专题02 期末考写作考前速成必刷｜单词+句型+范文全套（Units4-6）2025-2026学年（沪教版五四制）八年级下册英语

期末考写作专项・考前速成必刷（新教材沪教版五四制） 八年级下册(Units 4-6) 单词 + 句型 + 范文一站式 班级 姓名 学号 目录 素材积累 一、重点单词（必背） 1 二、重点短语（必背） 2 三、高分句型 万能通用句 2 四、衔接句 3 五、作文结构套句 3 素材小练 2.1 单词拼写 4 2.2 短语英汉互译 4 2.3 句型改写 5 2.4 翻译句子 5 写作实操 3.1 作文 1：Changes Around Us（生活变化短文） 5 3.2 作文 2：自然灾害经历（回信） 6 3.3 作文 3：How to Keep Friendship Long（友谊长存征文） 7 3.4 作文 4：难忘友谊经历（书信） 8 素材积累 一、重点单词（必背） 考前特训 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 8 / 8乐思英语 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【生活变化与发展】 abroad adv. 在国外；到国外 comfortable adj. 舒适的 convenient adj. 方便的 environment n. 环境 improve v. 改善；提升 modern adj. 现代的 transport n. 交通 【自然灾害与应急】 terrible adj. 可怕的；糟糕的 heavy adj. 猛烈的；沉重的 rise v. 上升；上涨 rescue v. 救援；营救 survive v. 幸存；存活 battery n. 电池 natural adj. 自然的 【友谊相处与维系】 communication n. 交流；沟通 honesty n. 诚实 share v. 分享 stress n. 压力 trust v. 信任 patient adj. 耐心的 meaningful adj. 有意义的 【情感与成长】 cheerful adj. 开朗的；令人愉快的 caring adj. 体贴的 overwhelmed adj. 不知所措的 support v. 支持 encourage v. 鼓励 forgive v. 原谅 unforgettable adj. 难忘的 二、重点短语（必背） 考前特训 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 12 / 12乐思英语 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【生活变化与发展】 take place 发生 travel abroad 出国旅行 high-speed railway 高铁 group work 小组合作 improve teamwork 提升团队协作 living environment 生活环境 【自然灾害与应急】 natural disaster 自然灾害 rain heavily 下大雨 stay inside 待在室内 in danger 处于危险中 help each other 互相帮助 take place 发生 【友谊相处与维系】 listen carefully 认真倾听 express thoughts 表达想法 be honest to sb. 对某人诚实 lend a hand 伸出援手 share feelings 分享心情 keep friendship 维系友谊 【情感与成长】 a friend in need 患难之交 be there for sb. 陪伴某人 give support 给予支持 over the moon 欣喜若狂 be mean to sb. 对某人刻薄 unforgettable experience 难忘的经历 三、高分句型 万能通用句 【生活变化与发展】 1. Great changes have taken place in our daily life in recent years. 近年来，我们的日常生活发生了巨大变化。 2. Modern technology makes our life more convenient and colorful. 现代科技让我们的生活更加便捷多彩。 3. Better environment and traffic bring us great comfort and happiness. 更好的环境和交通为我们带来舒适与幸福。 4. We are lucky to live such a wonderful and modern life. 我们很幸运能拥有如此美好的现代生活。 【自然灾害与应急】 1. I have ever experienced a terrible natural disaster in my life. 我曾经经历过一次可怕的自然灾害。 2. The heavy rain and strong wind brought much trouble to people. 狂风暴雨给人们带来了很多麻烦。 3. We stayed calm and tried our best to protect ourselves at that time. 当时我们保持冷静，尽力保护自己。 4. The experience taught me the importance of teamwork and mutual help. 这次经历让我懂得了互助与团结的重要性。 【友谊相处与维系】 1. Friendship is one of the most precious treasures in our life. 友谊是人生最宝贵的财富之一。 2. Good communication is the key to long-lasting friendship. 良好的沟通是友谊长存的关键。 3. True friendship lies in mutual help and sincere sharing. 真正的友谊在于互帮互助、真诚分享。 4. We should treat our friends with honesty and kindness all the time. 我们要始终真诚友善地对待朋友。 四、衔接句 1. As time goes by, our life has changed a lot in many ways. 随着时间推移，我们的生活在很多方面发生了巨变。 2. I’d like to share my experience of facing a natural disaster with you. 我想和你分享我应对自然灾害的经历。 3. It is important for us to know how to keep our friendship last long. 学会维系长久友谊对我们至关重要。 4. I still remember an unforgettable experience between my best friend and me. 我依然记得我和挚友之间的一段难忘经历。 五、作文结构套句 【开头】 1. Great changes have taken place around us in the past few years. 近几年我们身边发生了巨大变化。 2. I’m glad to receive your letter and I’d like to share my special experience with you. 很高兴收到你的信，我想和你分享我的特殊经历。 3. Friendship is like a bright star that lights up our life. 友谊如繁星，点亮我们的生活。 4. I’m writing to tell you an unforgettable story between my friend and me. 我写信想告诉你我和朋友之间的难忘故事。 【中间】 1. Firstly, ... Besides, ... What’s more, ... 首先……此外……而且…… 2. When the disaster happened, I ... and tried to ... 灾害发生时，我……并尽力…… 3. To keep friendship long, we need to ... 想要友谊长存，我们需要…… 4. At that moment, my friend ... which made me ... 那一刻，我的朋友……让我…… 【结尾】 1. All these changes make our life better and better. 这些变化让我们的生活越来越好。 