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专题08 书信写作(期末复习专项训练)
Passage 1
(2026 上海市浦东新区上海市文建中学·高一下)
学校校学生会正针对“校园内是否应该禁止学生使用手机”这一话题进行意见收集。假如你是李华,请向校学生会写一份邮件,结合个人经历,谈谈你对此话题的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容:
1. 你的看法;
2. 你的理由。
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Passage 2
(2026 上海市·高一下)
假如你是明启中学高一学生李明,在你校英语报读到如下征文启事:从小学至今,每个人都制定过许多计划,有过许多新学期愿景,其中有些中途放弃了,有些坚持到底了。请你就“坚持还是放弃”这个话题写一篇征文,内容需包括:
● 简单描述你曾经中途放弃或坚持到底的某个计划;
● 阐述你中途放弃或坚持到底的原因以及对你的启示。 (文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称)
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Passage 3
(2026 上海市·高一下)
你是明启中学的王磊,你班本学期剩余一笔总额三千元的班费(class fee)结余,目前有两个方案:1. 为教室添加一台空气净化器;2. 为每位同学订阅一份英语周报(Shanghai Students’ Post)。请你给班委会(class committee)写一封信,谈谈你的看法,必须包括:
1. 你赞同的方案;
2. 你赞同该方案的理由;
3. 你对于执行此方案的建议。
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Passage 4
(2026 上海市·高一下)
假设你是明启中学学生李明,你校英语报正在举行征文比赛,主题为“The change that I expect AI to bring about”,写一篇文章参赛,内容须包括:
(1)你最期待AI会带来的变化;
(2)你期待这一变化的理由。
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Passage 5
(2026 上海市·高一下)
假如你是明启中学高一学生李明。最近收到你就读于其他学校的好朋友张伟的邮件,他正在为选科的事情纠结:究竟该理化双选还是选自己喜欢的科目?就此想征求你的意见。请回复一封邮件,谈谈你的看法。(选修课程:optional course 文科:liberal arts 理科:sciences) 你的邮件内容需包括:
1. 你的建议;
2. 你的理由。
(文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称)
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Passage 6
(2026 上海市·高一下)
作为校报成员,你负责撰写名为“Ask Amy”的建议专栏。以下是一位学生读者咨询关于健康问题建议的来信。请你就信中提出的问题进行回复并提出具体建议。
Dear Amy,
I’m anxious about my weight. Recently, I’ve been studying so much that I haven’t been eating right. I get hungry late at night and will eat pizza, potato chips and hamburgers just because they are easy to fix. I also have soft drinks while I do my homework. They help me stay awake! Now I’ve put on weight. I’m worried. Can you help me? What should I do?
Liz
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Passage 7
(2026 上海市·高一下)
假设你是光明中学高一学生王琳,学校英文报以“Travellers’ Tales”为主题,面向全校学生征集旅者轶事,请你投稿。稿件内容必须包含:
(1)明确的旅行目的地,并简单介绍该地点。
(2)旅行中发生的某件事情,以及为什么这件事情给你留下了深刻的印象。
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Passage 8
(2026 上海市·高一下)
假设你是启明中学高一学生李明。学校创新社团正在招募成员,你对此很感兴趣,请写一封电子邮件给该社团,内容须包含:
1. 谈谈你对创新的认识及报名的理由;
2. 推荐1个适合社团开展的活动,介绍其具体内容。
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Passage 9
(2026 上海市闵行中学·高一下)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
为提升学生人文科学素养,学校拟新增一门校本特色课程。请从以下两个选项中任选其一,阐述你的选择并说明理由。词数 120-150 词。
选择 1:民间传统文化体验 (Traditional Folk Cultural Experience)
选择 2:生活中的新科技 (New Technology in Everyday Life)
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Passage 10
(2026 上海市闵行中学·高一下)
Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你叫李华,17 岁,是我校一名高二的学生。深圳市明年要举办国际旅游节,现向全市招募志愿者,请你根据以下要点向组委会写一封申请信,应征旅游节志愿者的工作。
1.你的个人信息;
2.你的兴趣爱好与特长或相关经历等;
3.你的承诺。
国际旅游节 the International Tourism Festival
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头、结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Committee,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 11
假设你是高一学生李华,你和同学们报名参加了英语能力竞赛,但在进行英语听说训练时遇到一些问题,请你给外教Ryan写封邮件,邀请他做一次指导讲座。内容包括:
1.说明当前问题;
2.询问对方意向。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100-120个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior One student in our school.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 12
(2026 上海市晋元高级中学·高一下)
为深入贯彻落实国家“确保学生每天综合体育活动时间不少于两小时”的政策要求,我校体育组老师已初步设计了一系列丰富多彩的体育活动。为了号召同学真正走出教室、走向操场、主动锻炼,还需要进一步优化方案。为此,体育组现面向全体同学征集活动建议。
请你以“李华”的身份写一封建议信,从活动设计(如项目类型、趣味性、竞赛机制、分层参与等)和时空安排(如活动时段、场地利用、频次与时长等)等角度贡献智慧,并说明理由。
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Passage 1
(2026上海市吴淞中学)
假如你是明启中学高一学生李明。为加强美育,你们学校计划开展艺术节活动,现广泛征求同学们的意见。请你向校学生会写一封邮件,表达你对此活动的看法。你的邮件内容需包括:
1. 简述举办该活动的意义;2. 对活动如何开展的建议。
(文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称)
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Yours sincerely,
Passage 2
(2026上海市甘泉外国语中学)
假设你是明启中学高一学生徐晶,你的外国好友Tom发来邮件,他即将来到中国游玩,向你咨询值得品尝的中华美食以及中国用餐礼仪,请你回复一封邮件,内容包含:
1. 推荐1-2道特色中国美食并简要介绍;
2. 介绍需要注意的用餐礼仪;
3. 表达期待与他一同品尝美食。
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Passage 3
假设你是明启中学高一学生吴磊,近期学校打算在官方微信平台上开展一个“多彩校园”的短视频展评活动,并要求配上介绍。你对该活动很感兴趣,请写一篇短文作为你参展短视频的介绍,内容须包括:
1.你参展短视频的名称和内容;
2.你选择这些内容的理由。
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Passage 4
(2026上海市杨浦区中原中学)
最近有些学校规定学生每天中午必须午睡30分钟,你是否赞成这种做法?请谈谈你的理由。
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Passage 5
(2026上海市曹杨第二中学)
Your school is considering installing vending machines (自动售货机) on campus to provide students with snacks and drinks. Some students support this plan while others object to it. Do you support this decision? Please write an essay to express your opinion.
