专题16 书面表达（期末专项训练）五年级英语下学期（译林版三起）

**基本信息** 小学英语期末书面表达专项训练，以“解题小技巧+模拟汇编题”构建系统训练体系，通过三步写作法与分段模板培养语言表达能力，强化思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |解题小技巧|3模块（写作三步/分段模板/得分窍门）|审题圈要点-列三段提纲-书写改错，熟词优先+时态统一+格式规范|从写作流程（审题-构思-表达）到得分要素的递进逻辑| |模拟汇编题|15题（人物介绍/节日描述/活动记录等）|模板化结构（开头-中间细节-结尾感想）与灵活拓展结合|不同时态（一般现在/过去/现在进行时）与生活场景的对应应用|

专项16 书面表达 01 解题小技巧 02 模拟汇编题   解题小技巧 一、写作三步 · 审题：圈要点（人物、时间、地点、事件、时态） · 列提纲：三段格式：开头→中间细节→结尾感想 · 书写：写完通读改错（单三、时态、大小写） 二、分段模板 · 开头：介绍主题（I’m… / Today is…） · 中间：2～3 个动作，用 and/but 衔接 · 结尾：心情（I’m happy. / I have a good time.） 三、得分窍门 · 优先用熟词熟句，不写没把握句型 · 时态统一：日常用一般现在时，过去事情用过去式 · 牢记格式：句首大写、末尾标点     模拟汇编题 1．书面表达。 Lily是你们班新转入的学生，请根据思维导图，向大家介绍一下她。 要求：1. 包含思维导图中所有要点，可适当发挥想象，不少于5句话； 2. 语句通顺，表达有条理，书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 This is our new classmate Lily. 2．写话练习。请根据图片和情景提示，用英语写一段话。 情景：今天是9月5日，苏的家庭日，爸妈带她和妹妹去爷爷奶奶家。请以 A Happy Family Day 为题写一段话。 要求：使用现在进行时；合理想象；表达正确；语句连贯，条理清晰；书写规范：不少于6句话。 A Happy Family Day It’s ________________________________________ today. It’s Sue’s Family Day. Sue and her sister Jane go to visit their grandparents with their parents. Look! What a happy Family Day! 3．书面表达。 在一年中，总有一天对你来说格外重要，可能是某个节日，可能是某人的生日，也可能是……请用英语介绍在一年中你觉得重要的一天。 What is it? My important day What do you do? When is it? How do you feel? Why is it important? ... 要求：1.涵盖表格中的所有信息。 2.条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范，格式正确。 3.不少于6句话。 My important day 4．书面表达。 观察Mary手账上的照片，用适当的时态描述照片。 要求：1. 不少于6句，不包括所给句； 2. 内容可以包括时间、地点、人物活动和心情等； 3. 时态准确，条理清晰，意思连贯； 4. 句式丰富、不单一，展开合理想象；5. 书写分2分。 Look at the picture of Mary’s family. 5．书面表达。 双减政策实施后，同学们的社团活动更加丰富多彩了。请你结合图片并发挥想象，将这样热闹的场景描述出来吧。（参考词汇：play the zither 弹古筝） 要求：1. 涵盖所有要点，可适当拓展；2. 句子通顺，语法正确，40词左右。 It is four o’ clock in the afternoon. What are the students doing? 6．书面表达。 请根据所给提示，以”My Favourite Festival”为题，完成一篇介绍自己最喜爱的节日的小作文。 要求：1. 请注意使用适当的形式； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3. 将作文写在相应位置，不少于5句话，50词左右。 My Favourite Festival My favourite festival is It’s in / on I always 7．书面表达。 今天是周六，Lucy和她的家人正在家里打扫卫生，请使用现在进行时对下图进行描述，可适当发挥想象。（不少于6句话） 8．书面表达。 今天是星期日，也是你家的“家庭劳动日”。请根据下面的思维导图，介绍一下你和你的家人正在做什么，写一写你们的活动内容吧！ 要求：1. 合理想象，内容全面，表达通顺，书写规范； 2. 时态运用正确，不少于5句话，已给出的内容不计入总句数。 Family Labor Day Today is my family labor day. 9．书面表达。 同学们在劳动课上学习了煮饭炖汤、修理小家电、种菜养禽等。现在是星期六上午九点，Zhou Yan和她的朋友们都在家。他们在忙些什么呢？请根据以下表格提供的信息，以“Doing chores (做家务)”为题，完成下面的习作。要求：时态正确，信息完整，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写美观。 Who Age Hobby What Where Zhou Yan 11 keep pets walk the dog in front of the house Chen Jun    12 cook make a fruit salad in the kitchen Cathy    13 grow flowers water the flowers in the garden Doing chores It’s nine o’clock on Saturday morning. The children are doing chores at home. Zhou Yan is eleven years old. She likes keeping pets. Look! 10．书面表达。 周六下午，Sue一家人享受着周末时光。爷爷和奶奶正在客厅看电视，爸爸正在书房看书，妈妈正在厨房做蛋糕，哥哥David正在卧室给朋友写电子邮件，Sue本人正在听音乐。请根据以下图片提示，以A happy afternoon为题，帮助Sue介绍这个快乐的下午。 要求：1. 内容连贯通顺，条理清楚，注意使用正确的时态。 2. 根据图片提示写全信息点，可以适当发挥想象。 3. 字数在30-50个词，已给出的不算。 参考词汇：read a book, study (书房), make a cake, kitchen, write an email, bedroom, listen to some music… A happy afternoon Hi, I’m Sue. It’s four o’clock in the afternoon. My grandparents are watching TV in the living room. 11．要求：根据图片提示，适当发挥想象；时态正确，语句通顺，表达有条理；书写规范，不少于5句话。 A busy Sunday It is Sunday. My parents and I are all at home. 12．写作。 儿童节是孩子们喜欢的节日。在这一天，你会和朋友们做什么呢？请以Children’s Day为题写一段话，要求不少于7句话。语句通顺、拼写正确、书写规范！ Children’s Day Children’s Day is 13．书面表达。 请以My birthday为题写一篇小短文，不少于5句话。要求语句通顺，表达正确。 My birthday 14．书面表达。 小米同学想去城市图书馆，但她不知道怎样去。请你帮她设计一条去城市图书馆的路线，并在地图上画出路线，然后用正确的语句描述出来，要求书写工整，不少于4句话。 First,_____________________________________________________________________________ Next,____________________________________________________________________________ Then, ____________________________________________________________________________ Finally, __________________________________________________________________________ 15．书面表达。 小明给远在美国的网友大卫介绍中国传统的节日——春节。请结合你的生活实际，帮助他完成这篇短文。要求：条理清晰，语句连贯，不少于五句话。 The Spring Festival The Spring Festival is in January or February. I feel very happy at this festival. 参考答案 1．范文： This is our new classmate Lily. Her birthday is on May 16th. She lives on Green Street. She goes to school on foot. She often watches films on the weekend. Her favourite festival is Spring Festival. Because she can get red packets. 2．