2026年北京市东城区九年级英语二模写作范文

该初中英语中考复习讲义聚焦书面表达“推荐信”核心考点，针对中考要求的内容要点完整（推荐对象及理由）、语言表达规范（词汇句型）、篇章结构清晰三大考查维度，设计“考点解析-方法提炼-范文示范”教学流程，通过提示词语梳理、写作句型模板归纳及6篇不同情境范文（教师/同学）的真题训练，帮助学生系统突破写作难点。 亮点在于“分层示范+模板化输出”策略，如通过推荐同桌王林的范文，运用“Although... he works harder...”等对比句型组织理由，培养学生思维品质；提供“recommend”“take care of”等核心词汇及“sb is a person who...”等万能句型，提升语言能力。配套词汇翻译和句型仿写练习，确保学生短期内掌握写作技巧，教师可依此精准把控复习进度，高效提升学生应考能力。

2026年北京市东城区九年级英语二模写作范文 书面表达题目： 假设你是李华，你校英文电子杂志正在策划一期“校园人物”专栏(People on Campus)，现面向全体同学征集采访对象。请你用英语给编辑写一封邮件，推荐一位采访对象，并说明理由。 提示词语：work hard, smile, take care of, important, responsibility 内容提示： · Who would you like to recommend? · Why do you recommend this person? Dear Editor, I'm writing to recommend a person for the "People on Campus". ________ _____________________________________________________________________________ I hope my recommendation will be considered. Yours, Li Hua 写作范文 (1) 范文 1 Dear Editor, I am writing to recommend my English teacher, Miss Zhang, for the "People on Campus". She is a teacher who always works hard to make her lessons interesting. Whenever we have difficulties in learning English, she smiles and encourages us to try again. She takes care of every student as if we were her own children. I believe that a good teacher is not only a person who teaches knowledge but also someone who lights up our hearts. Her responsibility makes our class feel like a warm family. I hope my recommendation will be considered. Yours, Li Hua 【好词汇】 · recommend - 推荐 · work hard - 努力工作 · have difficulties in - 在…方面有困难 · encourage - 鼓励 · take care of - 照顾 · as if - 好像 · responsibility - 责任 · light up - 点亮 【写作句子结构】 · She is a teacher who always works hard to do sth. · 翻译：她是一位总是努力做某事的老师。 · 例句：She is a teacher who always works hard to prepare her classes. · 例句翻译：她是一位总是努力备课的老师。 · Whenever we do sth, she smiles and does sth. · 翻译：每当我们做某事时，她就会微笑并做某事。 · 例句：Whenever we answer questions, she smiles and nods. · 例句翻译：每当我们回答问题时，她就会微笑并点头。 · I believe that + 宾语从句 · 翻译：我相信… · 例句：I believe that hard work pays off. · 例句翻译：我相信努力会有回报。 · 某人的 responsibility makes + 某地 + feel like + 名词短语 · 翻译：某人的责任感让某地感觉像… · 例句：Her responsibility makes our class feel like a family. · 例句翻译：她的责任感让我们的班级感觉像一个家。 【范文翻译】 尊敬的编辑： 我写这封信是为了推荐我的英语老师张老师参加“校园人物”专栏。她是一位总是努力工作让她的课变得有趣的老师。每当我们学习英语遇到困难时，她就会微笑着鼓励我们再试一次。她照顾每一个学生，好像我们是她自己的孩子。我相信一位好老师不仅是传授知识的人，也是点亮我们心灵的人。她的责任感让我们的班级感觉像一个温暖的家庭。 希望我的推荐能被考虑。 此致 李华 范文 2 Dear Editor, I would like to recommend my math teacher, Mr. Li, for this column. He is the person who makes me realize that math is not as difficult as I thought. Because he explains every problem step by step, I have become more confident in math. He often says that we should never give up when we face challenges. Besides teaching us knowledge, he also takes care of our feelings after exams. I think his greatest responsibility is to help each student grow. That is why I strongly recommend him. I hope my recommendation will be considered. Yours, Li Hua 【好词汇】 · would like to - 想要 · realize - 意识到 · step by step - 一步一步地 · confident - 自信的 · give up - 放弃 · face challenges - 面对挑战 · besides - 除了 · strongly - 强烈地 【写作句子结构】 · He is the person who makes me realize that + 宾语从句 · 翻译：他是那个让我意识到…的人。 · 例句：He is the person who makes me realize that practice makes perfect. · 例句翻译：他是那个让我意识到熟能生巧的人。 · Because he does sth, I have become more + 形容词 · 翻译：因为他做某事，我变得更加… · 例句：Because he tells interesting stories, I have become more interested in history. · 例句翻译：因为他讲有趣的故事，我变得对历史更感兴趣了。 · He often says that we should never do sth when we do sth. · 翻译：他经常说当我们做某事时，我们永远不应该做某事。 · 例句：He often says that we should never be afraid when we try new things. · 例句翻译：他经常说当我们尝试新事物时，我们永远不应该害怕。 · That is why + 主语 + 动词 + 宾语 · 翻译：这就是为什么… · 例句：That is why I respect him so much. · 例句翻译：这就是为什么我如此尊重他。 【范文翻译】 尊敬的编辑： 我想推荐我的数学老师李老师参加这个专栏。他是那个让我意识到数学并不像我想象的那么难的人。因为他一步一步地讲解每个问题，我在数学方面变得更加自信。他经常说当我们面对挑战时永远不应该放弃。除了教我们知识，他还关心我们考试后的感受。我认为他最大的责任是帮助每个学生成长。这就是为什么我强烈推荐他。 希望我的推荐能被考虑。 此致 李华 范文 3 Dear Editor, I am glad to write this email to recommend my physics teacher, Mrs. Wang. She is a teacher who always has a smile on her face. Whenever we do experiments in class, she takes care of our safety first. In her eyes, every student is important. She not only teaches us physics but also tells us how to face failure bravely. I still remember the day when I failed an exam and she said to me, Try your best and you will make progress. Her sense of responsibility touches my heart deeply. I hope my recommendation will be considered. Yours, Li Hua 【好词汇】 · be glad to - 很高兴做某事 · have a smile on one's face - 脸上带着微笑 · experiment - 实验 · safety - 安全 · in one's eyes - 在某人眼中 · face failure - 面对失败 · bravely - 勇敢地 · make progress - 取得进步 【写作句子结构】 · She is a teacher who always has a smile on her face. · 翻译：她是一位脸上总是带着微笑的老师。 · 例句：He is a student who always has a question in his mind. · 例句翻译：他是一个脑子里总是有问题的学生。 · Whenever we do sth, she does sth. · 翻译：每当我们做某事时，她就做某事。 · 例句：Whenever we feel tired, she tells us a short story. · 例句翻译：每当我们感到累时，她就给我们讲一个小故事。 · I still remember the day when + 句子 · 翻译：我仍然记得那一天… · 例句：I still remember the morning when I arrived late. · 例句翻译：我仍然记得那个早晨，我迟到了。 · 某人的 sense of responsibility touches + 某人的 heart + 副词 · 翻译：某人的责任感深深地触动了某人的心。 · 例句：His kindness touches everyone's heart deeply. · 例句翻译：他的善良深深触动了每个人的心。 【范文翻译】 尊敬的编辑： 我很高兴写这封邮件推荐我的物理老师王老师。她是一位脸上总是带着微笑的老师。每当我们上课做实验时，她首先会照顾我们的安全。在她眼中，每个学生都很重要。她不仅教我们物理，还告诉我们如何勇敢地面对失败。我仍然记得那一天，我考试不及格，她对我说，尽你最大努力，你会取得进步的。她的责任感深深触动了我的心。 希望我的推荐能被考虑。 此致 李华 范文 4 Dear Editor, I am writing to recommend my Chinese teacher, Miss Liu. She is a person who loves her job very much. Because she is always patient with us, we are not afraid to ask questions in class. She often tells us that reading is like opening a door to a new world. In addition, she takes care of our study habits and helps us build good ones. I think a teacher's responsibility is not only to give lessons but also to guide students in the right way. Her smile makes every class warm and enjoyable. I hope my recommendation will be considered. Yours, Li Hua 【好词汇】 · patient with - 对…有耐心 · be afraid to do - 害怕做某事 · in addition - 此外 · study habits - 学习习惯 · build - 培养 · guide - 引导 · in the right way - 以正确的方式 · enjoyable - 令人愉快的 【写作句子结构】 · Because she is always patient with us, we are not afraid to do sth. · 翻译：因为她总是对我们有耐心，我们不害怕做某事。 · 例句：Because he is always friendly to us, we are not afraid to share our ideas. · 例句翻译：因为他总是对我们很友好，我们不害怕分享我们的想法。 · She often tells us that doing sth is like doing sth. · 翻译：她经常告诉我们做某事就像做某事一样。 · 例句：She often tells us that learning is like climbing a mountain. · 例句翻译：她经常告诉我们学习就像爬山一样。 · I think a teacher's responsibility is not only to do sth but also to do sth. · 翻译：我认为一个老师的责任不仅是做某事而且是做某事。 · 例句：I think a student's job is not only to study but also to grow healthily. · 例句翻译：我认为一个学生的任务不仅是学习而且是健康成长。 · 某人的 smile makes + 某地 + 形容词 and 形容词 · 翻译：某人的微笑让某地变得…且… · 例句：His humor makes every meeting relaxed and fun. · 例句翻译：他的幽默让每次会议都轻松有趣。 【范文翻译】 尊敬的编辑： 我写这封信是为了推荐我的语文老师刘老师。她是一个热爱自己工作的人。因为她总是对我们有耐心，我们不害怕在课堂上提问。她经常告诉我们，阅读就像打开一扇通往新世界的大门。此外，她关心我们的学习习惯并帮助我们培养好习惯。