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Passage 6
许多饲养宠物的人和宠物关系亲密,他们视鸟、狗、猫等宠物为家里的一员。你觉得这种人与宠物的关系好吗?请说说你的看法,并举例说明你那样认为的理由。
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专题08 书信写作(期末复习专项训练)
Passage 1
Dear Student Union,
I am writing to share my opinion on whether mobile phones should be banned on campus. Personally, I am strongly in favor of this proposal.
First and foremost, mobile phones are a huge distraction. Take my own experience as an example. Last semester, I was so addicted to a mobile game that I couldn’t concentrate on my lessons, which eventually led to my failure in the midterm exam. It was a bitter lesson for me. Furthermore, excessive use of smartphones reduces face-to-face communication among students, making us isolated from the real world.
Therefore, banning mobile phones will not only help us focus on our studies but also encourage us to build healthier interpersonal relationships. I hope the school will take my suggestion into serious consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 2
The Dilemma of Persistence and Surrender
As a freshman at Mingqi High School, I have encountered many forks in the road of my life. Among the numerous plans and aspirations I’ve set for myself, one stands out — my decision to learn the piano. Initially, the thought of mastering this elegant instrument filled me with enthusiasm, but soon, the rigorous practice and complex theory took their toll. I surrendered, overwhelmed by the challenge.
Looking back, I realize that my surrender was a result of my lack of resilience. I failed to persevere when faced with difficulties. This experience taught me a valuable lesson: giving up too easily can lead to missed opportunities and unfulfilled dreams. Now, I strive to be more determined, understanding that true growth lies in overcoming obstacles, not avoiding them. Persistence, not surrender, is the key to success.
Passage 3
Dear class committee,
As we all know, there is a class fee balance of 3,000 yuan remaining for this semester. At present, there are two ways to spend it: one is to add an air purifier to the classroom; the other is to subscribe to the Shanghai Students’ Post for each student.
I am in favor of subscribing to the Shanghai Students’ Post. For one thing, the Shanghai Students’ Post is a good journal for our English studies. For another, it contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons.
We should set aside two classes every week for our students to read it, and find an opportunity to let the students report on what they have read.
Yours,
Wang Lei
Passage 4
The Change that I Expect AI to Bring About
As a senior high school student, I’m highly interested in the potential of AI. The change that I most expect AI to bring about is in the field of education.
I hope AI can provide personalized learning experiences for every student. In traditional classrooms, teachers have to teach a large group of students with different learning paces and styles. However, AI can analyze students’ learning data, such as their strengths, weaknesses, and learning speeds. Then it can customize study plans and materials for each individual.
The reason for my expectation is that personalized learning can greatly improve learning efficiency. Students can focus more on the areas where they need improvement, and they won’t waste time on things they already know well. Moreover, it can also increase students’ enthusiasm for learning as they are more likely to achieve better results with a more suitable learning method. In this way, AI can help every student reach their full potential in education.
Passage 5
Dear Zhang Wei,
Having received your email saying that you’re facing a tough decision regarding your optional courses, I’d like to share my thoughts on this matter.
Firstly, I suggest you choose the subjects that you are genuinely interested in, because being passionate about a subject often leads to better performance. If you have a strong liking for a particular subject, such as art, literature, or even a science topic that fascinates you, pursuing it can make your study experience more enjoyable and fulfilling. Secondly, consider your future aspirations. Think about what career path you might want to take in the future. It’s essential to align your current studies with your long-term goals.
In conclusion, my advice is to weigh your interests and consider your future plans. Whatever decision you make, make sure it’s one that you feel good about and that will help you grow academically and personally. Wish you all the best in making this important choice!
Best regards,
Li Ming
Passage 6
Dear Liz,
I understand your worry about weight gain, and it’s common to develop unhealthy habits when overwhelmed by studies. Here are practical ways to improve your routine:
First, replace late-night junk food with nutritious alternatives. Keep snacks like Greek yogurt, sliced veggies with hummus, or whole-grain crackers — they’re quick to prepare and rich in nutrients. Second, swap soft drinks for water or herbal tea. Staying hydrated can boost focus without the sugar crash, and adding a slice of lemon or cucumber makes it more refreshing.
Next, incorporate short breaks for movement. A five-minute walk, stretching, or jumping jacks can refresh your mind and boost metabolism. Also, try setting fixed meal times to avoid impulsive eating. If you study late, have a balanced snack like a banana with peanut butter instead of processed foods.
Finally, practice mindful eating. Avoid snacking while working, as distraction leads to overeating. Focus on enjoying each bite to recognize when you’re full. Small changes will gradually improve both your health and study efficiency.
Best regards,
Amy
Passage 7
A Brush with History in Dunhuang
Last summer, I journeyed to Dunhuang, a Gansu city and a vital node on the ancient Silk Road. Famous for the Mogao Caves, it shelters thousands of centuries-old murals and statues, embodying China’s profound cultural heritage.
In the dimly lit cave, I chanced upon an elderly mural restorer. With a brush so delicate, he was mending a faded section, his eyes fixed intently on the ancient artwork. He shared that restoring these treasures demanded not only knowledge of ancient pigments but also extreme patience. “We’re not just fixing paintings; we’re passing down history,” he said earnestly. His words, along with his unwavering dedication, deeply touched me. This encounter made me understand that Dunhuang isn’t just about scenery — it’s a testament to the perseverance of cultural preservation, teaching me to cherish the stories behind each relic.
Passage 8
Dear Innovation Club,
I’m Li Ming, a Senior 1 student from Qiming Middle School. I believe innovation is the key to progress. It enables us to break away from conventions and create new values. By combining creative ideas with practical skills, we can solve real-world problems.
I’m eager to join as I’m passionate about exploring new ideas. I recommend an “Innovation Workshop” activity. We can invite experts to give lectures on the latest innovative concepts. Then, students work in groups to brainstorm and design creative projects. This will surely inspire our innovative thinking.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Ming
Passage 9
I choose Traditional Folk Cultural Experience as our new school course. I believe this class will greatly improve our understanding of Chinese culture.
First, we can learn about activities like paper-cutting, dragon dances, and traditional festivals. These events, which connect us to our history, are very important. The course will teach us skills that we cannot easily learn from books. For example, making handicrafts will be a fun way to relax. Furthermore, I think that students will become more confident after taking this class. It allows us to see the beauty of our own traditions. Since many young people today are not familiar with these customs, this course is necessary. It is a fact that our school should help protect this heritage. By joining this class, we will not only gain knowledge but also develop a deeper love for our country.
Passage 10
Dear Committee,
I’m Li Hua, a 17-year-old student from Class 3, Grade 11. Learning that volunteers are needed for the International Tourism Festival next year, I’m eager to contribute.
As an outgoing teenager, I love exploring new cultures and have volunteered at Shenzhen Cultural Expo, where I assisted foreign guests. Fluent in English and skilled in cross-cultural communication, I can bridge gaps between visitors and locals. I’m also familiar with Shenzhen’s history and attractions, making me a suitable guide.
If selected, I’ll offer professional, patient service, ensuring every guest feels welcome. I’m ready to work flexibly and handle challenges. Please consider my application!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 11
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior One student in our school. On behalf of my classmates, I’m writing to invite you to give us a guiding lecture on English learning.
We have signed up for the English Proficiency Competition and been busy with listening and speaking training recently, yet we have met some frustrating problems. In listening practice, the listening materials are delivered at a fast speed, making it hard for us to follow and understand the whole context. When it comes to oral practice, we are short of confidence. We can hardly organize ideas in a short time and always stutter with simple and repeated expressions.
Would you be kind enough to spare some time to give us professional guidance? We will be grateful if you can accept our invitation and look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 12
Dear Teachers of the PE Group,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 1. I’m very glad to hear that you are collecting suggestions for the school sports activity plan to ensure we have at least 2 hours of sports activities every day. Here are my ideas.
In terms of activity design, I suggest we provide diverse types of activities, including ball games, aerobics, tai chi and frisbee to cater to different interests. We can add fun elements like obstacle runs in relay races, and set up tiered competition mechanisms for both professional players and amateurs. As for time and space arrangement, we can make use of the 30-minute break in the morning and one class period every afternoon for activities.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 1
Dear Students’ Union,
I’m Li Ming, a freshman from our school. I strongly support the plan to hold an art festival, as it plays a vital role in promoting aesthetic education among students.
First, the festival can help us develop a better understanding of beauty and creativity, which are often neglected in daily academic study. Also, it offers a valuable chance to relax and express ourselves. To make the event meaningful, I suggest organizing different sections, such as painting, calligraphy, and photography. Students should be encouraged to show their original works. Moreover, inviting professional artists to give lectures or workshops would enrich our experience.
I believe such an activity will not only develop our taste but also make our school life more colorful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Passage 2
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your email. Knowing that you will travel to China, I’d like to introduce some local delicacies and basic Chinese table manners to you.
Among various Chinese foods, I highly recommend Peking Duck and dumplings. Peking Duck is a top traditional dish with crispy skin and fresh meat. Dumplings are classic folk food, filled with vegetables or meat, and they stand for good wishes in Chinese culture.
When having meals in China, you need to pay attention to some manners. We use chopsticks daily. Never stick chopsticks upright in the bowl of rice, which is considered bad luck. Moreover, it’s rude to tap bowls with chopsticks or talk loudly during dinner.
I’m really looking forward to your coming. I hope to hang out with you and taste delicious Chinese food together.
Yours sincerely,
Xu Jing
Passage 3
My short video, “Colors of Youth”, captures the vibrant moments of campus life. The footage opens with students reading under the maple trees in the morning, followed by clips of a lively debate competition, a basketball match cheered by the crowd, and art club members painting sunset on the rooftop. I also included a scene of teachers helping students with math problems after class, and the canteen’s colorful food stalls at lunchtime.
I chose these scenes because they reflect the true spirit of our school. The morning reading shows academic passion, the sports and art activities display creativity, and the teacher-student interactions highlight care. The video aims to prove that youth is not just about textbooks, but about growing in a colorful, dynamic environment. Through these frames, I hope to share the warmth and energy that make our campus a second home.
Passage 4
Nowadays, some schools require students to take a 30-minute nap at noon every day. This rule has caused a heated discussion among students. As for me, I fully approve of this reasonable school practice.
A proper noon nap can effectively relieve our physical and mental tiredness from long hours of morning study. It can also refresh our mind and help us stay energetic and concentrated in all afternoon classes. Without a short rest, we may feel sleepy and distracted, which will greatly influence our learning efficiency. Besides, a regular noon rest is beneficial to our physical health and keeps us in a positive daily mood.
In short, a 30-minute noon nap is absolutely necessary for busy senior high students. It serves as a simple but practical way to balance heavy study tasks and daily rest. Therefore, I firmly believe that schools should stick to this thoughtful regulation.
Passage 5
I support installing vending machines on campus. They are convenient for students.
When we feel hungry or thirsty between classes, we can easily get snacks and drinks without wasting time, which is especially helpful on busy school days. Besides, proper machines can offer healthy choices, making our school life more comfortable and enjoyable. We should remember to choose healthy food and avoid too many snacks. With reasonable use, vending machines will bring great convenience to our daily school life.
In short, I believe this plan is good for students and will make our campus life better.
Passage 6
As is known to all, more and more people have their own pets and some have a very close relationship with their pets, especially the old people, who even view their pets as a member of their family and call their pets “Baby/Sun…”.
Different people have different opinions to this phenomenon. As for me, I think that it is normal. First of all, some pets, like dog, can serve as a great comfort for the old people, because some old people feel very lonely. What’s more, some pets can help people do some work like taking care of babies.
At last, I think although pets can bring great benefits to us, we should be sure that we can avoid injury or disease caused by pets.
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Passage 1
(2026 上海市浦东新区上海市文建中学·高一下)
学校校学生会正针对“校园内是否应该禁止学生使用手机”这一话题进行意见收集。假如你是李华,请向校学生会写一份邮件,结合个人经历,谈谈你对此话题的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容:
1. 你的看法;
2. 你的理由。
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【答案】
Dear Student Union,
I am writing to share my opinion on whether mobile phones should be banned on campus. Personally, I am strongly in favor of this proposal.
First and foremost, mobile phones are a huge distraction. Take my own experience as an example. Last semester, I was so addicted to a mobile game that I couldn’t concentrate on my lessons, which eventually led to my failure in the midterm exam. It was a bitter lesson for me. Furthermore, excessive use of smartphones reduces face-to-face communication among students, making us isolated from the real world.
Therefore, banning mobile phones will not only help us focus on our studies but also encourage us to build healthier interpersonal relationships. I hope the school will take my suggestion into serious consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】学校校学生会正针对“校园内是否应该禁止学生使用手机”这一话题进行意见收集。要求考生向校学生会写一份邮件,结合个人经历,谈谈自己对此话题的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
观点:opinion→perspective
禁止:ban→prohibit
上瘾的:addicted→obsessed
导致:lead to→ result in/contribute to
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:Therefore, banning mobile phones will not only help us focus on our studies but also encourage us to build healthier interpersonal relationships.
拓展句:Therefore, not only will banning mobile phones help us focus on our studies but also encourage us to build healthier interpersonal relationships.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to share my opinion on whether mobile phones should be banned on campus.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语以及whether引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Last semester, I was so addicted to a mobile game that I couldn’t concentrate on my lessons, which eventually led to my failure in the midterm exam.(运用了so...that...句型引导的结果状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
(2026 上海市·高一下)
假如你是明启中学高一学生李明,在你校英语报读到如下征文启事:从小学至今,每个人都制定过许多计划,有过许多新学期愿景,其中有些中途放弃了,有些坚持到底了。请你就“坚持还是放弃”这个话题写一篇征文,内容需包括:
● 简单描述你曾经中途放弃或坚持到底的某个计划;
● 阐述你中途放弃或坚持到底的原因以及对你的启示。 (文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称)
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The Dilemma of Persistence and Surrender
As a freshman at Mingqi High School, I have encountered many forks in the road of my life. Among the numerous plans and aspirations I’ve set for myself, one stands out — my decision to learn the piano. Initially, the thought of mastering this elegant instrument filled me with enthusiasm, but soon, the rigorous practice and complex theory took their toll. I surrendered, overwhelmed by the challenge.
Looking back, I realize that my surrender was a result of my lack of resilience. I failed to persevere when faced with difficulties. This experience taught me a valuable lesson: giving up too easily can lead to missed opportunities and unfulfilled dreams. Now, I strive to be more determined, understanding that true growth lies in overcoming obstacles, not avoiding them. Persistence, not surrender, is the key to success.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生就“坚持还是放弃”这个话题写一篇征文,描述经过并阐述原因以及启示。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
遇到:encounter→run into
意识到:realize→be aware of/that
努力:strive to do→struggle to do
障碍:obstacle→barrier
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Initially, the thought of mastering this elegant instrument filled me with enthusiasm, but soon, the rigorous practice and complex theory took their toll.
拓展句:Although initially the thought of mastering this elegant instrument filled me with enthusiasm, the rigorous practice and complex theory took their toll soon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Looking back, I realize that my surrender was a result of my lack of resilience. (运用了现在分词作状语、that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I failed to persevere when faced with difficulties.(运用了状语从句的省略)
[高分句型3] Now, I strive to be more determined, understanding that true growth lies in overcoming obstacles, not avoiding them. (使用了现在分词作状语、that引导宾语从句、动名词作宾语)
Passage 3
(2026 上海市·高一下)
你是明启中学的王磊,你班本学期剩余一笔总额三千元的班费(class fee)结余,目前有两个方案:1. 为教室添加一台空气净化器;2. 为每位同学订阅一份英语周报(Shanghai Students’ Post)。请你给班委会(class committee)写一封信,谈谈你的看法,必须包括:
1. 你赞同的方案;
2. 你赞同该方案的理由;
3. 你对于执行此方案的建议。
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【答案】
Dear class committee,
As we all know, there is a class fee balance of 3,000 yuan remaining for this semester. At present, there are two ways to spend it: one is to add an air purifier to the classroom; the other is to subscribe to the Shanghai Students’ Post for each student.
I am in favor of subscribing to the Shanghai Students’ Post. For one thing, the Shanghai Students’ Post is a good journal for our English studies. For another, it contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons.
We should set aside two classes every week for our students to read it, and find an opportunity to let the students report on what they have read.
Yours,
Wang Lei
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生给班委会写一封信,谈谈对如何使用本学期剩余班费方案的看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
学期:semester → term
支持:be in favor of → support/back up
有用的:useful → beneficial
开阔视野:broaden one’s horizons → expand one’s mind
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:For one thing, the Shanghai Students’ Post is a good journal for our English studies. For another, it contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons.
拓展句:Not only is the Shanghai Students’ Post a good journal for our English studies, but it also contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons.
【点睛】[高分句型1] For another, it contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons.(运用了关系代词which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] We should set aside two classes every week for our students to read it, and find an opportunity to let the students report on what they have read.(运用了连接代词what引导宾语从句)
Passage 4
(2026 上海市·高一下)
假设你是明启中学学生李明,你校英语报正在举行征文比赛,主题为“The change that I expect AI to bring about”,写一篇文章参赛,内容须包括:
(1)你最期待AI会带来的变化;
(2)你期待这一变化的理由。
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【答案】 范文:
The Change that I Expect AI to Bring About
As a senior high school student, I’m highly interested in the potential of AI. The change that I most expect AI to bring about is in the field of education.
I hope AI can provide personalized learning experiences for every student. In traditional classrooms, teachers have to teach a large group of students with different learning paces and styles. However, AI can analyze students’ learning data, such as their strengths, weaknesses, and learning speeds. Then it can customize study plans and materials for each individual.
The reason for my expectation is that personalized learning can greatly improve learning efficiency. Students can focus more on the areas where they need improvement, and they won’t waste time on things they already know well. Moreover, it can also increase students’ enthusiasm for learning as they are more likely to achieve better results with a more suitable learning method. In this way, AI can help every student reach their full potential in education.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以学生李明的身份,围绕“The change that I expect AI to bring about”这一主题进行写作,需包含最期待 AI 带来的变化以及期待这一变化的理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in → have interest in
定制:customize → tailor
提高:improve → enhance
合适的:suitable → appropriate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, AI can analyze students’ learning data, such as their strengths, weaknesses, and learning speeds.
