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Unit 2 Inspiring People 话题作文写作指导
一、单元话题概述
本单元主题为 Inspiring People(榜样人物),围绕古今中外名人、身边榜样展开。
核心写作任务:介绍敬佩的人物、描述人物事迹、评价人物品质、抒发感悟。
写作方向分为两大类:
介绍知名杰出人物(科学家、文学家、探险家、思想家等);
介绍身边榜样(家人、老师、普通人)。
二、审题立意
1. 审题要点
写作对象:名人 / 身边值得敬佩的人
写作核心:介绍人物身份、主要事迹、优秀品质,说明敬佩的原因,表达学习榜样的决心。
时态要求:介绍生平、过往事迹用一般过去时;评价人物、表达个人感受用一般现在时。
结构要求:通用「总 — 分 — 总」结构:开头点明敬佩之人 → 中间介绍身份、事迹、品质 → 结尾谈感悟与收获。
2. 立意方向
基础立意:介绍人物成就,表达敬佩之情,立志向榜样学习。
进阶立意:结合人物精神(坚持、勇敢、无私、创新等),联系自身生活,谈榜样对自己的影响。
三、谋篇布局
1. 经典三段式结构
开头段: 开篇点题,引出人物 点明自己最敬佩的人,简单介绍身份
中间段: 主体详述,事迹 + 品质
分两点:①人物主要经历 / 成就;②人物优秀品质
结尾段: 升华主题,谈感悟 说明人物带给自己的启发,表态要向其学习
2. 万能写作模板
模板一(写知名名人,考试高频)
开头
The person I admire most is ________. He/She is a great ________.
中间
When he/she was young, ________. He/She worked hard all his/her life and made great achievements. He/She is full of ________. It was ________ of him/her to do so.
结尾
He/She is really inspiring. I will learn from him/her and try my best to become a better person.
模板二(写身边榜样:家人 / 老师)
开头
My greatest inspiration is not a famous person. It is ________.
中间
He/She is kind and helpful. He/She always ________. It's very nice of him/her to support and encourage me.
结尾
I feel lucky to have him/her around. He/She sets a good example for me.
四、分类积累
(一)核心词汇库
1. 职业类(人物身份)
writer 作家 historian 历史学家 professor 教授 teacher 教师
researcher 研究员 scientist 科学家 chemist 化学家
physicist 物理学家 biologist 生物学家 engineer 工程师
nurse 护士 pilot 飞行员 thinker 思想家
2. 品质形容词(评价人物,作文加分)
creative 有创造力的 brave 勇敢的 wise 睿智
amazing 令人惊叹 inspiring 鼓舞人心的 admirable 令人敬佩的
courageous 有勇气的 hard-working 勤奋的 kind 善良的
strong-willed 意志坚定的
3. 动作 & 名词(事迹类)
reduce hunger 缓解饥饿 do research 做研究
make discoveries 做出发现 win Nobel Prizes 获得诺贝尔奖
collect seeds 收集种子 train students 培养学生
create works 创作作品 spread ideas 传播思想
come true (梦想)实现 live on 精神永存
4. 高频短语
look up to sb. 仰慕某人 drop out of school 辍学
above all 最重要的是 field research 实地考察
the spread of diseases 疾病传播 a balance between …… 之间的平衡
(二)核心句型
1. 开篇引入句型
Who do you admire most? 你最敬佩谁?
The person I look up to is ... 我所敬佩的人是……
My biggest inspiration is ... 我最大的榜样是……
2. 描述人物事迹(一般过去时)
He/She developed a new kind of rice. 他 / 她培育出了新型水稻。
She made many important discoveries. 她取得了诸多重大发现。
He spent his whole life on research. 他毕生投身研究。
3. 评价人物(单元核心语法:It 作形式主语 必考)
句型 1:It + be + adj. + of sb. to do sth.(评价人的品质)
It was great of him to help people reduce hunger.
他帮助人们缓解饥饿,十分伟大。
It was brave of her to face difficulties.
她直面困难,十分勇敢。
It was creative of him to design the great building.
他设计出这座宏伟的建筑,极具创造力。
It's nice of him to always encourage me.
他一直鼓励我,心地善良。
句型 2:It + be + adj. + for sb. to do sth.(评价事情难度)
It was difficult for her to work in that age.
在那个年代,她从事这份工作十分艰难。
It is important for us to keep going.
坚持前行对我们来说至关重要。
句型 3:综合评价(口语 / 作文通用)
I think he is inspiring because he never gives up.
我认为他很鼓舞人心,因为他永不言弃。
She is full of courage and wisdom.
她充满勇气与智慧。
4. 结尾感悟句型
His spirit will live on forever. 他的精神将永远流传。
I will learn from him and work harder. 我会以他为榜样,更加努力。
He sets a good example for all of us. 他为我们所有人树立了榜样。
五、经典范文
范文 1 基础短篇
标题:The Person I Admire Most
The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. He is a great scientist. He developed new rice and helped reduce hunger around the world. He worked hard all his life. It was great of him to devote himself to people. He is really inspiring. I will learn from him and study harder in the future.
我最敬佩的人是袁隆平。他是一位伟大的科学家。他培育出新型水稻,帮助全世界缓解饥饿。他一生勤恳付出。他为人民奉献自我,十分伟大。他非常鼓舞人心。今后我会以他为榜样,更加努力学习。
范文 2 标准长篇
标题:An Inspiring Person
My favorite person is Zhong Yang, a famous biologist. He was born in 1964. He entered university at 15 and later became interested in plants. He spent his whole life collecting seeds in Xizang. It was very difficult for him to work in cold and high places, but he never gave up. He also trained many young researchers. His spirit lives on. I look up to him very much. I decide to hold on to my dreams just like him.
我最敬佩的人是著名生物学家钟扬。他生于 1964 年,15 岁考入大学,后来对植物产生了浓厚兴趣。他毕生在西藏各地收集种子。在严寒与高原工作对他而言异常艰难,但他从未放弃。他还培养了许多青年科研工作者。他的精神永远流传。我十分仰慕他,也决心像他一样坚守梦想。
范文 3 写身边榜样
标题:My Role Model
My greatest inspiration is my father. He is not a famous person, but he means a lot to me. Whenever I meet difficulties, he always supports and encourages me. It's really nice of him to care about me all the time. He tells me never to give up. I feel lucky to have him. I hope I can become a person like him one day.
我最大的榜样是我的父亲。他并非名人,却对我意义非凡。每当我遇到困难,他总会支持、鼓励我。他一直关心我,十分暖心。他告诉我不要轻言放弃。拥有他我倍感幸运,希望有一天我也能成为像他一样的人。
范文 4 阅读理解延伸写作
标题:Mozi, a Great Thinker
Mozi was a great thinker in ancient China. He was good at woodwork and invented many things. Above all, he spent all his life calling for peace. He hoped all people could be kind to each other. His great ideas have lived on for over 2,000 years. He is inspiring to all of us. We should learn his spirit of love and peace.
墨子是中国古代伟大的思想家。他擅长木工,发明了许多物件。最重要的是,他毕生倡导和平。他希望所有人都能友善相待。他伟大的思想流传了两千多年,深深鼓舞着我们。我们应当学习他博爱与和平的精神。
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