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Introduce someone you admire
What have you got from the video?
a Jewish
a brilliant scientist
Nobel Prize for Physics
Theory of Relativity
Photoelectric Effect
Albert Einstein
What text type of this passage?
Exposition
B. Biography
C. Argumentation
D. Narration
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In order
time
The Man Who Changed our Understanding of the Universe
A biography is a written account of a person’s life. It includes:
Appearance & Personality
Life Experiences
Career & Achievements
Influence on Society
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应用文:
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Ordinary People:
不写宏大叙事,只写生活细节和人性温度
1. 外貌与神态 Appearance & Expressions
What they look like, how they act in the moment, small details on their face.
2. 品质与行为 Qualities & Actions
What they do in the story, and what their actions show about them.
3.对他人的影响 Impact on Others
How their words or actions make the main character feel or change.
4. 简单背景 Basic Background
Who they are (friend, stranger, etc.) and how they relate to the story.
①Albert Einstein,[ who is perhaps the greatest scientist in modern physics], is often considered one of the smartest men [who ever lived]. He made numerous contributions to the world, the most well-known being the general theory of relativity and the famous formula E=mc 2. Einstein was not only a genius; he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people.
1.make numerous contributions to 为...做出大量贡献
2.theory n.理论
3.relativity n.相对论
4.formula n.公式
5.genius n.天才
句①中第一个who引导的是非限制性定语从句,也是Albert Einstein的同位语,第二个who引导是限制性定语从句,修饰the smartest men。
Para 1. Introduction
Para 2: Early life & Education
This gentle genius was born in Germany on 14 March 1879. ②[When he was 16], he tried to enter university in Switzerland, but failed due to his low scores in the general part of the entrance exam, despite obtaining exceptional scores in maths and physics. After studying for another year, he managed to pass the exam, entering university in 1896 and graduating in 1900.
[新知词汇]
6.gentle adj.温柔的,文静的
[长难句式]
句①中when引导的是时间状语从句,but连接两个谓语动词tried和failed, despite...physics是介词短语。
[文化知识]
Switzerland(瑞士), 首都伯尔尼,位于中欧,北与德国接壤,东临奥地利和列支敦士登,南临意大利,西临法国。地处北温带。
Para 3: Career & Achievements
After two years of looking for work as a teacher, Einstein took a job as a clerk in the Swiss patent office. ③While working there, out of a strong passion for knowledge, he continued to study, earning a doctorate in physics in 1905. That same year, which was later recorded as a miracle year in science, he published four extraordinary physics papers. Following this, he gradually became famous throughout the world as the new Isaac Newton. After four years, he was able to quit his job at the patent office and enter research full-time at a university. In 1922, he was awarded the 1921 Nobel Prize for Physics for his explanation of the photoelectric effect.
[新知词汇]
7.patent n.专利,adj.有专利的
8.passion n.酷爱,激情
passionate adj.热情的,狂热的
9.doctorate n.博士学位
10.extraordinary adj.不一般的
11.gradually adv.逐渐地,逐步地
12.photoelectric adj.光电的
[长难句式]
句③中while working there是省略结构,while后省略了he was。earning a doctorate...是现在分词短 结果状语。
After two years of looking for work as a teacher, Einstein took a job as a clerk in the Swiss patent office. ③While working there, out of a strong passion for knowledge, he continued to study, earning a doctorate in physics in 1905. That same year, which was later recorded as a miracle year in science, he published four extraordinary physics papers. Following this, he gradually became famous throughout the world as the new Isaac Newton. After four years, he was able to quit his job at the patent office and enter research full-time at a university. In 1922, he was awarded the 1921 Nobel Prize for Physics for his explanation of the photoelectric effect.
句③中while working there是省略结构,while后省略了he was。earning a doctorate...是现在分词短 结果状语。
Para 4: Later Life
Circumstances changed in 1933, when Hitler came to power in Germany. Einstein, who was Jewish, found the doors of academic institutions closed to him. As a consequence he had to flee Germany. After spending time in Europe, he finally took up a position as a researcher at the Institute for Advanced Study in Princeton, USA. Following that, he continued to make great achievements in physics and mathematics.
[新知词汇]
13.come to power 掌权,上台
14. academic adj.学业的,学术的
academy n.研究院,学会
15. as a consequence 结果
16. take up a position担任,任职
17. insitute n.机构,机构建筑
institution n.机构,制度,习俗
Para 5: Appearance & Personality
To the public, he was seen as a slightly odd-looking but kind and funny man. ④He had a thick moustache and long white hair, [which sometimes stood on end [as though he had just received an electric shock]]. Although he was a genius, he sometimes forgot things, like his friends birthdays. But despite his peculiarities, he was loved by his friends and neighbours. There is even a story about how he helped a little girl who knocked on his door and asked for help with her homework. In fact, Einstein often encountered people on the street who would stop him and ask him to help explain things. After many such occasions, he finally started saying, “Pardon me! Sorry! Always I am mistaken for Professor Einstein!”
[新知词汇]
18. moustache n.胡子
19. peculiarity n.个性,特点
20.encounter v.遇到 n.邂逅
21. professor n.教授
[长难句式]
句④是复合句,which引导的是定语从句,该从句中又包含一个as though引导的方式状语从句。
On 18 April 1955, it was reported that Einstein had passed away, and the whole world mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist.
[新知词汇]
21. pass away 去世
22. mourn v.哀悼,忧伤
23. brilliant 聪明的
Para 6: Death & global legacy
Ordinary People:
不写宏大叙事,只写生活细节和人性温度
1. 外貌与神态 Appearance & Expressions
2. 品质与行为 Qualities & Actions
3.对他人的影响 Impact on Others
4. 简单背景 Basic Background
续写:先外貌→动作品质→影响感受→最后结尾补身份+升华,而不是开头介绍他是谁。
提示词: grey hair白发, warm wrinkles温暖的皱纹, gentle smile温和的笑容, walked towards me朝我走来
An old man with ______ walked towards me. ______ lined his face, and he gave me a ______.
提示词:spot看见,注意到, spread across the ground散落在地上
He ______ my books ______ the wet road in the rain.
提示词:bend down弯腰/aquat down蹲下, pick up 捡起, one by one逐一, anxiety焦虑, fade away慢慢消散
Slowly, he______and helped me _____. I felt my ____.
提示词:stranger passing by路过的陌生人, be willing to愿意, lend me a hand帮我一把, ordinary life平凡生活, make up my mind下定决心, pass warmth on传递温暖
He was only a ______, yet he ______. This little moment taught me that kindness lives in ______. I made up my mind to ____________.
An old man with grey hair walked towards me. Warm wrinkles lined his face, and he gave me a gentle smile. He spotted my books spread across the wet road in the rain. Slowly, he bent down and helped me pick them up one by one. I felt my anxiety fade away right away. He was only a stranger passing by, yet he was willing to lend me a hand. This little moment taught me that kindness lives in ordinary life. I made up my mind to pass warmth on.
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