例文： A Happy Family Day      It’s September 5th today. It’s Sue’s Family Day. Sue and her sister Jane go to visit their grandparents with their parents. Look! Sue’s Dad is cooking. Her sister Jane is playing with Grandpa. Her Mum is talking with Grandma. Sue is drawing. Then they have a meal. After meal, they watch TV together. What a happy Family Day! 3．范文： My important day My important day is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It usually comes in September every year. In China, the full moon is a symbol of reunion. On that day, I always visit my grandparents with my parents. We often have a big dinner together. After dinner, we watch the moon, eat the mooncakes and talk. We all have a good time. 4．范文： An outing on Sat. afternoon! Look at the picture of Mary’s family. It’s sunny and hot. Dad is having a barbecue there. Mary is flying a kite. Mom is reading a book. Look, their dog is sleeping on the grass. Mary’s brother is riding a bike on the road. They are very happy! 5．范文：     It is four o’clock in the afternoon. What are the students doing? Zhao Gang and Li Ming like basketball. They are playing basketball. My friend Zhao Hua is playing the zither. She plays really well. There are three girls dancing in the dancing room. Some students are drawing a picture. They are very serious. My best friend Li Hua is skating. All of them are very happy! 6．范文： My Favourite Festival     My favourite festival is Children’s Day. It is on June 1st every year. On Children’s Day, I always decorate the classroom and I have a big party in the classroom. I can sing, dance and play games with classmates. After class, I can go shopping with my parents. And I can buy lots of candies and toys in the supermarket. It’s a happy time. 7．范文： It’s Saturday today. Lucy and her family are doing some cleaning at home. Look, Lucy’s grandma is washing clothes. Lucy’s mother is cleaning the table. Her father is sweeping the floor. Her little brother is cleaning the windows. What about Lucy? Oh, she is making the bed. They are very busy. 8．范文： Family labor day Today is my family labor day. We are all very busy. My father is cleaning the car in front of the house. He likes his car very much. My mother is in the kitchen. She is cooking breakfast for us. She can cook well. My sister is making the bed. Her bedroom is always clean and tidy. I’m sweeping the floor in the living room. We are tired but happy. 9．范文： Doing chores     It’s nine o’clock on Saturday morning. The children are doing chores at home.       Zhou Yan is eleven years old. She likes keeping pets. Look! She is walking the dog in front of the house. Chen Jun is twelve years old. He likes cooking. Look! He is making a fruit salad in the kitchen. Cathy is thirteen years old. She likes growing flowers. Look! She is watering the flowers in the garden. 10．范文： A happy afternoon Hi, I’m Sue. It’s four o’clock in the afternoon. My grandparents are watching TV in the living room. Dad is reading a book in the study. Mom is making a cake in the kitchen. My brother David is writing an email to friends in the bedroom. And I’m listening to some music. I feel so happy. We all have a good time! 11．范文： A busy Sunday It is Sunday.  My parents and I are all at home. My father is cleaning the car. I am cleaning the living room. My mother is cooking. She likes cooking very much. We are very busy but very happy. 12．范文： Children’s Day Children’s Day is on the first day of June. It is a happy day for all kids. On this day, we will play games and have parties at school. We will sing songs and dance together. We won’t do our homework. We will receive gifts and yummy snacks from our parents. It is a day full of happiness and laughter. I love Children’s Day! 13．范文： My birthday My name is Tom. My birthday is on February 12th. On that day, my dad buys a cake for me. My mum cooks noodles for me. My friends give me gifts. We have a birthday party. We sing and dance. We have a lot of fun. 14． 范文： First, go along the Green Street. Next, turn left at the traffic lights. Then, go along the Yellow Street. Finally, Stop at the third traffic lights, she can see the City Library on the right. 15．范文： The Spring Festival     The Spring Festival is in January or February. People usually set off firecrackers to celebrate the Spring Festival. I like the Spring Festival very much, because I can eat traditional food, especially delicious dumplings. I can get lucky money from my parents and relatives. I can play with my best friends. I feel very happy at this festival. 第 2 页 共 13 页 第 1 页 共 13 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $