读后续写男孩误抓入室者后查明真相 课件-2025-2026学年高一下学期英语作文复习专项

该高中英语单元复习课件围绕“读后续写”核心能力，系统梳理了阅读分析的五大要素（背景、人物、情节、情感、语言）及情节发展流程（开端、发展、高潮、解决、结局），通过情节分段解析与要素对应表，帮助学生建立“文本分析-情节构建-逻辑续写”的知识网络。 其亮点在于采用“文本精读-线索分析-分层续写”的复习策略，如引导学生通过“男子看到Kevin未攻击”“Kevin怀疑自己”等原文线索推断真相，培养思维品质中的分析与推断能力，设计续写段落的衔接句与细节句模板（如“他重复了那人说过的话”“格林先生的脸变得严肃”），提升语言表达的逻辑性与准确性。这种设计既帮助学生巩固读后续写的核心步骤，也为教师提供分层教学的具体案例，增强复习实效。

读后续写 Kevin抓入室者后发现真相 Let me introduce a boy to you! Lead in 读 setting背景 characters人物 plot(conflict/problem)情节（冲突/问题） emotion情感 language语言 when + where climax: conflict/problem how to read beginning development solution:续写段一 ending：续写段二 who+ quality Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye. Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed (抓住) Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police. Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch (树枝) from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there You must leave right now” he called out, holding the branch with both hands. The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard. At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man. Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth?” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing. Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. Read the passage to know more about Kevin’ story. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. TEXT Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye. 读-读情节 Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed (抓住) Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police. 读-读情节 Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch (树枝) from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there You must leave right now” he called out, holding the branch with both hands. 读-读情节 The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard. 读-读情节 At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man. Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth?” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing. 读-读情节 Beginning Climax conflict/problem Ending 12 岁男孩Kevin独自待在Hill太太家，发现对面Green家有陌生男子破窗而入，打电话报警 Development Solution When: Kevin’s parents were at work, Mrs. Hill was asleep Where: In Mrs.Hill’s house In Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house On the street Who： Kevin Mrs.Hill Kevin’s parents Mr. and Mrs.Green Strange man Policeman 担心男子逃走，他拿树枝跳窗进入对面房子，喝令男子停下，男子称这是自己旧家，想找父亲留下的手表 警笛声响起，男子慌忙跳窗逃跑，被赶到的警察抓获，Kevin时候却怀疑自己是不是冤枉了对方 读-读情节 11 思 思考：Is that man a thief？ 原文线索 1 …but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. 如果这个男人是小偷，看到瘦骨嶙峋的Kevin一定会伤害，但他没有，说明他不是小偷。 原文线索 2 Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth?” The man’s words sounded pretty convincing. Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. 此段的作用就是让故事来个欧亨利式的反转。可谓：山重水复疑无路，柳暗花明又一村。 Mr. Green带上这块从地板下面找到的手表去警察局（根据协同可知），他要将它还给原房主的儿子。 原文线索 3 这也是唯一验证这个男人是不是小偷的证据了。 Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. 思-思情节 Kevin向格林夫妇解释他所做的事情，以及格林夫妇的反应和真相的揭露 Kevin和Mr. Green去警察局解释情况，以及事情解决后他们的感受和Kevin学到的教训 Theme： 勇敢不仅是冲上去阻止别人，更是勇敢承认自己可能做错了/人不仅要勇敢，也要有查明真相的决心 思-思细节 Paragraph 1： When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.衔接句： 句子： 句子： 句子： 衔接句： Paragraph 2： Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. 衔接句： 句子： 句子： 句子： 结尾句： 他重复了那人说过的关于手表和他父母的话。 格林先生的脸变得严肃起来。“以前的主人确实有个儿子，”他说。 他们走到松动的地板前，把它提起来。 里面放着一块旧表，还在滴答作响。 “他说的是实话，”凯文低声说，感到很抱歉。 这名警官证实，这名男子确实是手表前主人的儿子，他正试图找回他已故父亲的手表。 这个人在受到警告后被释放了。当他看到凯文时，他没有责怪他。 凯文把手表递给他，说：“对不起。” 那人点点头。“你做了你认为正确的事，孩子。” 凯文认识到，做正确的事也意味着在行动之前仔细倾听。 Paragraph 1 When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He repeated what the man had said about the watch and his parents. Mr. Green’s face turned serious. “The previous owner did have a son,” he said. They walked to the loose floorboard and lifted it. Inside lay an old watch, still ticking. “He told the truth,” Kevin whispered, feeling sorry. 参考范文 Paragraph 2 Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The officer confirmed that the man was indeed the former owner’s son, trying to recover his late father’s watch. The man was released with a warning. When he saw Kevin, he didn’t blame him. Kevin handed him the watch and said, “I’m sorry.” The man nodded. “You did what you thought was right, kid.” Kevin learned that doing the right thing also means listening carefully before acting. $