Unit 6 Hitting the road 书面表达10篇（单元话题：旅行）-2025-2026学年七年级英语下册单元易错题练习（外研版）

**基本信息** 聚焦“旅行”主题，按基础-重难梯度设计书面表达训练，覆盖中考高频题型，培养语言表达与逻辑思维能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |基础语篇练习|5篇（如“An Unforgettable Trip”“给David的邮件”）|提示明确（思维导图/表格），词数50-80词，聚焦时间、活动、感受等基础要素|从个人经历到具体场景，逐步构建旅行类写作基本框架，夯实语言表达能力| |重难语篇练习|5篇（如“介绍南京”“对比旅行地与家乡”）|提示概括（信息图/开放问题），词数70-120词，需综合对比、计划、城市文化等复杂内容|从单一叙述到多维度分析，提升逻辑组织与跨文化理解能力，契合中考高阶要求|

Unit 6 Hitting the road 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 旅行 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．每个人都有精彩的旅游经历，哪次旅行给你留下难忘的印象呢？请你以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你这一次难忘的旅行。 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息； 4. 词数：不少于50词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 An Unforgettable Trip Everyone has wonderful travel experiences. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An Unforgettable Trip Everyone has wonderful travel experiences. I will never forget my trip to Harbin last winter. The city was full of white snow and looked like a winter wonderland. My family and I had fun playing snowballs and making snowmen in the beautiful ice world. We also enjoyed delicious local food. What’s more, I took lots of photos of amazing ice works. This trip was not only exciting but also taught me the importance of spending time with my family. I really loved Harbin! 写作步骤           [第一步：审题立意]           确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主           明确要点：旅行的时间、地点、活动、感受与收获 确定人称：第一人称(I/My/We) 注意事项：不得透露真实个人信息，词数不少于50，开头已给出，不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局]           三段式结构：           开头段：承接题目给出的开头句，点明这次难忘的旅行是去年冬天去哈尔滨 主体段：描述具体的旅行活动 结尾段：描述旅行的感受和收获 [第三步：要点展开]           要点一：旅行的时间与地点 时间与地点：my trip to Harbin last winter/during the Spring Festival holiday/a city famous for its ice and snow等      要点二：旅行活动 活动：playing snowballs and making snowmen/enjoyed delicious local food/took lots of photos/visit the Ice and Snow World等      要点三：旅行感受与收获 感受与收获：exciting/the importance of spending time with my family/strengthen the bond with my family/look forward to coming back again等 2．假如你是李华，上周末你的朋友Daniel来西安游玩，你作为东道主，带他领略了这座城市的魅力。请你根据表格提供的信息，以“An Unforgettable Trip to Xi’an”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你们的游玩经历。 An Unforgettable Trip to Xi’an Time last weekend Weather sunny Activities visited the Bell Tower (钟楼) and the Big Wild Goose Pagoda (大雁塔); ate roujiamo and liangpi; ... Feelings ... 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于50词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。 An Unforgettable Trip to Xi’an Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Let me tell you one of my unforgettable trips. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： An Unforgettable Trip to Xi’an Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Let me tell you one of my unforgettable trips. Last weekend, my friend Daniel came to Xi’an. I was happy to show him around. It was a sunny day. First, we visited the Bell Tower and the Big Wild Goose Pagoda to learn about the history and culture. Then, we ate roujiamo and liangpi in a local restaurant. They were delicious. Next, we went to Qujiang Park and had fun there. Finally, we returned home by subway. We felt tired but happy. 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般过去时为主 明确要点：活动时间、天气、具体活动、感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/me/my） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名等 [第二步：构思布局] 两段式结构： 第一段：自我介绍，引入话题（活动时间和人物） 第二段：介绍具体活动内容，表达感受 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：活动简介 时间：Last weekend/last Saturday等 人物：my friend Daniel/my best friend Daniel等 天气：sunny/a sunny day等 要点二：活动 活动：visited the Bell Tower and the Big Wild Goose Pagoda/ate roujiamo and liangpi/went to Qujiang Park/took lots of photos/returned home by subway/was deeply attracted by the long history of these ancient buildings等 要点三：感受 感受：tired but happy/felt proud of my city等 3．假如你是Bob，此时正在加拿大过暑假，请你根据提示内容，给你的朋友David写一封电子邮件，告诉他你正在做什么。 How’s the weather? cool and cloudy What are you doing? · studying English · going on a trip in the mountains · taking some photos How do you feel? happy 要求：1.文中须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；2.80词左右（邮件的开头和格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear David, How is it going? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Bob 【答案】例文 Dear David, How is it going? I’m having a great time in Canada. These days, I’m studying English in a summer school and I’m learning a lot. I visited some of my old friends and I’m so happy. My family and I are on a trip in the mountains at the moment. The weather here is very cool and cloudy. It is just right for walking. We are taking some photos of trees and flowers. It’s very relaxing here. We all feel very happy. Can you tell me about your summer vacation? Yours, Bob 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：电子邮件，以现在进行时为主 明确要点：天气状况、正在做的三件事（学英语、山间旅行、拍照）、个人心情 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：以Bob身份写给David，词数控制在80词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：问候，点明在加拿大过暑假 主体段：当下三项活动（学英语、山间旅行、拍照）、介绍天气、抒发心情 结尾段：询问对方假期 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：活动内容 学习英语：study English/learn English/take English courses/have English lessons/learn spoken English等 山间旅行：be on a trip in the mountains/travel in mountains/go mountain hiking/have a mountain tour/visit mountain areas等 拍照：take some photos of trees and flowers/shoot photos of plants/take pictures of scenery/capture natural views/take photos of natural sights等 要点二：介绍天气 具体说明：cool and cloudy/cool and a little cloudy/cool with grey clouds in the sky/cool and not sunny at all/cloudy skies and a cool breeze等 要点三：心情感受 具体说明：feel very happy/enjoy oneself/have great fun/feel relaxed and glad/have a wonderful time等 4．近年来，越来越多的人出门旅行。假如你是李明，去年暑假，你和你的父母一起去海南度假。在那里，你不仅度过了欢乐的时光，还与大自然亲密接触。请根据以下提示，以“A Holiday Journey”为题，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文，介绍一下你的假期。 写作要点提示： 1. 乘火车去，在火车上认识了两个朋友，聊得很开心； 2. 中午到达，天气晴朗，去了沙滩，捡拾了贝壳； 3. 吃了海鲜，逛了商店，还买了水果； 4. 那里的人们很友好，玩得很开心。 要求： 文章应包含提示的所有写作要点；条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 注意： 词数70左右，开头已给出，不计入总次数；文中不得出现真实的姓名、人名和校名。 提示词：捡：pick贝壳：shell海鲜：sea food A Holiday Journey Hello, everyone! My name is Li Ming. Today I want to introduce my holiday journey to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 A Holiday Journey   Hello, everyone! My name is Li Ming. Today I want to introduce my holiday journey to you. Last summer, I went to Hainan with my parents by train. I made two friends and talked happily. We arrived at noon. It was sunny, so we went to the beach and picked many shells. We ate sea food, went shopping in the town and bought fruit.   The people there were friendly. We had a wonderful time. 写作步骤 第一步：[审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，一般过去时为主，开头自我介绍为一般现在时 明确要点：交通方式；抵达活动；美食购物；人物感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/We） 注意事项：词数70词左右，给定开头不计入词数；全文讲述去年往事，统一使用一般过去时；不得出现真实人名校名；覆盖全部4个写作要点。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：固定给出的开场白，自我介绍李明，点明要介绍自己的假期旅行。 主体段：顺叙完整旅行流程，依次写坐火车出行的经历、中午抵达后的沙滩活动、品尝海鲜与采购水果的行程，完整覆盖前三条写作要点。 结尾段：描写当地居民的友善，抒发本次旅途十分愉快的整体感受，收束全文。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：交通方式 出行交通：by train/take the train/on the train等 要点二：抵达活动 活动：went to the beach/picked many shells/played on the beach/gather shells等 要点三：美食购物 美食购物：ate sea food/bought fruit/visited the shops/bought apples等 要点四：人物感受 感受：had a wonderful time/enjoyed ourselves等 5．“A Wonderful Trip with My Family” 为题的分享会，请用英语写一篇短文，叙述你和家人一起外出旅行的经历，或谈谈这趟旅行给你带来的收获。 要求：1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本监测卷上无效。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Wonderful Trip with My Family Last summer, my family and I went to the beach. We drove there early in the morning. The weather was sunny and warm, and the sea looked beautiful and blue. When we arrived, we walked along the soft shore, picked up colorful shells, and swam in the cool water. We also built a big sandcastle together and had a nice picnic on the beach. After lunch, we flew a kite high in the sky. It was so much fun. This wonderful trip brought us closer. I felt completely relaxed and truly happy. Spending quality time with family is the best way to enjoy life. I will never forget this unforgettable experience. 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文（旅行经历分享），用一般过去时 明确要点：时间（去年夏天）、地点（海滩）、天气（晴朗温暖，大海湛蓝美丽）、活动（沿沙滩散步、捡贝壳、游泳、堆沙堡、野餐、放风筝）、收获（拉近了家人的距离、感到放松和快乐、与家人共度时光是享受生活的最佳方式、难忘的经历） 确定人称：第一人称（I）和第一人称复数（we） 注意事项：需包含所有要点，词数不少于80，不得出现真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：交代旅行时间（去年夏天）、地点（海滩）、交通方式（开车）、天气（晴朗温暖，大海湛蓝美丽） 主体段：描述具体活动（沿沙滩散步、捡贝壳、游泳、堆沙堡、野餐、放风筝） 结尾段：阐述收获（拉近了家人距离、感到放松快乐、与家人共度时光是享受生活的最佳方式、难忘的经历） [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：旅行基本信息 时间表达：Last summer/Last summer vacation等 地点表达：went to the beach/visited the seaside等 交通表达：drove there/went by car等 天气表达：sunny and warm/It was a bright and warm day等 大海描述：the sea looked beautiful and blue/the ocean was lovely and blue等 要点二：活动描述 活动一：walked along the soft shore/took a walk on the sandy beach等 活动二：picked up colorful shells/collected shells of various colors等 活动三：swam in the cool water/enjoyed swimming in the refreshing sea等 活动四：built a big sandcastle together/made a large sandcastle as a team等 活动五：had a nice picnic on the beach/enjoyed a pleasant picnic by the sea等 活动六：flew a kite high in the sky/sent a kite flying up into the sky等 要点三：收获与感受 收获表达：brought us closer/strengthened our family bond等 感受表达：felt completely relaxed and truly happy/felt peaceful and joyful等 感悟表达：spending quality time with family is the best way to enjoy life/Being with family is the greatest joy in life等 总结表达：never forget this unforgettable experience/will always remember this special trip等 6．随着人们生活条件的改善，越来越多的人选择假期出去旅游。你热爱旅游吗？你有难忘的旅游经历吗？请你与大家分享你最难忘的旅游经历。要求词数60左右，文中不得出现真实姓名。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。内容包括以下几点： 1.旅行的时间、地点和交通方式； 2.旅行经历（两件做过的事及感受）； 3.下个假期你想去的地方。 My Trip Nowadays, more and more people like going for a trip on vacation. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Trip Nowadays, more and more people like going for a trip on vacation. I like going for a trip, too. Last year I went to Beijing with my parents by plane. After we reached Beijing, we visited the Palace Museum, the Great Wall and many places of interest. I took many photos. And I tried Beijing Duck. Last, I bought many gifts for my friends. In a word, it was an excellent trip. Next year, I plan to go to Thailand. How about you? 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：本文是一则材料作文，以一般过去时为主 明确要点：介绍一次旅游经历，包括时间、地点和交通方式，在旅行中做过的两件事及感受，并介绍下个假期想去的地方 确定人称：以第一人称I为主 注意事项：包含所有要点，词数60词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出，引出主题 主体段：具体介绍旅游的时间、地点和交通方式，在旅行中做过的两件事 结尾段：谈旅游感受并介绍未来的旅游计划 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：旅游的基本信息 时间：last year/last summer holiday/on a sunny day等 地点：Beijing/Mount Tai/the Yellow River等 交通方式：by plane/by train/by car等 要点二：旅游中做的件事情 visited/many places of interest/took many photos/tried Beijing Duck/bought many gifts 要点三：谈感受，并介绍旅游计划 感受：an excellent trip/relaxing/meaningful等 计划：plan to/make a plan for等 7．假如你是学校英语俱乐部的一员，成员们在这周的活动中分享了自己的暑期旅游计划。请根据下面的问题提示，分享你的暑期旅游安排。不少于80词。 1. What special places are you going to visit? (mountains, rivers, oceans, forests or deserts) 2. Why do you want to visit this place? (就你选择的一种地貌做简要的介绍） 3. Who will you go with? And what will you do there? During this summer holiday, I plan to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 范文      During this summer holiday, I plan to visit the Gobi Desert with my parents. It is a special place with golden sand and wide open sky.      I want to visit this desert because I love the quietness and mystery. Unlike the noisy city, the desert makes me feel peaceful and free. I can also learn about the local plants and animals there. We will ride camels, watch the sunset, and sleep in tents at night.      I am really looking forward to this trip. I believe it will be an unforgettable experience for me. 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文（短文/旅游计划分享），主要时态为一般现在时（说明计划/介绍原因）和一般将来时（描述将要做的事情）。 明确要点：打算去什么特别的地方（戈壁沙漠/金色沙丘/广阔天空等）、为什么想去这个地方（喜欢安静与神秘/远离城市喧嚣/感到平静自由/学习当地动植物等）、和谁去以及在那里做什么（和父母一起/骑骆驼/看日落/住帐篷等）。 确定人称：第一人称（I/my/we），体现个人暑期计划的分享。 注意事项：不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名；词数不少于80词；覆盖所有问题提示，可适当发挥。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：直接点明暑期计划去的地方（戈壁沙漠）以及和谁一起去（父母）。 主体段：分两个层次展开。选择该地点的原因（喜欢安静与神秘/远离喧嚣/感到平静自由/学习当地动植物等）→ 在那里进行的活动（骑骆驼/看日落/住帐篷等），层次清晰，信息全面。 结尾段：表达期待之情，总结这是难忘的经历。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：去什么地方 核心词汇：Gobi Desert/golden sand/wide open sky/special place等 句式表达：I plan to visit the Gobi Desert with my parents/It is a special place with golden sand and wide open sky等 要点二：为什么想去这个地方 核心词汇：love the quietness and mystery/unlike the noisy city/peaceful and free/learn about local plants and animals等 句式表达：I want to visit this desert because I love the quietness and mystery/Unlike the noisy city, the desert makes me feel peaceful and free/I can also learn about the local plants and animals there等 要点三：和谁去及做什么活动 核心词汇：ride camels/watch the sunset/sleep in tents等 句式表达：We will ride camels, watch the sunset, and sleep in tents at night等 要点四：感受与期待 核心观点：looking forward to this trip/an unforgettable experience等 升华主题：通过分享独特的沙漠之旅计划，表达对大自然的向往与热爱，强调旅行对开阔眼界、放松身心、收获难忘回忆的重要意义。 8．假如上周六你们班组织了一次外出旅行，英语老师希望你们在课堂上分享一下这次旅行经历。请你根据如图提示,写一篇英语短文，为这次分享做准备。 注意: 1.短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; 3.字数70左右;标题已给出,不计入总词数。 Our Class Trip ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Our Class Trip Last Saturday morning, my whole class and our English teacher went to the Green Lake Park. The weather was sunny and warm with a soft wind that day. We had a picnic on the grass first, then played frisbee happily. We also picked up litter to keep the park clean, and took nice group photos under a big tree. It was a great day—we felt so happy and relaxed, and really enjoyed the time with each other! [写作步骤] 第一步：审题立意 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主 明确要点：旅行的人员（who）、地点（where）、时间（when）、天气（how was the weather）、做的事（what did you do）、感受（how did you feel） 确定人称：第一人称（we） 注意事项：70词左右，包含所有要点，无真实姓名 第二步：构思布局 开头：点明旅行的人员、时间、地点及天气 主体：描述旅行中做的具体事情 结尾：表达对这次旅行的感受 第三步：要点展开 Who：my whole class + our English teacher / my classmates and our head teacher When：last Saturday morning / last weekend (Saturday) / the Saturday before last Where：the City Park / the Green Lake Park / the Forest Park near our school How was the weather：sunny and warm (with soft wind) / cool and cloudy (not hot at all) / bright and pleasant (perfect for outdoor activities) What did you do：had a picnic on the grass / played frisbee together / picked up litter to keep the park clean / took group photos under the big tree How did you feel：happy and relaxed / enjoyed the time with classmates / felt close to nature 重难语篇练习 9．报纸Sunshine Teens正在开展主题为“美丽城市”的征文活动。请你结合下面的信息，用英语写一篇短文，向读者介绍你心中的美丽城市——南京。 内容提示： 写作要求： 1. 包含提示，内容充实，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 70词左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Nanjing is an ancient capital city in the east of China, near Shanghai. It has a long history and rich culture. There are many famous places to visit. You can climb Zijin Mountain, enjoy the beautiful scenery of Xuanwu Lake Park, or visit Confucius Temple to learn about traditional Chinese culture. Nanjing is a wonderful city with both history and modern life. Welcome to Nanjing! 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般现在时为主。 明确要点：南京的位置、可参观的景点、历史文化。 确定人称：第三人称（it/they）。 注意事项：涵盖所有提示信息，适当发挥细节。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起介绍南京的位置。 主体段：分别介绍景点和历史文化。 结尾段：总结南京的魅力，发出邀请。 第三步：要点展开 要点一：位置 位置描述：in the east of China, near Shanghai等 补充细节：Jiangsu Province’s capital等 要点二：景点 景点列举：Zijin Mountain, Xuanwu Lake Park, Confucius Temple等 补充细节：beautiful scenery, historical sites等 要点三：历史文化 文化描述：an ancient capital city, rich culture等 补充细节：long history, traditional food等 10．“世界是一本书，而不旅行的人只读了其中一页。”假如你的名字叫李华，你想写一封信给你在美国的笔友Jim, 向他描述你记忆中最难忘的一次旅行，并比较这个旅行目的地和你家乡的不同之处。 要点： 1. 介绍这次旅行； 2. 比较这座城市和你家乡的不同之处(天气/交通/食物等); …… 要求： 1. 词数：80-120词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数); 2. 书写工整，卷面整洁。文中不能出现本人的真实姓名和班级等信息。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to write to you. As a saying goes, “The world is a book. If you don't travel, you only read a page of it.” __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim, I’m glad to write to you. As a saying goes, “The world is a book. If you don’t travel, you only read a page of it.” My most unforgettable trip was to Sanya last summer. The blue sea and soft sand were amazing. I tried many water sports and enjoyed fresh seafood. Sanya is quite different from my hometown. My hometown is in the north, so it’s cold and dry in winter, while Sanya is warm and sunny all year. Also, the traffic in Sanya is less busy, and the food is lighter with more seafood. This trip made me realize how beautiful and different our country is. I hope to hear about your travel stories too. Yours, Li Hua 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：书信作文+记叙文，以一般过去时（描述旅行经历）为主，对比描述用一般现在时 明确要点：①介绍记忆中最难忘的一次旅行；②比较旅行目的地与家乡的不同之处（天气 / 交通 / 食物等）；③补充旅行感悟 / 笔友互动 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数80-120词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；不得透露真实姓名和班级等信息；书信格式规范 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构：开头段：承接题目给定开头，点明最难忘的旅行（三亚、去年夏天），总起旅行感受，引出下文 主体段：分两部分展开，第一部分介绍三亚旅行的具体经历；第二部分从天气、交通、食物三个维度对比三亚与家乡的差异，补充旅行感悟 结尾段：呼应笔友身份，邀请 Jim 分享旅行故事，自然收尾，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍难忘的旅行 时间选择：last summer/last winter vacation/during the summer holiday等 地点选择：Sanya/ Beijing/Shanghai/Chengdu等城市 活动内容：see the blue sea and soft sand/ try many water sports/enjoy fresh seafood/go surfing/go diving/play beach volleyball/visit famous places等 感受描述：amazing/unforgettable/wonderful/fantastic/impressive等 作用效果：This trip made me realize how beautiful and different our country is./It broadened my horizons/made me relaxed/enriched my life等 核心句型：My most unforgettable trip was to Sanya last summer./I had an unforgettable trip to... last.../The most amazing trip I ever had was to...等 要点二：比较旅行地与家乡的不同之处 对比维度选择：culture/lifestyle/scenery等 对比内容： 天气：My hometown is in the north, so it’s cold and dry in winter, while Sanya is warm and sunny all year.交通：The traffic in Sanya is less busy than that in my hometown. 食物：The food in Sanya is lighter with more seafood, different from the local food in my hometown./Compared with my hometown, Sanya has a warmer climate and more delicious seafood. 核心句型：A is quite different from B. /while（引导对比状语从句，表转折对比）/Compared with…,but…is… 具体说明：通过多维度对比，突出两地差异，丰富文章内容；可结合自身家乡特点，灵活调整对比内容，让文章更真实 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 6 Hitting the road 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 旅行 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．每个人都有精彩的旅游经历，哪次旅行给你留下难忘的印象呢？请你以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你这一次难忘的旅行。 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息； 4. 词数：不少于50词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 An Unforgettable Trip Everyone has wonderful travel experiences. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，上周末你的朋友Daniel来西安游玩，你作为东道主，带他领略了这座城市的魅力。请你根据表格提供的信息，以“An Unforgettable Trip to Xi’an”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你们的游玩经历。 An Unforgettable Trip to Xi’an Time last weekend Weather sunny Activities visited the Bell Tower (钟楼) and the Big Wild Goose Pagoda (大雁塔); ate roujiamo and liangpi; ... Feelings ... 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于50词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。 An Unforgettable Trip to Xi’an Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Let me tell you one of my unforgettable trips. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是Bob，此时正在加拿大过暑假，请你根据提示内容，给你的朋友David写一封电子邮件，告诉他你正在做什么。 How’s the weather? cool and cloudy What are you doing? · studying English · going on a trip in the mountains · taking some photos How do you feel? happy 要求：1.文中须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；2.80词左右（邮件的开头和格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear David, How is it going? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Bob 4．近年来，越来越多的人出门旅行。假如你是李明，去年暑假，你和你的父母一起去海南度假。在那里，你不仅度过了欢乐的时光，还与大自然亲密接触。请根据以下提示，以“A Holiday Journey”为题，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文，介绍一下你的假期。 写作要点提示： 1. 乘火车去，在火车上认识了两个朋友，聊得很开心； 2. 中午到达，天气晴朗，去了沙滩，捡拾了贝壳； 3. 吃了海鲜，逛了商店，还买了水果； 4. 那里的人们很友好，玩得很开心。 要求： 文章应包含提示的所有写作要点；条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 注意： 词数70左右，开头已给出，不计入总次数；文中不得出现真实的姓名、人名和校名。 提示词：捡：pick贝壳：shell海鲜：sea food A Holiday Journey Hello, everyone! My name is Li Ming. Today I want to introduce my holiday journey to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．“A Wonderful Trip with My Family” 为题的分享会，请用英语写一篇短文，叙述你和家人一起外出旅行的经历，或谈谈这趟旅行给你带来的收获。 要求：1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本监测卷上无效。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．随着人们生活条件的改善，越来越多的人选择假期出去旅游。你热爱旅游吗？你有难忘的旅游经历吗？请你与大家分享你最难忘的旅游经历。要求词数60左右，文中不得出现真实姓名。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。内容包括以下几点： 1.旅行的时间、地点和交通方式； 2.旅行经历（两件做过的事及感受）； 3.下个假期你想去的地方。 My Trip Nowadays, more and more people like going for a trip on vacation. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是学校英语俱乐部的一员，成员们在这周的活动中分享了自己的暑期旅游计划。请根据下面的问题提示，分享你的暑期旅游安排。不少于80词。 1. What special places are you going to visit? (mountains, rivers, oceans, forests or deserts) 2. Why do you want to visit this place? (就你选择的一种地貌做简要的介绍） 3. Who will you go with? And what will you do there? During this summer holiday, I plan to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如上周六你们班组织了一次外出旅行，英语老师希望你们在课堂上分享一下这次旅行经历。请你根据如图提示,写一篇英语短文，为这次分享做准备。 注意: 1.短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; 3.字数70左右;标题已给出,不计入总词数。 Our Class Trip ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 重难语篇练习 9．报纸Sunshine Teens正在开展主题为“美丽城市”的征文活动。请你结合下面的信息，用英语写一篇短文，向读者介绍你心中的美丽城市——南京。 内容提示： 写作要求： 1. 包含提示，内容充实，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 70词左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．“世界是一本书，而不旅行的人只读了其中一页。”假如你的名字叫李华，你想写一封信给你在美国的笔友Jim, 向他描述你记忆中最难忘的一次旅行，并比较这个旅行目的地和你家乡的不同之处。 要点： 1. 介绍这次旅行； 2. 比较这座城市和你家乡的不同之处(天气/交通/食物等); …… 要求： 1. 词数：80-120词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数); 2. 书写工整，卷面整洁。文中不能出现本人的真实姓名和班级等信息。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to write to you. As a saying goes, “The world is a book. If you don't travel, you only read a page of it.” __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $