Unit 2 A life’s work 介绍人物（单元同步写作讲义）英语外研版选择性必修第三册

本讲义聚焦高中英语选择性必修第三册Unit 2“Writing an expository essay”核心知识点，系统构建说明文写作支架，涵盖“开头（人物+成就）-主体（品质+例子）-结尾（主题）”结构脉络，提供常用表达、必备句式及写作模板，并通过基础题（搭配、仿写、翻译）与提升题（演讲稿、征文）实现从输入到输出的能力递进。 该资料特色鲜明，以高考真题（如2025湖北荆州题）为导向，强化语言能力培养，通过“人物介绍+品质分析”任务渗透文化意识（如推荐中国工艺品、介绍中国名人），在谋篇布局与句式升级中提升思维品质。课中助力教师高效授课，课后提供分层练习与模板，帮助学生自主巩固，弥补写作短板。

选择性必修第三册 Unit 2 A life’s work Writing an expository essay 单元写作早知道 写作任务 1.Beginning：Who+achievements 2.Main Body:qualities+ examples 3.Conclusion:themes 常用表达 1.Born in 1983, Shanghai, Liu Xiang, China's first male Olympic champion in track-and-field, equaled the world record of Olympic Games in Athens. 2.It is widely acknowledged that... 3.His/Her contributions to... have been invaluable. 4.What sets him/her apart is... 5.Despite facing numerous challenges, he/she has managed to.. 单元话题 真题展示 高考链接 Writing an expository essay 2025湖北荆州 内容必须包含 3 个要点： ①人物生平与早年经历；②主要成就与贡献；③人物品质 + 个人感悟启示。 工艺品(art craft) 假定你是李华，美国交换生Linda 交流学习期满，即将回国，来信表示想带一些具有中国特色的工艺品(art craft)给美国的家人和朋友。请回复邮件推荐一至两样并说明推荐理由。 注意:1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 An expository essay contains a fair and balanced analysis of an event, a situation or an idea. It commonly begins by clearly starting what it aims to explain or analyse. The main body comprises paragraphs with supporting evidence and facts It concludes by reviewing the main theme of the essay in light of all the evidence that has been presented. 1.What is the passage about? 2.What qualities of the Lei family are mentioned? 3.What is the conclusion of the passage? Choose one person who demonstrates the spirit of craftsmanship and complete the notes. Do further research if necessary. 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 Beginning He/She dedicated one’s life to... Honoured/Celebrated/Regarded as..he/she made great contributions to.. His/Her qualities was so admirable that... 第二段 Main Body innovation/diligence/perseverance/humility/integrity/skill/commitment In addition, ...showed... so incredible was...that ... Moreover, what made...great was his/her... 第三段 Conclusion with...,...leave behind ...that true craftwork is a treasure that can last beyond time. The life long devotion has made him/her one of the most celebrated... of all time. 【必备句式】 第一部分：Beginning（开头：点明介绍人物 + 写作目的） ①The passage is intended to introduce an outstanding figure who has made extraordinary achievements. 本文旨在介绍一位取得非凡成就的杰出人物。 ②Having devoted most of his lifetime to his career, he has won high praise worldwide. 他毕生投身事业，在全球收获广泛赞誉。 ③This article will analyze his life experience and great contributions in detail below. 本文下文将细致梳理他的人生经历与卓越贡献。 ④His inspiring deeds have greatly influenced generations of young people. 他励志的事迹深深影响了一代又一代年轻人。 第二部分：Main Body（主体：用事例、事实支撑人物事迹） ①To begin with, he overcame countless hardships and stuck to his original dream firmly. 首先，他克服无数磨难，始终坚守初心与理想。 ②A large number of real facts and practical achievements can prove his persistent efforts. 诸多真实事例与实际成果能够印证他持之以恒的付出。 ③Apart from personal success, he also spared no effort to benefit ordinary people around him. 除去个人成就，他还竭尽全力造福身边普通民众。 ④Step by step, continuous hard work finally helped him realize his lifelong goal. 日复一日的不懈奋斗，最终助力他实现毕生理想。 第三部分：Conclusion（结尾：回顾主旨 + 人物总结评价） ①In conclusion, all the above facts fully show the noble qualities of this respectable person. 总而言之，以上全部事例充分展现这位伟人的宝贵品格。 ②The great contributions he made will always be remembered by people at home and abroad. 他做出的巨大贡献将被海内外人民永远铭记。 ③It is his perseverance and selflessness that lead to his remarkable lifelong success. 正是坚持与无私成就了他一生斐然的成就。 ④We ought to learn from his spirit and apply it to our own study and daily life. 我们应当学习他的精神，并落实到自身学习与日常生活中。 【必背模板】 模板 ( ____【人名】, a remarkable person respected by the whole world, is well-known for his extraordinary devotion and achievements. Having spent most of his life on ____【领域：科研 / 教育 / 医学】, he has gained widespread admiration from people. o begin with, he went through various tough difficulties but never gave up his lifelong dream. Plenty of real-life facts and great achievements can witness his consistent hard work. Besides personal career success, he tried his best to help common people and bring benefits to society. Thanks to years of persistent struggle, he finally realized the goals he had pursued for decades. In short, all the above events fully reflect his noble personal qualities. The huge contributions he made will be remembered permanently by later generations. It is his perseverance and selflessness that account for his lifelong success. We should learn from his fine spirit and put it into our daily study and life. ) 假定你将代表学校参加即将举行的国际文化交流活动，请向外国友人介绍一位你敬佩的中国伟大的人物（如科学家 ，政治家、文学家、艺术家或历史人物），以帮助他们理解中国文化。主题是“The Great Person I Admire Most”请根据以下要求准备一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 介绍这位名人，简述他们的生平与成就； 2.说明你喜欢该人物的理由； 3说明这位名人的故事如何激励你，并影响你未来的追求。 注意：(1) 词数80-100左右；(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Great Person I Admire Most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________审题 本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以“The Great Person I Admire Most”为主题写一篇演讲稿。 谋篇 第一段:介绍这位名人；第二段说明你喜欢该人物的理由，第三段说明这位名人的故事如何激励你。 句式升级 1.词汇积累 致力于：devote oneself to → dedicate oneself to 最终：ultimately → eventually 尽管：in spite of → despite 重要：importance → significance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In spite of repeated failures, she never gave up. 拓展句：Even though she went through repeated failures, she never gave up. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In order to develop a new medicine to stop the spread of a serious disease, she devoted herself to working in the lab, doing experiments and reading Chinese medicine works.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语，动名词短语作宾语） 【高分句型2】Her story inspires me to work hard for my dream that lies ahead.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句） 组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【第一部分 基础题】 一、常用搭配 1. 12 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 个人成就： 成为…… 第一人__________　献身于，致力于__________ 获得…… 奖__________ 人物评价 被认为是__________；；； 被高度评价__________； 赢得…… 的尊重__________； 作为…… 被铭记，记住__________； 对…… 做出巨大贡献__________； 二、句子仿写改写​​ 1.简单句：Yuan Longping devoted all his life to rice research. 袁隆平毕生致力于水稻研究。 复合句： 拔高 (强调)： 2简单句：He fought against numerous difficulties and realized his dream. 他战胜重重困难，实现了理想。 复合句： 拔高 (非谓语)： 3.简单句：We can improve ourselves by learning from his noble spirit. 学习他可贵的精神，我们能够完善自我。 复合句： 拔高 (倒装)： 三、翻译句子​​ 1.这位科学家将一生投入科研事业，从不计较个人得失。 2.正是突破性的研究成果让他斩获多项国际大奖。 3.只有学习他坚持不懈的精神，我们才能克服成长路上的困难。 4如果没有他的伟大发现，很多人的生存难题难以被化解。 【第二部分 提升题】 假设你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办“The Person Who Shapes Me”主题分享会。请你写一篇英文发言稿，介绍一位对你影响深远的人（可以是家人、朋友、老师或名人）。 内容包括： 1.这个人是谁； 2.他/她影响你的具体事件或言行； 3.这种影响对你的改变和意义。 注意: 词数100左右，可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 The Person Who Shapes Me _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，你校英语报正在举办“大国科技推动者”主题征文比赛，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你最敬佩的一名科学工作者，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 说明其令人敬佩的原因。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 There are many scientists who have driven social development. Among them, the one I admire most is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【链接高考—经典诵读】 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom对中国的名人很感兴趣。请你写一封邮件向他介绍一位你钦佩的中国名人。内容包括： 1. 该名人的人生经历; 2. 他/她对你的影响或启示; 注意： 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $选择性必修第三册 Unit 2 A life’s work Writing an expository essay 单元写作早知道 写作任务 1.Beginning：Who+achievements 2.Main Body:qualities+ examples 3.Conclusion:themes 常用表达 1.Born in 1983, Shanghai, Liu Xiang, China's first male Olympic champion in track-and-field, equaled the world record of Olympic Games in Athens. 2.It is widely acknowledged that... 3.His/Her contributions to... have been invaluable. 4.What sets him/her apart is... 5.Despite facing numerous challenges, he/she has managed to.. 单元话题 真题展示 高考链接 Writing an expository essay 2025湖北荆州 内容必须包含 3 个要点： ①人物生平与早年经历；②主要成就与贡献；③人物品质 + 个人感悟启示。 工艺品(art craft) 假定你是李华，美国交换生Linda 交流学习期满，即将回国，来信表示想带一些具有中国特色的工艺品(art craft)给美国的家人和朋友。请回复邮件推荐一至两样并说明推荐理由。 注意:1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 An expository essay contains a fair and balanced analysis of an event, a situation or an idea. It commonly begins by clearly starting what it aims to explain or analyse. The main body comprises paragraphs with supporting evidence and facts It concludes by reviewing the main theme of the essay in light of all the evidence that has been presented. 1.What is the passage about? 【答案】The passage is about the Lei family, who for seven generations were behind the marvels of imperial architecture. 2.What qualities of the Lei family are mentioned? 【答案】skill；innovation；diligence and humility 3.What is the conclusion of the passage? 【答案】Although the names of those who created these remarkable works may not be known by future generations, their spirit of craftsmanship is everlasting. Choose one person who demonstrates the spirit of craftsmanship and complete the notes. Do further research if necessary. 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 Beginning He/She dedicated one’s life to... Honoured/Celebrated/Regarded as..he/she made great contributions to.. His/Her qualities was so admirable that... 第二段 Main Body innovation/diligence/perseverance/humility/integrity/skill/commitment In addition, ...showed... so incredible was...that ... Moreover, what made...great was his/her... 第三段 Conclusion with...,...leave behind ...that true craftwork is a treasure that can last beyond time. The life long devotion has made him/her one of the most celebrated... of all time. 【小试牛刀】 参考范文 The vividly coloured, finely shaped figurines of “Clay Figure Zhang” have been seeing a surge in popularity as an authentic and valuable traditional craft. The nearly 200-year history of “Clay Figure Zhang” began with Zhang Mingshan, who became known for his ability to breathe life and beauty into these painted clay figurines. Born into a poor family, Zhang Mingshan made them as a means of earning a living. He often visited markets where he observed people of all walks of life, and went to theatres to observe those performing on stage. Day in, day out, he used tonnes of clay to mould what he saw, and sometimes added decorative items or new features to the figurines. So vivid and lifelike were they that they attracted crowds of spectators to the stand from which he sold them. Fortunately, Zhang Mingshan’s craftsmanship has been passed down through his descendents, with these distinctive clay figurines now being crafted by the sixth generation of “Clay Figure Zhang”. 【必备句式】 第一部分：Beginning（开头：点明介绍人物 + 写作目的） ①The passage is intended to introduce an outstanding figure who has made extraordinary achievements. 本文旨在介绍一位取得非凡成就的杰出人物。 ②Having devoted most of his lifetime to his career, he has won high praise worldwide. 他毕生投身事业，在全球收获广泛赞誉。 ③This article will analyze his life experience and great contributions in detail below. 本文下文将细致梳理他的人生经历与卓越贡献。 ④His inspiring deeds have greatly influenced generations of young people. 他励志的事迹深深影响了一代又一代年轻人。 第二部分：Main Body（主体：用事例、事实支撑人物事迹） ①To begin with, he overcame countless hardships and stuck to his original dream firmly. 首先，他克服无数磨难，始终坚守初心与理想。 ②A large number of real facts and practical achievements can prove his persistent efforts. 诸多真实事例与实际成果能够印证他持之以恒的付出。 ③Apart from personal success, he also spared no effort to benefit ordinary people around him. 除去个人成就，他还竭尽全力造福身边普通民众。 ④Step by step, continuous hard work finally helped him realize his lifelong goal. 日复一日的不懈奋斗，最终助力他实现毕生理想。 第三部分：Conclusion（结尾：回顾主旨 + 人物总结评价） ①In conclusion, all the above facts fully show the noble qualities of this respectable person. 总而言之，以上全部事例充分展现这位伟人的宝贵品格。 ②The great contributions he made will always be remembered by people at home and abroad. 他做出的巨大贡献将被海内外人民永远铭记。 ③It is his perseverance and selflessness that lead to his remarkable lifelong success. 正是坚持与无私成就了他一生斐然的成就。 ④We ought to learn from his spirit and apply it to our own study and daily life. 我们应当学习他的精神，并落实到自身学习与日常生活中。 【必背模板】 模板 ( ____【人名】, a remarkable person respected by the whole world, is well-known for his extraordinary devotion and achievements. Having spent most of his life on ____【领域：科研 / 教育 / 医学】, he has gained widespread admiration from people. o begin with, he went through various tough difficulties but never gave up his lifelong dream. Plenty of real-life facts and great achievements can witness his consistent hard work. Besides personal career success, he tried his best to help common people and bring benefits to society. Thanks to years of persistent struggle, he finally realized the goals he had pursued for decades. In short, all the above events fully reflect his noble personal qualities. The huge contributions he made will be remembered permanently by later generations. It is his perseverance and selflessness that account for his lifelong success. We should learn from his fine spirit and put it into our daily study and life. ) 假定你将代表学校参加即将举行的国际文化交流活动，请向外国友人介绍一位你敬佩的中国伟大的人物（如科学家 ，政治家、文学家、艺术家或历史人物），以帮助他们理解中国文化。主题是“The Great Person I Admire Most”请根据以下要求准备一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 介绍这位名人，简述他们的生平与成就； 2.说明你喜欢该人物的理由； 3说明这位名人的故事如何激励你，并影响你未来的追求。 注意：(1) 词数80-100左右；(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Great Person I Admire Most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________审题 本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以“The Great Person I Admire Most”为主题写一篇演讲稿。 谋篇 第一段:介绍这位名人；第二段说明你喜欢该人物的理由，第三段说明这位名人的故事如何激励你。 句式升级 1.词汇积累 致力于：devote oneself to → dedicate oneself to 最终：ultimately → eventually 尽管：in spite of → despite 重要：importance → significance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In spite of repeated failures, she never gave up. 拓展句：Even though she went through repeated failures, she never gave up. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In order to develop a new medicine to stop the spread of a serious disease, she devoted herself to working in the lab, doing experiments and reading Chinese medicine works.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语，动名词短语作宾语） 【高分句型2】Her story inspires me to work hard for my dream that lies ahead.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句） 组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 The Great Person I Admire Most Dear foreign friends, It’s my great honor to introduce the great person I admire most — Tu Youyou, a remarkable Chinese scientist known for the discovery of a medicine, which has saved countless lives around the world. I admire her because of her perseverance and commitment in the field of medical research. In order to develop a new medicine to stop the spread of a serious disease, she devoted herself to working in the lab, doing experiments and reading Chinese medicine works. In spite of repeated failures, she never gave up. Ultimately, her hard work paid off and she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Medicine. From Tu Youyou, I’ve learned the importance of perseverance and devotion. Her story inspires me to work hard for my dream that lies ahead. 【第一部分 基础题】 一、常用搭配 1. 12 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 个人成就： 成为…… 第一人__________　献身于，致力于__________ 获得…… 奖__________ 人物评价 被认为是__________；；； 被高度评价__________； 赢得…… 的尊重__________； 作为…… 被铭记，记住__________； 对…… 做出巨大贡献__________； 【答案】成为…… 第一人：become the first person to do... 献身于，致力于：devote oneself to / be devoted to (doing) sth 获得…… 奖：win/receive the prize/award for... 2. 人物评价 被认为是：be considered as / be regarded as / be thought of as 被高度评价：be highly thought of / be well praised 赢得…… 的尊重：win respect from... 作为…… 被铭记，记住：be remembered as... 对…… 做出巨大贡献：make great contributions to... 二、句子仿写改写​​ 1.简单句：Yuan Longping devoted all his life to rice research. 袁隆平毕生致力于水稻研究。 复合句： 【答案】Because he cared about global food safety, Yuan Longping devoted all his life to rice research. 拔高 (强调)： 【答案】It is his lifelong devotion that brings huge benefits to people around the world. 2简单句：He fought against numerous difficulties and realized his dream. 他战胜重重困难，实现了理想。 复合句： 【答案】He held fast to his goal, so he fought against numerous difficulties and realized his dream. 拔高 (非谓语)： 【答案】Holding firmly to his original dream, he defeated various obstacles and fulfilled his lifelong ambition. 3.简单句：We can improve ourselves by learning from his noble spirit. 学习他可贵的精神，我们能够完善自我。 复合句： 【答案】When we learn from his noble spirit, we can continuously improve ourselves. 拔高 (倒装)： 【答案】Only by learning from his noble spirit can we keep improving ourselves in study and life. 三、翻译句子​​ 1.这位科学家将一生投入科研事业，从不计较个人得失。 【答案】Devoting his entire lifetime to scientific exploration, the scientist never cared about his own benefits. 2.正是突破性的研究成果让他斩获多项国际大奖。 【答案】It is his groundbreaking research achievements that earn him a host of global prizes. 3.只有学习他坚持不懈的精神，我们才能克服成长路上的困难。 【答案】Only by learning his spirit of perseverance can we conquer obstacles on our way of growth. 4如果没有他的伟大发现，很多人的生存难题难以被化解。 【答案】Without his extraordinary discovery, masses of people would have struggled with tough survival troubles. 【第二部分 提升题】 假设你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办“The Person Who Shapes Me”主题分享会。请你写一篇英文发言稿，介绍一位对你影响深远的人（可以是家人、朋友、老师或名人）。 内容包括： 1.这个人是谁； 2.他/她影响你的具体事件或言行； 3.这种影响对你的改变和意义。 注意: 词数100左右，可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 The Person Who Shapes Me _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                    The Person Who Shapes Me Good morning, everyone.Today, I stand here to talk about the person who has profoundly shaped me—my English teacher, Ms. Liu. Before entering high school, I was a timid girl who dreaded speaking English in public. In my first English class, Ms. Liu told us, “Mistakes are the portals of discovery.” She created a supportive environment where every attempt was celebrated. I still remember the day she encouraged me to join the debate team. I was full of self-doubt, but she spent hours after school practicing with me, not just on language, but on logic and confidence. Her faith ignited a spark within me. Ms. Liu is more than a teacher; she is a guide who helped me discover a braver and better self. Thank you. 【导语】这是一篇应用文。请考生写一篇英文发言稿，介绍一位对你影响深远的人（可以是家人、朋友、老师或名人）。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 帮助：help→assist 害怕的：dread→frightened 鼓励：encourage→motivate 点燃：ignite→set fire to 2.句式拓展： 简单句变复合句 原句：Before entering high school, I was a timid girl who dreaded speaking English in public. 拓展句：When reflecting on the time before high school, I realize that I was once a timid girl who dreaded speaking English in public. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】Today, I stand here to talk about the person who has profoundly shaped me—my English teacher, Ms. Liu.（运用who引导的定语从句） 【高分句型 2】She created a supportive environment where every attempt was celebrated.（运用 where引导的定语从句） 2．假如你是李华，你校英语报正在举办“大国科技推动者”主题征文比赛，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你最敬佩的一名科学工作者，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 说明其令人敬佩的原因。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 There are many scientists who have driven social development. Among them, the one I admire most is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 There are many scientists who have driven social development. Among them, the one I admire most is Yuan Longping, an outstanding agricultural scientist known as the “father of hybrid rice”. A few decades ago, the lack of food was one of the main problems threatening Chinese people. After years of study, Yuan Longping successfully developed the world’s first hybrid rice, which dramatically increased rice production. His approach to rice breeding also serves as a solution to food problems around the globe. There is no doubt that his contribution is of great significance. His story gives me inspiration and motivates me to love and learn science. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇英语短文介绍最敬佩的一名科学工作者。 【详解】1.词汇积累 出色的：outstanding→brilliant 缺少：the lack of→be short of 方法：approach→method 增加：increase→improve 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：There is no doubt that his contribution is of great significance. His story gives me inspiration and motivates me to love and learn science. 拓展句：Not only his contribution is of great significance, but also his story gives me inspiration and motivates me to love and learn science. 【点睛】【高分句型1】After years of study, Yuan Longping successfully developed the world’s first hybrid rice, which dramatically increased rice production. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】There is no doubt that his contribution is of great significance. (运用了There is no doubt that句型) 【链接高考—经典诵读】 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom对中国的名人很感兴趣。请你写一封邮件向他介绍一位你钦佩的中国名人。内容包括： 1. 该名人的人生经历; 2. 他/她对你的影响或启示; 注意： 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Version 1 Dear Tom, Hearing you’re interested in Chinese celebrities, I’d love to share about Tu Youyou, a remarkable scientist I admire deeply. In the 1960s, Tu led a team to research anti-malaria remedies. Despite countless failures, she persisted for decades and finally discovered artemisinin, saving millions of lives globally. Her work earned her the Nobel Prize in 2015, making her the first Chinese woman to receive this honor. Tu inspires me greatly. Her unwavering dedication and resilience remind me that true success comes from perseverance and selfless devotion. I hope her story touches you as much as it does me. Best wishes, Li Hua Version 2 Dear Tom, I’m excited to share with you about Yuan Longping, a Chinese hero I deeply admire. Yuan spent his whole life working to feed the world. In the 1960s, China faced serious food shortages, so he dedicated himself to developing hybrid rice. For decades, he worked in rice fields day and night, overcoming countless difficulties. His breakthroughs in hybrid rice increased global rice production greatly, helping solve hunger problems in many countries. Yuan teaches me the power of perseverance and selflessness. His passion for helping others shows that one person’s efforts can make a huge difference. I hope his story inspires you too! Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的英国笔友Tom对中国的名人很感兴趣这一情况，写一封邮件向他介绍一位你钦佩的中国名人。 【详解】1.词汇积累 对……感兴趣：be interested in→ be keen to 杰出的：remarkable→ outstanding 最终：finally→ eventually 激励：inspires→ motivates 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Hearing you’re interested in Chinese celebrities, I’d love to share about Tu Youyou, a remarkable scientist I admire deeply. 拓展句：Because I hear you’re interested in Chinese celebrities, I’d love to share about Tu Youyou, a remarkable scientist I admire deeply. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Her work earned her the Nobel Prize in 2015, making her the first Chinese woman to receive this honor.（运用了非谓语动中的现在分词作状语。） 【高分句型2】Her unwavering dedication and resilience remind me that true success comes from perseverance and selfless devotion.（运用了that引导的宾语从句。） $