2026年高考全国I卷 读后续写 雪夜温暖-来自陌生人的善意（ 十句五定法讲解） 课件-2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦读后续写专题，依据高考评价体系梳理了文本分析（5W1H）、情节逻辑（冲突-解决）、语言表达（高级句型）三大考查维度，通过近五年全国卷真题分析明确情节衔接占45%、情感描写占30%的高频考点分布，构建了“文本解读-情节设计-语言润色”的完整答题思路体系。 课件亮点在于“十句五定法+真题实战+素养培育”的备考策略，如以“雪夜温暖”真题为例，运用“五定”（衔接句、结局、主题升华）设计逻辑情节，培养学生思维品质和语言能力。包含“伏笔呼应模板”“高级句型库”，通过真题变式训练让学生掌握情节构建与情感表达技巧，教师可据此精准指导学情，助力学生高效冲刺高考。

雪夜温暖-来自陌生人的善意 The kindness of strangers 2026全国新课标I卷读后续写 十句五定法 情节构思与语言提升 1 Learning objectives By the end of the class, we will be able to: 1.Develop a clear recognition of the issues present in our own continuation writing； writ 2.Read for the 6 elements (5w+1H) and the theme； 3.Grasp the “十句五定法” for continuation writing, and build a logical plot structure through typical exam questions. 1 2 3 Three steps Text Analysis 文本分析 Plot design 情节设计 Language expression 语言表达 ① Emily Sanders, a 25-year-old from Detroit, Michigan, set out on December 23rd with high hopes of reaching Toronto to meet her boyfriend for Christmas. Although she had heard warnings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn't give it much thought. She assumed that much like in Michigan, police would simply detour (使绕道) traffic around any closed sections of the highway. But that didn't happen. As the snow came down more and more heavily, Emily was directed off the highway. She drove on for a while and found herself on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town What was Emily’s destination and purpose when she set out on December 23rd? She was heading to Toronto to meet her boyfriend for Christmas. Why did Emily end up on a strange road? She ignored the snowstorm warning, and heavy snow made her leave the highway, which led her to an unknown road. Having ignored a snowstorm warning, Emily got forced off the highway and lost her way. Emily drove to Toronto to visit her boyfriend despite warnings of an approaching snowstorm, because of which she got lost on an unfamiliar country road. Text analysis ②The blinding whiteout made driving nearly impossible. At one point, Emily's car got stuck. After a struggle, she managed to free the vehicle and continued inching along the snow - covered road. As night fell, panic set in. While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road, her car slid into a ditch(沟). She tried to call for help but found no signal on her phone. Seeing no hope of immediate rescue, Emily decided to spend the night in her car. She wrapped herself in a blanket, waiting for morning. To stay warm, she ran her engine for a few minutes every now and then. Eventually, she fell asleep. What made Emily feel extremely desperate? Her car was trapped, she had no phone signal and could not get any help in the freezing night. How did Emily manage to survive the cold night? She stayed inside the car and turned on the engine now and then to fight against the cold. With her car stuck and no phone signal, she survived the night by staying in the car With her car stuck in the snow and no phone signal to seek assistance, Emily had no choice but to stay in the vehicle all night, turning on the engine frequently to fight against the freezing cold. Text analysis ③Emily awoke to a gentle knock on her car window. Standing outside were Daniel and his wife Rachel, who noticed the stranded(被困的)vehicle on their way home and stopped to see if they could help. When Emily rolled down the window, Rachel asked if she was okay and told her it was not safe to stay overnight in the car. With genuine warmth in her voice, Rachel said they could take Emily to a nearby cafe they knew. Grateful and relieved, Emily accepted the offer. Who came to Emily’s rescue the next morning? A kind couple called Daniel and Rachel noticed her and came to offer help. Why did they advise Emily not to remain in the car? It was unsafe to stay in the vehicle overnight in such terrible weather. A couple found the stranded vehicle and volunteered to take her to a cafe, which she accepted gratefully A couple knocked at Emily’s window, warned it was unsafe to stay in the car, and offered to take her to a nearby cafe, which she gratefully accepted. Text analysis ④In the cafe, the couple bought Emily a hot chocolate and listened patiently as she explained her desperate situation: she was about a hundred miles from her destination, her car was completely stuck, and her entire holiday plan could be ruined. What was Emily’s biggest worry at that moment? Her car was stuck and she was afraid her Christmas trip would be ruined. What would the couple probably do next to help Emily? They would work out a practical plan to help her continue her journey. At the cafe, Emily recounted her desperate situation At the cafe, Emily explained her ruined travel plan, and the couple might well present a helpful solution. Text analysis Foreshadowings Echoes in Continuation Para. 2 ... At one point, Emily's car got stuck. After a struggle,..inching along the snow - covered road. As night fell, panic set in. While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road, her car slid into a ditch(沟). Para. 2 She tried to call for help but found no signal on her phone. Para. 4 she was about a hundred miles from her destination, her car was completely stuck, and her entire holiday plan could be ruined. 1.She adopted the couple’s proposal and took a train to meet her boyfriend. 2.The couple and other people worked together to get the car out of the ditch and her car finally stood safe and sound in their garage Spotting her phone’s dead signal, the couple offered theirs without hesitation, allowing her to update her boyfriend on the shifted schedule.” She finally succeeded to meet her boyfriend and her holiday plan went as scheduled. Foreshadowings &Echoes伏笔 Text analysis Conflicts-solutions P1 Although she had heard warnings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn’t give it much thought.......As the snow came down more and more heavily, Emily was directed off the highway. She drove on for a while and found herself on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town. P2 While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road, her car slid into a ditch (沟). P3 Emily awoke to a gentle knock on her car window. ...... With genuine warmth in her voice, Rachel said they could take Emily to a nearby cafe they knew. Grateful and relieved, Emily accepted the offer. P4 ......as she explained her desperate situation: she was about a hundred miles from her destination, her car was completely stuck, and her entire holiday plan could be ruined. Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. Conflict: Emily’s car got stuck in a ditch and her plan to meet her boyfriend for Christmas could fail. Solution: Emily took a train to meet her boyfriend. Daniel and Rachel helped to get her car out of the ditch. Text analysis Main plot Having ignored a snowstorm warning, Emily got forced off the highway and lost her way. A couple found the trapped vehicle and volunteered to take her to a cafe, which she accepted gratefully At the cafe, Emily recounted her desperate situation With her car stuck and no phone signal, she survived the freezing night by staying in the car. Para 2: Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. Para 1: Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Text analysis 1.同位语 Emily Sanders, a 25-year-old from Detroit, Michigan, set out on December 23rd with high hopes of reaching Toronto to meet her boyfriend for Christmas.25岁的艾米丽·桑德斯来自密歇根州底特律，12月23日她满怀希望地出发，前往多伦多与男友共度圣诞。 2. 让步状语从句 Although she had heard warnings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn't give it much thought. 虽然她听说了暴风雪即将来临的警告，但她并没有太当回事。 3.宾语从句 She assumed that much like in Michigan, police would simply detour traffic around any closed sections of the highway.她以为，就像在密歇根那样，警察会简单地让车辆绕行高速公路上任何封闭的路段。 4. find + oneself + 介词短语 – She drove on for a while and found herself on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town.她继续开了一会儿，发现自己身处一条通往某个加拿大小镇的陌生道路上。 5. 不定式作宾语 + 动名词作宾语 After a struggle, she managed to free the vehicle and continued inching along the snow-covered road.经过一番挣扎，她设法将车挣脱出来，继续在积雪的道路上缓慢爬行。 6.时间状语从句 As night fell, panic set in.随着夜幕降临，恐慌开始蔓延。 7. 时间状语从句（进行时） While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road, her car slid into a ditch.当艾米丽在一段狭窄的道路上行驶时，她的车滑入了一条沟里。 续写原文优美句子赏析 Text analysis 8. 现在分词短语作伴随状语 She wrapped herself in a blanket, waiting for morning.她用毯子裹住自己，等待天亮。 9. 不定式作目的状语 To stay warm, she ran her engine for a few minutes every now and then. 为了保暖，她时不时地发动引擎几分钟。 10. awake to + 名词 Emily awoke to a gentle knock on her car window.艾米丽在轻轻的敲车窗声中醒来。 11. 完全倒装 + 定语从句 + 宾语从句 Standing outside were Daniel and his wife Rachel, who noticed the stranded vehicle on their way home and stopped to see if they could help.站在外面的是丹尼尔和他的妻子瑞秋，他们在回家的路上注意到了这辆被困的车辆，便停下来看看是否能帮忙。 12. 时间状语从句 + 宾语从句 + 形式主语 When Emily rolled down the window, Rachel asked if she was okay and told her it was not safe to stay overnight in the car.当艾米丽摇下车窗时，瑞秋问她是否还好，并告诉她留在车里过夜不安全。 13. with + 名词 + 介词短语（伴随状语） With genuine warmth in her voice, Rachel said they could take Emily to a nearby cafe they knew.瑞秋声音中带着真诚的温暖，说她可以带艾米丽去附近一家他们熟悉的咖啡馆。 14. 形容词短语作状语 Grateful and relieved, Emily accepted the offer.感激而宽慰地，艾米丽接受了这个提议。 续写原文优美句子赏析 Text analysis 十句五定法 Task 4: Create plot according to given sentences and the writing skill “十句五定法”. 根据给定的句子和写作技巧“十句五定法”创设合理的情节。 “十句五定”通常指10句话中5句的位置及内容已定，并不限于文章是10句话。 Para.1 Para.2 Plot Design 第一定：衔接para.1首句 （无灵主语+时间状语从句） 第二定：衔接para.2首句（with 复合结构） 第三定：衔接para.2首句 （独立主格结构） 第四定： 结局(正能量)（非谓语+宾语从句） 第五定：主题升华（强调句） 第1句：细节描写（Adj.状+定从） 第2句：细节描写（非谓语 + 同位语） 第3句： 细节描写（半倒装） 第4句：细节描写（全倒装） 第5句：细节描写（动作链+独立主格） 剩下的五句补齐细节： Action-Response 行为-回应原则 所见，所闻 Conflict—Solution 冲突--解决原则 所说，所做 Negative—Positive 消极--积极原则 所思 适当用上衔接词：immediately, without hesitation, then, after a while, on arrival, with all the work done, however, instead, on/ upon doing….. 13 十 句 五 定 法 para. 1 1 衔接para. 1提示句（接着para. 1首句往下写） 2 3 4 5 衔接para. 2提示句（根据para. 2首句倒推写） para. 2 6 衔接、提示句（接着para. 2首句往下写） 7 8 9 结尾（正能量） 10 升华主题 Plot 剩余五句 补齐细节 情绪 动作 心理 语言 环境 描写 Para.1: Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Para. 2: Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. 衔接 1 Q1 回应首句How did Emily feel about her stranded car?1句 过渡 1 Q2. What did Daniel promise to do? Q3. Why did the couple offer their phones and what did Emily do then? Q4.What did the couple do to send Emily off?? 3-4句 衔接 3 回应首句 Q1.What changes took place in the weather three days later?1句 过渡 2 Q2.What did Emily do when she came back? Q3.What did Emily find about her car? Q4. How did Emily react to their help? 3-4句 主题 升华Q5. What is the central theme?1句 Main clues Construct a reasonable and logical plot 衔接 2 Q5. What happened after Emily arrived in Toronto? 1句 衔接 1 Scene 1 1. She worried about the car but agreed to take the train. 过渡 1 Scene 2 2.He promised to tow her car. 3.They lent her phones to contact her boyfriend as hers failed. 4.They sent her to the station, bought a ticket and left their address. 衔接 2 Scene 3 过渡下段首句5.She met her boyfriend, shared her story and planned to regain her car. 衔接 3 Scene 1 回应首句1.The snow stopped and the sun came out. 过渡 2 Scene 2 2.She visited the couple with gifts. 3.Her car was towed back and kept safe . 4. She felt deeply grateful to them. 主题 1 Scene 3 5.She decided to spread kindness to others. 续写构思：5-6句 Para. 1: Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Para. 2: Three days later, Emily came back to pick up her car. ① She worried about the car but agreed to take the train. ② He promised to tow her car. ③ They lent her phones to contact her boyfriend as hers failed. ④ They sent her to the station, bought a ticket and left their address. ⑤ She met her boyfriend, shared her story and planned to get her car. 粗线条的合理构思 Construct a reasonable and logical plot ① The snow stopped and the sun came out. ② She visited the couple with gifts. ③ Her car was kept safe and towed back . ④ She felt deeply grateful to them. ⑤ She decided to spread kindness to others. 细化的合理情节 写作技巧 sentence patterns + advanced and precise words feelings + actions Para.1: The couple suggested that Emily take a train to meet her boyfriend. 衔接 1 Scene 1 2句 She worried about the car but agreed to take the train. 1.起初她还在为抛锚的车子忧心忡忡、犹豫不决，得知乘火车是最佳选择后，她最终答应了。 ①让步 状语从句省略+主句+时间状语从句的省略 Though initially torn by concern about her stranded car, she ultimately agreed when informed that choosing train service might be her top priority. ② 形容词短语作状语+并列句+原因状语从句 Concerned about her broken-down car at first, she finally made up her mind to take the train as it was the best option. ③ 介词短语引导让步状语+主句+时间状语从句 Despite being concerned over her stuck car, she gave her consent eventually after learning that a train ride was the most sensible choice Language expression sentence patterns + advanced and precise words actions 2. 察觉到她的忧虑后，丹尼尔承诺一定会帮忙拖车，这让她放下了心。 ① 现在分词完成式作状语+主句+非限制性定语从句 Having sensed her concern, Daniel assured that he was bound to get the vehicle towed, which put her at ease. ② 形容词短语作状语+主句+现在分词结果状语 Aware of her hesitation , Daniel made a commitment to having her car towed away, relieving her great concern. ③ 时间状语从句+宾语从句+现在分词结果状语 After picking up on her unease, Daniel guaranteed that he would arrange for a tow truck, which greatly comforted her. Para.1:过渡 1 Scene 2 3-4 句 适当补充细节 He promised to tow her car. sentence patterns + advanced and precise words actions 3.发现她手机没有信号，夫妻俩毫不犹豫地把手机借给了她，她得以把行程变动告知男友。 ① 现在分词作状语+主句+现在分词结果状语 Spotting her phone’s dead signal, the couple offered theirs without hesitation, allowing her to update her boyfriend on the shifted schedule. ② 现在分词作状语+主句+结果状语从句 Catching sight of her phone out of service, the kind couple readily handed over their phones right away, contributing to making contact with her boyfriend to inform him of the brand new plan. ③ 现在分词作状语+主句+现在分词结果状语 The moment they noticed her phone fail to work, the considerate couple did not hesitate to share their phones, enabling her to message her boyfriend about the unexpected means of transportation. Para.1:过渡 1 Scene 2 3-4 句 适当补充细节 They lent her phones as hers failed, so she messaged her boyfriend. sentence patterns + advanced and precise words actions 4.随后，他们立刻送她到车站，帮她买好了车票，还写下了联系方式和地址方便后续联系。