写作句子提升之无灵主语句 讲义-2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦写作句式优化核心考点，围绕无灵主语句的定义、与有灵主语的对比、转换方法（谓语转名词加使令动词、无灵宾语变主语加得失类动词）及分类应用展开，通过考点梳理、方法指导、分层练习（基础转换到续写应用）等环节，帮助学生构建系统的句式提升框架，突破写作表达单一的难点。 资料以“无灵主语+有灵动词”为创新教学切入点，通过对比分析（如“我说不出话”与“Words fail me”）培养学生思维品质，结合情绪、自然现象等名词与特定动词搭配表（如“Nervousness washed over him”）提升语言能力。设置从单句转换到语篇续写的实战训练，确保学生在有限时间内掌握地道表达，为教师提供精准复习策略，有效提升学生写作应考能力。

写作句子提升之无灵主语句 一、什么是“有灵主语”与“无灵主语”？ 有灵主语： 指发出动作的人或有生命的物体。 · 例如：I felt very excited when I heard the news. · 例如：The cat is sleeping on the sofa. · 无灵主语： 指主语是没有生命或感知能力的事物，如抽象名词（idea, thought, feeling）、具体事物（book, rain, year）、时间、地点等。但句子中的谓语动词，通常是描述人有意识或无意识的行为或感受的动词。 · 例如：A wave of excitement swept over me when I heard the news. · 例如：Sleep is overcoming the cat. 试试来比较有灵主语和无灵主语的表达效果： 1. 我说不出话来 I can’t speak. Words fail me. 2.听了他的振奋人心的演讲之后，我备受鼓舞。 I felt encouraged after attending his inspiring speech. Encouragement swept over me after attending his inspiring speech. 3.我想不起他的名字了。 I couldn’t remember his name. His name escaped me. His name slipped my mind. 二、如何学会使用无灵主语 使用无灵主语的关键在于走出主体思维-------看到客观世界 无灵主语+有灵动词=超级表达 转换方法： 一）：谓语转换为无灵主语，两句话成因果关系。 1）找原因句的动词变为名词the thought/idea/sight/glance of +n. 2）名词后加上使令动词make/let/have/keep/offer/give/remind 致使类动词lead to/ contribute to/bring about/account for 例如： 1. 他想到母亲，才有力量继续工作think--thought The thought of his mother made him full of power to continue his work. 2看到这孤寂的景象，我心中满是凄凉。see--sight The sight of the lonely view made me full of isolation. 3. 医生迅速到达，仔细检查了病人，因此病人很快就恢复了。 arrive--arrival examine---examination The prompt arrival of the doctor and his careful examination contributed to the quick recovery of the patient. 二），无灵宾语变主语，有灵主语变宾语 加上得&失类谓语动词 得：sweep over/creep/seize 失：desert/elude/deprive 1.我一时想不起这本书的名字。 The name of this book eluded me. 2.多次失败后，他失去了勇气. His courage deserted him after several times of failure. 3.我的心中充满了愧疚和后悔。 Guilt and regret swept over me . 无灵主语名词分类： 无灵主语 有灵动词 表示情绪的名词 despair/fear/fright/horror/panic/excitement/anxiety/ nervousness/anger seize/ take hold of /sweep over/ choke/ grip/ overwhelm/wash over/ flood over/ flash/ well up 表示行为动作的名词 thought/ idea/ memory/ glance / sight/glimpse/ stare/ gaze/look hit/ strike/remind/fill with/ occur to 自然现象名词 wind/ snow/ night/ rain/ moon /light blanket/envelop/sweep over/ prevent/ hit/ threaten/ strike/ come/ find 身体部位，音容笑貌 face/eye /finger/ heart/ tears/ laughter beam / light up/stream/ blur/ linger/ brighten 时间地点场景类名词 Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary hiking, which excited the nerves of every one of us. The gathering dusk often finds me hastening home in a hurrying crowd. 暮色渐浓时，我常随着匆匆的人群匆匆往家赶。 The past decades have seen the rapid development of China. The small town boasts beautiful natural scenery.小镇以拥有美丽的自然风光而骄傲。 Practice: 1紧张的情绪涌上他的心头。 2. 她兴奋极了。 3. 一想到考试的失败，他就万念俱灰. 4. 我气得说不出话。 5. 看到这个情景我心中充满了恐惧. 6. 我突然想到一个可怕的想法。 7.想到不久就要见到她的儿子，她心中感到十分快乐。 8.落日见证了这座城市的美丽。 9.漆黑的夜晚，一只小狗在林荫大道中间趴着。 10. 清晨他已经出发了。 11. 笑声在房间里萦绕。 12. 泪水从Lily的眼中涌出来。 13. 他尴尬的脸都红了。 参考翻译： 1.Nervousness washed over him. 2.Excitement took hold of her. 3.Despair seized him at the thought of his failure in the exam. 4.Anger choked my words. 5.The sight of the scene filled me with horror. 6.A terrible thought suddenly struck me. 7.The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great happiness. 8.The sunset witnesses/sees the beauty of the city 9.The dark night found a little dog lying in the middle of an avenue. 