内容正文:
应用文话题写作:个人成长+建议信(A Letter of Advice)
一、语篇结构:
Para.1 背景+写信目的
Para.2 提出建议+理由(what&why)
Para.3 表达期望/祝愿
二、话题语言:
Para.1 背景+ 目的
(1) I'm sorry to hear that (you are having trouble in...) Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听到你在 方面有困难。这样的问题很常见。或许以下建议会有所帮助。
(2) Learning that you are upset/anxious about... I would like to make some constructive suggestions to help you.得知你对 感到沮丧 / 焦虑,我想提出一些建设性的建议来帮助你。
(3) You have asked me for advice concerning , and I’ll make some suggestions here.你向我征求关于 的建议,在此我给出一些建议。
Para.2 建议+理由
2.1 表达同理心
(1) I know well how it feels to .../I know you have trouble in .../It happens to everyone.我很清楚 的感觉。/ 我知道你在 方面有困难。/ 这在每个人身上都可能发生。
(2) Everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong.每个人都会有那么一段时期,事情似乎都不顺利。
2.2 提出建议
Why don't you/You’d better ...?
It couldn't be better if you could ...
I think it would be beneficial if you could ... It will make a difference if you ...
It's advisable/ recommended to do
You may/ might as well do ...
You may consider doing...
From my point of view, it would be wise/ reasonable/ a good idea to do ...
If I were you, I would...
Para.3 期待/祝愿
I do hope my suggestions can be of some help.
Hopefully, you will give my suggestions some thought. I hope my suggestions prove helpful to you.
Wish you a smooth adjustment to high school life! All the best!
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友罗伊(Roy)正在中国某城市做交换生,他因不适应高中生活而苦恼,所以发来邮件向你求助。请你用英语给他回复一封电子邮件,内容主要包括:
1.表示安慰; 2.你的建议。
一、审题分析
(1) 审话题:帮助英国笔友适应中国高中生活。
(2) 审写作体裁:电子邮件,属于书信类应用文,可视为建议信。
(3) 审人称:以第一人称 “I” 和第二人称 “you” 为主,在提出建议时可适当使用第三人称。
(4) 审时态:主要使用一般现在时,在描述可能的过去经历或感受时可适当使用一般过去时。
(5) 审写作内容:
表示安慰:理解罗伊的苦恼,表达对他的关心和共情。
提出建议:从学习、社交、生活习惯等方面给出具体可行的建议。
二、写作步骤
开头:
表达收到邮件的心情,对罗伊的求助表示理解和关心。
简单提及自己也曾有过类似经历(如果有),增强共鸣。
主体:(自己多结合实际提出一些合理的建议)
学习方面的建议:
① 制定合理的学习计划,合理安排时间。
② 积极参与课堂互动,勇敢提问。
③ 利用学校资源,如图书馆、辅导中心等。
社交方面的建议:
① 参加学校社团或俱乐部,结交志同道合的朋友。 ② 主动与同学交流,了解中国文化和习俗。
结尾:
① 再次表达对罗伊的鼓励和祝福。 ② 期待他的好消息,保持联系。
三、常用话题写作语块(个人成长之校园生活)
School life(校园生活)
1 、交流生 2 、校园生活 3、上课
4 、主修英语 5 、与 合作
6 、获得( 的)一等奖 7 、毕业于(某学校)(某专业)
8 、取得巨大/快速的进步 9 、在 方面有天赋
10 、赞扬某人 11、做演讲
12 、申请\获得奖学金 13、适应
14 、做...事情有困难 15、跟上同学
16 、遇到志同道合的人 17 、对某人有益
Learning approaches(学习方法)
1 、好好利用/充分利用
2 、图书馆可为某人使用 = 某人可使用
3 、查字典 4、做笔记
Aims(学习目标)
1 、开拓视野 2 、培养某人做某事的能力
2 、为...打下坚实的基础 4 、为未来做好准备
5 、丰富校园生活
After-school activities(课外活动)
1 、参加 2、报名参加 3 、加入学生会
4 、加入英语演讲俱乐部 5 、志愿者工作
Attitude to study(学习态度)
1 、养成... 的习惯 2 、专注于 3、投身于
4 、对...有热情,热衷于 5 、不遗余力做某事
6 、面对困难坚持不懈 7 、对 担忧
8 、专门为交流生设计
四、句子翻译
1 、很抱歉听到你难以适应高中生活。
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2 、我非常理解你感到焦虑和困惑,因为从所周知从初中过渡到高中确实是一个很大的挑战。
3 、我强烈建议你报名参加一个合适的课程,这会让你更容易跟上其他同学。(可以运用的句式有:用名从,定从增加结果细节)
4 、参加学校活动、俱乐部或体育运动是有益的,在这些地方你可以遇到志同道合的人。(用定语从句)
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五、链接成文(写在作文纸)
应用文话题写作:个人成长+建议信(A Letter of Advice)参考答案: School life(校园生活)
1. an exchange student 10. Speak highly of sb/ sing the praises of sb
2. campus life 11. make /deliver/ give a speech
3. have classes/attend classes 12. apply for/win a scholarship
4. major in English 13. adapt to
5. team up with/cooperate with... 14. have difficulty in doing sth.
6. win the first prize of... 15. keep up with classmates
7. graduate from... (school) majoring in... 16. meet like-minded souls
8. make huge/great/rapid progress 17. be beneficial to sb.
9. have a talent for/gift for
Learning approaches(学习方法)
1. make good use of/take full advantage of 3. look up words in a dictionary
2. The library is available to sb. = sb have access to 4. take notes
the library
Aims (学习目标)
1. broaden one's horizons 7. take part in/participate in
2. develop one's ability to do sth. 8. sign up for
3. lay a solid foundation for... 9. join the students ’union
4. get ready for/ get well-prepared for the future 10. join the English speech club
5. enrich campus life 11. volunteer work
6. After-school activities(课外活动)
Attitude to study (学习态度)
1. form the habit of... 5. spare no effort to do sth.
2. focus on.../be concentrated on.../be absorbed in/put 6. persist in the face of difficulties one’s heat into 7. be worried/anxious about
3. be devoted/dedicated/committed to... 8. be specially designed for exchange students
4. be enthusiastic about.../be passionate about.../be
keen on
翻译句子:
1. I'm very sorry to hear that you have difficulty in adapting to high school life.
2. I understand very well that you feel anxious and confused. As we all know, going from junior high school to high school is really a big challenge.
3. ① I strongly recommend that(宾从) you sign up for a suitable course. If you do so, it will be easier for you to keep up with other students.
② What I strongly recommend is that you sign up for a suitable course,which will be easier for you to keep up with other students.
4. Participating in school activities, clubs or sports is beneficial to you where you can meet like-minded people.
链接成文
I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty adapting to the life in senior high school.(说明事由)My suggestions are as follows, which I hope will benefit you. (建议信功能句)
I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel confused because going from junior high school to senior high school is really a big challenge.(表达共情) I highly recommend that you should sign up for a suitable course, which will make it easy for you to keep up with other students. Moreover, it is a great idea to participate in some extra-curricular activities clubs or sports where not only can you meet like-minded people but you can also build up your strength.
I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your high school life.(希望建议有所帮助+表达祝愿)
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