2026届高三英语一轮复习读后续写十句五定法课件

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦“读后续写”题型，依据高考评价体系梳理了情感描写、细节刻画、动作链推进、逻辑衔接和主题升华五大考查维度。通过分析近三年高考真题，明确“情感表达准确性”和“情节连贯逻辑性”占分权重达60%，以“十句五定法”构建从句型模板到情景应用的完整备考体系。 课件亮点在于“模板化输出+情境化训练+素养化提升”策略，如情感描写模块提供“On/upon seeing...”固定句型及20+情绪名词与有灵动词搭配表，结合真题情景翻译培养语言能力。动作链推进通过动词序列训练强化思维连贯性，“战胜自我”模块的虚拟语气感悟句提升文化意识与思维品质。教师可利用高频句型库和易错点警示，实现精准教学，助力学生高效提分。

读后读写“十句五定法”默写版 表示情绪的名词： 1)表示生气： 愤怒 2)表示高兴 高兴 高兴 欣慰 3)表示忧虑： 着急1 紧张 4)表示害怕： 恐惧 惊吓 惊吓 畏惧 恐怖 5)表示激动 兴奋 惊讶 6)表示伤心失望 悲伤 悲伤 失望 沮丧 哀伤 烦恼 7)其他类： 内疚 羞耻 满足 迷惑 后悔 困惑 疲惫 尴尬 感激 如释重负 羞愧 不确定 表示情绪的形容词： 1)表示生气： 2)表示高兴： 高兴的 高兴的 欣慰的 3)表示忧虑： 焦虑的 担心的 4)表示害怕： 恐惧的1 害怕的 5)表示激动： 兴奋的 惊讶的 惊讶的 6)表示伤心失望： 悲伤的I 悲痛的丨 失望的 抑郁的 沮丧的 7)其他类： 内疚的 羞耻的 满足的 迷惑的| 后悔的 困惑的 疲惫的 尴尬的1 感激的 如释重负的 有灵动词： 抓住 袭来 充满 掠过 淹没；压倒took hold of控制 笼罩 涌出 被 .代替 续写第一段 固定句第1包：情感描写 翻译练习 1.听到自己的团队赢得冠军的消息，Sarh心中涌起一阵强烈的兴奋，传遍全身。 2.看到那些在寒风中挣扎的可怜孩子，这位善良的女士心中涌起一阵强烈的同情，弥漫 全身。 4.一看到走失的狗朝自己跑来，他就感到一阵释然。 第2句：细节描写（使用非谓语结构） 翻译练习 1.兴奋地挥舞着门票，她冲向火车站，大声喊着：“我要去见偶像啦！” 2花了整整一周时间准备演讲，她站在台上时自信满满，毫无紧张感。 3受到电影里冒险故事的启发，男孩收拾好背包，小声告诉父母：“我想去徒步旅行。” 4老人拄着拐杖慢慢前行，双手颤抖着，眼里满是对故乡的思念。 固定句第3包：动作链推进 1. 她走到窗边，拉开窗帘，凝视着外面静静飘落的雪花。 2 他抓起背包，冲出家门，挥手拦了一辆出租车去赶早班火车。 固定包第4包：细节描（使用倒装句二选一） 翻译练习 1.她刚打开门，一阵风就把桌上的文件吹掉了。 2.音乐会刚一开始，外面就下起了大雨。 第5句：过渡衔接（使用时间状语从句或定语从句或形容词作状语） 翻译练习 1.当我们正沿着山间小路往前走时，突然听到不远处传来奇怪的脚步声。 2她攥着刚收到的神秘信件，站在原地愣了许久，困惑又好奇。 3.他们在森林里迷了路，手机也没有信号，这让他们不得不寻找临时避难所。 续写第二段 第1句情感转变【固定句】使用独立主格(with)+n+doing,一句话 泪水顺着我的脸颊流下，模糊了我的视线，我被抛入悲伤的深渊。 笑意在他心底涌动，他朝母亲跑去。 第2句：①使用not until倒装结构 【升级】：直到河里的鱼都死了，村民们才意识到污染有多严重。 或者②环境点经阳光透过窗帘洒进来，在相册静置的床铺上投下金色的光线。 ③对话或反应Her hands trembled slightly as she opened it."I never knew you kept these,." she whispered.情感释放，祖孙初次共情。 第3句：所感或者对话或反应 她打开相册时手微微颤抖，轻声说：“我从不知道你还留着这些。” 第45包：结局升华+难忘固定包】Having shared those memories again,Jake realized he didh't need years to build a bond--just one meaningful moment.体现成长与领悟 或者：所悟From this experience/story,I have learned that/we can learn that. 或者虚拟语气句 ①要不是有家人和老师的帮助，我不会意识到自己的错误，也不会改变对失败的态度。 2Had it not been for +N,sb could/would (not)have done. Had it not been for the help from my family and teacher,I wouldn't have realized my mistakes and changed my attitude towards failure. 或者用： 我意识到… 那一天/这段经历如此难忘，会永远留在我的记忆里。 这段经历在她身上留下了不可磨灭的印记，让她懂得了共情的美好与温柔手掌里的无声 力量。 或者强调句 或者 (正如谚语所说)，… 3 读后读写“十句五定法”课堂版 仁寿一中南校区 黄丽 为什么叫十句五定法? 可以理解为: 该类写作要求为150字, 即大概10 - 14句, 其中有五处是可共同的套路,就叫五定。 续写第一段 固定句第1句:情感描写（二选一） ①On/upon seeing/hearing /learning sth., sb. felt a great sense of +情绪名词+welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb. 表示"某人感到一股强烈的...在内心升腾、奔涌" 【小试牛刀】Jessica感到一股强烈的高兴，在她心中奔涌。 ___________________________________________________________________________②A wave of/A sense of...＋情感名词＋有灵动词＋sb when/as soon as/the monment+句子 表示情绪的名词: 1）表示生气: _______| ______愤怒 2）表示高兴: _______高兴 |_______ 高兴 | _______欣慰 3）表示忧虑: _______ |_______| _______ 着急 | _______紧张 4）表示害怕:_______恐惧 | _______ 惊吓 | _______ 惊吓 |_______畏惧 | _______恐怖 5）表示激动: ________________兴奋 | ___________________惊讶 6）表示伤心失望: _______悲伤 | _______悲伤 | ____________失望 | __________________________________________ 沮丧 | _______ 哀伤 | ________烦恼 7）其他类: _______内疚 | _______羞耻 | __________满足 | _________ 迷惑 | _______后悔 | __________________ 困惑 | ______________________________ 疲惫 | _____________尴尬 | ______________ 感激 | ____________如释重负 | ________羞愧______不确定 有灵动词: seized/caught/struck抓住 swept/flooded/rushed over袭来 flooded over充满 ran through/passed through掠过 overwhelmed淹没；压倒 took hold of控制 enveloped笼罩 well up in＋sb gave way to被……代替 翻译练习 1.听到自己的团队赢得冠军的消息，Sarah心中涌起一阵强烈的兴奋，传遍全身。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.看到那些在寒风中挣扎的可怜孩子，这位善良的女士心中涌起一阵强烈的同情，弥漫全身。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.得知自己的辛勤付出终于换来了晋升，Emma心中涌起一阵强烈的成就感，充斥全身。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.一看到走失的狗朝自己跑来，他就感到一阵释然。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 5.当她走进小时候读书的那间旧教室时，一股怀旧之情涌上心头。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.清晨在安静的环境中开始练瑜伽时，她立刻感到一阵平静笼罩着自己。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第2句:细节描写 （使用非谓语结构） (1) doing A,主语+谓语B(主语+谓语 A,doing B) Burning with anger, he glared at me with his frightening eyes, yelling,"You're such an idiot." (2)Having done A...,主语+谓语 B 已经......某人...... Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out. (3)done A,主语+谓语 B,doing C Encouraged by the teacher, Lucy raised her hand, whispering,"I want to have a try." (4)使用with复合结构 Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembling and her heart beating fast. He turned around, with tears rolling/streaming down his cheeks. The girl stood there, shivering/trembling with cold, with dirt on her face and hair. 翻译练习 1.兴奋地挥舞着门票，她冲向火车站，大声喊着：“我要去见偶像啦！” ___________________________________________________________________________ 2.花了整整一周时间准备演讲，她站在台上时自信满满，毫无紧张感。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.受到电影里冒险故事的启发，男孩收拾好背包，小声告诉父母：“我想去徒步旅行。” ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.老人拄着拐杖慢慢前行，双手颤抖着，眼里满是对故乡的思念。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 固定句第3句:动作链推进 1.He ___________to the window, ___________ the curtain, __________the snow falling gently outside.（她走到窗边，拉开窗帘，凝视着外面静静飘落的雪花。） 2. He _____________ his backpack,________________ out of the door, _________ a taxi to catch the early train.（他抓起背包，冲出家门，挥手拦了一辆出租车去赶早班火车。） 3.那个孩子跑过院子，被一块石头绊倒，然后大哭起来。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 4.他们围坐在篝火旁，唱着老歌，大声笑着，分享着故事直到深夜。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 5.他站起身，整理了一下领带，清了清嗓子，然后开始向观众演讲。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 固定句第4句:细节描写 （使用倒装句二选一） No sooner had sb. done than sb. did或Hardly had sb. done when sb. did 【小试牛刀】The moment my mother finished her performance, the audience broke into rapturous applause. _____________________________________________ than the audience broke into rapturous applause. 翻译练习 1.她刚打开门，一阵风就把桌上的文件吹掉了。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 2.音乐会刚一开始，外面就下起了大雨。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 3.他刚结束演讲，观众就爆发出掌声。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 4.球队刚踢进第一个球，人群就疯狂欢呼起来。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 第5句:过渡衔接 （使用时间状语从句或定语从句或形容词作状语） ①when | while | as | before | after引导的时间状语从句 When I arrived there,I walked to the door and knocked. As I waited at the stop,I heard a big noise. ②形容词作状语 The girl stood there, staring at the food, cold and hungry. They sat on the beach, enjoying the sunshine, relaxed and happy. ③定语从句 The youngest kid wanted to get a present, but he was refused by his mother, which made him cry. 翻译练习 1.当我们正沿着山间小路往前走时，突然听到不远处传来奇怪的脚步声。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 2.她攥着刚收到的神秘信件，站在原地愣了许久，困惑又好奇。 ___________________________________________________________________________3.他们在森林里迷了路，手机也没有信号，这让他们不得不寻找临时避难所。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 续写第二段 第1句 情感转变【固定句】 使用独立主格(with)+n+doing,一句话 Tears streaming down my face and blurring my vision, I was thrown into the abyss(深渊) of grief and sorrow. Laughter bubbling(洋溢,涌起)up inside him, he ran towards his mother, 第2句:①使用not until倒装结构 The villagers didn't realize how serious the pollution was until all the fish died in the river. 【升级】: ______________________________________________ how serious the pollution was. 或者②环境点经Sunlight streamed through the curtains, casting golden rays on the bed where the album now rested.  营造温暖画面，为高潮蓄力。 ③对话或反应 Her hands trembled slightly as she opened it. "I never knew you kept these," she whispered.  情感释放，祖孙初次共情。 第3句:所感或者对话或反应 Her hands trembled slightly as she opened it. "I never knew you kept these," she whispered.  _______________________________, I felt my time and effort worthwhile, for I have made my own contribution to XXX. 第4-5句: 结局升华+难忘【固定句】 Having shared those memories again, Jake realized he didn’t need years to build a bond—just one meaningful moment. 体现成长与领悟 或者:所悟From this experience/story, I have learned that/we can learn that... 1） XXX might go away, but YYY endures. 2） XXX might exist, but YYY endures. 或者虚拟语气句 ①Without/ But for + the help from my family and teachers, I wouldn’t have realized my mistakes and changed my attitude towards failure. ②Had it not been for + N, sb could/would (not) have done. Had it not been for the help from my family and teacher,I wouldn’t have realized my mistakes and changed my attitude towards failure. 或者用：It dawned on me that....... That day/experience was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. This experience left an indelible mark on her, teaching her the beauty of compassion and the quiet strength of gentle hands. 或者强调句It is+...that..... 或者As the saying goes,/As the proverb says, ..... 补充: 1.可以在句子前面适当的加上过渡词, 来表示时间、地点和逻辑, 使整篇文章更加的立体丰富。2.背一下不同主题的万能结尾句。 (1)immediately (2)Without hesitation (3) After a short while, after that,then (4) On arrival (5) Two hours later (6) At the sight of what had happened/At the thought of.... (7) With all the work alone (8) However/Instead/Rather (9) All of a sudden 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $读后读写“十句五定法”教师版 为什么叫十句五定法？可以理解为：该类写作要求为150字，即大概10-14句，其中有 五处是可共同的套路，就叫五定。 续写第一段 固定包第1包：情感描写（二选一) ①On/upon seeing/hearing /learning sth.,sb.felt a great sense of+情绪名词+welling up nsb's heart and surging through sb.表示"末人感到一股强烈的.在内心升腾、奔涌" 【小试牛刀】Jessica感到一股强烈的高兴，在她心中奔涌。 Jessica felt a great sense of delight welling up in her heart and surging through her. ②A wave of/A sense of..+情感名词+有灵动词+sb when/as soon as/the monment+句 子 表示情绪的名词： 1)表示生气：anger rage愤怒 2)表示高兴：delight高兴|joy高兴|relief欣慰 3)表示忧虑：anxiety|worry|concern着急|tension紧张 4)表示害怕：fear恐惧|scare惊吓|fright惊吓horror畏惧|terror恐怖 5)表示激动：excitement兴奋surprise/amaze ment惊讶 6)表示伤心失望：sorrow悲伤grief悲伤disappointment失望|depression frustration沮丧|sadness哀伤|annoyance烦恼 7)其他类：guilt内疚|shame羞耻|satisfaction满足|puzzlement迷惑|regret后 悔|puzzlement/confusion困惑」tiredness/exh austion疲惫|embarrassment尴尬 gratitude感激relief如释重负|shame羞愧/uncetainty不确定 有灵动词：seized/caught/struck抓住swept/flooded/.rushed over袭来flooded over充满 ran through/passed through掠过overwhelmed淹没：压倒took hold of控制enveloped 笼罩wellup涌出in十sb gave way to被...代替 翻译练习 1.听到自己的团队赢得冠军的消息，Sarah心中涌起一阵强烈的兴奋，传遍全身。 Upon hearing the news that her team had won the championship,Sarah felt a great sense of excitement welling up in her heart and surging through her. 2.看到那些在寒风中挣扎的可怜孩子，这位善良的女士心中涌起一阵强烈的同情，弥漫 全身。 Upon seeing the poor children struggling in the cold,the kind lady felt a great sense of sympathy welling up in her heart and surging through her. 3.得知自己的辛勤付出终于换来了晋升，Ema心中涌起一阵强烈的成就感，充斥全身。 Upon learning that her hard work had finally paid off with a promotion,Emma felt a great sense of achievement welling up in her heart and surging through her. 4.一看到走失的狗朝自己跑来，他就感到一阵释然。 A sense of relief washed over him as soon as he saw his lost dog running toward him 5.当她走进小时候读书的那间旧教室时，一股怀旧之情涌上心头。 A sense of nostalgia came over her the moment she walked into the old classroom where she had studied as a child. 6.清晨在安静的环境中开始练瑜伽时，她立刻感到一阵平静笼罩着自己。 A sense of calm enveloped her as soon as she started practicing yoga in the quiet morning. y 固定句第2句：细节描写（使用非谓语结构） (I)doing A,主语+谓语B(主语+谓语A,doing B) Burning with anger,he glared at me with his frightening eyes,yelling,"You're such an idiot." (2)Having done A.,主语+谓语B已经.某人… Having queued for 3 hours,he was told that the ticket had been sold out. (3)done A,主语+谓语B,doing C Encouraged by the teacher,Lucy raised her hand,whispering,"I want to have a try." (4)使用with复合结构 Jenny walked slowly to the front,with her legs trembling and her heart beating fast. He turned around,with tears rolling/streaming down his cheeks. The girl stood there,shivering/trembling with cold,with dirt on her face and hair. 翻译练习 1.兴奋地挥舞着门票，她冲向火车站，大声喊着：“我要去见偶像啦！” Waving the ticket excitedly,she rushed to the railway station,shouting,"I'm going to meet my idol!" 2花了整整一周时间准备演讲，她站在台上时自信满满，毫无紧张感。 Having spent a whole week preparing for the speech,she stood on the stage full of confidence without any sense of nervousness. 3受到电影里冒险故事的启发，男孩收拾好背包，小声告诉父母：“我想去徒步旅行。” Inspired by the adventure stories in the movie,the boy packed his backpack and whispered to his parents,"I want to go hiking." 4老人拄着拐杖慢慢前行，双手颤抖着，眼里满是对故乡的思念。 The old man walked slowly with a crutch,with his hands trembling and his eyes filled with longing for his hometown 固定句第3句：动作链推进 1.He walked to the window,opened the curtain,and stared at the snow falling gently outside. (她走到窗边，拉开窗帘，凝视着外面静静飘落的雪花。) 2.He grabbed his backpack,rushed out of the door,and hailed a taxi to catch the early train. (他抓起背包，冲出家门，挥手拦了一辆出租车去赶早班火车。) 3那个孩子跑过院子，被一块石头绊倒，然后大哭起来。 The child ran across the yard,tripped over a stone,and burst into tears. 4.他们围坐在篝火旁，唱着老歌，大声笑着，分享着故事直到深夜。 They sat around the campfire,sang old songs,laughed loudly,and shared stories late into the night. 5他站起身，整理了一下领带，清了清嗓子，然后开始向观众演讲。 He stood up,adjusted his tie,cleared his throat,and began his speech to the audience. 固定句第4句：细节描写（使用倒装句二选一） No sooner had sb.done than sb.did Hardly had sb.done when sb.did 【小试牛刀】The moment my mother finished her performance,.the audience broke into rapturous applause. No sooner had my mother finished her performance than the audience broke into rapturous applause. 2 翻译练习 1.她刚打开门，一阵风就把桌上的文件吹掉了。 No sooner had she opened the door than a gust of wind blew the papers off her desk. 2.音乐会刚一开始，外面就下起了大雨。 No sooner had the concert started than it began to rain heavily outside 3.他刚结束演讲，观众就爆发出掌声。 No sooner had he finished his speech than the audience burst into applause. 4球队刚踢进第一个球，人群就疯狂欢呼起来。 No sooner had the team scored the first goal than the crowd cheered wildly. 固定句第5句：过渡衔接（使用时间状语从句或定语从句或形容词作状语） ①when while」as before」after引导的时间状语从包 When I arrived there.I walked to the door and knocked. As I waited at the stop,I heard a big noise. ②形容词作状语 The girl stood there,staring at the food,cold and hungry. They sat on the beach,enjoying the sunshine,relaxed and happy ③定语从句 The youngest kid wanted to get a present,but he was refused by his mother,which made him cry. 翻译练习 1.当我们正沿着山间小路往前走时，突然听到不远处传来奇怪的脚步声。 As we were walking along the mountain path,we suddenly heard strange footsteps not far away. 2她攥着刚收到的神秘信件，站在原地愣了许久，困惑又好奇。 She held the mysterious letter she had just received,standing there in a daze for a long time, confused and curious. 3.他们在森林里迷了路，手机也没有信号，这让他们不得不寻找临时避难所。 They got lost in the forest and their mobile phones had no signal,which forced them to look for a temporary shelter 续写第二段 第1包情感转变【固定包】使用独立主格(wth)+n+doing,一包话 Tears streaming down my face and blurring my vision,I was thrown into the abyss() of grief and sorrow. Laughter bubbling(洋溢，涌起)up inside him,he ran towards his mother, 第2句：①使用not until倒装结构 The villagers didn't realize how serious the pollution was until all the fish died in the river. 【升级】：Not until all the fish died in the river did the villagers realize how serious the pollution was. 或者②环t境点经Sunlight streamed through the curtains,casting golden rays on the bed where the album now rested.营造温暖画面，为高潮蓄力。 ③对话或反应Her hands trembled slightly as she opened it."I never knew you kept these," she whispered..情感释放，祖孙初次共情。 第3句：所感或者对话或反应 Her hands trembled slightly as she opened it."I never knew you kept these,"she whispered. Exhausted/tired/cold as I was,I felt my time and effort worthwhile,for I have made my own contribution to XXX. 第45句：结局升华+难忘【固定句】Having shared those memories again,.Jake realized he didn't need years to build a bond一just one meaningful moment..体现成长与领悟 或者：所悟From this experience/.story,I have learned that/we can learn that. 1)XXX might go away,but YYY endures. 2)XXX might exist,but YYY endures. 或者虚拟语气句 DWithout/But for the help from my family and teachers,I wouldn't have realized my mistakes and changed my attitude towards failure. 2Had it not been for+N.sb could/would (not)have done Had it not been for the help from my family and teacher,I wouldn't have realized my mistakes and changed my attitude towards failure. 或者用：It dawned on me that.... That day/experience was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. This experience left an indelible mark on her,teaching her the beauty of compassion and the quiet strength of gentle hands. 或者强调句Itis+hat.. 或者As the saying goes,. 补充：1.可以在句子前面适当的加上过渡词，来表示时间、地点和逻辑，使整篇文章更加 的立体丰富。2背一下不同主题的万能结尾句。 (1)immediately (2)Without hesitation (3)After a short while,after that,then (4)On arrival (5)Two hours later (6)At the sight of what had happened/At the thought of.... (7)With all the work alone (8)However/Instead/Rather (9)All of a sudden 读后读写“十句五定法”默写版 表示情绪的名词: 1）表示生气: _______| ______愤怒 2）表示高兴: _______高兴 |_______ 高兴 | _______欣慰 3）表示忧虑: _______ |_______| _______ 着急 | _______紧张 4）表示害怕:_______恐惧 | _______ 惊吓 | _______ 惊吓 |_______畏惧 | _______恐怖 5）表示激动: ________________兴奋 | ___________________惊讶 6）表示伤心失望: _______悲伤 | _______悲伤 | ____________失望 | __________________________________________ 沮丧 | _______ 哀伤 | ________烦恼 7）其他类: _______内疚 | _______羞耻 | __________满足 | _________ 迷惑 | _______后悔 | __________________ 困惑 | ______________________________ 疲惫 | _____________尴尬 | ______________ 感激 | ____________如释重负 | ________羞愧______不确定 表示情绪的形容词: 1）表示生气: _______| ______ 2）表示高兴: _______高兴的 |_______ 高兴的 | _______欣慰的 3）表示忧虑: _______ 焦虑的|_______担心的 4）表示害怕:_______恐惧的 | _______ 害怕的 5）表示激动: __________兴奋的 | _________惊讶的| ___________惊讶的 6）表示伤心失望: _______悲伤的 | _______悲痛的 | ____________失望的 | _________抑郁的| ___________ 沮丧的 7）其他类: _______内疚的 | _______羞耻的 | __________满足的 | _________ 迷惑的 | _______后悔的 | __________ 困惑的 | __________ 疲惫的 | _____________尴尬的 | ______________ 感激的 | ____________如释重负的 有灵动词: ______________抓住 ______________袭来 ______________________充满 ______________________掠过 _______________淹没；压倒 took hold of控制 ______________笼罩 ___________________涌出 _____________________被……代替 续写第一段 固定句第1句:情感描写 翻译练习 1.听到自己的团队赢得冠军的消息，Sarah心中涌起一阵强烈的兴奋，传遍全身。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.看到那些在寒风中挣扎的可怜孩子，这位善良的女士心中涌起一阵强烈的同情，弥漫全身。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.一看到走失的狗朝自己跑来，他就感到一阵释然。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 第2句:细节描写 （使用非谓语结构） 翻译练习 1.兴奋地挥舞着门票，她冲向火车站，大声喊着：“我要去见偶像啦！” ___________________________________________________________________________ 2.花了整整一周时间准备演讲，她站在台上时自信满满，毫无紧张感。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.受到电影里冒险故事的启发，男孩收拾好背包，小声告诉父母：“我想去徒步旅行。” ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.老人拄着拐杖慢慢前行，双手颤抖着，眼里满是对故乡的思念。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 固定句第3句:动作链推进 1.__________________________________________________________________________她走到窗边，拉开窗帘，凝视着外面静静飘落的雪花。 2._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________他抓起背包，冲出家门，挥手拦了一辆出租车去赶早班火车。 固定句第4句:细节描写 （使用倒装句二选一） 翻译练习 1.她刚打开门，一阵风就把桌上的文件吹掉了。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 2.音乐会刚一开始，外面就下起了大雨。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 第5句:过渡衔接 （使用时间状语从句或定语从句或形容词作状语） 翻译练习 1.当我们正沿着山间小路往前走时，突然听到不远处传来奇怪的脚步声。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 2.她攥着刚收到的神秘信件，站在原地愣了许久，困惑又好奇。 ___________________________________________________________________________3.他们在森林里迷了路，手机也没有信号，这让他们不得不寻找临时避难所。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写第二段 第1句 情感转变【固定句】 使用独立主格(with)+n+doing,一句话 泪水顺着我的脸颊流下，模糊了我的视线，我被抛入悲伤的深渊。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 笑意在他心底涌动，他朝母亲跑去。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 第2句:①使用not until倒装结构 【升级】: 直到河里的鱼都死了，村民们才意识到污染有多严重。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 或者②环境点经阳光透过窗帘洒进来，在相册静置的床铺上投下金色的光线。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________③对话或反应 Her hands trembled slightly as she opened it. "I never knew you kept these," she whispered.  情感释放，祖孙初次共情。 第3句:所感或者对话或反应 她打开相册时手微微颤抖，轻声说：“我从不知道你还留着这些。” __________________________________________________________________________第4-5句: 结局升华+难忘【固定句】 Having shared those memories again, Jake realized he didn’t need years to build a bond—just one meaningful moment. 体现成长与领悟 或者:所悟From this experience/story, I have learned that/we can learn that... 或者虚拟语气句 ①要不是有家人和老师的帮助，我不会意识到自己的错误，也不会改变对失败的态度。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ②Had it not been for + N, sb could/would (not) have done. Had it not been for the help from my family and teacher,I wouldn’t have realized my mistakes and changed my attitude towards failure. 或者用：__________________________________我意识到....... 那一天/这段经历如此难忘，会永远留在我的记忆里。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 这段经历在她身上留下了不可磨灭的印记，让她懂得了共情的美好与温柔手掌里的无声力量。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________或者强调句__________________________ 或者______________________________________________________(正如谚语所说), ..... 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 读后续写“十句五定法” 1 表示情绪的名词: 1）表示生气: anger | rage 愤怒 2）表示高兴: delight 高兴 | joy 高兴 | relief 欣慰 3）表示忧虑: anxiety | worry | concern | tension 紧张 4）表示害怕: fear 恐惧 | scare 惊吓 | fright 惊吓 | horror 畏惧 | terror 恐怖 5）表示激动: excitement 兴奋 | surprise/amazement 惊讶 6）表示伤心失望: sorrow 悲伤 | grief 悲伤 | disappointment 失望 | depression frustration 沮丧 | sadness 哀伤 | annoyance 烦恼 7）其他类: guilt 内疚 | shame 羞耻 | satisfaction 满足 | puzzlement 迷惑 | regret 后悔 | puzzlement/confusion 困惑 | tiredness/exhaustion 疲惫 | embarrassment 尴尬 | gratitude 感激 | relief 如释重负 | shame 羞愧/uncetainty不确定 有灵动词: seized/caught/struck抓住 swept/flooded/rushed over袭来 flooded over充满 ran through/passed through掠过 overwhelmed淹没；压倒 took hold of控制 enveloped笼罩 gave way to被……代替 well up涌出 ＋ sb 表示情绪的形容词: 1）表示生气: angry | annoyed | irritated 2）表示高兴: delighted | joyful | relieved 宽慰的 3）表示忧虑: anxious | worried | concerned | tense 4）表示害怕: scared | frightened 5）表示激动: excited 兴奋 | amazed 惊讶的 | astonished 6）表示伤心失望: sad | grieved 悲痛的 | disappointed 失望的 | depressed 抑郁的 frustrated 沮丧的 7）其他类: guilty 内疚的 | ashamed 羞耻的 | satisfied 满意的 | puzzled 困惑的 | regretful 后悔的 | confused 困惑的 | tired/exhausted 疲惫的 | embarrassed 尴尬 | grateful 感激的 有灵动词: seized/caught/struck抓住 swept/flooded/rushed over袭来 flooded over充满 ran through/passed through掠过 overwhelmed淹没；压倒 took hold of控制 enveloped笼罩 gave way to被……代替 well up涌出 in ＋ sb 翻译练习 一 1.听到自己的团队赢得冠军的消息，Sarah心中涌起一阵强烈的兴奋，传遍全身。 Upon hearing the news that her team had won the championship, Sarah felt a great sense of excitement welling up in her heart and surging through her. 2.看到那些在寒风中挣扎的可怜孩子，这位善良的女士心中涌起一阵强烈的同情，弥漫全身。 Upon seeing the poor children struggling in the cold, the kind lady felt a great sense of sympathy welling up in her heart and surging through her. 3.得知自己的辛勤付出终于换来了晋升，Emma心中涌起一阵强烈的成就感，充斥全身。 Upon learning that her hard work had finally paid off with a promotion, Emma felt a great sense of achievement welling up in her heart and surging through her. 4.一看到走失的狗朝自己跑来，他就感到一阵释然。 A sense of relief washed over him as soon as he saw his lost dog running toward him. 5.当她走进小时候读书的那间旧教室时，一股怀旧之情涌上心头。 A sense of nostalgia came over her the moment she walked into the old classroom where she had studied as a child. 6.清晨在安静的环境中开始练瑜伽时，她立刻感到一阵平静笼罩着自己。 A sense of calm enveloped her as soon as she started practicing yoga in the quiet morning. 翻译练习 二 1.兴奋地挥舞着门票，她冲向火车站，大声喊着：“我要去见偶像啦！” Waving the ticket excitedly, she rushed to the railway station, shouting, "I'm going to meet my idol!" 2.花了整整一周时间准备演讲，她站在台上时自信满满，毫无紧张感。 Having spent a whole week preparing for the speech, she stood on the stage full of confidence without any sense of nervousness. 3.受到电影里冒险故事的启发，男孩收拾好背包，小声告诉父母：“我想去徒步旅行。” Inspired by the adventure stories in the movie, the boy packed his backpack and whispered to his parents, "I want to go hiking." 4.老人拄着拐杖慢慢前行，双手颤抖着，眼里满是对故乡的思念。 The old man walked slowly with a crutch, with his hands trembling and his eyes filled with longing for his hometown. 固定句第3句:动作链推进 1.He walked to the window, opened the curtain, and stared at the snow falling gently outside.（她走到窗边，拉开窗帘，凝视着外面静静飘落的雪花。） 2. He grabbed his backpack, rushed out of the door, and hailed a taxi to catch the early train.（他抓起背包，冲出家门，挥手拦了一辆出租车去赶早班火车。） 3.那个孩子跑过院子，被一块石头绊倒，然后大哭起来。 The child ran across the yard, tripped over a stone, and burst into tears. 4.他们围坐在篝火旁，唱着老歌，大声笑着，分享着故事直到深夜。 They sat around the campfire, sang old songs, laughed loudly, and shared stories late into the night. 5.他站起身，整理了一下领带，清了清嗓子，然后开始向观众演讲。 He stood up, adjusted his tie, cleared his throat, and began his speech to the audience. 翻译练习 三 No sooner had my mother finished her performance than the audience broke into rapturous applause. 1.她刚打开门，一阵风就把桌上的文件吹掉了。 No sooner had she opened the door than a gust of wind blew the papers off her desk. 2.音乐会刚一开始，外面就下起了大雨。 No sooner had the concert started than it began to rain heavily outside. 3.他刚结束演讲，观众就爆发出掌声。 No sooner had he finished his speech than the audience burst into applause. 4.球队刚踢进第一个球，人群就疯狂欢呼起来。 No sooner had the team scored the first goal than the crowd cheered wildly. 翻译练习 四 1.当我们正沿着山间小路往前走时，突然听到不远处传来奇怪的脚步声。 We were walking along the mountain path when we suddenly heard strange footsteps not far away. 2.她攥着刚收到的神秘信件，站在原地愣了许久，困惑又好奇。 She held the mysterious letter she had just received, standing rooted for a long time, confused and curious. 3.他们在森林里迷了路，手机也没有信号，这让他们不得不寻找临时避难所。 They got lost in the forest and their mobile phones had no signal, which forced them to look for a temporary shelter. The villagers didn't realize how serious the pollution was until all the fish died in the river. Not until all the fish died in the river did the villagers realize how serious the pollution was. Exhausted/tired/cold as I was, I felt my time and effort worthwhile, for I have made my own contribution to XXX. $