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期末考写作专项・考前速成必刷(新教材外研版)
八年级下册(Units 4-6) 单词 + 句型 + 范文一站式
班级 姓名 学号
[目录]
素材积累 1
一、重点单词(必背) 1
二、重点短语(必背) 2
三、高分句型 万能通用句 3
四、衔接句 3
五、作文结构套句 4
素材小练 4
2.1 单词拼写 4
2.2 短语英汉互译 4
2.3 句型改写 5
2.4 翻译句子 5
写作实操 5
3.1 作文 1:A story of kindness: the help I passed on(善意传递经历) 5
3.2 作文 2:介绍植物探索者胡先骕(人物介绍) 6
3.3 作文 3:介绍运城盐池(自然景点介绍) 7
3.4 作文 4:Living in Harmony with Nature(人与自然和谐共处) 8
素材积累
一、重点单词(必背)
考前特训
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【善意传递】
kindness 善良;善意
patient 耐心的
community 社区
elderly 年老的
meaningful 有意义的
difference 影响;作用
【人物致敬】
explorer 探索者
species 物种
contribution 贡献
dedication 奉献
remarkable 卓越的
identify 鉴定;识别
【自然景点】
scenic 风景优美的
seasonal 季节性的
salty 咸的
float 漂浮
protect 保护
view 景色
【自然共生】
harmony 和谐
resource 资源
ancient 古老的
wisdom 智慧
survive 生存
future 未来
二、重点短语(必背)
【善意传递】
care for others 关爱他人
pass on kindness 传递善意
chat with seniors 陪伴老人聊天
clean up homes 打扫房屋
make a real difference 带来真正的改变
【人物致敬】
dedicate one’s life to 毕生致力于
discover new species 发现新物种
make great contributions to 做出巨大贡献
lay a solid foundation for 为……奠定基础
living fossil 活化石
【自然景点】
change with seasons 随季节变化
colorful mirror 彩色镜面
salt flowers 硝花/盐花
float on water 水上漂浮
follow the rules 遵守规则
【自然共生】
live in harmony with 与……和谐共处
natural resources 自然资源
24 Solar Terms 二十四节气
protect wild animals 保护野生动物
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save water and trees 节水护林
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三、高分句型 万能通用句
【善意传递】
1. Small acts of kindness can warm people’s hearts and brighten the whole community.
微小善举温暖人心、点亮社区。
2. Helping others is one of the most meaningful things in our life.
帮助他人是人生中最有意义的事之一。
3. I believe kindness can be passed on from person to person.
我相信善意可以代代相传。
【人物致敬】
1. He devoted his whole life to the study of Chinese plants.
他毕生致力于中国植物研究。
2. His great achievements have greatly influenced botanical research.
他的伟大成就深刻影响了植物学研究。
3. His spirit of dedication inspires us to keep working hard.
他的奉献精神激励我们不断奋进。
【自然景点】
1. The amazing natural scenery attracts lots of visitors every year.
绝美的自然风光每年吸引无数游客。
2. Different seasons bring different special views of the lake.
四季更迭,湖水景致各不相同。
3. It’s everyone’s duty to protect our precious natural scenery.
保护珍贵自然景观,人人有责。
【自然共生】
1. Nature provides humans with necessary resources to live.
大自然为人类提供生存必需的资源。
2. Ancient Chinese wisdom shows the beauty of living in harmony with nature.
中国古人智慧彰显人与自然共生之美。
3. Small daily actions can better protect our natural environment.
日常微小行动,亦可守护自然环境。
四、衔接句
1. I once took part in a community activity and learned to pass on warmth.
我曾参与社区活动,学会传递温暖。
2. He is a great scientist who has made amazing achievements.
他是一位成就卓越的伟大科学家。
4. This famous scenic spot has special natural features different from others.
这处知名景点拥有与众不同的自然特色。
5. We cannot live without nature, so we must learn to coexist with it.
人类离不开自然,我们必须学会与之共生
五、作文结构套句
【开头】
1. Kindness is the most beautiful warmth in our daily life. 善意是生活中最美的温暖。
2. Hu Xiansu is a remarkable and respectable Chinese plant explorer. 胡先骕是卓越且值得尊敬的中国植物探索家。
3. Yuncheng Salt Lake is a famous and special natural scenic spot. 运城盐池是独特知名的自然景点。
4. It is important for humans to live in harmony with nature. 人与自然和谐共处至关重要。
【中间】
1. First…Then…During the process…Finally… 首先……然后……过程中……最后……
2. He is famous for…He not only… but also… 他因……闻名,不仅……而且……
3. It is special because…What’s more… 它的独特之处在于……此外……
【结尾】
1. I will keep helping others and pass on kindness forever. 我会坚持助人,永远传递善意。
2. We should learn from his spirit and keep exploring. 我们应学习他的精神,勇于探索。
3. Let’s protect the beautiful scenery together. 让我们共同守护美丽景色。
4. Only by protecting nature can we have a better future. 唯有守护自然,方能拥有美好未来。
素材小练
2.1 单词拼写
1. ________(善良) makes our society warmer and better.
2. We should be ________(耐心的) when helping others.
3. He is a famous plant ________(探索者) in China.
4. He discovered many new plant ________(物种).
5. The lake has ________(季节性的) colour changes.
6. People can ________(漂浮) easily on the salty water.
7. We should ________(保护) our natural scenery.
8. Living in ________(和谐) with nature is our goal.
9. Ancient people have great ________(智慧).
10. We must save natural ________(资源).
2.2 短语英汉互译
1. 传递善意 _______________
2. 毕生致力于 _______________
3. 活化石 _______________
4. 随季节变化 _______________
5. 与自然和谐共处 _______________
6. make a real difference _______________
7. lay a solid foundation for _______________
8. salt flowers _______________
9. follow the rules _______________
10. natural resources _______________
2.3 句型改写
1. Kindness is very warm and beautiful.(感叹句)
________ beautiful kindness is!
2. He discovered many new plant species.(一般疑问句)
________ he ________ many new plant species?
3. The lake changes colors with seasons.(否定句)
The lake ________ ________ colors with seasons.
4. Nature gives us air and water.(同义句)
Nature ________ us ________ air and water.
5. Helping others is meaningful.(同义句)
It is ________ to ________ others.
2.4 翻译句子
1. 小小的善举可以给他人带来温暖。
________________________________________
2. 胡先骕为中国植物研究做出了巨大贡献。
________________________________________
3. 运城盐池的景色随季节发生奇妙变化。
________________________________________
4. 我们应该学习古人智慧,与自然和谐共处。
________________________________________
5. 保护自然是每个人的责任。
________________________________________
写作实操
1.关心与帮助他人是构筑温暖社会的重要行为。这份善意的传递需要我们付诸具体的实践。请以 “A story of kindness: the help I passed on” 为题,写一篇英文短文,讲述你传递爱心、帮助他人的一次经历。
提示:
注意:
1. 提供的信息仅供参考使用;
2. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 词数80左右。
A story of kindness: the help I passed on
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.在植物探索的征程中,无数先驱者留下足迹。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,介绍中国植物探索者胡先骕,展现其贡献与精神。
(1) 胡先骕生于1894年;
(2) 他发现许多新物种;
(3) 1948年,他与郑万钧共同鉴定“活化石”水杉 (Metasequoia glyptostroboides Hu et Cheng)
注意:
(1) 词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hu Xiansu is a remarkable Chinese plant explorer.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.运城盐池被誉为“中国死海”,湖水色彩随季节变化,冬季硝花如雪,夏季宛如彩色镜面,是山西独特的自然景观。请你根据以下提示,写一篇短文介绍运城盐池,突出其自然魅力。
内容包括
·What is the natural place and where is it?
·What are its special facts?
·What can people do there and how to protect it?
要求:
1. 需包含以上所有提示内容;
2. 词数不少于80;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
参考词:
Yuncheng Salt Lake, “Dead Sea of China”, salt flowers, content, salt spa bath, scenic area
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4.人与自然和谐共处是人类的共同追求。请以“Living in Harmony with Nature”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈我们应该如何与自然和谐相处。要求:
1. 内容包括:自然对人类的重要性、人类与自然和谐共处的例子 (如二十四节气、坎儿井等) 以及我们可以做的事;
2. 词数80~100左右;
3. 语句通顺,语法正确,条理清晰。
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$ 期末考写作专项・考前速成必刷(新教材外研版)
八年级下册(Units 4-6) 单词 + 句型 + 范文一站式
班级 姓名 学号
[目录]
素材积累 1
一、重点单词(必背) 1
二、重点短语(必背) 2
三、高分句型 万能通用句 2
四、衔接句 3
五、作文结构套句 4
素材小练 4
2.1 单词拼写 4
2.2 短语英汉互译 4
2.3 句型改写 5
2.4 翻译句子 5
写作实操 5
3.1 作文 1:A story of kindness: the help I passed on(善意传递经历) 6
3.2 作文 2:介绍植物探索者胡先骕(人物介绍) 8
3.3 作文 3:介绍运城盐池(自然景点介绍) 10
3.4 作文 4:Living in Harmony with Nature(人与自然和谐共处) 12
素材积累
一、重点单词(必背)
考前特训
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
1 / 12乐思英语
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
【善意传递】
kindness 善良;善意
patient 耐心的
community 社区
elderly 年老的
meaningful 有意义的
difference 影响;作用
【人物致敬】
explorer 探索者
species 物种
contribution 贡献
dedication 奉献
remarkable 卓越的
identify 鉴定;识别
【自然景点】
scenic 风景优美的
seasonal 季节性的
salty 咸的
float 漂浮
protect 保护
view 景色
【自然共生】
harmony 和谐
resource 资源
ancient 古老的
wisdom 智慧
survive 生存
future 未来
二、重点短语(必背)
【善意传递】
care for others 关爱他人
pass on kindness 传递善意
chat with seniors 陪伴老人聊天
clean up homes 打扫房屋
make a real difference 带来真正的改变
【人物致敬】
dedicate one’s life to 毕生致力于
discover new species 发现新物种
make great contributions to 做出巨大贡献
lay a solid foundation for 为……奠定基础
living fossil 活化石
【自然景点】
change with seasons 随季节变化
colorful mirror 彩色镜面
salt flowers 硝花/盐花
float on water 水上漂浮
follow the rules 遵守规则
【自然共生】
live in harmony with 与……和谐共处
natural resources 自然资源
24 Solar Terms 二十四节气
protect wild animals 保护野生动物
考前特训
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save water and trees 节水护林
12 / 12乐思英语
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三、高分句型 万能通用句
【善意传递】
1. Small acts of kindness can warm people’s hearts and brighten the whole community.
微小善举温暖人心、点亮社区。
2. Helping others is one of the most meaningful things in our life.
帮助他人是人生中最有意义的事之一。
3. I believe kindness can be passed on from person to person.
我相信善意可以代代相传。
【人物致敬】
1. He devoted his whole life to the study of Chinese plants.
他毕生致力于中国植物研究。
2. His great achievements have greatly influenced botanical research.
他的伟大成就深刻影响了植物学研究。
3. His spirit of dedication inspires us to keep working hard.
他的奉献精神激励我们不断奋进。
【自然景点】
1. The amazing natural scenery attracts lots of visitors every year.
绝美的自然风光每年吸引无数游客。
2. Different seasons bring different special views of the lake.
四季更迭,湖水景致各不相同。
3. It’s everyone’s duty to protect our precious natural scenery.
保护珍贵自然景观,人人有责。
【自然共生】
1. Nature provides humans with necessary resources to live.
大自然为人类提供生存必需的资源。
2. Ancient Chinese wisdom shows the beauty of living in harmony with nature.
中国古人智慧彰显人与自然共生之美。
3. Small daily actions can better protect our natural environment.
日常微小行动,亦可守护自然环境。
四、衔接句
1. I once took part in a community activity and learned to pass on warmth.
我曾参与社区活动,学会传递温暖。
2. He is a great scientist who has made amazing achievements.
他是一位成就卓越的伟大科学家。
4. This famous scenic spot has special natural features different from others.
这处知名景点拥有与众不同的自然特色。
5. We cannot live without nature, so we must learn to coexist with it.
人类离不开自然,我们必须学会与之共生
五、作文结构套句
【开头】
1. Kindness is the most beautiful warmth in our daily life. 善意是生活中最美的温暖。
2. Hu Xiansu is a remarkable and respectable Chinese plant explorer. 胡先骕是卓越且值得尊敬的中国植物探索家。
3. Yuncheng Salt Lake is a famous and special natural scenic spot. 运城盐池是独特知名的自然景点。
4. It is important for humans to live in harmony with nature. 人与自然和谐共处至关重要。
【中间】
1. First…Then…During the process…Finally… 首先……然后……过程中……最后……
2. He is famous for…He not only… but also… 他因……闻名,不仅……而且……
3. It is special because…What’s more… 它的独特之处在于……此外……
【结尾】
1. I will keep helping others and pass on kindness forever. 我会坚持助人,永远传递善意。
2. We should learn from his spirit and keep exploring. 我们应学习他的精神,勇于探索。
3. Let’s protect the beautiful scenery together. 让我们共同守护美丽景色。
4. Only by protecting nature can we have a better future. 唯有守护自然,方能拥有美好未来。
素材小练
2.1 单词拼写
1. ________(善良) makes our society warmer and better.
2. We should be ________(耐心的) when helping others.
3. He is a famous plant ________(探索者) in China.
4. He discovered many new plant ________(物种).
5. The lake has ________(季节性的) colour changes.
6. People can ________(漂浮) easily on the salty water.
7. We should ________(保护) our natural scenery.
8. Living in ________(和谐) with nature is our goal.
9. Ancient people have great ________(智慧).
10. We must save natural ________(资源).
2.2 短语英汉互译
1. 传递善意 _______________
2. 毕生致力于 _______________
3. 活化石 _______________
4. 随季节变化 _______________
5. 与自然和谐共处 _______________
6. make a real difference _______________
7. lay a solid foundation for _______________
8. salt flowers _______________
9. follow the rules _______________
10. natural resources _______________
2.3 句型改写
1. Kindness is very warm and beautiful.(感叹句)
________ beautiful kindness is!
2. He discovered many new plant species.(一般疑问句)
________ he ________ many new plant species?
3. The lake changes colors with seasons.(否定句)
The lake ________ ________ colors with seasons.
4. Nature gives us air and water.(同义句)
Nature ________ us ________ air and water.
5. Helping others is meaningful.(同义句)
It is ________ to ________ others.
2.4 翻译句子
1. 小小的善举可以给他人带来温暖。
________________________________________
2. 胡先骕为中国植物研究做出了巨大贡献。
________________________________________
3. 运城盐池的景色随季节发生奇妙变化。
________________________________________
4. 我们应该学习古人智慧,与自然和谐共处。
________________________________________
5. 保护自然是每个人的责任。
________________________________________
参考答案
2.1 单词拼写
1. Kindness 2. patient 3. explorer 4. species 5. seasonal
6. float 7. protect 8. harmony 9. wisdom 10. resources
2.2 短语英汉互译
1. pass on kindness 2. dedicate one’s life to 3. living fossil
4. change with seasons 5. live in harmony with nature 6. 产生真正的影响
7. 为……奠定坚实基础 8. 盐花/硝花 9. 遵守规则 10. 自然资源
2.3 句型改写
1. How 2. Did; discover 3. doesn’t change 4. provides; with 5. meaningful; help
2.4 翻译答案
1. Small acts of kindness can bring warmth to others.
2. Hu Xiansu made great contributions to Chinese plant research.
3. The scenery of Yuncheng Salt Lake changes wonderfully with seasons.
4. We should learn from ancient wisdom and live in harmony with nature.
5. It is everyone’s duty to protect nature.
写作实操
1.关心与帮助他人是构筑温暖社会的重要行为。这份善意的传递需要我们付诸具体的实践。请以 “A story of kindness: the help I passed on” 为题,写一篇英文短文,讲述你传递爱心、帮助他人的一次经历。
提示:
注意:
1. 提供的信息仅供参考使用;
2. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 词数80左右。
A story of kindness: the help I passed on
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(1)审题目
主题:讲述自己帮助他人、传递善意的一次具体经历、遇到的困难与个人感悟
文体:记叙文
人称:第一人称
时态:事件用一般过去时,感悟用一般现在时
(2)搭框架
引出话题:Kindness can warm the world and I once passed on my kindness to others.
具体介绍:事件经过 —— I visited elderly neighbours, cleaned their homes and chatted with them.
遇到困难 —— Some elders were shy and hard to communicate with, so I tried to be patient.
个人感悟 —— Small kind acts can make a big difference to others’ lives.
结尾:I will keep helping people and pass on kindness all the time.
(3)参考范文:
A story of kindness: the help I passed on
Caring for others helps build a warmer community. Last Sunday, I visited elderly neighbours with friends. We helped clean their homes, did some shopping, and spent time chatting, playing chess, and teaching them to use phones. At first, some were shy and refused help, and communicating with hearing-impaired seniors required great patience. Seeing their smiles, I learned small acts of kindness can make a real difference. This meaningful experience encouraged me to keep helping others and pass on kindness whenever I can.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文(个人经历类),以一般过去时为主,描述上周日的志愿活动;感受和启示可用一般现在时。
明确要点:探访社区老人,传递善意;帮忙做家务、陪伴聊天、克服沟通障碍、耐心服务;微小善意也能带来温暖,善意可以传递,要持续主动帮助他人。
确定人称:第一人称(I/we/my)
注意事项:不得出现真实姓名、校名等
[第二步:构思布局]
一段式结构:
开头:总起句,引出主题,交代时间、事件背景(和朋友探访社区老人)
主体:具体描述志愿活动的过程、遇到的困难(老人害羞、沟通障碍)以及如何耐心应对
结尾:总结这次经历的感受和学到的道理,升华主题(善意的力量、传递温暖)
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:善举事件
帮助对象:elderly neighbours /the elderly/the disabled/senior citizens /lonely elders /the elderly in my community /aged residents
时间场景:Last Sunday/On a sunny weekend/During the community volunteer activity/In my free time/ Last month
具体行为:clean their homes /tidy their rooms /do some shopping /buy daily necessities /chat with them /play chess /teach them to use mobile phones/read newspapers to them /listen to their life stories
要点二:遇到的困难与应对
困难描述:some were shy and refused help /hearing-impaired seniors /hard to communicate /slow hearing /they were not used to accepting help /felt lonely and quiet /didn’t know how to open up
应对方式:with great patience /talk slowly and clearly /use simple words /repeat things many times
要点三:感受与收获
直接感受:seeing their smiles /their eyes lit up / I felt proud and warm /it was a meaningful experience
意义理解:small acts of kindness can make a real difference /kindness can warm people’s hearts /helping others also makes ourselves happy
升华与展望:encourage me to keep helping others /pass on kindness whenever I can /make the community warmer
2.在植物探索的征程中,无数先驱者留下足迹。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,介绍中国植物探索者胡先骕,展现其贡献与精神。
(1) 胡先骕生于1894年;
(2) 他发现许多新物种;
(3) 1948年,他与郑万钧共同鉴定“活化石”水杉 (Metasequoia glyptostroboides Hu et Cheng)
注意:
(1) 词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hu Xiansu is a remarkable Chinese plant explorer.
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(1)审题目
主题:介绍胡先骕生平、科研贡献、鉴定水杉成就及精神影响
文体:人物说明文
人称:第三人称
时态:一般过去时为主,评价用一般现在时
(2)搭框架
引出话题:Hu Xiansu is a remarkable Chinese plant explorer worthy of our respect.
具体介绍:生平经历 —— He was born in 1894 and devoted his life to plant research.
主要贡献 —— He discovered many new species and laid a foundation for plant study.
重大成就 —— He identified the living fossil Metasequoia glyptostroboides in 1948.
结尾:His dedication spirit always inspires us to study and explore.
(3)参考范文:
Hu Xiansu is a remarkable Chinese plant explorer.
He was born in 1894. He dedicated his life to exploring and studying plants. He travelled across mountains and through forests, enduring harsh conditions to collect specimens. Hu discovered many new plant species and made significant contributions to plant classification in China. His work laid a solid foundation for the understanding of China’s rich plant resources. In 1948, he, together with Zheng Wanjun, identified Metasequoia glyptostroboides Hu et Cheng, the living fossil, which shocked the international botanical community.
Hu Xiansu’s spirit of exploration and dedication continues to inspire generations.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:人物介绍类作文
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主
③提示:根据所给三点信息介绍胡先骕,需适当补充细节,保持连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:承接开头句,介绍其出生年份及总体贡献。
第二步:具体说明其发现新物种和鉴定水杉的成就。
第三步:总结其科学精神或影响。
[亮点词汇]
①explorer探索者
②discovered发现
③a solid foundation一个坚固的基础
④the living fossil活化石
[高分句型]
①Hu discovered many new plant species and made significant contributions to plant classification in China. (运用了and连接的并列谓语动词)
②..., which shocked the international botanical community.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.运城盐池被誉为“中国死海”,湖水色彩随季节变化,冬季硝花如雪,夏季宛如彩色镜面,是山西独特的自然景观。请你根据以下提示,写一篇短文介绍运城盐池,突出其自然魅力。
内容包括
·What is the natural place and where is it?
·What are its special facts?
·What can people do there and how to protect it?
要求:
1. 需包含以上所有提示内容;
2. 词数不少于80;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
参考词:
Yuncheng Salt Lake, “Dead Sea of China”, salt flowers, content, salt spa bath, scenic area
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(1)审题目
主题:介绍运城盐池位置、别称、季节特色、游玩项目及保护方式
文体:景物说明文
人称:第三人称、第一人称复数
时态:一般现在时
(2)搭框架
引出话题:Yuncheng Salt Lake is a famous special scenic spot in southern Shanxi.
具体介绍:基本信息 —— It is known as the “Dead Sea of China” for its high salt content.
特色景观 —— It looks like a colorful mirror in summer and has white salt flowers in winter.
游玩与保护 —— Visitors can enjoy salt baths and we should protect it by following rules.
结尾:Let’s work together to keep this beautiful scenery forever.
(3)参考范文:
Yuncheng Salt Lake
Yuncheng Salt Lake is a beautiful place in southern Shanxi. It is known as the “Dead Sea of China” because the water is very salty.
What makes it special? The water changes colors with seasons. In summer, it is like a colorful mirror. In winter, white salt flowers shine like snow. Because of the high salt, people float easily on the water. Visitors can enjoy salt baths, take photos, and learn salt history.
We should protect this scenic area. Do not litter or take too much salt. Follow the rules. If everyone helps, Yuncheng Salt Lake will stay beautiful for years.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍运城盐湖的地理位置、“中国死海”的别称及原因,描述其季节变色、易漂浮的特色,列举游客活动,呼吁保护措施
确定人称:第三人称(it/visitors)+第一人称复数(we)
注意事项:结构清晰,突出景点特色,语言生动,环保呼吁具体可行
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段(第一段):介绍运城盐湖的地理位置及“中国死海”的别称与原因
主体段(第二段):阐述景点特色,列举游客活动
结尾段(第三段):呼吁保护,强调共同保护让盐湖长久美丽
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:基本信息
Yuncheng Salt Lake/southern Shanxi/known as “Dead Sea of China”/water is very salty/a famous scenic spot in south Shanxi/called the “Dead Sea of China” for its high salt content等
要点二:景点特色
湖水变色:water changes colors with seasons/summer: colorful mirror/winter: white salt flowers like snow/the lake’s color varies with seasons/in summer, it looks like a colorful mirror; in winter, white salt flowers glow like snow等
漂浮:high salt/people float easily on the water/due to the high salt concentration, people can float on the water without difficulty等
要点三:游客活动
enjoy salt baths/take photos/learn salt history/experience salt baths/take beautiful photos/know about the history of salt production等
要点四:保护呼吁
protect this scenic area/do not litter/take too much salt/follow the rules/stay beautiful/protect this precious scenic spot/never throw rubbish/do not take excessive salt/obey the rules/keep the lake beautiful forever等
4.人与自然和谐共处是人类的共同追求。请以“Living in Harmony with Nature”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈我们应该如何与自然和谐相处。要求:
1. 内容包括:自然对人类的重要性、人类与自然和谐共处的例子 (如二十四节气、坎儿井等) 以及我们可以做的事;
2. 词数80~100左右;
3. 语句通顺,语法正确,条理清晰。
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(1)审题目
主题:阐述自然的重要性、列举人与自然共生案例、写出个人环保行动
文体:议论文说明文
人称:第一人称复数为主
时态:一般现在时
(2)搭框架
引出话题:Nature is essential to human life and we need to live in harmony with it.
具体介绍:自然重要性 —— Nature provides us with air, water and food for living.
共生案例 —— The 24 Solar Terms and karez system show ancient human wisdom.
行动做法 —— We can save resources, plant trees and protect wild animals.
结尾:Protecting nature is protecting our own future.
(3)参考范文:
Living in Harmony with Nature
Nature is important to humans—it provides us with air, water and food. Living in harmony with nature is our common goal.
There are many examples of this. The 24 Solar Terms guide farmers’ work and show ancient Chinese wisdom. The karez system in Turpan, built with hand tools, helps people survive in the hot desert. These examples show how humans and nature can live together well.
To achieve harmony, we should protect natural resources. We can save water, plant trees, and protect animals. By doing so, we can enjoy a better life and keep nature beautiful for future generations.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,以一般现在时为主,阐述与自然和谐共处的方式
明确要点:说明自然的重要性、列举和谐共处的例子、提出可行行动
确定人称:第一人称复数(we)
注意事项:词数80~100左右,语句通顺,语法正确,条理清晰
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明自然对人类的重要性,提出与自然和谐共处的目标
主体段:列举二十四节气、坎儿井等和谐共处的例子
结尾段:说明我们可以采取的行动,总结意义
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:自然重要性
重要性:provides us with air, water and food/supports our life and development
例子:24 Solar Terms guide farmers’ work/karez system helps people survive in desert
行动:save water/plant trees/protect animals/protect natural resources
要点二:意义启发
启发:living in harmony with nature is our common goal/we should respect nature
意义:enjoy a better life/keep nature beautiful for future generations/learn to protect the environment
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