Unit 6 Rain or Shine 作文写作 讲义2025-2026学年人教版英语七年级下册

该初中英语单元复习讲义围绕“天气”话题，通过话题分析明确写作要求，结合分类词汇表（活动类、常用表达、天气句型）和写作框架图构建知识体系，用表格呈现写作要素（天气、活动、感受），以分段示例展示“开头-主体-结尾”结构，清晰呈现现在进行时运用、天气描述等重难点的内在联系。 讲义亮点在于“情境化写作任务”设计，如书信（加拿大度假）和记叙文（家庭雨天活动），引导学生运用现在进行时描述活动、用天气句型表达情境，培养语言能力和逻辑思维品质。提供分层段落示例（基础句到拓展句），基础学生可掌握基本框架，优秀学生能丰富细节，答案含中英文对照支持自主复习，助力教师实施精准分层教学。

Unit 6 Rain or Shine. (话题写作指导） 【话题分析】 本单元的话题为“天气”，要求能围绕这一话题写一篇有关天气情况、人们正在进行的活动和人们感受的短文。在写作过程中，首先要能准确使用描述天气的形容词及句型，并要能正确使用现在进行时描述人们正在进行的活动。 参考词汇 1. 活动类: play basketball / football 打篮球/踢足球 play the piano/guitar/violin 弹钢琴/吉他/小提琴 play Chinese Kung fu 练中国功夫 watch TV 看电视 do homework 做家庭作业 walk the dog 遛狗 2. 常用表达：sb be doing... 某人正在做某事 What am/is/are sb doing? 某人正在做什么？ be busy doing sth. 忙于做... play with sb./sth. 与某人、某物玩 have a good time / have fun/ enjoy oneself 玩得开心/愉快 Play hard，study hard，laugh hard and live well. 努力玩耍，努力学习，放声大笑，好好生活。 There’ s no place like home. 没有比家更好的地方。 3. 描述天气的句型：How ‘s the weather in ...?/What’s the weather like in...? ...天气怎么样？ The weather is + 描述天气的adj. in +地点。 It's +描述天气的词 today. 【写作实例】 1．假如你是魏华，你正在加拿大的姑妈家度假。请根据下表信息，给你上海的同学李涛写一封信，不少于60词。 Where Weather Activities Feelings Canada cold; snowing visit my aunt; ski; make a snowman relaxed; have a good time Dear Li Tao, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wei Hua 【思路点拨】 审题：主题：介绍你在加拿大的天气和活动情况 文章类型：应用文——书信 时态：一般现在时，现在进行时 人称：第一人称 2.写作框架： 第一段：向同学问好，说明自己所在的地方，并引入话题。 第二段：主体——描述天气，并介绍活动。 第三段：表达自己的感受、心情，询问同学所在地的天气及同学的活动情况，并请他尽快回信。 第一段：向同学问好，说明自己所在的地方，并引入话题。 1. How are you? I'm visiting my aunt in Canada now. 你好吗？我现在正在加拿大看望我的姑姑。 2. How is everything? I'm in Canada right now. 亲爱的李涛，一切都好吗？我现在在加拿大。 3. How is it going with you? I'm visiting my aunt in Canada. It's so different from Shanghai here!你最近过得怎么样？我正在加拿大看望姑姑，这里和上海太不一样了！ 4. Long time no see! I'm staying with my aunt in Canada for my winter holiday 好久不见！我现在正和姑姑在加拿大过寒假。 第二段：主体——描述天气，并介绍活动。 1. It's cold and snowing here. I'm skiing and making a snowman. 这里很冷，正在下雪。我可以滑雪和堆雪人。 2. The weather is cold in Canada and it's snowing outside. I'm skiing with my cousin and making a snowman.加拿大的天气很冷,外面正在下雪。我正和表哥/表妹一起滑雪、堆雪人。 3. It's winter here now. The weather is cold and it's snowing heavily. It’s a good time to play in the snow. So I often go skiing with my cousin and we like making snowmen. 这里现在是冬天，天气很冷，还在下大雪。这正是玩雪的好时机。我经常和表哥/表妹一起滑雪，我们还喜欢堆雪人。 4. It's winter here now. The weather is cold and it's snowing heavily. It’s a good time to play in the snow. So I often go skiing with my cousin and we like making snowmen in the yard. We have a good time in the snow. We are really relaxed. 这里现在是冬天，天气很冷，还在下大雪。这正是玩雪的好时机。我经常和表哥/表妹一起滑雪，我们还喜欢在院子堆雪人。我们在雪地里玩得很开心，我们很放松。 第三段：表达自己的感受、心情，询问同学所在地的天气及同学的活动情况，并请他尽快回信。 1. I feel relaxed and I'm having a good time. What's the weather like in Shanghai? Please write to me soon! 我感觉很放松，玩得很开心。上海的天气怎么样？请尽快给我写信！ 2. I'm very happy here. How's the weather in Shanghai? Please tell me what you're doing these days! 我在这里很开心。上海的天气如何？请告诉我你这些天都在做什么！ 【答案】 Dear Li Tao, How is it going with you? I’m visiting my aunt in Canada. It's winter here now. The weather is cold and it's snowing heavily. It’s a good time to play in the snow. So I often go skiing with my cousin and we like making snowmen in the yard. We have a good time in the snow. We are really relaxed. Besides, we also take lots of beautiful pictures. I really love it here . What’s the weather like in Shanghai? What are you doing these days? Please write back to me soon. Yours, Wei Hua 亲爱的李涛： 你最近过得怎么样？我正在加拿大看望我的姑姑。 这里现在是冬天，天气很冷，雪下得很大。这是玩雪的好时候。所以我经常和我的堂兄/堂妹一起去滑雪，我们喜欢在院子里堆雪人。我们在雪地里玩得很开心，感觉非常放松。除此之外，我们还拍了很多漂亮的照片。我真的很喜欢这里。 上海的天气怎么样？你这些天在做什么？请尽快给我回信。 你的朋友， 魏华 2．假设今天是周日，现在是下午五点，外面正在下雨。你和你的家人正在做什么呢？请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文来描述你们的活动。 提示： 1.What are your family doing? 2.What do you think of rainy days? 要求： 1.语句通顺，符合逻辑； 2.包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】 审题：主题：介绍你和你的家人正在做的事情情况 文章类型：记叙文 时态：一般现在时，现在进行时 人称：第一人称、第三人称 2.写作框架： 第一段：讲明时间，天气并引入话题。 第二段：主体——介绍每个人的活动。 第三段：表达自己的感受、心情。 第一段：讲明时间，天气并引入话题。 1. It is Sunday today. It is 5:00 p.m. and it is raining outside. 今天是周日，下午五点，外面正在下雨。 2. Today is Sunday and it's 5 o'clock now. The weather is rainy. 今天是周日下午，现在是五点钟，天气在下雨。 3. It is 5 o'clock on a Sunday afternoon. It is raining heavily, so my family are all at home. 周日下午五点，外面下着大雨，所以我的家人都待在家里。 第二段：主体——介绍每个人的活动。 1. My dad is reading a book in the living room. My mom is cleaning the room. My sister is doing her homework. 爸爸在客厅看书，妈妈在打扫房间，妹妹在写作业。 2. My father is reading a book on the sofa. My mother is making dinner in the kitchen. My little brother is playing with his toys. I am listening to music. 爸爸正在沙发上看杂志，妈妈在厨房做饭，弟弟在玩玩具，我在听音乐。 3. My father is reading a book in the living room. He looks very relaxed, because it’s his favorite hobby. My mother is making dinner in the kitchen. She is good at cooking. My sister is doing her homework carefully in the study and my brother is listening to music. He feels very happy. 爸爸在客厅看书，妈妈在厨房做晚饭，她很擅长做饭。我的妹妹正在书房认真地写作业。我的弟弟正在听音乐，他看上去很开心。 第三段：表达自己的感受、心情。 I like rainy days because we can have a good time staying at home together. I think there’ s no place like home. 我喜欢雨天，因为我们可以一起度过愉快的时光。我认为没有比家更好的地方。 【答案】 Today is Sunday and it's 5 o'clock now. The weather is rainy，so my family are all at home. Everyone in my family is doing different things. My father is reading a book in the living room. He looks very relaxed, because it’s his favorite hobby. My mother is making dinner in the kitchen. She is good at cooking. My sister is doing her homework carefully in the study and my brother is listening to music. He feels very happy. As for me, I am drawing pictures. I am good at drawing and it makes me relaxed. I like rainy days because we can have a good time staying at home together. I think there’ s no place like home. 今天是周日，现在是五点钟，天气在下雨。所以我的家人都在家。 家里的每个人都在做不同的事情。我的爸爸在客厅看书，妈妈在厨房做晚饭，她很擅长做饭。我的妹妹正在书房认真地写作业。我的弟弟正在听音乐，他看上去很开心。 我喜欢雨天，因为我们可以一起度过愉快的时光。我认为没有比家更好的地方。 （22-23七年级下·山东烟台·期末）请根据表格中的信息，进行场景描述，字数不少于50，可适当扩展。 时间 周日下午 地点 公园 天气 晴朗，有点热 人物 王华一家 场景 爸爸与哥哥在树下下棋；王华和弟弟在踢球；妈妈在拍照。 心情 快乐 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】 审题：主题：介绍王华和他的家人正在做的事情情况 文章类型：记叙文 时态：现在进行时，一般现在时 人称：第三人称 2.写作框架： 第一段：讲明时间，天气，地点和人物，并引入话题。 第二段：主体——介绍每个人的活动。 第三段：表达感受、心情。 第一段：交代时间、天气、地点，引入话题 1. It’s Sunday afternoon today. The weather is sunny and a little hot. Wang Hua goes to the park with his family. 今天是周日下午。天气晴朗，有点热。 王华和全家人一起去公园。 2. It is Sunday afternoon, and it is sunny but a little hot outside. Wang Hua’s family decide to spend their free time in the park. 周日下午，外面阳光明媚，稍稍有些炎热。王华一家决定去公园度过闲暇时光。 3.  It’s Sunday afternoon today and the sun is shining brightly now. Wang Hua and his family have fun in the park. 今天是周日下午, 正阳光明媚，王华一家人在公园里游玩。 第二段：主体，分别描述每个人正在做的事（现在进行时） ----爸爸&哥哥下棋 1. Wang Hual’s father and his brother are playing chess under the tall tree. 王华的爸爸和哥哥正在下棋在高大的树下。 2. Dad and his big brother sit quietly under the tree and enjoy their chess game. 爸爸和哥哥安静坐在树下，享受下棋的乐趣。 3.Wang Hua’s father and his brother are playing chess under the tall tree. They are all good at playing chess and they look very happy. 王华的爸爸和哥哥正在下棋在高大的树下。他们都擅长于下棋，他们看上去很开心。 ----王华&弟弟踢球 1. Wang Hua and his little brother run on the grass. They are playing football happily. 王华和弟弟在草地上奔跑，开心地踢着足球。 2. Wang Hua and his little brother are playing football happily on the grass. They laugh happily and enjoy the moment . 王华和弟弟开心地踢着足球。他们开心地大笑，享受这个时刻。 ----妈妈拍照 1. Their mother is taking photos for them. 他们的妈妈正在拍照。 Their mother is taking beautiful photos for them. She likes recording every wonderful moment. 他们的妈妈正在拍照。她喜欢记录每一个美好的时刻。 第三段：表达感受、心情 They all have a wonderful time in the park. 他们所有人都在公园里过得十分愉快。 2. Everyone feels relaxed and joyful. 每个人都感到放松又快乐。 3.They all have a wonderful time in the park. Everyone feels relaxed and joyful. 他们所有人都在公园里过得十分愉快。每个人都感到放松又快乐。 4. Everyone all have a wonderful time in the park.They love staying together and enjoy the happy time. 每个人都在公园里过得十分愉快。他们喜欢彼此相伴，享受这份温馨的时光。 【答案】 It’s Sunday afternoon today. The weather is sunny and a little hot. Wang Hua goes to the park with his family. Wang Hua’s father and his elder brother are playing chess under the tall tree. They are all good at playing chess and they look very happy. Wang Hua and his little brother are playing football happily on the grass. They laugh happily and enjoy the moment. Where is their mother?She is taking beautiful photos for them. She likes recording every wonderful moment. Everyone all have a wonderful time in the park. They love staying together and enjoy this sweet family time. 今天是周日下午。天气晴朗，有点热。 王华和全家人一起去公园。 王华的爸爸和哥哥正在下棋在 高大的树下，他们都擅长于下棋，他们看上去很开心。王华和弟弟在草地上奔跑，开心地踢着足球。他们的妈妈正在拍照。她喜欢记录每一个美好的时刻。 每个人都在公园里过得十分愉快。他们喜欢彼此相伴，享受这份温馨的家庭时光。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $