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Unit 7 A Good Read Section B(3a3c)Writing 第七课时
写作课教学设计
一、文本分析
1. 文本类型
本课以范文研读、结构提炼、列提纲、动笔写作为主线,是读范文 — 析框架 — 列提纲 — 实操写作一体化写作课。依托范文拆解读书报告写作要素,由输入过渡到输出,落实读书报告三段式写作,实现积累句型、搭建框架、独立成文,形成 “研读 — 归纳 — 构思 — 写作” 学习闭环。
2. 文本结构
①范文研读(3a):阅读范文,匹配写作五大要素,拆分三段行文结构;
②素材梳理(3b):借助表格从简介、情节、感悟三方面整理写作素材;
③完整写作(3c):结合提纲与积累句型,独立完成读书报告。
3. 核心信息
①范文素材:《The Old Man and the Sea》;
②写作要点:书籍信息、故事情节、阅读感悟与推荐;
③核心技能:划分文章结构、梳理写作提纲、三段式英文书评写作; ④主题:品读经典,学会好书推荐,养成读后写书评的好习惯。
4. 语言特点
①时态分层:过去时介绍作者成书,现在时简述故事,现在完成时表达阅读感受;
②多用连接词串联内容;
③重点词汇:recommend, popular, succeed, character, fisherman; ④语篇功能:介绍书籍、概括情节、抒发感悟、推荐书目。
二、教学内容
1.重点词汇:recommend, popular, succeed, character, fisherman, inspiration, introduction, opinion, structure, tense。
2.重点句型:
① 开篇Introduction: My favourite book is... / It was written by... / The book became popular...
② 叙事Story: The main character is... / One day, he... / Finally, he...
③ 推荐Opinion: This book has taught me... / I'm inspired by... / I strongly recommend this book because...
3.技能目标:
① 能识别读书报告的五个要素和三段式结构。
② 能使用表格梳理写作思路。
③ 能在写作中正确使用不同时态。
④ 能完成一篇结构完整、内容充实的读书报告。
4.情感目标:
① 学习《老人与海》中 “人可以被毁灭,但不能被打败” 的硬汉精神。
② 培养阅读经典、分享好书的兴趣和习惯。
三、核心素养目标
1. 语言能力
① 学生能够掌握并运用本课所学的重点词汇和句型。
② 能够在写作中根据不同部分(引言、故事、观点)正确使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。
③ 能够完成一篇结构清晰、内容完整的英文读书报告。
2. 文化意识
① 通过阅读《老人与海》,了解美国文学经典及其蕴含的文化精神。
② 鼓励学生阅读和分享自己喜爱的中外名著,拓宽国际视野,增强文化自信。
3. 思维品质
① 通过分析范文结构,培养逻辑思维和篇章组织能力。
② 通过提炼个人感悟和推荐理由,培养批判性思维和独立思考能力。
4. 学习能力
① 掌握 “分析范文 - 提炼结构 - 梳理提纲 - 动笔写作” 的写作方法。
② 养成阅读后进行思考和总结,并乐于与他人分享的学习习惯。
四、教学重难点
1.教学重点
① 掌握读书报告的三段式结构(Introduction, Story, Opinion)。
② 学习并运用各部分的核心句型。
③ 完成个人读书报告的写作。
2.教学难点
① 在写作中准确、恰当地切换不同时态。
② 将个人感悟与故事内容自然结合,使推荐理由更具说服力。
五、教学过程
Step 1 Lead-in & Introduction
1.导入:展示《老人与海》的封面,提问:“Look at this book cover. What can you see? What book is it? Who is the writer?” 引导学生回答。
2.引出课题:提出问题:“If you want to introduce this great book to your friends, what should you write? How to write a book report for it?” 引出本课主题 “Book Report Writing”。
Step 2: Analyze the Sample(3a,3b)
1.头脑风暴:提问:“What parts can be included in a story book report?” 引导学生思考并回答,如书名、作者、情节、人物、感悟等。
2.让学生阅读并将 A-E 五个要素与范文段落进行匹配。核对答案:A、D、E、B、C。
3.师生梳理三段结构:Introduction→Main story→Opinion & recommendation;
4. 提炼各板块万能句型,分类板书,集体朗读,口头仿写练习。
Paragraphs
Items
Sample writing(3a)
My Report
Para 1: Introduction时态:一般现在时(Simple present tense);一般过去时(Simple past tense)
1. book title
My favourite book is The Old Man and the Sea
2. the writer3. When / Where the story was written
It was written in 1952 by the American writer Ernest Hemingway.
4. How popular the book is.
The book became popular very quickly. It won the Pulitzer Prize in 1953.
Para 2: Story时态:一般现在时(Simple present tense)常用连接词: but, when, finally, one day 等
1. the main character(s)
The main character(s) is a fisherman who hasn’t caught anything for months.
2. the main events
One day he …, but he … He finally …, but he can’t . When …, …
Para 3: Lessons, opinion/ feeling, recommendation时态:现在完成时(Present perfect tense),一般现在时(Simple present tense)
1. lessons from the book
This book has taught me (not) to give up or doubt myself. I’m inspired by how hard the fisherman fights. As Hemingway said, “Man is not made for defeat. A man can be destroyed but not defeated.”
2. your feelings
Even though I’ve already read the book three times, I’m not tired of it yet.
3. your
If you’ve never read Ernest Hemingway, I recommend this book.
Part
Expression
Introduction
- My favourite book is ... Of all the books I’ve read, ... is my favourite.- When it comes to books, ... is my top choice. This book tells the story of ... / It is a book about ...- The book focuses on ... ...
Story
- The main character is ... who ...- This story happens / is set in ... and is about ...- First, ... / Then, ... / Next, ... The climax of the story happens when ...- The most exciting / intense part is when ... ...
Opinion
After reading this book, I felt ... / This book has taught me ... I’m inspired by ... / I was deeply moved by ... When I finished reading the book, I couldn’t help thinking about ... As ... said / the saying goes, ... It provides a lot of useful knowledge about ... I strongly recommend this book to everyone because ... Don’t miss this wonderful book. It will bring you ...
Step3 Make notes(3b)
1.学生自选读过的书籍(或利用P66,1b中的The Secret Garden素材 ),完成上面表格,梳理书名、人物、情节、感悟;
2.同桌互查,互相补充写作素材。
参考范文:
My favourite book is The Secret Garden. It was written in 1909 by Frances Hodgson Burnett. The book became very popular and is still one of the greatest books for children.
The main characters are Mary, Mr Craven (Colin’s father), Dickon, and Colin. After her parents die, Mary goes to live at her uncle’s manor house. One day, she finds the secret garden, which looks wild and neglected. With her friend Dickon, she makes the garden beautiful again. Later, they meet the sick and unhappy Colin. Finally, with the help of nature and friendship, both Mary and Colin become happier and healthier.
This book has taught me to love nature and see how it can help us. I’m inspired by the author’s description of nature. As Burnett said, “If you look the right way, you can see that the whole world is a garden.” I’ve read the book twice and still enjoy it. If you have never read anything by Frances Hodgson Burnett, I recommend starting with this book.
Step4 3c Writing + peer correction(3c)
1. 学生依托提纲当堂完成作文;
2. 选取两篇习作,全班共同纠错点评,梳理常见时态、句式错误。
Step5 Summary & Homework
1. 熟读课文。
2. 修改完善作文。
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