拓展句:However, AI, which has powerful computing capabilities, can analyze students’ learning data, such as their strengths, weaknesses, and learning speeds.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The change that I most expect AI to bring about is in the field of education. (运用了关系代词that引导限制性定语从句、不定式作表语)
[高分句型2] The reason for my expectation is that personalized learning can greatly improve learning efficiency.(运用了连词that引导表语从句)
[高分句型3] Moreover, it can also increase students’ enthusiasm for learning as they are more likely to achieve better results with a more suitable learning method. (运用了从属连词as引导原因状语从句)
Passage 5
(2026 上海市·高一下)
假如你是明启中学高一学生李明。最近收到你就读于其他学校的好朋友张伟的邮件,他正在为选科的事情纠结:究竟该理化双选还是选自己喜欢的科目?就此想征求你的意见。请回复一封邮件,谈谈你的看法。(选修课程:optional course 文科:liberal arts 理科:sciences) 你的邮件内容需包括:
1. 你的建议;
2. 你的理由。
(文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称)
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【答案】Dear Zhang Wei,
Having received your email saying that you’re facing a tough decision regarding your optional courses, I’d like to share my thoughts on this matter.
Firstly, I suggest you choose the subjects that you are genuinely interested in, because being passionate about a subject often leads to better performance. If you have a strong liking for a particular subject, such as art, literature, or even a science topic that fascinates you, pursuing it can make your study experience more enjoyable and fulfilling. Secondly, consider your future aspirations. Think about what career path you might want to take in the future. It’s essential to align your current studies with your long-term goals.
In conclusion, my advice is to weigh your interests and consider your future plans. Whatever decision you make, make sure it’s one that you feel good about and that will help you grow academically and personally. Wish you all the best in making this important choice!
Best regards,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达要求学生代替李明给张伟回信,就他所纠结的选科问题提出自己的看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
关于:regarding→in regard to/with respect to
对……有热情:be passionate about→be enthusiastic about/be keen on
考虑:consider→take…into consideration/take…into account
与……一致:align...with... →correspond with
2. 句式拓展:
同义句转换
原句:Firstly, I suggest you choose the subjects that you are genuinely interested in, because being passionate about a subject often leads to better performance.
拓展句:Firstly, what I suggest you choose are the subjects that you are genuinely interested in, because being passionate about a subject often leads to better performance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Having received your email saying that you’re facing a tough decision regarding your optional courses, I’d like to share my thoughts on this matter.(运用了现在分词的完成式Having received...作状语、现在分词saying作后置定语、that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Whatever decision you make, make sure it’s one that you feel good about and that will help you grow academically and personally.(运用了Whatever引导让步状语以及that引导定语从句)
Passage 6
(2026 上海市·高一下)
作为校报成员,你负责撰写名为“Ask Amy”的建议专栏。以下是一位学生读者咨询关于健康问题建议的来信。请你就信中提出的问题进行回复并提出具体建议。
Dear Amy,
I’m anxious about my weight. Recently, I’ve been studying so much that I haven’t been eating right. I get hungry late at night and will eat pizza, potato chips and hamburgers just because they are easy to fix. I also have soft drinks while I do my homework. They help me stay awake! Now I’ve put on weight. I’m worried. Can you help me? What should I do?
Liz
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【答案】
Dear Liz,
I understand your worry about weight gain, and it’s common to develop unhealthy habits when overwhelmed by studies. Here are practical ways to improve your routine:
First, replace late-night junk food with nutritious alternatives. Keep snacks like Greek yogurt, sliced veggies with hummus, or whole-grain crackers — they’re quick to prepare and rich in nutrients. Second, swap soft drinks for water or herbal tea. Staying hydrated can boost focus without the sugar crash, and adding a slice of lemon or cucumber makes it more refreshing.
Next, incorporate short breaks for movement. A five-minute walk, stretching, or jumping jacks can refresh your mind and boost metabolism. Also, try setting fixed meal times to avoid impulsive eating. If you study late, have a balanced snack like a banana with peanut butter instead of processed foods.
Finally, practice mindful eating. Avoid snacking while working, as distraction leads to overeating. Focus on enjoying each bite to recognize when you’re full. Small changes will gradually improve both your health and study efficiency.
Best regards,
Amy
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生就学生读者咨询关于健康问题建议的来信进行回复并提出具体建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
担心: worry→concern
促进:boost→promote
导致:lead to→bring about
专注于:focus on→concentrate on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: First, replace late-night junk food with nutritious alternatives.
拓展句: First, it is advisable that you should replace late-night junk food with nutritious alternatives.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I understand your worry about weight gain, and it’s common to develop unhealthy habits when overwhelmed by studies.(运用了状语从句的省略、it is+adj.+to do结构)
【高分句型2】Staying hydrated can boost focus without the sugar crash, and adding a slice of lemon or cucumber makes it more refreshing.(运用了动名词作主语)
Passage 7
(2026 上海市·高一下)
假设你是光明中学高一学生王琳,学校英文报以“Travellers’ Tales”为主题,面向全校学生征集旅者轶事,请你投稿。稿件内容必须包含:
(1)明确的旅行目的地,并简单介绍该地点。
(2)旅行中发生的某件事情,以及为什么这件事情给你留下了深刻的印象。
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【答案】范文
A Brush with History in Dunhuang
Last summer, I journeyed to Dunhuang, a Gansu city and a vital node on the ancient Silk Road. Famous for the Mogao Caves, it shelters thousands of centuries-old murals and statues, embodying China’s profound cultural heritage.
In the dimly lit cave, I chanced upon an elderly mural restorer. With a brush so delicate, he was mending a faded section, his eyes fixed intently on the ancient artwork. He shared that restoring these treasures demanded not only knowledge of ancient pigments but also extreme patience. “We’re not just fixing paintings; we’re passing down history,” he said earnestly. His words, along with his unwavering dedication, deeply touched me. This encounter made me understand that Dunhuang isn’t just about scenery — it’s a testament to the perseverance of cultural preservation, teaching me to cherish the stories behind each relic.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以“Travellers’ Tales”为主题,就自己的旅游轶事向学校英文报投稿。其内容包括:旅行目的地及其简要介绍,旅行中发生的某件事情,以及为什么这件事情给你留下了深刻的印象。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
重要的:vital→important
著名的:famous →renowned
修补:repair→mend
真诚地:earnestly→sincerely
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Last summer, I journeyed to Dunhuang, a Gansu city and a vital node on the ancient Silk Road.
拓展句: Last summer, I journeyed to Dunhuang, which is a Gansu city and was a vital node on the ancient Silk Road.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Famous for the Mogao Caves, it shelters thousands of centuries-old murals and statues, embodying China’s profound cultural heritage.(运用了形容词短语和现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】With a brush so delicate, he was mending a faded section, his eyes fixed intently on the ancient artwork. (运用了With复合结构和独立主格结构)
Passage 8
(2026 上海市·高一下)
假设你是启明中学高一学生李明。学校创新社团正在招募成员,你对此很感兴趣,请写一封电子邮件给该社团,内容须包含:
1. 谈谈你对创新的认识及报名的理由;
2. 推荐1个适合社团开展的活动,介绍其具体内容。
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【答案】
Dear Innovation Club,
I’m Li Ming, a Senior 1 student from Qiming Middle School. I believe innovation is the key to progress. It enables us to break away from conventions and create new values. By combining creative ideas with practical skills, we can solve real-world problems.
I’m eager to join as I’m passionate about exploring new ideas. I recommend an “Innovation Workshop” activity. We can invite experts to give lectures on the latest innovative concepts. Then, students work in groups to brainstorm and design creative projects. This will surely inspire our innovative thinking.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生请写一封电子邮件给创新社团,谈谈对创新的认识及报名的理由,推荐一个活动并具体介绍。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
惯例,常规:convention→routine
热情的:passionate→enthusiastic
激发,鼓舞:inspire→stimulate
技巧:skill→technique
2. 句式拓展
句式转换
原句:I believe innovation is the key to progress.
拓展句:I hold the belief that innovation serves as the key to making progress.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】I believe innovation is the key to progress.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】Then, students work in groups to brainstorm and design creative projects.(使用动词不定式作目的状语)
Passage 9
(2026 上海市闵行中学·高一下)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
为提升学生人文科学素养,学校拟新增一门校本特色课程。请从以下两个选项中任选其一,阐述你的选择并说明理由。词数 120-150 词。
选择 1:民间传统文化体验 (Traditional Folk Cultural Experience)
选择 2:生活中的新科技 (New Technology in Everyday Life)
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【答案】
I choose Traditional Folk Cultural Experience as our new school course. I believe this class will greatly improve our understanding of Chinese culture.
First, we can learn about activities like paper-cutting, dragon dances, and traditional festivals. These events, which connect us to our history, are very important. The course will teach us skills that we cannot easily learn from books. For example, making handicrafts will be a fun way to relax. Furthermore, I think that students will become more confident after taking this class. It allows us to see the beauty of our own traditions. Since many young people today are not familiar with these customs, this course is necessary. It is a fact that our school should help protect this heritage. By joining this class, we will not only gain knowledge but also develop a deeper love for our country.
【导语】题目要求考生从两门校本课程中任选其一,用120—150词阐述选择并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
改善:improve → enhance
重要的:important → significant
自信的:confident → self-assured
熟悉的:familiar → acquainted
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:I choose Traditional Folk Cultural Experience as our new school course. I believe this class will greatly improve our understanding of Chinese culture.
拓展句:I choose Traditional Folk Cultural Experience as our new school course, because I believe this class will greatly improve our understanding of Chinese culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】These events, which connect us to our history, are very important. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The course will teach us skills that we cannot easily learn from books. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 10
(2026 上海市闵行中学·高一下)
Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你叫李华,17 岁,是我校一名高二的学生。深圳市明年要举办国际旅游节,现向全市招募志愿者,请你根据以下要点向组委会写一封申请信,应征旅游节志愿者的工作。
1.你的个人信息;
2.你的兴趣爱好与特长或相关经历等;
3.你的承诺。
国际旅游节 the International Tourism Festival
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头、结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Committee,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】范文:
Dear Committee,
I’m Li Hua, a 17-year-old student from Class 3, Grade 11. Learning that volunteers are needed for the International Tourism Festival next year, I’m eager to contribute.
As an outgoing teenager, I love exploring new cultures and have volunteered at Shenzhen Cultural Expo, where I assisted foreign guests. Fluent in English and skilled in cross-cultural communication, I can bridge gaps between visitors and locals. I’m also familiar with Shenzhen’s history and attractions, making me a suitable guide.
If selected, I’ll offer professional, patient service, ensuring every guest feels welcome. I’m ready to work flexibly and handle challenges. Please consider my application!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求高二学生李华给深圳市国际旅游节组委会写一封英文申请信,应征志愿者岗位。
【详解】1.词汇积累
渴望的:eager → longing
合适的:suitable → proper/appropriate
确保:ensure → guarantee
处理:handle → deal with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m also familiar with Shenzhen’s history and attractions, making me a suitable guide.
拓展句:I’m also familiar with Shenzhen’s history and attractions, which makes me a well-qualified guide for foreign visitors.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that volunteers are needed for the International Tourism Festival next year, I’m eager to contribute. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] As an outgoing teenager, I love exploring new cultures and have volunteered at Shenzhen Cultural Expo, where I assisted foreign guests. (运用了动名词短语作宾语,where引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 11
假设你是高一学生李华,你和同学们报名参加了英语能力竞赛,但在进行英语听说训练时遇到一些问题,请你给外教Ryan写封邮件,邀请他做一次指导讲座。内容包括:
1.说明当前问题;
2.询问对方意向。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100-120个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior One student in our school.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior One student in our school. On behalf of my classmates, I’m writing to invite you to give us a guiding lecture on English learning.
We have signed up for the English Proficiency Competition and been busy with listening and speaking training recently, yet we have met some frustrating problems. In listening practice, the listening materials are delivered at a fast speed, making it hard for us to follow and understand the whole context. When it comes to oral practice, we are short of confidence. We can hardly organize ideas in a short time and always stutter with simple and repeated expressions.
Would you be kind enough to spare some time to give us professional guidance? We will be grateful if you can accept our invitation and look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】本篇书面表达要求考生以高一学生李华的身份,给外教Ryan写封邮件,邀请他做一次英语听说训练指导讲座,说明当前问题并询问对方意向。
1.词汇积累
忙于:be busy with→ be occupied with
令人沮丧的:frustrating → disheartening
缺乏:be short of → lack
指导:guidance → instruction
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:In listening practice, the listening materials are delivered at a fast speed, making it hard for us to follow and understand the whole context.
拓展句:In listening practice, the listening materials are delivered at a fast speed, which makes it hard for us to follow and understand the whole context.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In listening practice, the listening materials are delivered at a fast speed, making it hard for us to follow and understand the whole context.(运用了现在分词短语作状语以及“it作形式宾语,不定式短语作真正宾语”结构)
【高分句型2】We will be grateful if you can accept our invitation and look forward to your reply.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 12
(2026 上海市晋元高级中学·高一下)
为深入贯彻落实国家“确保学生每天综合体育活动时间不少于两小时”的政策要求,我校体育组老师已初步设计了一系列丰富多彩的体育活动。为了号召同学真正走出教室、走向操场、主动锻炼,还需要进一步优化方案。为此,体育组现面向全体同学征集活动建议。
请你以“李华”的身份写一封建议信,从活动设计(如项目类型、趣味性、竞赛机制、分层参与等)和时空安排(如活动时段、场地利用、频次与时长等)等角度贡献智慧,并说明理由。
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【答案】范文:
Dear Teachers of the PE Group,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 1. I’m very glad to hear that you are collecting suggestions for the school sports activity plan to ensure we have at least 2 hours of sports activities every day. Here are my ideas.
In terms of activity design, I suggest we provide diverse types of activities, including ball games, aerobics, tai chi and frisbee to cater to different interests. We can add fun elements like obstacle runs in relay races, and set up tiered competition mechanisms for both professional players and amateurs. As for time and space arrangement, we can make use of the 30-minute break in the morning and one class period every afternoon for activities.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份,给学校体育组老师写建议信,结合国家“确保学生每天综合体育活动时间不少于两小时”的政策要求,从活动设计(项目类型、趣味性等)和时空安排(活动时段、场地利用等)角度提出建议并说明理由,助力优化体育活动方案,号召同学主动锻炼。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
多样的:diverse→a wide range of
确保:ensure→guarantee
利用:make use of→take advantage of
建议:suggestion→proposal
2. 句式拓展
同义句
原句:In terms of activity design, I suggest we provide diverse types of activities, including ball games, aerobics, tai chi and frisbee to cater to different interests.
拓展句:In terms of activity design, I suggest we provide diverse types of activities, which include ball games, aerobics, tai chi and frisbee to cater to different interests.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m very glad to hear that you are collecting suggestions for the school sports activity plan to ensure we have at least 2 hours of sports activities every day.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】In terms of activity design, I suggest we provide diverse types of activities, including ball games, aerobics, tai chi and frisbee to cater to different interests.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 1
(2026上海市吴淞中学)
假如你是明启中学高一学生李明。为加强美育,你们学校计划开展艺术节活动,现广泛征求同学们的意见。请你向校学生会写一封邮件,表达你对此活动的看法。你的邮件内容需包括:
1. 简述举办该活动的意义;2. 对活动如何开展的建议。
(文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称)
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【答案】Dear Students’ Union,
I’m Li Ming, a freshman from our school. I strongly support the plan to hold an art festival, as it plays a vital role in promoting aesthetic education among students.
First, the festival can help us develop a better understanding of beauty and creativity, which are often neglected in daily academic study. Also, it offers a valuable chance to relax and express ourselves. To make the event meaningful, I suggest organizing different sections, such as painting, calligraphy, and photography. Students should be encouraged to show their original works. Moreover, inviting professional artists to give lectures or workshops would enrich our experience.
I believe such an activity will not only develop our taste but also make our school life more colorful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以高一学生李明的身份,表达对校学生会就艺术节活动的看法,说明活动意义和具体建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
促进:promote→enhance
有意义的:meaningful→significant
开讲座:give lectures→deliver lectures
培养:develop→cultivate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Students should be encouraged to show their original works.
拓展句:It is advisable that students be encouraged to show their original works.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I strongly support the plan to hold an art festival, as it plays a vital role in promoting aesthetic education among students.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】First, the festival can help us develop a better understanding of beauty and creativity, which are often neglected in daily academic study.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
(2026上海市甘泉外国语中学)
假设你是明启中学高一学生徐晶,你的外国好友Tom发来邮件,他即将来到中国游玩,向你咨询值得品尝的中华美食以及中国用餐礼仪,请你回复一封邮件,内容包含:
1. 推荐1-2道特色中国美食并简要介绍;
2. 介绍需要注意的用餐礼仪;
3. 表达期待与他一同品尝美食。
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【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your email. Knowing that you will travel to China, I’d like to introduce some local delicacies and basic Chinese table manners to you.
Among various Chinese foods, I highly recommend Peking Duck and dumplings. Peking Duck is a top traditional dish with crispy skin and fresh meat. Dumplings are classic folk food, filled with vegetables or meat, and they stand for good wishes in Chinese culture.
When having meals in China, you need to pay attention to some manners. We use chopsticks daily. Never stick chopsticks upright in the bowl of rice, which is considered bad luck. Moreover, it’s rude to tap bowls with chopsticks or talk loudly during dinner.
I’m really looking forward to your coming. I hope to hang out with you and taste delicious Chinese food together.
Yours sincerely,
Xu Jing
【导语】要求考生以徐晶的身份给外国好友Tom回一封邮件,给他推荐1-2道特色中国美食并介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的:various→diverse/varied
传统的:traditional→conventional
代表,象征:stand for→symbolize
期待:hope→anticipate
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:Dumplings are classic folk food, filled with vegetables or meat, and they stand for good wishes in Chinese culture.
拓展句:Dumplings, which stand for good wishes in Chinese culture, are classic folk food, filled with vegetables or meat.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you will travel to China, I’d like to introduce some local delicacies and basic Chinese table manners to you.(运用了现在分词knowing作状语和that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】When having meals in China, you need to pay attention to some manners.(运用了状语从句的省略)
Passage 3
假设你是明启中学高一学生吴磊,近期学校打算在官方微信平台上开展一个“多彩校园”的短视频展评活动,并要求配上介绍。你对该活动很感兴趣,请写一篇短文作为你参展短视频的介绍,内容须包括:
1.你参展短视频的名称和内容;
2.你选择这些内容的理由。
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【答案】范文:
My short video, “Colors of Youth”, captures the vibrant moments of campus life. The footage opens with students reading under the maple trees in the morning, followed by clips of a lively debate competition, a basketball match cheered by the crowd, and art club members painting sunset on the rooftop. I also included a scene of teachers helping students with math problems after class, and the canteen’s colorful food stalls at lunchtime.
I chose these scenes because they reflect the true spirit of our school. The morning reading shows academic passion, the sports and art activities display creativity, and the teacher-student interactions highlight care. The video aims to prove that youth is not just about textbooks, but about growing in a colorful, dynamic environment. Through these frames, I hope to share the warmth and energy that make our campus a second home.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以高一学生吴磊的身份,为学校官方微信平台“多彩校园”短视频展评活动撰写一篇参展短视频的介绍,内容需包括视频名称、内容及选择理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
捕捉、录制:capture → record
生动的:vibrant → lively
展示:display → showcase
活力:energy → vitality
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My short video, “Colors of Youth”, captures the vibrant moments of campus life.
拓展句:My short video, “Colors of Youth”, captures the vibrant moments of campus life, which are filled with energy and warmth.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The footage opens with students reading under the maple trees in the morning, followed by clips of a lively debate competition, a basketball match cheered by the crowd, and art club members painting sunset on the rooftop.(运用了with复合结构、过去分词短语followed by...作状语、过去分词短语cheered by...作后置定语、现在分词短语painting...作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Through these frames, I hope to share the warmth and energy that make our campus a second home.(运用了that引导的定语从句,修饰先行词warmth and energy)
Passage 4
(2026上海市杨浦区中原中学)
最近有些学校规定学生每天中午必须午睡30分钟,你是否赞成这种做法?请谈谈你的理由。
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【答案】
Nowadays, some schools require students to take a 30-minute nap at noon every day. This rule has caused a heated discussion among students. As for me, I fully approve of this reasonable school practice.
A proper noon nap can effectively relieve our physical and mental tiredness from long hours of morning study. It can also refresh our mind and help us stay energetic and concentrated in all afternoon classes. Without a short rest, we may feel sleepy and distracted, which will greatly influence our learning efficiency. Besides, a regular noon rest is beneficial to our physical health and keeps us in a positive daily mood.
In short, a 30-minute noon nap is absolutely necessary for busy senior high students. It serves as a simple but practical way to balance heavy study tasks and daily rest. Therefore, I firmly believe that schools should stick to this thoughtful regulation.
【来源】上海市杨浦区中原中学2025-2026学年高一年级(下)英语学科期中测试试卷
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生谈论学校强制学生每日午休半小时的举措,作者持赞同态度,结合学习与健康角度分析好处并总结观点。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
要求:require → demand
赞同:approve of → be in favor of
缓解:relieve → ease
专注的:concentrated → focused
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Besides, a regular noon rest is beneficial to our physical health and keeps us in a positive daily mood.
拓展句:Besides, not only is a regular noon rest beneficial to our physical health, but it also keeps us in a positive daily mood.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Without a short rest, we may feel sleepy and distracted, which will greatly influence our learning efficiency.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Therefore, I firmly believe that schools should stick to this thoughtful regulation.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 5
(2026上海市曹杨第二中学)
Your school is considering installing vending machines (自动售货机) on campus to provide students with snacks and drinks. Some students support this plan while others object to it. Do you support this decision? Please write an essay to express your opinion.
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【答案】
I support installing vending machines on campus. They are convenient for students.
When we feel hungry or thirsty between classes, we can easily get snacks and drinks without wasting time, which is especially helpful on busy school days. Besides, proper machines can offer healthy choices, making our school life more comfortable and enjoyable. We should remember to choose healthy food and avoid too many snacks. With reasonable use, vending machines will bring great convenience to our daily school life.
In short, I believe this plan is good for students and will make our campus life better.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生针对校园是否安装自动售货机发表观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
支持:support→be in favor of
此外:Besides→Additionally
特别地:especially→particularly
合适的:proper→appropriate
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I support installing vending machines on campus. They are convenient for students.
拓展句:I support installing vending machines on campus because they are convenient for students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When we feel hungry or thirsty between classes, we can easily get snacks and drinks without wasting time, which is especially helpful on busy school days. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, proper machines can offer healthy choices, making our school life more comfortable and enjoyable. (运用了现在分词making作结果状语)
Passage 6
许多饲养宠物的人和宠物关系亲密,他们视鸟、狗、猫等宠物为家里的一员。你觉得这种人与宠物的关系好吗?请说说你的看法,并举例说明你那样认为的理由。
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【答案】As is known to all, more and more people have their own pets and some have a very close relationship with their pets, especially the old people, who even view their pets as a member of their family and call their pets “Baby/Sun…”.
Different people have different opinions to this phenomenon. As for me, I think that it is normal. First of all, some pets, like dog, can serve as a great comfort for the old people, because some old people feel very lonely. What’s more, some pets can help people do some work like taking care of babies.
At last, I think although pets can bring great benefits to us, we should be sure that we can avoid injury or disease caused by pets.
【分析】这是一篇开放性作文,按照要求写一片自己对人与宠物的关系的看法。
【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。许多饲养宠物的人和宠物关系亲密,他们视鸟、狗、猫等宠物为家里的一员。你觉得这种人与宠物的关系好吗?请说说你的看法,并举例说明你那样认为的理由。人称为第三人称和第一人称。时态以一般现在为主。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段,引入话题。第二段,解释看法及原因。第三段,总结。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: have a very close relationship with有密切关系;view….as看作;serve as充当; taking care of照顾; bring great benefits to带来巨大益处等。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接;注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了一些较为高级的句式:使用了;As is known to all, more and more people have their own pets and some have a very close relationship with their pets, especially the old people, who even view their pets as a member of their family and call their pets “Baby/Sun…”.使用了as和who引导的定语从句;some pets, like dog, can serve as a great comfort for the old people, because some old people feel very lonely使用了原因状语从句;I think although pets can bring great benefits to us, we should be sure that we can avoid injury or disease caused by pets.使用了让步状语从句。
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
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