读后续写技能提升篇（一）2027届高三英语二轮专项写作备考

**基本信息** 聚焦读后续写情感描写，构建“语料积累-话题拓展-场景应用”三阶训练体系，强化语言能力与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |积累教材续写语料|词汇11个、佳句3句|教考衔接，提炼教材动作/人物描写语料|从基础词汇到情感佳句，构建表达基础| |拓展情感描写素材|词汇6组、语块5个、佳句8句|精准构建情感表达体系，区分词汇词性与搭配|按“词汇-语块-佳句”递进，强化情感描写准确性| |锤炼续写场景|3个场景（露营/登山/观日出）|内化语法结构（无灵主语句/独立主格等），提升场景应用能力|从基础场景到拔高场景，实现从输入到输出的思维转化|

读后续写技能提升篇（一） 2027高三二轮专项备考 一、积累教材续写语料 —— 有效强化教考衔接 词汇积累： 动作描写：inspire, flash, laughter, challenge, chat, drag, get ahead, seek, apply, deal with 人物描写：eager, dynamic, confidence→confident, competence→competent, responsible, expectation 佳句积累： 1.It always makes me excited to work hard and achieve a team goal together.（情感描写） 2.He had met wonderful teachers from small villages during his early school years and he was inspired by them to go and teach where he was needed the most.（动作、情感描写） 3.Bringing with him lots of books, clothes, and two pairs of trainers, Zhang Tian travelled to the village with an eager heart.（动作、情感描写） 二、拓展续写话题素材 —— 精准构建表达基石 情感描写：激动和兴奋 经典词汇 1.keen adj. 渴望的，热衷的→keenly adv. 渴望地，热衷地 2.eager adj. 热切的；渴望的，急切的→eagerly adv. 渴望地，急切地 3.thrilled adj. 非常兴奋的，激动的→thrilling adj. 令人激动的，令人兴奋的 4.passionate adj. 充满激情的，热情的→passionately adv. 热情地，激情地→passion n. 激情，热情 5.amaze v. 使吃惊，惊讶→amazed adj. 大为惊奇的，惊讶的→amazing adj. 令人惊异的，令人惊讶的→amazingly adv. 惊人地，了不起地→amazement n. 惊讶，吃惊 6.excited adj. 兴奋的，激动的→exciting adj. 令人兴奋的，激动人心的→excitedly adv. 兴奋地，激动地→excitement n. 兴奋，激动 靓点语块 1.with excitement 兴奋地 2.jump for joy 高兴地跳起来 3.jump up and down 上蹦下跳 4.to one’s thrill 令某人激动的是 5.to one’s excitement 令某人兴奋的是 出彩佳句 1.After hearing the good news, I couldn’t wait to tell my friends. 听到这个好消息后，我迫不及待地想告诉朋友们。 2.The crowd was caught up in the excitement, cheering and clapping loudly. 观众被兴奋的气氛带动，欢呼声和掌声此起彼伏。 3.An excitement took hold of the children, who ran to the front to get a better view.（无灵主语句） 兴奋情绪感染了孩子们，他们为了看得更清楚跑到前面去。 4.She was too excited to speak, her face glowing with happiness.（独立主格） 她兴奋得说不出话来，脸上洋溢着幸福的光辉。 5.Her eyes glowed with excitement when she saw the surprise party. 当她看到惊喜派对时，她的眼睛闪闪发光，满是兴奋。 6.We were all excited about this special class. I decided to paint a lake with swans gliding gracefully on the water. 我们都对这堂特别的课感到兴奋。我决定画一个湖面，湖面上天鹅优雅地在水面滑行。 7.On the journey to the lake, a wave of excitement/thrill spread through my body.（无灵主语句） 在去湖边的路上，一股兴奋 / 激动的情绪在我的身体里蔓延开来。 8.Hearing the exciting news, she shed tears of excitement. 听到这个激动人心的消息，她流下了激动的眼泪。 3、 重拳锤炼续写场景 —— 积累内化应用提升 （一） 场景导入：周末，一家人去露营…… On the journey to the lake, 1. _______________（兴奋情绪感染了妈妈；无灵主语句）. She insisted that we go camping in the next village, 2. _______________（她的眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒；独立主格；介词短语）. When we arrived at the camping place, Mom couldn’t wait to rush out, 3. _______________（兴奋地催促我们搭帐篷；表示兴奋的副词作状语）. After a while, Mom walked towards the lake, and 4. _______________（然后传来一阵兴奋的尖叫声；倒装句）. Enjoying the beautiful view, 5. _______________（妈妈兴奋得难以自抑；名词作宾语）. Certainly, as it was the first time that we had helped Father cook food outdoors, 6. _______________（我和哥哥也感到很兴奋；形容词作表语）.Breathing in the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, 7. _______________（我们上蹦下跳；动词短语）. (二) 背景导入：周末我们全家一起去郊外登山…… On the way to the mountain, 1. _______________（喜悦激动席卷了全家人；无灵主语句）. My little sister kept chattering all the way, 2. _______________（她的脸蛋闪烁着期待的光彩；独立主格）. When we caught sight of the winding stone steps, my sister ran forward instantly, 3. _______________（激动地拉着我往山顶冲；情绪副词作状语）. After climbing halfway, we stopped to rest, and 4. _______________（山谷里传来一阵欢快的欢呼声；倒装句）. Gazing at the endless green hills, 5. _______________（妹妹难掩心中的兴奋；名词作宾语）. Undoubtedly, since it was the first time we’d hiked as a whole family, 6. _______________（爸爸妈妈也十分激动；形容词作表语）.Feeling the soft wind and seeing wild flowers everywhere, 7. _______________（我们开心地又蹦又跳；动词短语）. （三）拔高提升 背景导入：深夜登山观日出 Last weekend, my family and I made a bold plan to climb the mountain overnight to watch the sunrise. On the winding mountain trail in the dead of night, 1. ____________________（难以抑制的狂喜充盈了我的胸腔；高级无灵主语，抽象名词作主语）. My younger brother clutched my arm tightly the whole time, 2. ____________________（一双亮晶晶的眼眸盛满对日出的热切憧憬；带介词修饰的独立主格，多层修饰）. When faint golden streaks peeked over the distant ridge, he dashed ahead at full speed, 3. ____________________（急切地呼喊着我们加快脚步奔赴观景台；多层副词叠加作伴随状语）.Minutes later, we reached the summit overlook, and 4. ____________________（天际间骤然迸发一阵震彻山林的欢呼；完全倒装 + 后置定语）.Staring at the spectacular glow spreading across the horizon, 5. ____________________（弟弟再也无法压抑心底翻涌的激动；抽象名词作宾语 + 后置定语）. Without doubt, because none of us had witnessed mountain sunrise together before, 6. ____________________（父母同样被这壮阔的景象震撼得热血沸腾；程度副词 + 高级情感形容词作表语）.Bathed in the warm dawn breeze and surrounded by boundless rosy clouds, 7. ____________________（我们放声欢呼，欣喜地来回雀跃；并列动词短语，高级情绪搭配）. 参考答案： （一） 1.A wave of excitement swept over Mom 2.her eyes glowing with sparks of excitement 3.eagerly urging us to put up the tent 4.then came a scream of excitement 5.Mom could hardly contain her excitement 6.my brother and I were also extremely excited 7.we jumped up and down for joy （二） 1.A wave of thrill swept over the whole family 2.her face glowing with rays of eager expectation 3.excitedly dragging me toward the mountain top 4.then came a cheer of delight from the valley 5.my little sister could barely hide her excitement 6.my parents were also absolutely thrilled 7.we jumped up and down with great joy (三) 1.Uncontrollable thrill welled up inside my chest 2.his bright eyes brimming with eager expectation for the sunrise 3.eagerly shouting for us to quicken our pace toward the viewing platform 4.then burst a cheer of excitement echoing through the mountains 5.my brother could no longer hold back the surging excitement inside him 6.my parents were equally thrilled to the core by the magnificent scene 7.we let out loud cheers and jumped up and down with wild delight 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $