2026年北京市朝阳区九年级英语二模写作范文

该初中英语中考复习讲义聚焦书面表达核心考点，覆盖主题确立、经历叙述、感悟提炼等中考考查要求，通过“主题解析-范文示范-词汇句型梳理-结构归纳”四环节设计，帮助学生构建“喻体选择-经历描述-成长感悟”写作框架，突破内容连贯与语言表达难点。 亮点在于“主题情境化”与“语言结构化”教学策略，如以“成长比喻”为情境，提供向日葵、小火苗等6类喻体范文，结合提示词语设计“经历-感悟”模板，通过“With + 名词, + 主语 + made + 形容词 + 名词”等句型训练，提升学生语言能力与思维品质。配套“好词汇”与“句子结构”解析，配合即时仿写练习，确保高效复习，教师可据此精准把控写作教学节奏，助力学生提升应考能力。

2026年北京市朝阳区九年级英语二模写作范文 书面表达题目： 成长路上，每个人都有自己独特的样子。有人觉得自己像一缕风，有人像一簇小火苗，还有人像一朵向日葵。你觉得自己像什么？ 假设你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展“成长加油站”活动，计划在公众号做一期以“I Am Like ______”为主题的推送，现面向全校征集留言。请结合一段真实的成长经历，说明你为什么觉得自己像它，并分享你的成长感悟。 提示词语： · sunshine, warmth, encourage, learning methods, make progress 提示信息： · What do you think you are like during your growth? · What experience makes you have such a feeling? I Am Like________ I am like ___________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作范文 (1) 范文 1 I Am Like a Sunflower I am like a sunflower. Last term, I felt very sad because my math grades were always low. My teacher noticed my problem and encouraged me to use new learning methods. She told me that sunshine can help sunflowers grow. Just as sunflowers turn towards the sun, I turned towards her warmth and help. With her encouragement, I made great progress in math. Now I understand that when we face difficulties, we should always look for the sunshine around us. 【好词汇】 · noticed - 注意到 · encouraged - 鼓励 · learning methods - 学习方法 · warmth - 温暖 · progress - 进步 · face difficulties - 面对困难 · look for - 寻找 · turn towards - 转向 【写作句子结构】 · ... felt + 形容词 + because + 句子 · 翻译：……感到……因为…… · 例句：I felt very sad because my math grades were always low. · 例句翻译：我感到非常难过，因为我的数学成绩一直很低。 · Just as + 句子 A, + 主语 + turned towards + 名词 · 翻译：正如……一样，……转向了…… · 例句：Just as sunflowers turn towards the sun, I turned towards her warmth. · 例句翻译：正如向日葵转向太阳一样，我转向了她的温暖。 · With + 名词, + 主语 + made + 形容词 + 名词 · 翻译：在……下，某人取得了……的…… · 例句：With her encouragement, I made great progress in math. · 例句翻译：在她的鼓励下，我在数学上取得了很大进步。 · ... understand that + 句子 · 翻译：……明白…… · 例句：Now I understand that we should always look for the sunshine. · 例句翻译：现在我明白了我们应该总是去寻找阳光。 【范文翻译】 我像一朵向日葵。上学期，我感到非常难过，因为我的数学成绩一直很低。我的老师注意到了我的问题，并鼓励我使用新的学习方法。她告诉我阳光可以帮助向日葵生长。正如向日葵转向太阳一样，我转向了她的温暖和帮助。在她的鼓励下，我在数学上取得了很大进步。现在我明白了，当我们面对困难时，我们应该总是去寻找身边的阳光。 (2) 范文 2 I Am Like a Small Flame I am like a small flame. Last year, I joined the school running race. Although I was not the fastest, I decided not to give up. Every time I wanted to stop, a small flame inside me kept burning. My best friend ran beside me and shouted that I could do it. That warmth made me feel stronger. I finally finished the race. From this experience, I learned that even a small flame can light up the darkness if it never dies out. 【好词汇】 · decided not to - 决定不 · give up - 放弃 · kept burning - 一直燃烧 · shouted - 喊叫 · warmth - 温暖 · finally - 最后 · light up - 照亮 · dies out - 熄灭 (可以用goes out来代替) 【写作句子结构】 · Although + 句子 A, + 主语 + decided + 不定式 · 翻译：虽然……，……决定…… · 例句：Although I was not the fastest, I decided not to give up. · 例句翻译：虽然我不是最快的，但我决定不放弃。 · Every time + 句子 A, + 名词 + kept + 动词ing · 翻译：每次……，……一直…… · 例句：Every time I wanted to stop, a small flame inside me kept burning. · 例句翻译：每次我想停下来的时候，我内心的一簇小火苗一直在燃烧。 · ... learned that + 句子 · 翻译：……明白了…… · 例句：I learned that even a small flame can light up the darkness. · 例句翻译：我明白了即使是一簇小火苗也能照亮黑暗。 · if + 句子 A, + 主语 + can + 动词 · 翻译：如果……，……就能…… · 例句：It can light up the darkness if it never dies out. · 例句翻译：如果它永不熄灭，它就能照亮黑暗。 【范文翻译】 我像一簇小火苗。去年，我参加了学校跑步比赛。虽然我不是最快的，但我决定不放弃。每次我想停下来的时候，我内心的一簇小火苗一直在燃烧。我最好的朋友跑在我旁边，大喊着我能行。那份温暖让我感觉更强大了。我最终完成了比赛。从这次经历中，我明白了即使是一簇小火苗也能照亮黑暗，如果它永不熄灭的话。 (3) 范文 3 I Am Like a Soft Wind I am like a wind. When I was in Grade 8, I often helped my deskmate with her English. She felt nervous before exams, so I always told her to stay cool just like a soft wind. One day, she thanked me and said that my words made her feel relaxed. I realized that a wind does not need to be strong. It only needs to bring warmth to others. Now I am happy to be a wind in my friends lives. 【好词汇】 · helped ... with - 帮助……做…… · deskmate - 同桌 · nervous - 紧张的 · stay cool - 保持冷静 · relaxed - 放松的 · bring comfort - 带来安慰 · in my friends lives - 在我朋友的生活中 【写作句子结构】 · When + 句子 A, + 主语 + often + 动词过去式 · 翻译：当……时，……经常…… · 例句：When I was in Grade 8, I often helped my deskmate with her English. · 例句翻译：当我在八年级时，我经常帮助我的同桌学英语。 · ... told her to + 动词原形 + just like + 名词 · 翻译：……告诉她去……就像……一样 · 例句：I always told her to stay cool just like a soft wind. · 例句翻译：我总是告诉她像一阵温柔的风一样保持冷静。 · ... realized that + 句子 · 翻译：……意识到…… · 例句：I realized that a wind does not need to be strong. · 例句翻译：我意识到一阵风不需要很强劲。 · It only needs to + 动词原形 · 翻译：它只需要…… · 例句：It only needs to bring warmth to others. · 例句翻译：它只需要给别人带来温暖。 【范文翻译】 我像一阵轻柔的风。当我在八年级时，我经常帮助我的同桌学英语。她在考试前感到紧张，所以我总是告诉她像一阵温柔的风一样保持冷静。有一天，她感谢了我，并说我的话让她感到放松。我意识到一阵风不需要很强劲。它只需要给别人带来温暖。现在我很高兴成为朋友们生活中的一阵风。 (4) 范文 4 I Am Like a Tree I am like a tree. Three years ago, I did not know how to study well. My grades were like a small tree in a storm. Then my mother taught me some useful learning methods. She said that a tree grows slowly but never stops. I followed her advice and kept practicing every day. Each time I made a little progress, I felt my roots growing deeper. Now I have become a stronger tree. My growth taught me that patience is the key to success. 【好词汇】 · did not know how to - 不知道如何 · in a storm - 在风暴中 · useful - 有用的 · followed her advice - 听从了她的建议 · kept practicing - 坚持练习 · roots - 根 · patience - 耐心 · the key to success - 成功的关键 【写作句子结构】 · 主语 + did not know how to + 动词原形 · 翻译：……不知道如何…… · 例句：I did not know how to study well. · 例句翻译：我不知道如何学好。 · Each time + 主语 + made + 名词, + 主语 + felt + 名词 + 形容词 · 翻译：每次……取得……，……感觉……越来越…… · 例句：Each time I made a little progress, I felt my roots growing deeper. · 例句翻译：每次我取得一点进步，我就感觉我的根扎得更深。 · ... taught me that + 句子 · 翻译：……教会我…… · 例句：My growth taught me that patience is the key to success. · 例句翻译：我的成长教会我耐心是成功的关键。 · keep + 动词ing · 翻译：一直…… · 例句：A tree keeps growing without stopping. · 例句翻译：一棵树一直不停地生长。 【范文翻译】 我像一棵树。三年前，我不知道如何学好。我的成绩就像风暴中的一棵小树。然后我的妈妈教了我一些有用的学习方法。她说一棵树生长得很慢但从不停止。我听从了她的建议并且每天都坚持练习。每次我取得一点进步，我就感觉我的根扎得更深。现在我已经变成了一棵更强壮的树。我的成长教会我耐心是成功的关键。 (5) 范文 5 I Am Like a Star I am like a star. In the past, I was a shy boy who never raised my hand in class. I thought I was too small to be seen. Then one day, my English teacher asked me a question. I answered it correctly. She smiled and said that every star shines at the right time. Those words encouraged me a lot. Since then, I have tried to be more active. I realize that even a tiny star can give light if it believes in itself. 【好词汇】 · raised my hand - 举手 · too ... to - 太……而不能 · answered correctly - 回答正确 · shines - 发光 · at the right time - 在适当的时候 · encouraged me a lot - 极大地鼓励了我 · since then - 从那时起 · believes in itself - 相信自己 【写作句子结构】 · ... who never + 动词过去式 + 介词短语 · 翻译：……一个从不……的…… · 例句：I was a shy boy who never raised my hand in class. · 例句翻译：我是一个在课堂上从不举手的害羞男孩。 · too + 形容词 + to + 动词原形 · 翻译：太……而不能…… · 例句：I thought I was too small to be seen. · 例句翻译：我以为我太小了以至于不能被看见。 · ... said that + 句子 · 翻译：……说…… · 例句：She said that every star shines at the right time. · 例句翻译：她说每颗星星都会在它自己的时间里发光。 · even + 名词 + can + 动词 + if + 句子 · 翻译：即使……也能……如果…… · 例句：Even a tiny star can give light if it believes in itself. · 例句翻译：即使一颗小小的星星也能发光，如果它相信自己。 【范文翻译】 我像一颗星星。在过去，我是一个在课堂上从不举手的害羞男孩。我以为我太小了以至于不能被看见。然后有一天，我的英语老师问了我一个问题。我回答正确了。她笑了，并说每颗星星都会在适当的时候发光。那些话极大地鼓励了我。从那时起，我努力变得更加积极。我意识到即使是一颗小小的星星也能发光，如果它相信自己。 (6) 范文 6 I Am Like Sunshine I am like sunshine. Last winter, my friend Lily was upset because she failed the exam. I decided to cheer her up. I shared my learning methods with her and studied together every afternoon. I told her that failure is just a cloud. Sunshine always appears after the cloud. Slowly, she became happy again and her grades improved. Seeing her smile made me feel warm inside. I learned that when we share our sunshine with others, we become warmer ourselves. 【好词汇】 · was upset - 很难过 · failed - 不及格 · cheer her up - 让她高兴起来 · shared ... with - 与……分享 · studied together - 一起学习 · appears - 出现 · slowly - 慢慢地 · became warm inside - 内心变温暖 【写作句子结构】 · ... decided to + 动词原形 · 翻译：……决定…… · 例句：I decided to cheer her up. · 例句翻译：我决定让她高兴起来。 · ... told her that + 句子 · 翻译：……告诉她…… · 例句：I told her that failure is just a cloud. · 例句翻译：我告诉她失败只是一朵云。 · Seeing + 名词 + made + 主语 + feel + 形容词 · 翻译：看到……让……感到…… · 例句：Seeing her smile made me feel warm inside. · 例句翻译：看到她的微笑让我内心感到温暖。 · When + 句子 A, + 主语 + become + 比较级 · 翻译：当……时，……变得更…… · 例句：When we share our sunshine with others, we become warmer ourselves. · 例句翻译：当我们与他人分享我们的阳光时，我们自己变得更温暖。 【范文翻译】 我像阳光。去年冬天，我的朋友莉莉因为考试不及格而很难过。我决定让她高兴起来。我和她分享了我的学习方法，并且每天下午一起学习。我告诉她失败只是一朵云。阳光总是出现在云朵之后。慢慢地，她又变得开心了，她的成绩也提高了。看到她的微笑让我内心感到温暖。我明白了，当我们与他人分享我们的阳光时，我们自己也会变得更温暖。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $