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Unit 4
Space Exploration
Reading for Writing
Learning Objectives
to reflect on whether it is worthwhile to explore space;
to study the basic structure and language features of the argumentative essay;
to write about your own opinion about space exploration.
By the end of this class, we will be able
NASA may spend 25,383.7 million dollars on space exploration in 2025.
However, the earth is still facing...
poverty
hunger
pollution
disease
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Why?
1
2
3
4
5
2. What is the issue(议题)?
1. What genre is this article?(题材)
A. narration
B. exposition
C. argumentaion
Is exploring space a waste or not?
3. What’s the author’s attitude towards space exploration?
A. Indifferent. B. Supportive.
C. Negative. D. Objective.
Reading
1 Why are some people against space exploration?
2 What has space exploration done for food production?
3 What did the pictures of Earth from space make people realise?
4 How does space exploration benefit the products that people use nowadays?
Read and Answer
1
2.1
2.3
3
2.2
Underline the sentence that
repeats the writer's opinion in the last paragraph.
Read the first paragraph and
underline the different opinions about space exploration.
Find the three topic sentences
that summarise the writer's arguments about space exploration.
Tip: Topic sentence
is usually the first or
the last sentence.
Para1
Para2
Para3
Para4
Para5
Firstly, exploring space has already made a difference in the fight against world hunger.
Secondly, space exploration has already promoted technological improvements that benefit us all.
Finally, sending astronauts into space has helped people to think about the world's problems and even to find ways to solve them.
Some people argue that we should stop.... However, others feel this is a shallow view...
In closing, exploring space provides
the world with many different benefits.
Thesis statement
(主题句/中心论点)
发挥了重要作用
Argument(论点1)
推动了科技进步
Argument(论点2)
Argument(论点3)
寻找解决办法
Read for Structure
Rephrase the thesis statement
(重申观点)
Countries around the globe are spending billions of dollars and a lot of time on various space missions, whether to Mars or other planets much further away. Some people argue that we should stop wasting time and money exploring space. Instead, we should feed the world's poor and find immediate solutions to other problems, such as pollution and fatal diseases. However, others feel this is a shallow view which fails to realize how exploring space helps us.
View 1
View 2
Tip1: To make our article more objective, we should express different opinions about the topic.
1... think that..
2... point out that...
3... hold the idea that..
4... declare that ..
5... suggest that..
Para. 1
Read for Language Features
How to state different opinions?
Some people argue that…
However, others feel this is a shallow view…
Firstly, exploring space has already made a difference in the fight against world hunger. It has directly resulted in the many satellites that now orbit Earth. A number of the satellites record data on land and weather patterns. Then the data is transmitted to scientists on Earth After careful analysis, the scientists can provide useful recommendations and advice for farmers. As a result, space-based science has helped farming in its efforts to grow enough food to feed Earth's increasing population.
Secondly, space exploration has already promoted technological improvements that benefit us all. High-end products around the world are made to a higher standard now because of advanced technology which was first created to meet the requirements for space exploration. For example, space technologies have helped the research and development of diffcerent types of new material. They have also helped companies make better heart monitors and other machines that doctors regularly use. Today, space technologies are widely used in all kinds of industries, and everyday products such as GPS, memory foam pillows, and smartphone cameras are changing our lives.
Finally, sending astronauts into space has helped people to think about the world's problems and even to find ways to solve them. Seeing pictures of our planet as an island in a black sea made people realise that our planet's resources are limited. In order to provide for such a rapidly increasing population, scientists are trying to find other planets that could one day be our new home. The greatest attention at present is on Mars because it is closer to Earth, In the future, humans may live on both planets.
arguments
Tip2: Using linking words can make an essay more logical and coherent.
How did the author show the supporting details?
By explaining why
By giving example
By describing facts
In closing, exploring space provides the world with many different benefits. Therefore, it should continue so as to provide new and better solutions to people's short-term and long-term problems.
Para. 5
Tip3: Repeating the statement can echo author’s opinion.
How to rephrase your opinion?
表示总结:
in short; in brief; in conclusion;
in a/one word; to sum up;
all in all; on the whole; in general
增强语气:
There’s no doubt that…
There’s no denying that…
Summary
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Instead of wasting large amounts of money and time, space exploration provides more advantages for us.
Firstly, thanks to ____________________(基于太空的科学), exploring space has played a key role in________________________________ (解决地球上不断增加的人口温饱问题). Secondly, space exploration has truly ____________________
_____________(推动了科技进步) . With the high standards of space technology, lots of__________________________(高端产品大量涌现) in all kinds of industries, benefiting us all. Finally, exploring space makes us ______________________
_______________ (更好地理解世界上的问题) and the outer environment, making it possible to_____________(找到解决方法).
__________(总而言之), space exploration ___________________________ (为人类带来更多好处). Therefore, more attention should be paid to it.
the space-based science
feeding Earth’s increasing population
promoted technological
high-end products spring up
better understand the
find solutions
In closing
brings more benefits for humans
improvements
world’s problems
Discussion
Are these arguments for or against exploring space?
Put them in the table below.
A There are a lot of unsolved mysteries on Earth. So why are we going into space to explore?
B It is necessary to find a new home for people in space, as the resources on Earth will run out.
C I cannot understand spending all this money on expensive research
and experiments when so many people need food.
D Exploring space encourages scientists to improve technology that can
help people in other ways, too.
Against
For
B
D
A
C
Is Exploring Space A Waste of Time And Money?
for space exploration
It helps us learn more about the universe and find new resources.
Space research can improve new technology, such as GPS and weather forecast.
It may offer humans a new home in space if the Earth is no longer suitable to live on.
It encourages international cooperation and inspires young people to study science.
against space exploration
It costs too much money which could
be used to solve problems on Earth,
like poverty and pollution.
Space travel is very dangerous and may cause serious accidents.
It takes lots of time and energy with uncertain results.
It may bring space rubbish and pollute the space environment.
Writing
最近,你班同学就“太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况,并谈谈自己的看法。
30%的同学认为 70%的同学认为
1.不值得探索 1.值得探索
2.离我们及我们的日常生活太遥远 2.已使用卫星进行通讯传播、天气预报
3.浪费金钱,这些金钱本可用来解决地球上的饥饿、污染等问题 3.寻找新家,解决地球能源短缺问题
议论文
体裁:议论文,太空探索
人称:第三人称、第一人称
时态:一般现在时为主
要点:1. 论点—太空是否值得探索?
2. 论证
2.1 分论点1+细节
2.2 分论点2+细节
2.3 分论点3+细节
3. 结论
Arguments
…has made a difference in …
It is undeniable that...
There is no doubt that...
Not only...but also...
It is our responsibility to...
Examples:
For example
A clear example is...
Take... as an example
Phrases
Politics: strengthen international cooperation
Technology: accelerates scientific breakthroughs...
Employment: creates high-skilled job opportunities...
Education: inspires younger generations to...
inspires movies and art...
population: address overpopulation risks...
Farming: improve crop monitoring...
Safety: monitor natural disaster from space...
Natural Resources: find new energy sources...
People’s Well-Being: Maps apps make life easier...
Housing: design eco-friendly homes...
Para 1 How to introduce the topic?
1)现象+争议
Nowadays/ Recently, 现象/话题......However, whether....has caused a heated discussion.
People hold different opinions on this issue.
2)对比+引出话题
With the development of..., ...have/has become very common. But when it comes to whether...., people’s ideas vary from person to person.
3) 问题式开头
Should ...? This question has been widely discussed in ..... Some people believe that..., while others argue that...
1. Some/Most/Few of them hold the opinion that...
他们中的一些/大多数/少数人认为……。
2. Some/Most/Few of them are in favor of/ for the idea that...
他们中的一些/大多数/少数人赞成……的观点。
3. People who are opposed to/ against the idea think that...
反对这个想法的人认为……。
4. However, the flip side of the coin is…
然而;另一个相反的观点是……。
Para 2 How to state different opinions?
表示递进关系:
In the first place; first of all; to begin with; firstly;
what’s more; furthermore; moreover; besides; in addition
Last but not least; Equally important is that...
what's worse; to make matters worse; worse still
表示列举事实:
such as; for example/instance; take ... for example;
表示解释:
that is to say; in other words
如何衔接论据?
1. As far as I am concerned,... ……就我个人而言
2. From my perspective,... ……在我看来
3. From my point of view,... ……在我看来
4. In my opinion,... ……依我所见
5. It’s my opinion that+句子. 我的看法是……
6. Taking all factors into consideration, we may come to the conclusion that...
把所有的因素加以考虑,我们可以得出这样的结论……。
7. In a word, only through... can we have a bright future.
总之,只有通过……我们才能有一个光明的未来。
Para 3 How to express your own opinion?
Is exploring space worthwhile?
Recently, students in our class have had a heated discussion on whether space is worth exploring. Students’ opinions differ.
30% of us argue that space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is too distant from us and our daily life and is a waste of money. The money spent on space exploration could have been used to solve the earth’s other problems such as starvation and pollution. On the other hand, 70% advocate exploring space because we have enjoyed a lot of benefits by doing so, such as using satellites for communication and weather forecast. What’s more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. Finding new resources through space exploration also contributes to alleviating the problem of energy shortages on the earth.
As far as I am concerned, it is worthwhile to explore space. Not only can it help tackle many problems on the earth, but it enables us to know about new planets and even find a new home in the future.
Exchange drafts with your partner. Use the checklist to give feedback
on your partner’s draft.
✔ Does the introduction state the topic?
✔ Does the introduction express different opinions about the topic?
✔ Does the body give arguments with suitable supporting information?
✔ Does the closing express the writer's opinion and end properly?
✔ Are there any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors?
✔ Are there any transitional words to make the passage more coherent?
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