专题 10 书面表达（专项训练）五升六年级英语暑假专项提升（外研版一起）

专题10 书面表达 · 内容导航 · 01：答题技巧 02：小试牛刀 答题技巧 一、审题 “三看”（动笔前必做） 看话题：确定写人 / 事 / 景 / 物（本册高频：变化、过去经历、季节、家庭、旅行）。 看时态： ①　过去（was/were, did, had, lived）：变化、昨天 / 上周 / 童年。 ②　现在（am/is/are, do/does, have）：现状、爱好、习惯。 ③　将来（will, be going to）：计划、假期、梦想。 看要求：词数（40–60 词）、要点（不少于 5 句）、格式（邮件 / 短文 / 书信）。 二、结构 “三段式”（万能模板） 开头（1 句）：点题，简单介绍背景。 例：My life is changing. / My favourite season is spring. 中间（3–4 句）：按顺序写要点，用连接词（and, but, then, because, so）串联。 变化类：In the past… Now…（过去→现在对比） 经历类：First… Then… Finally…（时间顺序） 结尾（1 句）：总结 / 感受 / 愿望。 例：I’m happy. / I love it very much. 三、语法 “四不错”（扣分重灾区） 时态不乱变：全文统一时态，过去式通篇用过去式。 主谓要一致：He likes… / They are… 名词单复数：a book → two books；some people 动词形式对：过去式（go→went）；现在进行时（playing） 四、加分 “小技巧” 用本册核心词：change, live, study, different, favourite, season, travel, family。 用简单句 + 基础连接词，不写长难句，避免语法错误。 书写工整：字母间距均匀，大小写正确，标点规范。 检查 “三步”：时态→要点→拼写，确保无漏写、错写。 五、书面表达核心内容（Module 1–10） Module1（今昔职业・过去 was/were） 技巧：前后对比，before 写过去，now 写现在 万能句：Before…was… Now…is… 范文骨架：My mum was…before. She worked… Now she is… Module2（三餐 + 就餐时间・现 + 过去） 技巧：usually 写日常（现在时），yesterday 写昨天（过去时） 万能：I usually have…at… Yesterday I had… Module3（图书馆 / 藏书・have got/can） 技巧：先说拥有，再说能做什么 万能：I have got… In the library, I can… Module4（读书 + 四季・过去 + 现在） 分两种：①读书：Did…? I read…yesterday. ②季节：My favourite season is… I can… Module5（物品归属・物主代词 mine/yours/hers） 技巧：形物代 + 名词 = 名物代，Your bag=Yours 万能：My…is… Mine is… Your…is broken. Module6（参观景点・将来 will + 过去 was） 技巧：计划用 will，回忆感受用 was 万能：I will visit… We’ll see… It was amazing. Module7（作息时间・三单 + will） 技巧：every day 用三单 goes，将来回家用 will be 万能：…goes to work at… He will be home at… Module8（求助 + 做手工・Will+made） 求助：Will you help me? Yes,I will. 手工：I made…yesterday. Module9（游玩购物・全过去式） 技巧：全句动词变过去式（go-went/buy-bought/laugh-laughed） 万能：Last…we went… We laughed…Mum bought… Module10（打包行李、海边度假・过去式） 技巧：What did…? I put… I played… 话题：一次旅行经历（过去时）、假期计划（将来时）。 必背句型： I went to Beijing last summer. I visited the Great Wall. I will go to Shanghai tomorrow. I will visit the Bund. 小试牛刀 1、 请仔细阅读下面有关Jenny一日三餐的信息，并根据表格内容完成Jenny写给英国朋友Anna的电子邮件。 要求:1.根据表格信息描述,可以展开合理想象; 2.用词准确，语意连贯，书写规范； 3.不少于5句话，开头已给出，不计入总句数。 Meal When What Where breakfast 7:00 milk and bread home lunch 12:00 vegetables,meat,rice school dinner 6:30 fish,rice,vegetables home Dear Anna, I'm very well. And how are you? I know English people usually have breakfast at 7 o'clock._____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jenny 二、根据图片提示，写一写李华上个周末做了什么，以及他这个周末的计划。 Last weekend This weekend 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，时态正确，不少于 5句话。 三、分享你的 “四季最爱”！以 “My Favourite Season” 为题，写下你最喜欢的季节，说说喜欢它的理由和相关趣事，让伙伴们一起感受你的四季热爱吧～ 要求：1. 时态正确，语句通顺，用词准确，书写认真；2. 可以适当发挥；3. 书写工整，50 词左右。 Seasons Weather Clothes Activities Spring warm, windy... jacket, shirt... fly a kite, go for a hike... Summer hot, rainy... shorts, dress... go swimming, ride a bike... Autumn cool, windy... coat, jeans... have a picnic, play football... Winter cold, snowy... down jacket（羽绒服）, sweater... go skating, play with the snow... My Favourite Season ____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、作为 “跨国生活观察营” 的一员，Tracy 需要向同学们介绍家人从英国到中国后的职业变化。请以 Tracy 的身份，根据表格提示完成介绍。 要求：1. 书写规范，语句通顺；2. 不少于 50 词，开头已给出，不计入单词总数。 Father Mother Sister Brother In the UK Reporter Seller Flute player Pupil In China Teacher Housewife Policewoman Middle school student _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 五、根据信息提示，写出Lanlan昨天三餐的情况，交流周的最后一项任务是提交“我的美食日记”。Lanlan已经整理好了自己昨天三餐的信息，请你帮她把这些信息写成一篇完整的英语短文，和中外小伙伴分享吧！ 要求： 1.时态准确，语句通顺； 2.包含所给内容，可适当发挥； 3.书写工整；4.50词左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 六、假设你是李伟，学校组织同学们本周末去城市图书馆(City Library)参加社会实践活动。请根据下面的表格信息，介绍一下本次活动的相关要求。 要求：1.内容清晰，结构完整，语意连贯，书写规范； 2.不少于 5 句话，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。 Place Time Rules Homework playground 8:30 can/can't write a report Hello, everyone. This weekend we will go to City Library. We will_______________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________We will have a great weekend. 七、某报社暑假期间将要举办青少年英语夏令营活动。假如你是陈明，请根据下面的提示，用英语 写一篇自我介绍报名参加此次活动。 要求：1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名； 3.50 词左右。 Name 陈明 Age 11 School 新华小学 Hobby 读书，打篮球，游泳 Favourite food 鱼，三明治，香蕉 Favourite season 夏天 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 八、Tom上个寒假去了西安,请根据提示信息帮Tom写一段游记,需要包括所到城市、交通工具、 景物、事件和感受等信息。 Transportation(交通工具)：train,car,plane... Be famous for(因……出名)：the Terracotta Army（兵马俑） Activities(活动)：painted great pictures, made a new friend... Feelings(感受）：proud,sad，happy... Tom's winter holiday ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 九、请你根据下面表格中的信息，以“My mother”为题写一篇小短文。 Ten years ago Now Go to work every evening This weekend Go to Beijing two hours 要求：1.时态准确，语言通顺，逻辑清晰； 2.包含所有信息，可适当发挥； 3.书写工整，不少于6句话。 My mother ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 十、下面是Anna制作京剧面具的图示，请你根据提示为图片配上相应的制作说明吧！ 提示词：Beijing Opera face, cut, tie, wear... Yesterday, I made a Beijing Opera mask.____________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、Jenny 的一日三餐（电子邮件） Dear Anna, I'm very well. And how are you? I know English people usually have breakfast at 7 o'clock. I have breakfast at 7 too. I have milk and bread for breakfast at home. I have lunch at 12 o'clock at school. I eat vegetables, meat and rice. I have dinner at 6:30 at home. I have fish, rice and vegetables. I like Chinese food very much. Yours, Jenny 【解析】时态：一般现在时（日常习惯） 要点：三餐时间、食物、地点全覆盖 句型：have … for + 三餐 二、李华上个周末 & 这个周末计划 Last weekend, Li Hua cleaned his room and read a book. He watched TV too. He was happy. This weekend, he is going to play basketball. He will visit his grandparents and fly a kite. He will have a good time. 【解析】过去：last weekend → cleaned, read, watched 将来：this weekend → will / be going to 结构：先过去、再将来，时态清晰 三、My Favourite Season（以夏天为例） My Favourite Season My favourite season is summer. It is hot and sunny. I can wear shorts and T-shirts. I can go swimming and eat ice cream. I can also ride my bike in the park. I love summer very much. 【解析】结构：季节→天气→衣服→活动 时态：一般现在时 词数：约 50 词，符合要求 四、Tracy 家人职业变化（英国→中国） Hello, everyone. I'm Tracy. My family has different jobs in China and in the UK. My father was a reporter in the UK. Now he is a teacher. My mother was a seller. Now she is a housewife. My sister was a flute player. Now she is a policewoman. My brother was a pupil. Now he is a middle school student. We love our life in China. 【解析】核心：before → now 对比 时态：一般过去时 + 一般现在时 要点：表格信息全覆盖 五、Lanlan 昨天三餐（美食日记） Yesterday, Lanlan had three meals. She had breakfast at 8:00. She ate bread and milk. She had lunch at 12:30. She had a sandwich, chips and an apple. She had dinner at 6:00. She ate fish, vegetables and rice. They were delicious. 【解析】时态：一般过去时（yesterday） 句型：had … for breakfast/lunch/dinner 要点：时间 + 食物全覆盖 六、城市图书馆活动介绍 Hello, everyone. This weekend we will go to City Library. We will meet on the playground at 8:30. We can read books and do our homework. We can't talk loudly or eat food in the library. We will write a report about the library. We will have a great weekend. 【解析】时态：一般将来时 will 要点：时间、地点、规则、作业全覆盖 句型：We will… / We can… / We can’t… 七、陈明自我介绍（夏令营） Hello, everyone! My name is Chen Ming. I am 11 years old. I am from Xinhua Primary School. I like reading books, playing basketball and swimming. My favourite food is fish, sandwiches and bananas. My favourite season is summer. I want to join the summer camp. Thank you! 【解析】时态：一般现在时 要点：姓名、年龄、学校、爱好、食物、季节全覆盖 八、Tom 的西安寒假游记 Tom's winter holiday Last winter holiday, Tom went to Xi’an. He went there by train. Xi’an is famous for the Terracotta Army. He visited it and took many photos. He painted great pictures and made a new friend. He was very happy and proud. He had a lovely time. 【解析】时态：一般过去时 要点：城市、交通、景点、活动、感受全覆盖 九、My mother（十年前→现在→本周末） My mother Ten years ago, my mother was a worker. She worked in a factory. Now she is a nurse. She goes to work every evening. She is very busy. This weekend, she will go to Beijing. It will take two hours by plane. I love my mother very much. 【解析】三段时态：过去 → 现在 → 将来 要点：十年前职业、现在职业、本周末计划全覆盖 十、Anna 制作京剧面具 Yesterday, I made a Beijing Opera mask. First, I drew a face on the paper. Then I cut the paper with scissors. Next, I coloured it red and black. At last, I tied a string to it. I can wear it now. It was very beautiful. 【解析】时态：一般过去时 顺序：First → Then → Next → At last 关键词：cut, tie, wear 全部用到 第 1 页 共 8 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $