内容正文:
U8写作学案
Project: Be a Columnist for Teen Life Magazine
项目任务:成为《青少年生活》杂志的专栏小作家
班级 Class: __________ 姓名 Name: __________ 评价 Star: ☆☆☆☆☆
🌟 任务背景 (Project Background)
《Teen Life Magazine》(青少年生活杂志)正在向全国中学生征集关于“课余爱好”的英文文章。只要你的文章内容清晰、情感真实,就有机会被刊登在下一期的杂志上!今天,让我们跟着王瑶(Wang Yao)的步伐,一步步完成你的投稿作品吧!
🧱 Step 1: 搭建词汇砖块 (Word Bank)
想要写好文章,我们需要先准备好词汇。请圈出你需要的词,或者写下你自己的词。
类别
词汇选择 (可以多选,也可以自己补充)
🎯 爱好名称
(Hobbies)
reading books (看书), playing basketball (打篮球), drawing (画画), singing (唱歌), playing computer games (打游戏), swimming (游泳), ___________
⏰ 频率与时间
(Time)
every day (每天), once a week (一周一次), at weekends (在周末), after school (放学后), in my free time (在空闲时间)
😊 感受与理由
(Feelings)
happy (开心), relaxed (放松), exciting (令人兴奋的), interesting (有趣的), make friends (交朋友), express my feelings (表达情感)
🔍 Step 2: 拆解范文秘籍 (Analyze the Model)
王瑶的文章逻辑非常清晰,分为四段。请阅读课本P124,看看每段写了什么(连线):
Para. 1 (第一段) • • A. 表达对未来的期望 (Future hopes)
Para. 2 (第二段) • • B. 解释为什么喜欢它 (Reasons & Feelings)
Para. 3 (第三段) • • C. 开门见山介绍爱好是什么 (What is it?)
Para. 4 (第四段) • • D. 描述爱好的发展过程和频率 (How & When)
🗺️ Step 3: 绘制我的大纲 (My Outline)
现在,把你的想法填入下面的大纲中。用简单的词组即可,不用写完整句子!
段落 (Paragraph)
我的想法 (My Ideas)
Para. 1: 介绍爱好
(My hobby is...)
Para. 2: 发展过程
- 几岁开始:
- 练习频率:
Para. 3: 为什么喜欢
- 感觉:
- 原因:
Para. 4: 未来期望
(I hope I can...)
✍️ Step 4: 撰写初稿 (Write my Draft)
请根据大纲,借助下面的“句型脚手架”,完成你的杂志投稿。
Title (取个吸引人的标题): ____________________________________
My favourite hobby is ____________________.
I started ____________________ (爱好 + ing) when I was ________ years old. Now I ____________________ almost every day / at weekends. I usually practise for ________ (时长, 如 one hour) after school.
I never feel bored with ____________________. When I ________, I feel so ____________________ (形容词). It is fun to ____________________, and there are always new things to learn.
I hope I can become a ____________________ (职业, 如 player/writer/artist) one day.
✅ Step 5: 编辑部终审 (Check and Revise)
作为一名合格的小作家,交稿前要自己检查哦!(打 ✔)
[ ] 我分了四段写作。 (4 paragraphs)
[ ] 我在第一段清晰地介绍了我的爱好。
[ ] 第二段讲述了过去的事情,我注意了动词过去式 (如 started)。
[ ] 我检查了大小写、句号和单词拼写。
🧑🏫 教师参考答案及范例 (Teacher's Key & Sample)
Step 2: 拆解范文秘籍连线答案
Para. 1 -- C
Para. 2 -- D
Para. 3 -- B
Para. 4 -- A
Step 3 & 4: 中等偏下学生参考范文 (以篮球为例)
设计意图:针对基础薄弱学生,范文尽量贴合学案中的脚手架句型,不盲目追求长难句,确保学生能看懂、能模仿,建立写作自信。
Title: My Happy Basketball Time
My favourite hobby is playing basketball.
I started playing basketball when I was ten years old. Now I play it almost at weekends. I usually practise for two hours with my friends.
I never feel bored with playing basketball. When I play it, I feel so happy and relaxed. It is fun to make new friends, and there are always new skills to learn.
I hope I can become a great basketball player one day.
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