 衔接句1——What was in the video? What truth did the author find? The video was their competition work, with a hidden ending recording the awards ceremony, which meant Brian had known the result and the prize money all the time. Paragraph 2 衔接句2——How did Brian respond? What did the author realize? Brian smiled and said he chose to keep silent to avoid embarrassing the author, making the author realize his selfishness and understand the selfless family love. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我浏览U盘文件时，一个视频吸引了我的注意。 →①点开视频，发现是当年参赛的短片→②视频末尾附带颁奖画面，记录了获奖和奖金信息→③我瞬间明白哥哥当年就知晓全部真相 第二段：“你其实一直都知道，却从未说破？”我震惊不已。 →①哥哥温柔坦言，早已看穿我的谎言却选择包容→②我为自己当年的自私狭隘满心愧疚→③深刻领悟亲情的真谛，决心弥补过错、珍惜手足之情 四.段落续写（标准范文） I was looking through the files on the USB drive when one video caught my eye. It was exactly the short film we had made for the competition. To my great surprise, the tail of the video was attached to a clip of the awards ceremony. It clearly recorded us winning the second prize and the $50 bonus. A sudden realization struck me: Brian had seen this video and known the truth long ago, but he never blamed me or asked for the money. My heart was instantly filled with shame and regret for my childish selfishness. "You actually knew and didn't say anything?" I was shocked. Wearing a gentle smile, Brian nodded softly. He explained that he knew I had longed for the tablet for a long time and didn’t want to upset me. Moved and guilty, I apologized sincerely for my greed and lie. This experience taught me that family love is the most tolerant and precious treasure. From then on, I cherished our brotherly bond and learned to be honest, grateful and responsible. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $