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2026年中考作文一对一讲义1
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2026.
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九年级下册中考写作话题3——学校活动
My Favorite School Activity
九年级下册中考写作话题3——学校活动
My Favorite School Activity
你所在学校的英语报刊正在举行以 “My Favorite School Activity” 征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇短文,分享一次最喜欢的学校活动经历。
· What did you do during the activity?
· How did you feel?
1. 可在要点提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 注意:
3. 词数 80 词左右;
4. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My Favorite School Activity
Over the past three years, our school has held lots of colorful and meaningful activities.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1、 亮点词汇(背诵)
普通表达
高分替换词
词性
中文释义
适用场景
have
hold/organize
v.
举办 / 组织
描述学校活动
take part in
participate in/join in
v.
参加
描述参与活动
happy
delighted/thrilled/pleased
adj.
开心的 / 激动的
描述活动感受
important
meaningful/valuable/rewarding
adj.
有意义的 / 值得的
评价活动价值
good
unforgettable/memorable
adj.
难忘的 / 值得纪念的
形容活动体验
learn
gain/develop/improve
v.
获得 / 培养 / 提升
描述活动收获
friend
like-minded partner/classmate
n.
志同道合的伙伴 / 同学
描述活动中认识的人
进阶高分词(加分项,适配各类活动)
单词
音标
词性
中文释义
annual
/ˈænjuəl/
adj.
一年一度的
event
/ɪˈvent/
n.
大型活动 / 赛事
session
/ˈseʃn/
n.
活动场次 / 环节
competition
/ˌkɒmpəˈtɪʃn/
n.
竞赛 / 比赛
ceremony
/ˈserəməni/
n.
仪式 / 典礼
experience
/ɪkˈspɪəriəns/
n.
经历 / 体验
teamwork
/ˈtiːmwɜːk/
n.
团队合作
confidence
/ˈkɒnfɪdəns/
n.
自信
fulfilled
/fʊlˈfɪld/
adj.
充实的 / 有成就感的
proud
/praʊd/
adj.
自豪的
grateful
/ˈɡreɪtfl/
adj.
感激的
cherish
/ˈtʃerɪʃ/
v.
珍惜 / 珍视
strengthen
/ˈstreŋθn/
v.
加强 / 增进
challenge
/ˈtʃælɪndʒ/
v./n.
挑战 / 克服
achieve
/əˈtʃiːv/
v.
达成 / 实现
二、万能亮点词组(直接套用,适配所有活动主题)
1. 活动引入 & 描述类(承接开头句,描述活动)
· hold/organize a series of colorful and meaningful activities 举办一系列丰富多彩且有意义的活动
· take part in/participate in an unforgettable school activity 参加一次难忘的校园活动
· the most memorable activity in my school life 我校园生活中最难忘的活动
· be held on a sunny morning in last autumn 于去年秋天的一个晴朗早晨举办
· last for two hours/three days 持续了两小时 / 三天
· attract the attention of all teachers and students 吸引了全校师生的目光
2. 活动过程 & 动作类(对应 “What did you do” 要点)
· work together with classmates to complete tasks 和同学一起合作完成任务
· take an active part in the speech competition 积极参加演讲比赛
· share my ideas and stories with others 和他人分享我的想法和故事
· practice the relay race again and again 一遍又一遍地练习接力赛
· prepare carefully for the talent show 为才艺秀认真准备
· give a wonderful performance on the stage 在舞台上呈现精彩的表演
· cheer for my classmates loudly 大声为同学们加油助威
· help each other and never give up 互相帮助,永不放弃
· exchange books with my classmates after the reading festival 读书节后和同学交换书籍
· take part in the group discussion and share my opinions 参与小组讨论并分享观点
3. 感受 & 收获类(对应 “How did you feel” 要点,高分核心)
· feel a strong sense of pride and achievement 感到强烈的自豪感和成就感
· learn the importance of teamwork and communication 学会了团队合作与沟通的重要性
· develop my confidence and courage to speak in public 培养了公开发言的自信与勇气
· make new like-minded friends during the activity 在活动中结识了志同道合的新朋友
· improve my skills in reading/writing/speaking/sports 提升了阅读 / 写作 / 口语 / 运动方面的能力
· cherish this precious experience very much 非常珍惜这段宝贵的经历
· leave a deep impression on me 给我留下了深刻的印象
· strengthen the friendship between my classmates and me 增进了我和同学们之间的友谊
· become more outgoing and brave after the activity 活动后变得更开朗、更勇敢
· gain a lot from this activity, both in mind and body 从这次活动中身心都收获良多
三、万能亮点句型(可直接背诵,适配所有活动作文)
1. 开头承接句型(完美衔接题目给出的句子)
1. My favorite one is the annual Reading Festival, which was held in our school last October. (我最喜欢的是去年 10 月学校举办的年度读书节。)
2. Among all these activities, the school sports meeting held last spring stands out the most in my memory. (在所有这些活动中,去年春天的校运会在我的记忆里尤为深刻。)
3. The activity that impressed me most is the volunteer day we had in Grade 8. (给我留下最深印象的活动是八年级时的志愿者日。)
2. 活动过程描述句型(对应 “What did you do”)
1. During the activity, not only did I take part in the book sharing session, but I also joined the reading speech competition. (倒装句加分!活动期间,我不仅参加了读书分享会,还加入了阅读演讲比赛。)
2. At the beginning of the activity, we were divided into groups and given different tasks to complete. (活动一开始,我们就被分成小组,拿到了不同的任务去完成。)
3. I was a little nervous at first, but my classmates encouraged me to keep going, so I tried my best to perform well. (一开始我有点紧张,但同学们鼓励我继续前进,所以我尽了最大努力表现好。)
4. As the activity went on, I became more relaxed and even made friends with students from other classes. (随着活动的进行,我越来越放松,甚至和其他班的同学交上了朋友。)
3. 感受 & 收获升华句型(对应 “How did you feel”,高分关键)
1. When I stood on the stage and heard the cheers from my classmates, I felt a strong sense of pride and warmth. (当我站在舞台上,听到同学们的欢呼时,我感到了强烈的自豪与温暖。)
2. What I learned most from this activity is that teamwork makes the dream work. (我从这次活动中学到的最重要的一点是:团队合作能成就梦想。)
3. It was not easy at first, but after we worked together, we finally succeeded. This taught me never to give up easily. (一开始并不容易,但我们一起努力后,最终成功了。这教会了我永远不要轻易放弃。)
4. This activity not only developed my interest in reading, but also let me realize the importance of sharing. (这次活动不仅培养了我对阅读的兴趣,也让我意识到了分享的重要性。)
5. Even now, I still remember the happy moments with my classmates, and this activity will always be a precious memory in my school life. (即使现在,我依然记得和同学们在一起的快乐时光,这次活动将永远是我校园生活中一段珍贵的回忆。)
6. This experience made me more confident, and I believe it will encourage me to face challenges bravely in the future. (这段经历让我变得更自信,我相信它会鼓励我在未来勇敢面对挑战。)
4. 万能结尾句型(收束全文,升华主题)
1. All in all, this activity was not only fun but also meaningful, and I will cherish it forever. (总而言之,这次活动既有趣又有意义,我会永远珍惜它。)
2. This unforgettable activity has become one of the most beautiful memories of my middle school life. (这次难忘的活动已经成为我中学生活中最美好的回忆之一。)
3. I feel so lucky to take part in this activity, and I hope there will be more such activities in the future. (我很幸运能参加这次活动,也希望未来能有更多这样的活动。)
四、不同主题活动替换模板(学生可直接套用)
模板 1:读书节 / 文化活动
· 替换词:Reading Festival → Culture Week / Poetry Competition / English Corner
· 过程句:I introduced my favorite book to the class and shared my understanding of it. / I took part in the English speech contest and talked about my dream.
· 收获句:It improved my reading and speaking skills, and I also learned more about different cultures.
模板 2:校运会 / 体育活动
· 替换词:Sports Meeting → Autumn Hiking / Basketball Match / Volleyball Game
· 过程句:I joined the 4×100m relay race and practiced with my teammates every day. / We ran together and cheered for each other on the playground.
· 收获句:It taught me the true meaning of teamwork, and I also learned to never give up even when I was tired.
模板 3:志愿者 / 公益活动
· 替换词:Volunteer Day → Charity Sale / Community Service / Tree-planting Activity
· 过程句:We sold our old books and toys to raise money for the children in need. / We cleaned the park and planted trees to make our city more beautiful.
· 收获句:I learned that helping others brings happiness, and I want to keep doing small good things in my life.
优秀范文 3 篇(背诵)
三篇范文分别对应读书节、校运会、志愿者日三大高频校园活动。
范文 1:读书节主题
My Favorite School Activity
Over the past three years, our school has held lots of colorful and meaningful activities. My favorite one is the annual Reading Festival held last October. During the festival, I joined the book sharing session. I introduced my favorite novel and exchanged interesting books with classmates. We also took part in a reading speech competition. I felt really proud when I won a small prize. This activity not only developed my reading habit but also let me make new like-minded friends. It is such a precious memory that I will always keep it in mind.
范文 2:校运会主题(团队合作类,情感真挚)
My Favorite School Activity
Over the past three years, our school has held lots of colorful and meaningful activities. My favorite one is the autumn sports meeting held last November. During the sports meeting, I took part in the 4×100m relay race. My teammates and I practiced running every day before the race. On that day, we cheered for each other loudly and finally won the first place. I felt a strong sense of pride and warmth. This activity taught me the true meaning of teamwork. It has become one of the most unforgettable memories in my middle school life.
范文 3:志愿者日主题(公益类,立意升华)
My Favorite School Activity
Over the past three years, our school has held lots of colorful and meaningful activities. My favorite one is the school volunteer day held last spring. During the activity, my classmates and I went to clean the community park. We picked up rubbish, watered the flowers and talked with the elderly people there. We also gave out leaflets about environmental protection. I felt very fulfilled when I saw the clean park and the smiles on people’s faces. This activity let me know that small actions can make a big difference. I will always remember this meaningful experience.
高分亮点
1. 结构统一:三篇均采用「开头引入→过程描述→感受升华」三段式,完美贴合题目两个要点。
2. 句型复用:均使用了 not only...but also... 倒装 / 并列句型、such...that... 结果状语从句,是中考加分高频结构。
3. 词汇多样:用到了 annual, meaningful, unforgettable, precious, fulfilled 等高分词,避免重复使用 happy/good。
作文大纲:My Favorite School Activity
一、开头段(承接题目,引入活动)
· 任务:承接题目给出的开头句,点明你最喜欢的活动是什么,什么时候举办的。
· 核心句型:
1. 题目原句:Over the past three years, our school has held lots of colorful and meaningful activities.
2. 续写:My favorite one is the ________ held ________.
· 示例:Over the past three years, our school has held lots of colorful and meaningful activities. My favorite one is the Reading Festival held last October.
二、主体段(核心,回答 “What did you do during the activity?”)
· 任务:按时间顺序描述活动过程,写 2-3 个具体动作,体现参与感。
· 结构模板:
3. 活动一开始:At the beginning, we ________.
3. 活动中:Then, I took part in ________ and ________.
3. 补充细节:Besides, my classmates and I also ________.
· 示例(读书节): During the festival, I took part in the book sharing session. I introduced my favorite novel to the class and exchanged books with my classmates. We also joined a reading speech competition.
三、结尾段(升华,回答 “How did you feel?”)
· 任务:抒发感受 + 点明收获,用 1-2 个高分句型收尾。
· 结构模板:
3. 直接感受:I felt really ________ when ________.
3. 活动收获:This activity not only ________, but also ________.
3. 结尾收束:It’s such a precious memory that I will always remember it.
· 示例: I felt really proud when I won a small prize in the competition. This activity not only developed my reading habit, but also let me make new like-minded friends. It’s such a precious memory that I will always keep it in mind.
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