10.Dawn found him already on the road. 11.Laughter lingered around the room. 12.Tears welled up in Lily’s eyes. 13.His face burned with embarrassment 续写应用参考： This morning, I asked Mom to take me to the pool. But she reminded me I’d watch kids for her as she got a job interview at the radio station. Still, I asked, “Couldn’t Julie watch them instead?” “She can help, Jess, but she’s only ten. I’ll feel better with a fifteen-year-old in charge, honey.” Mom gave me a hug and off she went. So there I was, stuck watching my five-year-old sister Lyssa and three-year-old brother Dougie. I usually don’t mind watching the kids, but the problem was our little rented trailer house(拖车房屋). It’s like living in a barbecue cooker in hot days. Well, as is said, “What is, is.” and I decided to make the best of it. We moved out into the front yard and I filled a paddling pool for the kids. I noticed that the sky looked a little strange — greenish-yellow, with gray clouds rising for miles — but I didn’t think anything of it. As kids jumped in the pool, I settled down to read my magazine. I put on headphones and turned the volume up loud enough to block out their noise. Before long I got lost in a cool story. I was almost at the end when Julie came over to me, dropping water on my article. I took my headphones off, “Hey, what’s wrong with you? ” She pointed upwards. That’s when I saw the sky and about fell off my chair. Not only had the clouds moved toward us, they were swirling(打旋). I hadn’t realized how much the wind had picked up. A huge, gray-black funnel(漏斗)snaked down from the sky to the ground—a real, live tornado! And it headed our way at a high speed! Though I had learned about tornado safety, at that moment, the only thing I could remember was that a tornado develops fast and that trailer houses are the worst place to take shelter. I tried hard to remember other safety tips. Get low. Yeah. If you’re caught outside, find the lowest spot. Scanning around, my eye stopped on a line of bushes. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 There was a ditch(沟渠)there for shelter, a hundred yards off. But in a couple of minutes, the tornado was over. There was a ditch there for sheltering, a hundred yards off. I quickly gathered the kids, yelling, “Run to the ditch! As fast as you can!” A fierce wind howled across the land, sending broken debris flying in all directions. Julie held Dougie’s hand tightly, and I grabbed Lyssa. We ran with all our might. The heavy pressure of the wind weighed hard on our bodies, making every single step a bitter struggle. When we reached the ditch, we huddled closely together. I covered the kids with my body, praying the tornado would soon pass. An ear-splitting noise filled the air, just like thousands of trains roaring nonstop. I could feel the ground trembling beneath our feet. Cold fear crept over my mind, and my heart raced with great worry. I could not help wondering if we would survive this deadly disaster. But in a couple of minutes, the tornado was over.. The wild wind gradually lost its strength, and flying debris finally settled down. I slowly lifted my head and glanced around. A strange sense of unreality hung over the whole world. Trees lay uprooted on the ground, and broken pieces of the trailer scattered everywhere. We climbed out of the ditch. The kids were badly shaken but totally unhurt. A warm wave of relief flooded my heart the moment I realized we were safe. As we walked back toward the damaged trailer, the cruel scene truly told me how lucky we were to stay alive. Most importantly, a strong sense of pride rose inside me. All of us had kept calm and faced this terrifying disaster with great bravery. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $