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高考应用文总复习模板十七:道歉信
假设你是交换生李华,正在美国一所高中上学,你因故不能参加今天的音乐剧排练,请给导演Mr.Smith写封信说明情况,内容包括:
1.表达歉意; 2.解释原因; 3.请求谅解。
请注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
一、解题思路分析:
审题定调:
1. 时态:以一般现在时为主
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
谋篇布局
※★第一段:情况+目的
※★第二段:解释自己的过失或疏忽的原因并请求原谅
※★第三段:再次表达歉意,希望对方谅解
二、范文赏析
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am terribly sorry that I am unable to attend the music rehearsal today. Thus, I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you.
The reason why I won’t be available at that time as planned is that I am sick with a fever of 39 and the doctor has told me to rest for two days. I have taken medicine, hoping to recover soon and perform favorite musical because it’s a good opportunity for me to practice my English and show my talents. I feel sorry for not keeping my word, and I hope the change will not cause too much trouble.
Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused. If I can’t attend the next rehearsal, I recommend Sophia to take my place./ I would appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another time. If not, please keep me informed in advance of when it is convenient to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
三、常用词汇
1.keep promise 信守诺言
2.be absent/present from 缺席/出席
3.apologize to sb. for sth. 因某事向某人道歉
4.show an apology to sb. for sth. 因某事向某人道歉
5.make an apology to sb. for sth. 因某事向某人道歉
6.say sorry to sb. 对某人说抱歉
7.beg your forgiveness for 恳求你的原谅
8.cause inconvenience 造成不便
9.miss/cancel the appointment 错过/取消约会
10.make up for 弥补.…
11.express my regret 表达我的歉意
12.be considerate of 体谅
13.accept my apology 接受我的道歉
14.conflict with... 与……冲突
15.have no choice/option but to do sth. 除了做某事别无选择
16.make a choice 选择
四、实用句型
1、首段常用语
① I am writing to express my sincere apology for my failing to ... as scheduled.
我写信的目的是表达我未能按计划 ......的真诚歉意 。
② I'm writing to apologize to you because I cannot make it to ... with you this weekend.
我写信向你致歉因为我无法在周末和你一起去 ...... 。
2、主体部分常用语
① The reason why I can't ... is that I have to make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend.
我无法 ...... 的原因是我必须要为周末将要举行的英语演讲比赛做好准备。
② I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
我刚刚发现那天下午我有个重要会议要参加。我希望这个改变不会给你带来太多麻烦。
3、结尾常用语
① Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.
对于我的缺席给您带来的不便再表歉意。
② I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation. Wish you a safe and happy journey!
我真诚地希望您能接受我的歉意并理解我的处境。祝您一路顺风、旅途愉快!
5、 万能模板
Dear [收信人称呼],
I hope this letter finds you well. I am [你的名字], and I am writing to you with a deep sense of apology. (说明写信目的是道歉)
I am truly sorry for the problems I have caused. Firstly, I [具体不当行为或错误 1]. This not only affected [受影响的方面 1], but also made you [对方受到的影响 1]. What’s more, [具体不当行为或错误 2] was also a thoughtless act on my part, which might have brought you [对方受到的影响 2]. (中间段具体说明导致道歉的事情和错误)
I sincerely apologize for my actions and take full responsibility for them. To make up for the inconvenience I have caused, I will [提出弥补措施]. I truly hope that you can find it in your heart to forgive me for my mistakes. I value our relationship [或合作等,根据具体情况] very much and will do my best to avoid similar situations in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
六、小试牛刀
(广东省惠州市2025届第一次调研模拟)假定你是李华,外教Mike邀请你担任英语俱乐部下周五举办的“Drama Night”的主持人。现你因故无法出席,请写信说明情况。内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因。
注意:1.开头和结尾已经给出;2.词数80左右。
Dear Mike,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Mike,
I sincerely appreciate your trust in me and the invitation to host the Drama Night organized by the English Club next Friday. I should have embraced this remarkable opportunity and made preparations with utmost dedication. To my regret, however, I’m writing to extend my apologies for failing to serve as the host as scheduled.
I have been selected as a representative of our school to participate in an English speech contest on the same day, making it impossible for me to adjust my schedule accordingly. My apologies again for any inconvenience I brought to you and the club.
I hope you can understand my dilemma and find a suitable replacement promptly. Wishing you all the best for a triumphant event! (120 words)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
尊敬的麦克老师:
非常感谢您对我的信任,邀请我担任英语俱乐部下周五举办的“戏剧之夜”的主持人。这是一个极好的机会,我本应欣然接受并全力以赴准备,但遗憾的是,我现在不得不向您表达我无法如约的歉意。
我已经被选为学校代表去参加英语演讲比赛,这与“戏剧之夜”的活动时间冲突,使得我无法调整时间参与“戏剧之夜”的筹备与主持工作。对于给您及俱乐部带来的不便,我再次表示诚挚的歉意。
我希望您能理解我的处境,并尽快找到合适的替代人选。祝“戏剧之夜”圆满成功!
李华
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