2. This special experience teaches me a valuable lesson. 这段特殊的经历教会了我宝贵的道理。 3. If we try our best, we will surely have long-lasting friendship. 用心经营，定能拥有长久的友谊。 4. I will cherish our friendship forever. 我会永远珍惜我们的友谊。 素材小练 2.1 单词拼写 2.1 单词拼写 1. Now people can travel ________ (在国外) easily. 2. The new traffic makes our trip more ________ (舒适的). 3. The heavy rain ________ (上涨) the river water quickly. 4. We need honest ________ (沟通) with our friends. 5. True friends can ________ (分享) happiness and sadness. 6. His help gave me ________ (勇气) to keep going. 7. It is an ________ (难忘的) experience in my life. 2.2 短语英汉互译 1. 发生 ______________ 2. 出国旅行 ______________ 3. 自然灾害 ______________ 4. 互相帮助 ______________ 5. 伸出援手 ______________ 6. a friend in need ______________ 7. over the moon ______________ 8. improve teamwork ______________ 9. living environment ______________ 10. stay inside ______________ 2.3 句型改写 1. Great changes have taken place in our life.（改为一般疑问句） ______________ great changes taken place in our life? 2. I experienced a terrible flood last year.（改为被动句式同义改写） A terrible flood ______________ ______________ by me last year. 3. Sharing feelings can make friends closer.（改为否定句） Sharing feelings ______________ make friends closer. 4. We should be honest to our friends.（划线提问） ______________ should we ______________ to our friends? 5. Friendship is very important to us.（改为感叹句） ______________ ______________ friendship is to us! 2.4 翻译句子 1. 近年来，我们的生活和环境发生了巨大变化。 _____________________________________________ 2. 在自然灾害中，保持冷静和互相帮助非常重要。 _____________________________________________ 3. 真诚沟通与懂得分享是维系友谊的关键。 _____________________________________________ 4. 困境中陪伴我们的朋友才是真正的朋友。 _____________________________________________ 5. 这段难忘的经历让我更加珍惜友谊。 _____________________________________________ 写作实操 1．随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes Around us”。请你根据下表中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。 注意： 1. 表达中应包含所给要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 2. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 Changes Around Us In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom写信询问你关于自然灾害的经历。请你给他写一封回信，分享你经历过的一次台风或洪水。信的内容需包括： - 灾害发生的时间、地点 - 灾害发生时的情景 - 你是如何应对的 - 你的感受或收获 要求： - 不少于80词 - 书信格式正确 - 可以结合所给关键词 关键词： typhoon, flood, rain, wind, lock, batteries, stay inside, rescue, survive, terrible, force Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 3．在我们的生活中，友谊如同璀璨星辰，照亮我们前行的道路。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在以“How to Keep Friendship Long”为题开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍应如何保持真正的友谊。 How to Keep Friendship Long 1. communication: listen carefully, freely express thoughts, never lie, ... 2. Help: study, life, trouble, ... 3. Share:feelings, thoughts, stress (压力), ... 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于80词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） How to Keep Friendship Long In our lives, friendship is like a bright star. It lights up our way forward. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．友谊是人生中宝贵的财富。请给你的好朋友写一封邮件或一封信，回忆你们之间的一段难忘的经历，并谈谈你对友谊的理解。 要求： 1. 不少于80词。 2. 结构完整，语句通顺。 3. 可以结合你学过的词汇（如：cheerful, caring, whenever, be mean to, over the moon等）。 Dear ________, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, ________ $ 期末考写作专项・考前速成必刷（新教材沪教版五四制） 八年级下册(Units 4-6) 单词 + 句型 + 范文一站式 班级 姓名 学号 目录 素材积累 一、重点单词（必背） 1 二、重点短语（必背） 2 三、高分句型 万能通用句 2 四、衔接句 3 五、作文结构套句 3 素材小练 2.1 单词拼写 4 2.2 短语英汉互译 4 2.3 句型改写 5 2.4 翻译句子 5 写作实操 3.1 作文 1：Changes Around Us（生活变化短文） 6 3.2 作文 2：自然灾害经历（回信） 8 3.3 作文 3：How to Keep Friendship Long（友谊长存征文） 10 3.4 作文 4：难忘友谊经历（书信） 12 素材积累 一、重点单词（必背） 考前特训 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 8 / 8乐思英语 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【生活变化与发展】 abroad adv. 在国外；到国外 comfortable adj. 舒适的 convenient adj. 方便的 environment n. 环境 improve v. 改善；提升 modern adj. 现代的 transport n. 交通 【自然灾害与应急】 terrible adj. 可怕的；糟糕的 heavy adj. 猛烈的；沉重的 rise v. 上升；上涨 rescue v. 救援；营救 survive v. 幸存；存活 battery n. 电池 natural adj. 自然的 【友谊相处与维系】 communication n. 交流；沟通 honesty n. 诚实 share v. 分享 stress n. 压力 trust v. 信任 patient adj. 耐心的 meaningful adj. 有意义的 【情感与成长】 cheerful adj. 开朗的；令人愉快的 caring adj. 体贴的 overwhelmed adj. 不知所措的 support v. 支持 encourage v. 鼓励 forgive v. 原谅 unforgettable adj. 难忘的 二、重点短语（必背） 考前特训 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 12 / 12乐思英语 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【生活变化与发展】 take place 发生 travel abroad 出国旅行 high-speed railway 高铁 group work 小组合作 improve teamwork 提升团队协作 living environment 生活环境 【自然灾害与应急】 natural disaster 自然灾害 rain heavily 下大雨 stay inside 待在室内 in danger 处于危险中 help each other 互相帮助 take place 发生 【友谊相处与维系】 listen carefully 认真倾听 express thoughts 表达想法 be honest to sb. 对某人诚实 lend a hand 伸出援手 share feelings 分享心情 keep friendship 维系友谊 【情感与成长】 a friend in need 患难之交 be there for sb. 陪伴某人 give support 给予支持 over the moon 欣喜若狂 be mean to sb. 对某人刻薄 unforgettable experience 难忘的经历 三、高分句型 万能通用句 【生活变化与发展】 1. Great changes have taken place in our daily life in recent years. 近年来，我们的日常生活发生了巨大变化。 2. Modern technology makes our life more convenient and colorful. 现代科技让我们的生活更加便捷多彩。 3. Better environment and traffic bring us great comfort and happiness. 更好的环境和交通为我们带来舒适与幸福。 4. We are lucky to live such a wonderful and modern life. 我们很幸运能拥有如此美好的现代生活。 【自然灾害与应急】 1. I have ever experienced a terrible natural disaster in my life. 我曾经经历过一次可怕的自然灾害。 2. The heavy rain and strong wind brought much trouble to people. 狂风暴雨给人们带来了很多麻烦。 3. We stayed calm and tried our best to protect ourselves at that time. 当时我们保持冷静，尽力保护自己。 4. The experience taught me the importance of teamwork and mutual help. 这次经历让我懂得了互助与团结的重要性。 【友谊相处与维系】 1. Friendship is one of the most precious treasures in our life. 友谊是人生最宝贵的财富之一。 2. Good communication is the key to long-lasting friendship. 良好的沟通是友谊长存的关键。 3. True friendship lies in mutual help and sincere sharing. 真正的友谊在于互帮互助、真诚分享。 4. We should treat our friends with honesty and kindness all the time. 我们要始终真诚友善地对待朋友。 四、衔接句 1. As time goes by, our life has changed a lot in many ways. 随着时间推移，我们的生活在很多方面发生了巨变。 2. I’d like to share my experience of facing a natural disaster with you. 我想和你分享我应对自然灾害的经历。 3. It is important for us to know how to keep our friendship last long. 学会维系长久友谊对我们至关重要。 4. I still remember an unforgettable experience between my best friend and me. 我依然记得我和挚友之间的一段难忘经历。 五、作文结构套句 【开头】 1. Great changes have taken place around us in the past few years. 近几年我们身边发生了巨大变化。 2. I’m glad to receive your letter and I’d like to share my special experience with you. 很高兴收到你的信，我想和你分享我的特殊经历。 3. Friendship is like a bright star that lights up our life. 友谊如繁星，点亮我们的生活。 4. I’m writing to tell you an unforgettable story between my friend and me. 我写信想告诉你我和朋友之间的难忘故事。 【中间】 1. Firstly, ... Besides, ... What’s more, ... 首先……此外……而且…… 2. When the disaster happened, I ... and tried to ... 灾害发生时，我……并尽力…… 3. To keep friendship long, we need to ... 想要友谊长存，我们需要…… 4. At that moment, my friend ... which made me ... 那一刻，我的朋友……让我…… 【结尾】 1. All these changes make our life better and better. 这些变化让我们的生活越来越好。 2. This special experience teaches me a valuable lesson. 这段特殊的经历教会了我宝贵的道理。 3. If we try our best, we will surely have long-lasting friendship. 用心经营，定能拥有长久的友谊。 4. I will cherish our friendship forever. 我会永远珍惜我们的友谊。 素材小练 2.1 单词拼写 2.1 单词拼写 1. Now people can travel ________ (在国外) easily. 2. The new traffic makes our trip more ________ (舒适的). 3. The heavy rain ________ (上涨) the river water quickly. 4. We need honest ________ (沟通) with our friends. 5. True friends can ________ (分享) happiness and sadness. 6. His help gave me ________ (勇气) to keep going. 7. It is an ________ (难忘的) experience in my life. 2.2 短语英汉互译 1. 发生 ______________ 2. 出国旅行 ______________ 3. 自然灾害 ______________ 4. 互相帮助 ______________ 5. 伸出援手 ______________ 6. a friend in need ______________ 7. over the moon ______________ 8. improve teamwork ______________ 9. living environment ______________ 10. stay inside ______________ 2.3 句型改写 1. Great changes have taken place in our life.（改为一般疑问句） ______________ great changes taken place in our life? 2. I experienced a terrible flood last year.（改为被动句式同义改写） A terrible flood ______________ ______________ by me last year. 3. Sharing feelings can make friends closer.（改为否定句） Sharing feelings ______________ make friends closer. 4. We should be honest to our friends.（划线提问） ______________ should we ______________ to our friends? 5. Friendship is very important to us.（改为感叹句） ______________ ______________ friendship is to us! 2.4 翻译句子 1. 近年来，我们的生活和环境发生了巨大变化。 _____________________________________________ 2. 在自然灾害中，保持冷静和互相帮助非常重要。 _____________________________________________ 3. 真诚沟通与懂得分享是维系友谊的关键。 _____________________________________________ 4. 困境中陪伴我们的朋友才是真正的朋友。 _____________________________________________ 5. 这段难忘的经历让我更加珍惜友谊。 _____________________________________________ 2.1 单词拼写 1. abroad　2. comfortable　3. rose　4. communication　5. share　6. courage　7. unforgettable 2.2 短语英汉互译 1. take place　2. travel abroad　3. natural disaster　4. help each other　5. lend a hand 6. 患难见真情　7. 欣喜若狂　8. 提升团队协作　9. 生活环境　10. 待在室内 2.3 句型改写 1. Have 2. was experienced 3. can’t 4. What; do 5. How important 2.4 翻译句子 1. In recent years, great changes have taken place in our life and environment. 2. It is very important to stay calm and help each other during natural disasters. 3. Sincere communication and sharing are the keys to keeping friendship long. 4. True friends are those who accompany us in difficult times. 5. This unforgettable experience makes me cherish friendship more. 写作实操 1．随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes Around us”。请你根据下表中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。 注意： 1. 表达中应包含所给要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 2. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 Changes Around Us In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （1）审题目 主题：围绕旅行、交通、学习、环境四个方面介绍身边的变化，阐述变化带来的便利与美好 文体：说明文 人称：第一、三人称 时态：现在完成时 + 一般现在时 要求：词数80左右，语句连贯，无真实信息 （2）搭框架 开头：In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. 中间：People’s lives have become much better. We can travel abroad or visit places online. High-speed railways make trips faster. At school, group work improves our study. The environment is becoming greener. 结尾：These small changes bring us great convenience and make our life more colorful. （3）参考范文 Changes Around Us In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. People’s lives have become much better than before. We can travel abroad easily or even visit famous places online at home. High-speed railways and cars also make our trips faster and more comfortable. At school, we do more reading and group work, which helps us learn better and improve our teamwork. What’s more, the environment is getting greener with more trees and parks around us. We can clearly feel how these small changes make our daily life more colourful. These changes bring us great convenience and happiness. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：本文是一篇说明文，时态以现在完成时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：Travel/Study/Traffic/Environment四个方面的改变 确定人称：第一 / 第三人称（we/our/people） 注意事项：不得出现真实校名及姓名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引入话题 主体段：从旅行、交通、学习、环境四个方面说明具体变化 结尾段：点明变化带来的好处，呼应主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：变化 旅行：travel abroad or visit places online easily/become more convenient/go abroad easily or even visit places online等 交通：make our trips faster and more comfortable/can drive cars or take high-speed railways等 学习：helps us learn better/improve our teamwork skills等 环境：getting greener with more trees and parks/make our living environment nicer/is getting better等 要点二：变化带来的好处 总结：bring us great convenience and happiness 2．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom写信询问你关于自然灾害的经历。请你给他写一封回信，分享你经历过的一次台风或洪水。信的内容需包括： - 灾害发生的时间、地点 - 灾害发生时的情景 - 你是如何应对的 - 你的感受或收获 要求： - 不少于80词 - 书信格式正确 - 可以结合所给关键词 关键词： typhoon, flood, rain, wind, lock, batteries, stay inside, rescue, survive, terrible, force Dear Tom, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （1）审题目 主题：回信介绍一次台风/洪水经历，包含时间地点、事发情景、应对方式、个人感悟 文体：书信（回信） 人称：第一人称 时态：一般过去时 要求：格式正确，不少于80词，可结合关键词 （2）搭框架 开头：I am glad to hear from you. I’d like to share my experience of a natural disaster with you. 中间：I experienced a flood when I was in the countryside. It rained heavily for days. The water rose fast. We moved upstairs and took daily supplies. Rescue workers saved us the next day. 结尾：It was a terrible experience, but I learned the importance of helping each other. （3）参考范文 Dear Tom, I am glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked whether I had ever experienced a natural disaster. Yes, I once went through a serious flood when I was visiting my grandparents in the countryside. It rained heavily for three days without stopping. The river near their house rose rapidly and soon the low-lying areas were covered with water. My grandfather urged us to move to the second floor. We took some food, water, and a flashlight with us. The rescue workers came by boat the next day and took us to a safe place. Although it was a terrible experience, I learned how important it is to help each other during difficult times. What about you? Have you ever experienced something like this? Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 明确文体：书信体，一般过去时 明确要点：回应Tom的询问，说明曾经历自然灾害及具体情况、、表达从经历中获得的感悟及询问Tom是否有类似经历 确定人称：第一人称(I) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：回应Tom的询问，说明曾经历自然灾害及具体情况 主体段：描述自然灾害发生过程及说明后续救援情况 结尾段：表达从经历中获得的感悟及询问Tom是否有类似经历 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：回应Tom的询问，说明曾经历自然灾害及具体情况：experienced a natural disaster/went through/serious flood/be flooded with/floodwater‌/flooded‌等 要点二：描述自然灾害发生过程及说明后续救援情况： 描述自然灾害发生过程：rained heavily/rose rapidly/were covered with/took some food/flashlight/heavy rain‌/continuous rain/soar rapidly等 说明后续救援情况：rescue/came by/took us to a safe place/dispatch a rescue team/take a boat/supplies/emergency/by ship等 要点三：表达从经历中获得的感悟及询问Tom是否有类似经历：terrible experience/learned/help each other/diffcult time/ever experiencedtribulation‌/predicament‌/lend a hand to each other‌等 3．在我们的生活中，友谊如同璀璨星辰，照亮我们前行的道路。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在以“How to Keep Friendship Long”为题开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍应如何保持真正的友谊。 How to Keep Friendship Long 1. communication: listen carefully, freely express thoughts, never lie, ... 2. Help: study, life, trouble, ... 3. Share:feelings, thoughts, stress (压力), ... 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于80词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） How to Keep Friendship Long In our lives, friendship is like a bright star. It lights up our way forward. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （1）审题目 主题：从沟通、互助、分享三个方面阐述维系长久友谊的方法，升华主题 文体：说明文（征文） 人称：第一、二人称 时态：一般现在时 要求：语句通顺，逻辑连贯，无真实信息 （2）搭框架 开头：Friendship is like a bright star. It lights up our way forward. There are some ways to keep friendship long. 中间：First, we should communicate sincerely, listen carefully and never lie. Second, we must help friends when they are in trouble. Third, share feelings and stress to get closer. 