高考英语读后续写扩句练习2 课件 -2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦书面表达（记叙文）专题，依据高考评价体系梳理了语言丰富度、内容逻辑、情感表达三大考查维度，通过近五年高考真题分析，明确“细节描写”占45%、“情感表达”占30%的高频考点分布，构建了从基础扩写到高阶表达的完整答题体系。 课件亮点在于“技巧分层+情境训练+素养融合”的备考策略，如以“邻里温情”故事为情境，运用分解动作、心理描写等扩写技巧，培养学生的语言能力和思维品质。提供“扩写模板库”和“易错表达警示”，通过真题变式训练，帮助学生掌握高分表达技巧，教师可据此实施精准教学，助力学生高效冲刺高考。

I lived in an old apartment complex where the walls were thin. For weeks，my new neighbor upstairs was keeping me awake every night between ten and midnight. What I heard was slow，forceful footsteps mixed with crying, as if someone were pacing with the weight of the world on shoulders. To cope with the noise，I would sink into the old rocking chair（摇椅）by the window. The rhythm somehow quieted my mind. But tonight，the noise was just unbearable. I posted in the building's group chat，“ Can the 3C neighbor keep it down after 10? ” Almost immediately， Lena，a cashier at a local market，replied，“Same here. Haven't slept well for weeks.” And Tom， who ran the secondhand shop on the corner，added，“ Don't they realize how loud it is? ” A few others responded，but 3C never did. I'd had enough. “ That's it ” I thought aloud，pulling on my slippers. “ I'm going up there! ” I stormed to the third floor，playing my angry speech in my head，“Keep it down! Some of us need to work tomorrow!” The moment the door opened，I blurted out（脱口面出），“Do you have any idea how much noise you're making?” But the rest of my prepared speech got stuck in my throat. A young woman stood there，eyes red，swaying（摇晃）gently back and forth in a desperate attempt to comfort a crying baby. The apartment behind her was humble－no dining table，no chairs，not even a lamp，only a mattress（床垫）and a few empty baby food packets on the floor. “  I'm so sorry，Madam，” she whispered，managing a weak smile，“I'm just trying to get her to sleep.” That was when my anger disappeared. A familiar rhythm surfaced in my mind as I saw her sway the baby tiredly. “I have a chair downstairs that might calm your baby，”I smiled softly. She looked up，eyes widening in disbelief.     读懂无声守护，写好邻里温情 Para1：“Let me fetch it for you，” I said and rushed downstairs. Para 2:The neighbors responded to my post and agreed to gather at 3C instantly. plot 1: I fetched the rocking chair. plot2 : The chair worked. Linking sentence: I posted the woman’s difficult situation in the group chat plot 1: The neighbors brought necessities. plot 2: The woman extended thanks Ending: Baby’s crying was replaced by the rhythm of the chair. 技巧1：使用形容词/副词 技巧2：使用介词短语 技巧3：使用非谓语动词(to do /doing /done) 技巧4：使用with 复合结构/独立主格结构 技巧5：使用从句 句子扩写 sentence expansion 1.0 1.The _______girl unwrapped her ______________________gift box. 2.__________________________, the girl unwrapped her gift box. 3. The girl unwrapped her gift box ____________________________ thrilled fancy/delicately decorated Astonished and overjoyed delightedly/eagerly/cautiously 技巧1：使用形容词/副词 ____________________, the girl unwrapped her gift box 技巧2：使用介词短语 Without hesitation With eager anticipation With great caution In surprise/astonishment Out of curiosity ... 1. ___________________________, the girl unwrapped her gift box. 2. ________________________, the girl unwrapped her gift box. 3. ____________________________, the girl unwrapped her gift box. 技巧3：使用非谓语动词(to do /doing /done) To figure out what was inside Exclaiming with excitement Overcome with excitement/delight _____________________, the girl unwrapped her gift box. 技巧4：使用with 复合结构/独立主格结构 With her hands trembling With her heart racing With her eyes twinkling Her palms sweating Her mouth open wide 定语从句 1.The girl unwrapped her gift box ___________________________________ 技巧5：使用从句 which was tied with a beautiful ribbon 状语从句 1.Hardly...when/ No sooner ...than 2.So...that 3.as 倒装 Hardly had the girl reached home when she unwrapped her gift box. So excited was the girl that she couldn’t wait to unwrap her gift box. Confused as she was, she still unwrapped her gift box. Astonished and overjoyed, the girl unwrapped her delicately decorated gift box which she had been longing for with great caution, her eyes sparkling with excitement. 句子扩写 Sentence expansion 2.0 The girl unwrapped her gift box. 技巧1：分解动作 hold breath → untie the ribbon → lift the lid grasp the box → tear off the paper → pull out reach for → tear open → take out... The girl unwrapped her gift box. 技巧1：分解动作 1.The girl reached for the gift box, tore open the wrapping paper, and took out the long-awaited present inside. 2.Holding her breath, the girl carefully untied the ribbon on the box and slowly lifted the lid to see what was inside. v1+v2+v3 doing, v1+v2 v1+v2,doing The girl unwrapped her gift box. 技巧2：心理描写 1.wondering /guessing/expecting /praying /feeling/imagining/ doubting/picturing/realizing/hoping/assuming... 2.emotions+consumed/overtook/seized/overwhelmed/ swept over/washed over/took hold of ....+sb The girl unwrapped her gift box. 技巧2：心理描写 wondering what was inside guessing who had sent this special gift expecting a big surprise awaiting her praying her wish would come true. feeling warmth flooding her heart. a wave of delight took hold of her a flood of thrills welling up inside her heart a mixture of expectation and curiosity overcame her ... The girl unwrapped her gift box. 技巧3：语言描写 说：exclaim/whisper/murmur/declare/gasp/cheer/laugh/scream... 自言自语：say/talk/think/murmur/whisper to oneself/think aloud... The girl unwrapped her gift box. 技巧4：环境烘托 1. the surroundings 2. the people nearby the sun/sunlight/breeze/ wind/ birds/flowers the room /the light/the smell.. their reactions The girl unwrapped her gift box. 技巧4：环境烘托 warm sunlight streaming/shining through the window the room bathed in golden sunlight birds singing sweetly outside a gentle breeze blowing softly cheerful laughter echoing/lingering in the warm room anticipation written on loved one’s face eager eyes fixed on her 句子扩写 Sentence expansion 2.0 技巧1：分解动作 技巧2：心理描写 技巧3：语言描写 技巧4：环境烘托 Holding her breath, the girl reached for the gift box, carefully tore open the wrapping and took out the gift, wondering what exactly was inside. “This is Artie,” she exclaimed in surprise, her smile lighting up the warm room. With her hands trembling slightly, the girl grasped the box, peeled off the paper and pulled out the gift, expectation and excitement crossing her mind. "It's incredible!" she let out a cry of delight, warm sunlight flooding the room. 即时练习 I fetched the rocking chair. 即时练习： I fetched the rocking chair. Anxious to lend a hand to the desperate woman and her crying baby, I pushed the door open, rushed to the rocking chair and carried it without the slightest hesitation. Heavy as it was, the image of the helpless woman instantly fueled my resolve, “She needs the chair”, thinking to myself, I gathered all my strength to take it upstairs. More practice The woman extended her thanks. $