“艾米丽裹着他们的厚实的外套，登上了火车，心中满怀感激之情。” ① 副词作状语+并列谓语+现在分词伴随状语 Subsequently,without delay, they swiftly dropped her off at the station and purchased a ticket for her, scribbling down their number and address for the sake of convenient contact.Wrapped in their thick coats, Emily boarded the train, her heart swelling with overwhelming gratitude. ② 副词作状语+多重并列谓语// 主句+插入语+非谓语 Soon afterwards, they drove her straight to the station rapidly, bought her a ticket and jotted down their contact information just to keep in touch. Emily, wrapped up in their thick coat,stepped onto the train, overcome with a deep sense of thankfulness. Para.1:衔接 2 Scene 2 3-4 句 适当补充细节 They sent her to the station, bought a ticket and left their address. sentence patterns + advanced and precise words actions 4.随后，他们立刻送她到车站，帮她买好了车票，还写下了联系方式和地址方便后续联系。“艾米丽裹着他们的厚实的外套，登上了火车，心中满怀感激之情。” ③ 高级句型+多重并列非谓语//with复合结构+主句+非谓语 They wasted no time sending her to the station, purchasing a ticket and leaving their address for later connection.With her warm coat wrapped around her, Emily climbed aboard the train, feeling profoundly grateful from the bottom of her heart. Para.1:衔接 2 Scene 2 3-4 句 适当补充细节 They sent her to the station, bought a ticket and left their address. sentence patterns + advanced and precise words actions 5.几小时后，她抵达目的地。走下站台，她立刻被男友紧紧抱住。她讲述了这段惊险的经历和夫妻俩暖心的相助，倘若没有他们无私的帮助，她的假期计划早已泡汤。她打算圣诞节后回去取自己的车。 ① 现在分词作状语+主句+独立主格+状语从句+定语从句+简单句 Hours later, she ended up in Toronto. Stepping off the platform, she was instantly enveloped in her boyfriend’s tight embrace, tears of joy and relief welling up in her eyes as she recounted her thrilling adventure and the heartwarming rescue by the kind couple, without whose unselfish help her holiday plan could have been ruined. She intended to retrieve her car after Christmas. Para.1:衔接 2 Scene 2 3-4 句 适当补充细节 She met her boyfriend, shared her story and planned to retrieve her car. sentence patterns + advanced and precise words actions 5.② 时间状语从句+主句+with复合结构+并列谓语 As the hours stretched on, the train eventually rolled into Toronto. On stepping out of the station, her boyfriend gathered her into his arms , worry written on his face. With tears of joy and relief springing to her eyes, she poured out her heart-stopping experience and was determined to get her car back soon afterwards . ③ 现在分词作状语+主句+并列谓语 Hours slipping by, she found herself landing in Toronto. No sooner had she left the platform than her boyfriend gave her a big hug tightly. She shared her tough journey and made up her mind to fetch her stranded car in the days to come. Para.1:衔接 2 Scene 2 3-4 句 适当补充细节 She met her boyfriend, shared her story and planned to retrieve her car. sentence patterns + advanced and precise words feelings + actions Para.2: Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. 衔接 3 Scene 1. 1-2句 The snow stopped and the sun came out.补充细节 1.随着大雪的停止，太阳在闪闪发光的田野上投下金色的光芒，融化了暴风雪的最后痕迹。 ① with复合结构作状语+主句+现在分词结果状语 With the raging snow ceasing, the sun cast a golden glow over the glistening fields, melting the last traces of the snow storm. ② 独立主格+无灵主语+现在分词结果状语+名词性从句 The howling snow dying down, the glistening fields were bathed in a warm golden glow, dissolving what remained of the blizzard. ③ 时间状语从句+无灵主语句+现在分词结果状语 As the fierce snow ended up ceasing, the sun poured a golden light across the sparkling fields, erasing the snow storm’s final marks. sentence patterns + advanced and precise words feelings + actions 2. 她提着一盒礼物前去向夫妻俩表达诚挚的谢意，来到家中，眼前的一幕让她十分惊喜：自己的车完好无损地停在车库里。 ① 现在分词作状语+主句+定语从句+独立主格 Carrying a box of gifts to convey their heartfelt thanks to the couple, she paid a visit to their house where she was greeted with a magical scene, her vehicle standing safe and sound in their garage. ② with复合结构作状语+主句+非谓语+独立主格 With a box of gifts held in hand , she headed to drop in on the kind couple to extend her genuine gratefulness, only to be met with an extraordinary sight-her car , perfectly intact, was parked in their garage. Para.2:过渡2 Scene 2 She visited the couple with gifts. 1-2句适当补充细节 sentence patterns + advanced and precise words feelings + actions 2. 她提着一盒礼物前去向夫妻俩表达诚挚的谢意，来到家中，眼前的一幕让她十分惊喜：自己的车完好无损地停在车库里。 ③ 不定式作目的状语+主句+定语从句 To convey her deep gratitude , she held a box of gifts to her chest , calling at their house, where her car was kept perfectly in good condition in their garage. Para.2:过渡2 Scene 2 She visited the couple with gifts. 1-2句适当补充细节 sentence patterns + advanced and precise words feelings + actions 3. 原来，夫妻俩第二天就联系了警方和拖车司机，把车从沟里拖了出来。 ① it作形式主语句型+宾语从句 It turned out that the couple reached out to the police and truck drivers to tow it out of the ditch the very next day. ② 状语从句+主句+不定式作目的状语 As it happened, the couple contacted the police and tow truck workers to pull her trapped vehicle out of the ditch the following day. ③ 主语从句+表语从句 What went beyond her expectations was that the couple managed to get in touch with the police to have her car removed from the ditch soon after her car was stuck. Para.2:过渡2 Scene 2 Her car was kept safe and towed back 1-2句适当补充细节 sentence patterns + advanced and precise words feelings + actions 4. 她看到车上装点的节日饰品，埃米莉忍不住流下感激的泪水，心中暖意涌动。她坦言，若非二人及时相助，她就无法和男友共度圣诞团聚时光了。这对夫妇笑了笑，坚持说这没什么大不了的，他们只是做了每个人都应该做的事。 ① 现在分词作状语+主句+独立主格+状语从句（含虚拟语气）//主句+非谓语+并列名从 Witnessing the festive decorations on her car, Emily couldn’t resist shedding tears of gratefulness, a sense of warmth surging through her body, as she uttered that she would have missed the Christmas reunion with her boyfriend but for their timely assistance. The couple cracked a smile, insisting that it was no big deal and that they merely did what anyone was supposed to do. Para.2:过渡2 Scene 2 She felt deeply grateful to them.1-2句适当补充细节 sentence patterns + advanced and precise words feelings + actions 4. 她看到车上装点的节日饰品，埃米莉忍不住流下感激的泪水，心中暖意涌动。她坦言，若非二人及时相助，她就无法和男友共度圣诞团聚时光了。这对夫妇笑了笑，坚持说这没什么大不了的，他们只是做了每个人都应该做的事。 ② 状语从句省略 +主句+宾语从句//主句+名从+非谓语//非谓语+主句+非谓语+名从 When noticing the delicate decorations on her car, Emily was too moved to tears to utter a single word. She highlighted that never would she have succeeded in spending a merry Christmas without their selfless aid. Wearing a warm smile , the couple perceived it as no big deal, claiming that they had just done what every human being ought to do for another. Para.2:过渡2 Scene 2 She felt deeply grateful to them.1-2句适当补充细节 sentence patterns + advanced and precise words feelings + actions 4. 她看到车上装点的节日饰品，埃米莉忍不住流下感激的泪水，心中暖意涌动。她坦言，若非二人及时相助，她就无法和男友共度圣诞团聚时光了。这对夫妇笑了笑，坚持说这没什么大不了的，他们只是做了每个人都应该做的事。 ③ 介词短语作状语+主谓结构+简单句//主句+名从+虚拟语气//with复合结构+名从句 At the sight of the decorations on her car, Emily stood rooted to the spot , tears of gratitude welling up in her eyes. She owed her happy Christmas reunion entirely to the couple. She acknowledged that had it not been for the couple’s prompt help, she wouldn’t have been able to enjoy a Christmas reunion with her boyfriend. With a smile spreading across her face, the couple responded that it was nothing special — they simply did what every person ought to do. Para.2:过渡2 Scene 2 She felt deeply grateful to them.1-2句适当补充细节 sentence patterns + advanced and precise words feelings + actions 5.这个难忘的圣诞节让埃米莉明白，不经意的善意行为能够战胜我们遇到的一切困境，照亮我们前行之路。从那以后，她下定决心，今后遇到身处困境的人，也要将这份善意传递下去。 ① 主句+宾语从句+现在分词状语+时间状语+分词省略结构 That unforgettable Christmas left Emily realizing that random acts of generosity can conquer whatever comes in our way, illuminating the way forward. From then on, she resolved to pay forward such good gestures whenever encountering those trapped in trouble. ② 主语从句+表语从句+状语从句省略//主句+并列结构 What Emily gained from this Christmas was that kindness without expecting anything in return could be of great help to overcome all hardships when braving a tough situation. Since then, she has been determined to do good deeds and lend a helping hand to those stuck in difficulty. Para.2: 1 句 主题升华 回应主题 画面定格 She decided to spread kindness to others. sentence patterns + advanced and precise words feelings + actions 5.这个难忘的圣诞节让埃米莉明白，不经意的善意行为能够战胜我们遇到的一切困境，照亮我们前行之路。从那以后，她下定决心，今后遇到身处困境的人，也要将这份善意传递下去。 ③ 强调句型+主句// 主句+名从句 It was from this memorable Christmas experience that Emily learned that small kindnesses can guide us through all challenges lying before us. After that , she resolved to do whatever she could to spread warmth and reached out her hand to assist anyone who ran into trouble. Para.2: 1 句 主题升华 回应主题 画面定格 She decided to spread kindness to others. Continuation Writing Let’s share our stories! Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Though initially torn by concern about her stranded car, she ultimately agreed when informed that choosing train service might be her top priority. Having sensed her worry, Daniel assured that he was bound to get the vehicle towed , which put her at ease. Spotting her phone’s dead signal, the couple offered theirs without hesitation, allowing her to update her boyfriend on the shifted schedule. Subsequently, without delay, they swiftly dropped her off at the station and purchased a ticket for her, scribbling down their number and address for the sake of convenient contact. Wrapped in their thick coats, Emily boarded the train, her heart swelling with overwhelming gratitude. Hours later, she ended up in Toronto. Stepping off the platform, she was instantly enveloped in her boyfriend’s tight embrace, tears of joy and relief welling up in her eyes as she recounted her thrilling adventure and the heartwarming rescue by the kind couple, without whose unselfish help her holiday plan could have been ruined. She intended to retrieve her car afterwards. Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. With the raging snow ceasing, the sun cast a golden glow over the glistening fields, melting the last traces of the storm. Carrying a box of gifts to convey their heartfelt thanks to the couple, she paid a visit to their house where she was greeted with a magical scene, her vehicle standing safe and sound in their garage. It turned out that the couple reached out to the police and truck drivers to tow it out of the ditch the very next day. Witnessing the festive decorations on her car, Emily couldn’t resist shedding tears of gratefulness, a sense of warmth surging through her body, as she uttered that she would have missed the Christmas reunion with her boyfriend but for their timely assistance. The couple cracked a smile, insisting that it was no big deal and that they merely did what anyone was supposed to do. That unforgettable Christmas left Emily realizing that random acts of generosity can conquer whatever comes in our way, illuminating the way forward. From then on, she resolved to pay forward such good gestures whenever encountering those trapped in trouble. 佳作展现 续写技巧： step1 读原文，梳理信息(5w1h)，5分钟 step2 构思、初稿（十句五定法、3大原则），7分钟 step3 补充细节，写剩下五句，润色，定稿，7 分钟 step4 誊写到答题卡上，5分钟 Summary THANK YOU $