结尾：If we stick to these rules, our friendship will last forever. （3）参考范文 How to Keep Friendship Long In our lives, friendship is like a bright star. It lights up our way forward. There are several useful ways to keep friendship long. First, good communication matters most. When talking with friends, we should listen to them carefully and express our true thoughts freely. Besides, we must never lie to each other, because honesty is the basis of friendship. Second, we should lend a hand to friends whenever they are in trouble. If they fall behind in study or meet difficulties in daily life, we can offer help at once. What’s more, it’s important to share everything together. We can share our happy feelings, deep thoughts as well as daily stress with our friends. Sharing makes us closer. If we do these things well, our friendship will last forever. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 明确文体：说明文（材料作文），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：点明友谊的意义，分点阐述维系长久友谊的方法，总结做法带来的结果 确定人称：第一、二人称 注意事项：论点清晰，条理分明，句式规范，逻辑连贯 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：运用比喻点明友谊的价值，引出本文主题——维系长久友谊的方法 主体段：依次阐述沟通、真诚、互帮互助、彼此分享这几个相处原则，并展开说明 结尾段：总结全文，点明践行以上做法就能让友谊长存 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：沟通的重要性和沟通原则 重要性：good communication matters most/listen carefully/express true thoughts/communication is the key/be a good listener/speak out what we really think/communicate with each other sincerely/understand one another/exchange ideas openly 原则：never lie to each other/honesty is the basis of friendship/be truthful to friends/honesty builds up friendship/treat others with sincerity/trust each other/keep faithful to friends 要点二：主动互帮互助 lend a hand/be in trouble/offer help right away/give support to friends/face problems/help each other in need/stand by friends when they have difficulties/give assistance to others/care about friends 要点三：学会彼此分享 share feelings, thoughts and stress/make us closer/share joy and worries/shorten the distance between each other/exchange joys and troubles/open up to one another/deepen the bond between friends 要点四：总结收尾 do these things well/friendship will last forever/stick to these rules/friendship will stay for a long time/follow these suggestions/keep the friendship all the time/enjoy lasting friendship 4．友谊是人生中宝贵的财富。请给你的好朋友写一封邮件或一封信，回忆你们之间的一段难忘的经历，并谈谈你对友谊的理解。 要求： 1. 不少于80词。 2. 结构完整，语句通顺。 3. 可以结合你学过的词汇（如：cheerful, caring, whenever, be mean to, over the moon等）。 Dear ________, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, ________ （1）审题目 主题：书信回忆一段难忘的友谊经历，结合所学词汇，阐述对友谊的理解 文体：书信 人称：第一、二人称 时态：一般过去时+一般现在时 要求：结构完整，语句通顺，不少于80词 （2）搭框架 开头：I’m writing to share an unforgettable experience between us. 中间：I once failed an exam and felt upset. You encouraged me and helped me study every day. With your help, I made progress and felt over the moon. 结尾：I truly understand friendship means supporting each other. I will cherish our friendship forever. （3）参考范文 Dear Lucy, I’m writing to share an unforgettable experience with you. I still remember the day I failed my math exam. I felt sad and wanted to give up. But you came and said, “I will help you.” You spent two hours every day teaching me math. Whenever I had questions, you were patient. With your help, I passed the next exam and was over the moon. True friendship means being there for each other. A friend in need is a friend indeed. I’m lucky to have you. Yours sincerely, Tom 【详解】写作步骤 第一步：审题立意   确定文体：电子邮件/书信 明确要点：一段难忘的经历+对友谊的理解   确定人称：第一人称（I/my）和第二人称（you/your）   注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称   第二步：构思布局   三段式结构：   开头段：写信目的，引出回忆   主体段：详细描述一段难忘的经历（起因、经过、结果）   结尾段：总结对友谊的理解，升华主题   第三步：要点展开   要点一：难忘的经历   事件选择：failed an exam/lost a game/felt lonely at a new school等 时间描述：one day/last term/on a rainy afternoon等   情感变化：sad/hopeful/happy/over the moon等   朋友行为：encouraged me/helped me with/stayed with me等   要点二：对友谊的理解   核心观点：A friend in need is a friend indeed.等 关键词汇：whenever/caring/cheerful/be there for each other等   总结升华：True friendship means supporting each other through hard times.等 $