我认为一个老师的责任不仅是上课而且是以正确的方式引导学生。她的微笑让每节课都温暖而令人愉快。 希望我的推荐能被考虑。 此致 李华 范文 5 Dear Editor, I want to recommend my deskmate, Wang Lin, for the "People on Campus". He is the kind of person who is always ready to help others. Whenever I forget to bring my things, he shares his with me without saying a word. Although he is not the top student in our class, he works harder than anyone else. I have learned from him that we should never look down on ourselves. He also takes care of the classroom plants every day. In my eyes, his sense of responsibility is truly important. That is why he deserves to be interviewed. I hope my recommendation will be considered. Yours, Li Hua 【好词汇】 · deskmate - 同桌 · be ready to - 准备好做某事 · share with - 与…分享 · without saying a word - 一句话不说 · top student - 尖子生 · look down on - 看不起 · deserve to be - 值得被 · interviewed - 采访 【写作句子结构】 · He is the kind of person who is always ready to do sth. · 翻译：他是那种总是准备好做某事的人。 · 例句：She is the kind of person who is always ready to lend a hand. · 例句翻译：她是那种总是准备好帮忙的人。 · Whenever I do sth, he does sth without saying a word. · 翻译：每当我做某事时，他一句话不说就做某事。 · 例句：Whenever I feel sad, he sits beside me without saying a word. · 例句翻译：每当我感到难过时，他一句话不说就坐在我旁边。 · Although he is not + 名词短语, he works harder than anyone else. · 翻译：虽然他不是…，但他比任何人都努力。 · 例句：Although she is not the tallest, she runs faster than anyone else. · 例句翻译：虽然她不是最高的，但她跑得比任何人都快。 · I have learned from him that we should never do sth. · 翻译：我从他身上学到了我们永远不应该做某事。 · 例句：I have learned from my father that we should never give up easily. · 例句翻译：我从父亲身上学到了我们永远不应该轻易放弃。 【范文翻译】 尊敬的编辑： 我想推荐我的同桌王林参加“校园人物”专栏。他是那种总是准备好帮助别人的人。每当我忘记带东西时，他一句话不说就和我分享他的东西。虽然他不是我们班的尖子生，但他比任何人都努力。我从他身上学到了我们永远不应该看不起自己。他还每天照顾教室里的植物。在我眼中，他的责任感真的很重要。这就是为什么他值得被采访。 希望我的推荐能被考虑。 此致 李华 范文 6 Dear Editor, I am pleased to recommend the top student in our class, Chen Wei, for this column. He is a boy who not only gets good grades but also helps others in a friendly way. Whenever someone asks him a question, he explains it carefully until we fully understand. Because he never shows off, everyone likes to stay with him. I think he has realized that real success means making the whole team better. He takes care of our study group and encourages us to work as a team. His responsibility sets a good example for all of us. I hope my recommendation will be considered. Yours, Li Hua 【好词汇】 · be pleased to - 高兴做某事 · not only… but also… - 不仅…而且… · in a friendly way - 以友好的方式 · explain - 解释 · fully - 完全地 · show off - 炫耀 · real success - 真正的成功 · set a good example - 树立好榜样 【写作句子结构】 · He is a boy who not only does sth but also does sth. · 翻译：他是一个不仅做某事而且做某事的男孩。 · 例句：She is a girl who not only sings well but also dances beautifully. · 例句翻译：她是一个不仅唱得好而且跳舞优美的女孩。 · Whenever someone does sth, he does sth until we fully understand. · 翻译：每当有人做某事时，他就做某事直到我们完全理解。 · 例句：Whenever someone makes a mistake, he points it out until we fully understand. · 例句翻译：每当有人犯错时，他就指出来直到我们完全理解。 · Because he never shows off, everyone likes to do sth. · 翻译：因为他从不炫耀，每个人都喜欢做某事。 · 例句：Because he never complains, everyone likes to work with him. · 例句翻译：因为他从不抱怨，每个人都喜欢和他一起工作。 · 某人的 responsibility sets a good example for + 某人 · 翻译：某人的责任感为…树立了好榜样。 · 例句：Her kindness sets a good example for the younger students. · 例句翻译：她的善良为低年级学生树立了好榜样。 【范文翻译】 尊敬的编辑： 我很高兴推荐我们班成绩最好的同学陈伟参加这个专栏。他是一个不仅成绩好而且以友好的方式帮助别人的男孩。每当有人问他问题，他都会仔细解释直到我们完全理解。因为他从不炫耀，每个人都喜欢和他待在一起。我认为他已经意识到真正的成功意味着让整个团队变得更好。他照顾我们的学习小组并鼓励我们团队合作。他的责任感为我们所有人树立了好榜样。 希望我的推荐能被考虑。 此致 李华 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $