内容正文:
Unit 4 The art of having fun
同步写作课讲义-外研版七年级下册
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话题解读
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本单元以“娱乐活动”为话题,说明了娱乐活动对人们生活的意义和重要性。与其相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面:
①介绍自己最喜欢的休闲娱乐活动;
②介绍合理的休闲娱乐活动对自己的影响;
③介绍不合理的娱乐活动给生活和学习带来的负面影响;
④介绍中学生应如何平衡学习和娱乐活动。
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写作任务
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①介绍自己最喜欢的休闲娱乐活动;
②介绍合理的休闲娱乐活动对自己的影响;
③介绍不合理的娱乐活动给生活和学习带来的负面影响;
④介绍中学生应如何平衡学习和娱乐活动。
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审题指导
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假如你是李华,你最近加入了Healthy living社团,社团组织大家在社团活动日分享自己最喜欢的娱乐活动,请你以“My favourite activity for fun”为题写一篇发言稿。
提示:1.最喜欢的娱乐活动是什么;
2.它对你产生了哪些影响(至少三点);
3.鼓励大家寻找自己喜欢的娱乐活动。
要求:1.包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
2.不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My favourite activity for fun
Hi, everyone. Today I want to introduce my favourite activity for fun.
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审主题:介绍娱乐活动
审人称:以第一人称为主
审时态:一般现在时
审体裁:应用文
审要点:娱乐活动的名称、对你的影响、鼓励大家寻找喜欢的娱乐活动等
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写作框架
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素材宝库
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词汇积累
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娱乐活动
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take a trip 旅行
read books 读书
play computer games 玩电脑游戏
play basketball 打篮球
surf the Internet 上网
jog 慢跑
go hiking 远足
listen to the music听音乐
watch TV 看电视
do sport 做运动
do voluntary work 做义工
go to the cinema 去看电影
play chess 下棋
影响
be good for our physical and mental health 对我们的身心健康有好处
develop our creativity 培养创造性
strengthen the body 强身健体
relax the mind 放松心情
build up willpower 增强意志力
relieve/reduce stress 缓解压力
broaden one’s horizons 开阔视野
建议
keep a balance between study and fun平衡学习和娱乐
spend time with your family 和家人共度时光
enjoy life享受生活
have fun 玩得开心
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句型积累
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开头句
...is my favourite activity for fun because...……是我最喜欢的娱乐活动,因为……
It’s of great importance to do sth. 做某事很重要。
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
中间句
1.某活动的正面影响
It can increase my knowledge of the world and broaden my horizons.它能增加我对世界的了解,拓宽我的眼界。
It can make me relaxed and full of energy.它能让我感到放松、精力充沛。
It is good to find a way out of boring life by...通过……来摆脱枯燥的生活是很不错的。
It is beneficial to both our physical and mental health.它对我们的身心健康都有好处。
2.某活动的负面影响
It’s a waste of time.它很浪费时间。
Too much fun also makes Jack a dull boy!玩得太多也会让人变傻!
结尾句
Fun is important in a number of ways. Don’t forget to take some time out to have fun and enjoy life!娱乐在很多方面都很重要。别忘记抽出一些时间去娱乐,享受生活!
Work hard and play hard.努力学习,尽情玩耍。
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My favourite activity for fun
Hi, everyone. Today I want to introduce my favourite activity for fun. I like reading in my spare time because it benefits me a lot in different ways.
To begin with, it can increase my knowledge of the world and broaden my horizons. I have learned a lot from different books. What’s more, reading is a good way to relax.When reading, I often get lost in the magic world.Finally, it’s good for the mental health. Just like the saying goes, “The reading of all good books is like a conversation with the finest minds of past centuries.” Reading makes me wise.
In a word, it’s necessary to have an activity for fun. I hope all of you can find your own favourite activity for fun. Don’t forget to work hard and play hard.
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变式提升训练
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1.(25-26七年级下·内蒙古鄂尔多斯·期中)每个人都有自己喜欢的趣味活动,现在手机和网络娱乐、短视频、自媒体深受同学们喜爱,手机在我们生活中扮演重要角色。平时你喜欢哪些手机娱乐活动;花费太多时间在上面对你的生活、学习有什么影响;你打算怎样合理平衡学习和娱乐。请你以“Having fun in a balanced way”为题,根据提示写一篇短文:
1.What fun activities do you like to do on the phone?
2.How does this affect your life?
3.What can you do to solve the problem?
写作要求
1.词数80词左右;
2.语句通顺,时态正确,条理清晰,书写规范;
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Having fun in a balanced way
Now mobile phones play an important role in our life.
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例文
Having fun in a balanced way
Now mobile phones play an important role in our life. I like to watch short videos and chat with friends. Sometimes I also play online games.
However, too much time on these activities has bad effects. I often stay up late and feel tired in class the next day. My eyesight also gets worse.
To solve this problem, I will make a clear timetable. I will allow only one hour of phone time each day. I will do sports or read books instead. A balanced life is healthier and happier. I will try my best to follow this plan.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文(问题与解决方案),用一般现在时
明确要点:喜欢的手机娱乐活动(看短视频、和朋友聊天、玩在线游戏)、对生活学习的影响(熬夜、上课犯困、视力变差)、解决方法(制定清晰的时间表、每天只允许一小时手机时间、用运动或读书替代)
确定人称:第一人称(I)
注意事项:需包含所有要点,词数80左右,不得出现真实信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总述手机在生活中扮演重要角色,介绍喜欢的手机娱乐活动(看短视频、和朋友聊天、玩在线游戏)
主体段:阐述花费太多时间在手机娱乐上的负面影响(熬夜、上课犯困、视力变差)
结尾段:提出解决方法(制定清晰的时间表、每天只允许一小时手机时间、用运动或读书替代)并表达决心(平衡的生活更健康快乐,努力遵循计划)
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:喜欢的手机娱乐活动
活动一:watch short videos and chat with friends/enjoy watching funny clips and texting friends等
活动二:play online games/play some mobile games in my spare time等
要点二:负面影响
影响一:stay up late and feel tired in class the next day/go to bed late and feel sleepy during lessons等
影响二:my eyesight also gets worse/my vision becomes poorer as a result等
要点三:解决方法
方法一:make a clear timetable/create a strict daily schedule等
方法二:allow only one hour of phone time each day/limit phone use to just one hour daily等
方法三:do sports or read books instead/replace screen time with physical activity or reading等
要点四:决心与期望
表达:A balanced life is healthier and happier/Keeping a good balance leads to better health and happiness等
决心:I will try my best to follow this plan/I will strictly stick to this plan等
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(25-26七年级下·江苏南京·期中)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter下个月要来中国学习,他对中国传统艺术很感兴趣。请你写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加你们学校下周举办的“传统艺术周”活动。内容包括:
1. 活动时间:下周周一至周五
2. 活动地点:学校礼堂和艺术教室
3. 活动内容:剪纸、陶艺、中国结制作等课程,以及传统艺术展
4. 你的建议
要求:
1. 词数70左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to China next month.
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I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to China next month. I have some good news for you. Our school will hold a Traditional Art Week from next Monday to Friday in the school hall and art rooms.
There will be many interesting activities, such as paper-cutting, pottery making and Chinese knot weaving lessons. You can learn to make your own works and see a traditional art show. I think you should take the pottery lesson because you like making things with your hands.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(邮件/邀请信)
明确要点:介绍活动时间、地点;说明活动内容;给出参加建议;表达期待
确定人称:第一人称(I)和第二人称(you)
注意事项:词数70左右;包含所有要点;不得出现真实姓名和校名;开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接已给开头,引出活动邀请
主体段:介绍活动的时间、地点与内容并给出针对性建议
结尾段:承接已给结尾,表达期待
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:开头引入
话题引入:I’m glad to hear that you will come to China next month. I have some good news for you./Since you’re interested in traditional Chinese art, I’d like to invite you to our school’s activity.
要点二:活动时间与地点
时间说明:Our school will hold a Traditional Art Week from next Monday to Friday./The activity will run from next Monday to Friday.
地点说明:It will take place in the school hall and art rooms./We’ll have the activities in the school hall and art classrooms.
要点三:活动内容介绍
课程内容:There will be many interesting activities, such as paper-cutting, pottery making and Chinese knot weaving lessons./You can take part in classes like paper-cutting, pottery making and Chinese knot weaving.
展览内容:You can learn to make your own works and see a traditional art show./There will also be a traditional art exhibition with many beautiful works on display.
要点四:给出参加建议
建议说明:I think you should take the pottery lesson because you like making things with your hands./I recommend you join the pottery class, since you enjoy making things by hand.
要点五:结尾期待
期待表达:I’m looking forward to your coming./I hope you can join us and have a great time!
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(25-26七年级下·河北保定·期中)假如你是Li Ming,你们学校上周开展了一次有意义的课后活动——为山区贫困儿童募捐。请你根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,记录这次活动。
要点提示:
1.活动地点:学校操场
2.活动内容:捐钱、捐学习用品
3.参与方式:和朋友一起参加
4.活动结果:募捐到不少钱和学习用品,将会把这些物品寄给山村的贫困孩子
5.你的感受:很开心,收获很多,希望以后多参加此类活动
要求:
1,词数70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
I’m Li Ming. Last Friday afternoon, our school had a meaningful after-school activity.
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I’m Li Ming. Last Friday afternoon, our school had a meaningful after-school activity. We raised money for poor children in the mountains.
The activity was on the school playground. I went there with my friends. We donated some money and school things like notebooks and rulers. Many students joined us, and everyone was kind and helpful.
At last, we raised lots of money and things, which we will send to the children in poor villages. I felt very happy and learned a lot. I hope to join more such activities in the future.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,主要为一般过去时
明确要点:活动地点、活动内容、参与方式、活动结果、感受
确定人称:第一人称(we)
注意事项:不得出现真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明学校举办了一个有意义的活动这一主题
第二段:介绍活动地点、活动内容、参与方式
第三段:介绍活动结果及感受
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:介绍活动地点、活动内容、参与方式
活动地点:the school playground
活动内容:donated some money and school things like notebooks and rulers/raise money and school supplies等
参与方式;went there with my friends/took part in it with my friends等
要点二:活动结果及感受
结果描述:we raised lots of money and things, which we will send to the children in poor villages/collected a lot of money and many school things, which will be sent to the kids soon/got quite a lot of money and school supplies, and these things will be sent to the poor kids soon等
表达感受:felt very happy and learned a lot/hope to join more such activities/hope to take part in more such activities in the future等
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(25-26七年级下·云南楚雄·期中)假如你们学校在“五四”期间举办了精彩的校园文化艺术展演活动,丰富了大家的校园生活。请你根据以下提示,为学校校刊的英文专栏写一篇以“My School Life”为题的短文, 介绍你的校园生活。
要点:
1. 日常的学习生活;
2. 多彩的校园活动(唱歌、跳舞、俱乐部活动等);
3. 你对校园生活的个人感受;
要求:
1.包含以上提示要点,可适当发挥;
2.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少于80词。
3.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称,否则以零分记。
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例文:
My School Life
My school life is busy but colorful. Every day, I have different classes and do homework. They help me learn a lot.
Our school also holds many activities. During the May 4th Youth Day, we had a wonderful art show. Students sang, danced and joined club activities. I took part in a singing group. It was great fun.
I enjoy my school life very much. These activities not only make me relaxed but also help me make more friends. My school life is meaningful and happy.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性记叙文,以一般现在时为主,辅以一般过去时描述活动,语气积极轻松
明确要点:日常学习生活、多彩校园活动、个人感受
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称,内容完整,情感真挚
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,概括校园生活的特点
主体段:分别介绍日常学习生活、多彩的校园活动(含“五四”展演)
结尾段:表达对校园生活的个人感受,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:日常的学习生活
基础表达:have different classes and do homework/learn a lot等
拓展词汇/句式:attend various classes every day/finish homework carefully/develop my knowledge and skills等
要点二:多彩的校园活动
基础表达:had a wonderful art show during the May 4th Youth Day/sang, danced and joined club activities等
拓展词汇/句式:took part in a singing group/participated in dance performances/joined different clubs after class等
要点三:对校园生活的个人感受
基础表达:enjoy my school life very much/meaningful and happy等
拓展词汇/句式:make me relaxed and outgoing/help me make more friends/become a better version of myself等
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(25-26七年级下·广东江门·期中)娱乐活动是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分,能让我们在忙碌中得到放松和快乐。但过度地玩耍又会让我们的生活受到影响。只有适度地娱乐才能身心健康。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,用英文写一篇短文进行投稿。
写作要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯,注意分段,词数70左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Having fun plays an important role in our lives.
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【答案】例文
Having fun plays an important role in our lives. First, it can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Then, it keeps us feeling youthful. Lastly, having fun is a good way to connect with others.
However, too much fun is like a time-eating monster. It will eat away our time, and we will become couch potatoes with sore necks and dry eyes.
So, we need to properly plan and balance our work and fun. We should control our fun time and focus on study first. Then we can study better.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(投稿短文)
明确要点:阐述娱乐活动的重要性(至少 3 点);说明过度娱乐的不利影响;给出平衡学习与娱乐的建议(至少 2 点)
确定人称:第一人称复数(we)
注意事项:词数70左右;包含思维导图所有要点;不得照抄原文;不得出现真实学校和姓名;开头已给出,不计入总词数
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接已给开头,引出娱乐活动的话题
主体段 1:阐述娱乐活动的重要性(3点)
主体段 2:说明过度娱乐的不利影响
结尾段:给出平衡学习与娱乐的建议,总结观点
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:开头引入(承接已给开头)
话题引入:Having fun plays an important role in our lives./Entertainment is a necessary part of our daily life.
要点二:娱乐活动的重要性(至少3点)
重要性 1:First, it can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits./It helps us relax and get rid of stress.
重要性 2:Then, it keeps us feeling youthful./It keeps us energetic and happy.
重要性 3:At last, having fun is a good way to connect with others./It also helps us build relationships with friends.
要点三:过度娱乐的不利影响
不利影响 1:However, too much fun is like a time-eating monster. It will eat away our time./Spending too much time on fun activities wastes our study time.
不利影响 2:We become couch potatoes with sore necks and dry eyes./It also harms our health, causing problems like sore necks and tired eyes.
要点四:平衡学习与娱乐的建议(至少2点)
建议 1:So, we need to properly plan our work and fun./We should make a plan to balance study and entertainment.
建议 2:We should control our fun time and focus on study first./We should arrange our time well so that fun doesn’t affect our studies.
结尾总结:Then we can study better./Only in this way can we keep healthy and study well.
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(25-26七年级下·湖南衡阳·期中)现在是课外活动时间,看看你的同学们都正在做什么吧!请根据表格中的信息提示写一篇英语短文,描述你们的课外活动,并谈一谈你的感想。
Name
Activity
Place
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和同学聊天
under the tree
Lucy
弹钢琴
in the music room
Lily
写作业
in the classroom
John and Peter
打篮球
on the playground
Alice
阅读
in the reading room
注意:1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2.词数80左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Now class is over. It’s time for after-school activities. Let’s see what my classmates are doing!
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Now class is over. It’s time for after-school activities. Let’s see what my classmates are doing!
I am chatting happily with my classmates under the big tree. Lucy is playing the piano beautifully in the music room. She has great talent for music. Lily concentrates on finishing her homework quietly in the classroom. John and Peter play basketball excitedly on the playground. Alice enjoys reading her favorite storybook in the reading room.
We take part in different interesting activities in our free time. These wonderful moments make our school life lively, happy and truly meaningful.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:材料作文,用一般现在时为主。
明确要点:描述课外活动各个同学的具体做什么这一内容展开
确定人称:第一人称和第三人称(I/we/she/he)
注意事项:词数80左右;内容包括提示中所有的写作要点;条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:介绍已经下课处于课外活动时间,引出话题为介绍各个同学的具体活动做铺垫
主体段:详细阐述每个同学的具体活动
结尾段:总结课外活动的多样性和意义,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:各个同学的具体活动内容
作者自己:I am chatting happily with my classmates under the big tree. /Under the huge tree, I have a pleasant talk with my schoolmates./ I spend nice time chatting and laughing with classmates under the big tree.
Lucy同学:Lucy is playing the piano beautifully in the music room./ Lucy gives a wonderful piano performance in the music room./ It is Lucy who is playing the piano beautifully in the music room.
Lily同学: Lily concentrates on finishing her homework quietly in the classroom./ Lily devotes herself to doing homework silently inside the classroom./ Lily stays calm and keeps working on her homework carefully.
John and Peter同学:John and Peter play basketball excitedly on the playground./ On the sports field, the two boys play basketball with high spirits./ John and Peter have great fun playing basketball on the playground.
Alice同学:Alice enjoys reading her favorite storybook in the reading room./ Alice spends pleasant time reading the storybook she likes best./ Alice loses herself in her beloved storybook in the reading room.
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(25-26七年级下·安徽铜陵·期中)近几年,我们学校课间休息时间统一从10分钟延长至15分钟,每天上午下午还空出大课间时间,让孩子们充分得到休息放松。为了把课间休息时间充分利用起来,校刊英语专栏以 “活力课间,健康成长” 为主题,面向学生征文,请你根据以下要求,用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。
● 介绍同学们平时有哪些课间活动及你的感受;
● 你对课间活动的建议。
要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 包含要点的所有内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Longer breaks and healthier growth
The colorful activities during the break help make students healthier and stronger.
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Longer breaks and healthier growth
The colorful activities during the break help make students healthier and stronger.
During breaks, most students play sports like basketball or skip rope on the playground. Some choose to chat with classmates or read books in the classroom. These activities help us relax after classes and build better relationships with each other. I feel happy and energetic after every break.
To make breaks more meaningful, I hope we can have more group games or small competitions. Also, we should remember to keep quiet in the hallway and not run too fast. Let’s enjoy our breaks and grow healthily!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:英语短文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:①同学们的课间活动+个人感受②对课间活动的建议
确定人称:第一人称(I/we/my)
注意事项:词数80左右,不透露真实姓名及学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出开篇句,承接总起,引出课间活动
主体段:介绍同学们的课间活动类型,表达自身感受
结尾段:提出合理的课间活动建议,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:课间活动及个人感受
活动:play sports/chat with classmates/read books/take a walk/do eye exercises
感受:happy/energetic/relaxed/build better relationships/improve relationships
要点二:课间活动建议
活动:group games/small competitions/outdoor activities
建议:keep quiet/not run too fast/keep safe
$Unit 4 The art of having fun
同步写作课讲义-外研版七年级下册
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话题解读
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本单元以“娱乐活动”为话题,说明了娱乐活动对人们生活的意义和重要性。与其相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面:
①介绍自己最喜欢的休闲娱乐活动;
②介绍合理的休闲娱乐活动对自己的影响;
③介绍不合理的娱乐活动给生活和学习带来的负面影响;
④介绍中学生应如何平衡学习和娱乐活动。
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写作任务
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①介绍自己最喜欢的休闲娱乐活动;
②介绍合理的休闲娱乐活动对自己的影响;
③介绍不合理的娱乐活动给生活和学习带来的负面影响;
④介绍中学生应如何平衡学习和娱乐活动。
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审题指导
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假如你是李华,你最近加入了Healthy living社团,社团组织大家在社团活动日分享自己最喜欢的娱乐活动,请你以“My favourite activity for fun”为题写一篇发言稿。
提示:1.最喜欢的娱乐活动是什么;
2.它对你产生了哪些影响(至少三点);
3.鼓励大家寻找自己喜欢的娱乐活动。
要求:1.包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
2.不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My favourite activity for fun
Hi, everyone. Today I want to introduce my favourite activity for fun.
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审主题:介绍娱乐活动
审人称:以第一人称为主
审时态:一般现在时
审体裁:应用文
审要点:娱乐活动的名称、对你的影响、鼓励大家寻找喜欢的娱乐活动等
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写作框架
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素材宝库
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词汇积累
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娱乐活动
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take a trip 旅行
read books 读书
play computer games 玩电脑游戏
play basketball 打篮球
surf the Internet 上网
jog 慢跑
go hiking 远足
listen to the music听音乐
watch TV 看电视
do sport 做运动
do voluntary work 做义工
go to the cinema 去看电影
play chess 下棋
影响
be good for our physical and mental health 对我们的身心健康有好处
develop our creativity 培养创造性
strengthen the body 强身健体
relax the mind 放松心情
build up willpower 增强意志力
relieve/reduce stress 缓解压力
broaden one’s horizons 开阔视野
建议
keep a balance between study and fun平衡学习和娱乐
spend time with your family 和家人共度时光
enjoy life享受生活
have fun 玩得开心
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句型积累
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开头句
...is my favourite activity for fun because...……是我最喜欢的娱乐活动,因为……
It’s of great importance to do sth. 做某事很重要。
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
中间句
1.某活动的正面影响
It can increase my knowledge of the world and broaden my horizons.它能增加我对世界的了解,拓宽我的眼界。
It can make me relaxed and full of energy.它能让我感到放松、精力充沛。
It is good to find a way out of boring life by...通过……来摆脱枯燥的生活是很不错的。
It is beneficial to both our physical and mental health.它对我们的身心健康都有好处。
2.某活动的负面影响
It’s a waste of time.它很浪费时间。
Too much fun also makes Jack a dull boy!玩得太多也会让人变傻!
结尾句
Fun is important in a number of ways. Don’t forget to take some time out to have fun and enjoy life!娱乐在很多方面都很重要。别忘记抽出一些时间去娱乐,享受生活!
Work hard and play hard.努力学习,尽情玩耍。
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参考范文
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My favourite activity for fun
Hi, everyone. Today I want to introduce my favourite activity for fun. I like reading in my spare time because it benefits me a lot in different ways.
To begin with, it can increase my knowledge of the world and broaden my horizons. I have learned a lot from different books. What’s more, reading is a good way to relax.When reading, I often get lost in the magic world.Finally, it’s good for the mental health. Just like the saying goes, “The reading of all good books is like a conversation with the finest minds of past centuries.” Reading makes me wise.
In a word, it’s necessary to have an activity for fun. I hope all of you can find your own favourite activity for fun. Don’t forget to work hard and play hard.
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写作拓展
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变式提升训练
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1.(25-26七年级下·内蒙古鄂尔多斯·期中)每个人都有自己喜欢的趣味活动,现在手机和网络娱乐、短视频、自媒体深受同学们喜爱,手机在我们生活中扮演重要角色。平时你喜欢哪些手机娱乐活动;花费太多时间在上面对你的生活、学习有什么影响;你打算怎样合理平衡学习和娱乐。请你以“Having fun in a balanced way”为题,根据提示写一篇短文:
1.What fun activities do you like to do on the phone?
2.How does this affect your life?
3.What can you do to solve the problem?
写作要求
1.词数80词左右;
2.语句通顺,时态正确,条理清晰,书写规范;
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Having fun in a balanced way
Now mobile phones play an important role in our life.
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(25-26七年级下·江苏南京·期中)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter下个月要来中国学习,他对中国传统艺术很感兴趣。请你写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加你们学校下周举办的“传统艺术周”活动。内容包括:
1. 活动时间:下周周一至周五
2. 活动地点:学校礼堂和艺术教室
3. 活动内容:剪纸、陶艺、中国结制作等课程,以及传统艺术展
4. 你的建议
要求:
1. 词数70左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to China next month.
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I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
(3)
(25-26七年级下·河北保定·期中)假如你是Li Ming,你们学校上周开展了一次有意义的课后活动——为山区贫困儿童募捐。请你根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,记录这次活动。
要点提示:
1.活动地点:学校操场
2.活动内容:捐钱、捐学习用品
3.参与方式:和朋友一起参加
4.活动结果:募捐到不少钱和学习用品,将会把这些物品寄给山村的贫困孩子
5.你的感受:很开心,收获很多,希望以后多参加此类活动
要求:
1,词数70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
I’m Li Ming. Last Friday afternoon, our school had a meaningful after-school activity.
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(25-26七年级下·云南楚雄·期中)假如你们学校在“五四”期间举办了精彩的校园文化艺术展演活动,丰富了大家的校园生活。请你根据以下提示,为学校校刊的英文专栏写一篇以“My School Life”为题的短文, 介绍你的校园生活。
要点:
1. 日常的学习生活;
2. 多彩的校园活动(唱歌、跳舞、俱乐部活动等);
3. 你对校园生活的个人感受;
要求:
1.包含以上提示要点,可适当发挥;
2.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少于80词。
3.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称,否则以零分记。
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(25-26七年级下·广东江门·期中)娱乐活动是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分,能让我们在忙碌中得到放松和快乐。但过度地玩耍又会让我们的生活受到影响。只有适度地娱乐才能身心健康。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,用英文写一篇短文进行投稿。
写作要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯,注意分段,词数70左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Having fun plays an important role in our lives.
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(25-26七年级下·湖南衡阳·期中)现在是课外活动时间,看看你的同学们都正在做什么吧!请根据表格中的信息提示写一篇英语短文,描述你们的课外活动,并谈一谈你的感想。
Name
Activity
Place
I
和同学聊天
under the tree
Lucy
弹钢琴
in the music room
Lily
写作业
in the classroom
John and Peter
打篮球
on the playground
Alice
阅读
in the reading room
注意:1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2.词数80左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Now class is over. It’s time for after-school activities. Let’s see what my classmates are doing!
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(25-26七年级下·安徽铜陵·期中)近几年,我们学校课间休息时间统一从10分钟延长至15分钟,每天上午下午还空出大课间时间,让孩子们充分得到休息放松。为了把课间休息时间充分利用起来,校刊英语专栏以 “活力课间,健康成长” 为主题,面向学生征文,请你根据以下要求,用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。
● 介绍同学们平时有哪些课间活动及你的感受;
● 你对课间活动的建议。
要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 包含要点的所有内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Longer breaks and healthier growth
The colorful activities during the break help make students healthier and stronger.
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