善意温情陌生人帮助类读后续写- 雪天滑倒，画作被毁，一个清洁工的出现改变了结局 讲义-2026届高三英语三轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写专题，覆盖情节构思、语言表达（动作/环境/心理描写）及情感升华等核心考点，按“题材判断-核心思路-情节逻辑-语料积累”层次架构知识体系。通过考点梳理（如“困境→帮助→解决→升华”模式）、方法指导（道具再利用、情感曲线设计）、真题训练（联考真题解析与范文对比），帮助学生突破情节连贯性与语言精准性难点，体现复习的系统性与针对性。 资料特色在于融合苏格拉底式问题培养思维品质，通过分层默写（原文佳句、中译英、高级句式）提升语言能力。例如“情节推进中引导学生利用‘snow’‘daisy’等原文元素，增强续写逻辑性”。配套地道表达替换词表与多版本范文，确保学生高效掌握高分技巧，既助力学生提升应考能力，也为教师把控复习节奏提供清晰路径。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 江西省八所重点中学（九江一中、宜春中学、临川一中、南昌二中等）2026届高三4月联考 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was Mom's birthday, and a cold, snowy afternoon. The snow had been falling steadily outside the art room of my school, blanketing the playground in white(现在分词短语做伴随动作). I'd stayed late to finish a drawing for her, determined to make it perfect(过去分词短语做主语补语). I'd worked for hours, carefully sketching every detail(现在分词短语做伴随动作)—the playful expression of our puppy Daisy, the delicate petals (花瓣) of Mom's favorite flowers, and the happy, smiling faces of our family. But I was running out of time. I had to hurry to catch the last bus home. If I missed it, I would have to walk 40 minutes through the bitter cold and falling snow. However, just as I turned the corner, my foot slipped on the icy sidewalk. I fell hard, and my schoolbag flew open. Books and pens fell all over. To make matters worse, the drawing slipped out and landed in the slush (雪泥) near the roadside. I struggled to my feet and rushed to grab the drawing. But when I picked it up, my heart sank. The colors I'd carefully chosen had bled (渗开) into each other. I could hardly recognize the image anymore—our puppy Daisy, Mom's favorite flowers, and our smiling faces—it was all ruined. I tried to dry the paper with my coat, but it only made things worse. The wet edges of the paper tore, and I could feel hot tears welling up in my eyes. In my distress (悲伤), I hadn't noticed an old man a few feet away who witnessed it all. He was the street cleaner who worked this block every day, sweeping the sidewalk with his broom(现在分词短语做后置定语). I'd seen him many times before, always wearing his woolen hat(现在分词短语做后置定语), but we had never exchanged words. He was always quiet, just sweeping and smiling at passersby. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: He walked over to me slowly and patted me on the shoulder. Paragraph 2: Finally, I got home with the new drawing in my hands. 江西省八所重点中学（九江一中、宜春中学、临川一中、南昌二中等）2026届高三4月联考 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was Mom's birthday, and a cold, snowy afternoon. The snow had been falling steadily outside the art room of my school, blanketing the playground in white. I'd stayed late to finish a drawing for her, determined to make it perfect. I'd worked for hours, carefully sketching every detail—the playful expression of our puppy Daisy, the delicate petals (花瓣) of Mom's favorite flowers, and the happy, smiling faces of our family. But I was running out of time. I had to hurry to catch the last bus home. If I missed it, I would have to walk 40 minutes through the bitter cold and falling snow. However, just as I turned the corner, my foot slipped on the icy sidewalk. I fell hard, and my schoolbag flew open. Books and pens fell all over. To make matters worse, the drawing slipped out and landed in the slush (雪泥) near the roadside. I struggled to my feet and rushed to grab the drawing. But when I picked it up, my heart sank. The colors I'd carefully chosen had bled (渗开) into each other. I could hardly recognize the image anymore—our puppy Daisy, Mom's favorite flowers, and our smiling faces—it was all ruined. I tried to dry the paper with my coat, but it only made things worse. The wet edges of the paper tore, and I could feel hot tears welling up in my eyes. In my distress (悲伤), I hadn't noticed an old man a few feet away who witnessed it all. He was the street cleaner who worked this block every day, sweeping the sidewalk with his broom. I'd seen him many times before, always wearing his woolen hat, but we had never exchanged words. He was always quiet, just sweeping and smiling at passersby. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: He walked over to me slowly and patted me on the shoulder. Paragraph 2: Finally, I got home with the new drawing in my hands. 一、读后续写类型判断 + 构思 1. 题材类型判断 维度 类型 体裁 记叙文（第一人称叙事） 主题类型 人与人（陌生人善意）+ 人与情感（亲情） 情节模式 困境 → 他人帮助 → 问题解决 → 情感升华 常见归类 “善意救赎型 / 温情治愈型续写” 关键词：意外受挫 + 陌生人帮助 + 情感修复 + 主题升华 2. 续写核心思路 ✔ 标准结构模板： 段落 功能 内容重点 Paragraph 1 冲突缓解（他人介入） 老人帮助 → 修复/重构画 → 情绪转变 Paragraph 2 问题解决 + 情感升华 成功回家 → 妈妈反应 → 主题点明 3. 情节推进逻辑 Step 1：承接原文 · 老人走近 → 观察 → 安慰 · ❗避免：突然情节跳跃 Step 2：冲突转机 · 老人提供帮助（可能方式）： 1. 提供工具（纸/画笔） 1. 教“我”重新构思 1. 用语言鼓励 核心：“画毁了” → “重新创造” Step 3：任务完成 · 赶时间 → 快速完成简化版画 · 或：老人帮忙画/指导 Step 4：情感升华 · 回家 → 妈妈感动 · 点题： 2. 礼物不在完美，而在心意 2. 陌生人的善意 4. 续写设计技巧 ✔ 技巧1：道具再利用 原文元素 续写利用 drawing（画） 修复 / 重画 snow（雪） 渲染困难 / 温暖对比 Daisy（小狗） 画中再出现 flowers（花） 情感象征 ✔ 技巧2：情感曲线设计 必须有“起伏”：悲伤 → 希望 → 紧张 → 温暖 → 感动 ✔ 技巧3：人物功能明确 人物 作用 “我” 情绪载体 + 成长 老人 善意象征（推动情节） 妈妈 情感终点（升华主题） ✔ 技巧4：主题升华句（ 可选方向： · Love matters more than perfection. · Kindness from strangers can warm the coldest day. 二、故事核心脉络 + 关键线索分析表 1. 故事核心脉络 阶段 内容 开端 为妈妈准备生日礼物（画） 发展 雪天摔倒 → 画毁 高潮 情绪崩溃 转折点 老人出现 续写空间 帮助 → 修复 → 回家 → 情感升华 2. 全维度分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 细心、有爱但脆弱的“我”；沉默善良的老人 I'd worked for hours… / He was always quiet 情感层次 期待 → 焦急 → 崩溃 determined → running out of time → my heart sank 关键情节点 画完成 → 摔倒 → 画毁 → 老人出现 my foot slipped / colors had bled 语言特色 细节描写细腻，画面感强 carefully sketching every detail 关键词分析 drawing, snow, slush, tears landed in the slush / tears welling up 心理描写 失落、自责、绝望 my heart sank 动作描写 摔倒、捡画、擦拭 fell hard / rushed to grab 环境描写 寒冷、雪天、孤独 cold, snowy afternoon 隐含主题 爱与心意 > 完美；善意的力量 （需续写点明） 情感转折 从崩溃到希望（续写完成） （由老人触发） 空间转换 学校 → 路边 → 回家 outside the art room → sidewalk 时间过渡 下午放学 → 赶车时间 had to hurry to catch the last bus 三、苏格拉底式引导问题 第一组：理解冲突 1. Why was the drawing so important to the narrator? 2. What made the situation worse after the fall? 3. How did the narrator feel when the drawing was ruined? 第二组：预测人物行为 1. Why did the old man come over? 2. What kind of person is he based on the description? 3. What might he say to comfort the narrator? 第三组：构建情节 1. How can the problem (ruined drawing) be solved realistically? 2. Could the narrator create a new drawing? How? 3. What role can the old man play in solving the problem? 第四组：深化主题 1. What matters more—a perfect gift or love behind it? 2. How can the ending reflect the mother’s reaction? 3. What lesson does the narrator learn from this experience? 第五组：语言表达引导 1. How can you describe the narrator’s feelings when helped? 2. What actions show kindness instead of telling it? 3. How can the snowy setting contrast with warmth? Part 2 一、读后续写动作、环境、心理描写 1 动作描写 1. He gently patted me on the shoulder, as if to comfort me. 他轻轻拍了拍我的肩膀，仿佛在安慰我。 2. I bent down quickly, gathering my scattered belongings. 我迅速弯下腰，捡起散落的物品。 3. He took out a piece of paper from his bag and handed it to me. 他从包里拿出一张纸递给我。 4. I wiped the wet drawing carefully with my sleeve. 我用袖子小心地擦拭那张湿掉的画。 5. He crouched beside me and examined the damaged drawing. 他蹲在我旁边，仔细查看那张损坏的画。 6. I hesitated for a moment before taking his advice. 我犹豫了一下，才接受他的建议。 7. He picked up a pen and began to sketch lightly on the paper. 他拿起一支笔，在纸上轻轻地画起来。 8. I nodded gratefully and followed his instructions. 我感激地点点头，按照他的指导去做。 9. He smiled and motioned for me to continue. 他微笑着示意我继续。 10. Clutching the new drawing, I ran toward the bus stop. 我紧握着新画，朝公交站跑去。 2心理描写 1. My heart sank at the sight of the ruined drawing. 看到毁掉的画，我的心一下沉了下去。 2. A wave of disappointment washed over me. 一阵失望涌上心头。 3. I felt completely helpless and on the verge of tears. 我感到无助，几乎要哭出来。 4. Tears blurred my vision as I stared at the paper. 泪水模糊了我的视线。 5. I was filled with regret for not being more careful. 我因不够小心而满心懊悔。 6. His words gave me a glimmer of hope. 他的话给了我一丝希望。 7. I felt warmth spreading through my heart. 我感到一股暖流涌上心头。 8. Gradually, my anxiety faded away. 渐渐地，我的焦虑消散了。 9. I was deeply touched by his kindness. 我被他的善意深深打动。 10. At that moment, I realized that love mattered more than perfection. 那一刻，我意识到爱比完美更重要。 3 环境描写 1. Snowflakes fell silently, covering everything in white. 雪花静静飘落，覆盖了一切。 2. The icy wind cut through my coat like a knife. 寒风像刀一样穿透我的外套。 3. The sidewalk was slippery and covered with slush. 人行道湿滑，布满雪泥。 4. The sky was gray, adding to the gloomy atmosphere. 天空灰蒙蒙的，更添压抑。 5. The cold air made my fingers stiff and numb. 寒冷让我的手指僵硬麻木。 6. The street was almost empty in the heavy snow. 大雪中街道几乎空无一人。 7. A faint light glowed from the streetlamp nearby. 路灯发出微弱的光。 8. The falling snow softened the noise of the city. 飘落的雪让城市变得安静。 9. The chilly air contrasted sharply with the warmth in my heart. 寒冷的空气与我内心的温暖形成鲜明对比。 10. The world seemed frozen, yet kindness brought it back to life. 世界仿佛冻结了，但善意让它重新有了温度。 二、高级替换词 情绪类 普通词 高级替换 sad sorrowful / heartbroken / downcast / miserable / upset happy delighted / overjoyed / thrilled / cheerful / joyful 动作类 普通词 高级替换 look gaze / stare / glance / peer / observe walk stroll / wander / march / hurry / pace 描写类 普通词 高级替换 cold freezing / icy / bitter / chilly / frosty big enormous / विशाल / massive / huge / gigantic 心理变化类 普通词 高级替换 think realize / figure out / come to understand / recognize / perceive feel sense / experience / be filled with / be overwhelmed by / be seized by 三、地道搭配 + 词法解析 高频短语与表达 短语 含义 近义表达 反义表达 例句 my heart sank 心一沉 feel disappointed / lose heart feel relieved My heart sank when I saw the mess. a wave of… washed over me 一阵…袭来 be overwhelmed by remain calm A wave of sadness washed over me. on the verge of 濒临 about to / close to far from I was on the verge of crying. give sb a hand 帮助某人 help / assist ignore He gave me a hand when I needed it. cheer sb up 使振作 comfort / encourage discourage His words cheered me up. in silence 默默地 quietly loudly He stood there in silence. out of breath 上气不接下气 breathless relaxed I arrived out of breath. be filled with 充满 be full of be empty of My heart was filled with gratitude. make one’s way to 前往 head for leave I made my way home slowly. in the distance 在远处 far away nearby A light shone in the distance. 词汇拓展 1 distress 项目 内容 含义 痛苦，悲伤 近义词 sorrow, anguish, misery, grief 反义词 joy, comfort, relief 例句1 She was in great distress after the accident. 例句2 His voice was full of distress. 2 comfort 项目 内容 含义 安慰 近义词 soothe, console, reassure 反义词 upset, disturb 例句1 He tried to comfort the crying child. 例句2 Her words comforted me greatly. 3 ruin 项目 内容 含义 毁坏 近义词 destroy, damage, spoil 反义词 repair, fix 例句1 The rain ruined our plan. 例句2 The picture was completely ruined. 4 grateful 项目 内容 含义 感激的 近义词 thankful, appreciative 反义词 ungrateful 例句1 I was truly grateful for his help. 例句2 She gave me a grateful smile. 5 encourage 项目 内容 含义 鼓励 近义词 inspire, motivate, support 反义词 discourage 例句1 He encouraged me to try again. 例句2 Her words encouraged me greatly. 四、可直接套用的续写语料 ⭐ 开头承接句（万能） · He approached me slowly, with concern in his eyes. · Noticing my distress, he offered help immediately. ⭐ 中间转折句 · To my surprise, he didn’t blame me but encouraged me instead. · With his help, I regained confidence and started again. ⭐ 结尾升华句 · It was not the perfect drawing but the love behind it that mattered most. · That day, I learned that kindness can warm even the coldest winter. Part 3 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1 He walked over to me slowly and patted me on the shoulder. Startled(过去分词做主语补语), I looked up through my tears, only to see a gentle smile on his wrinkled face. “It’s not the end,” he said softly, glancing at the ruined drawing(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Following his gaze(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt another wave of sadness, but his calm voice somehow steadied me(无灵主语句). He crouched beside me, took out a piece of dry paper from his cart, and placed it in my trembling hands(动作串). “Try again,” he encouraged, handing me a pen and leading me to his sweeping cart(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Hesitating for a second(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I nodded and began to redraw, simplifying the lines but holding on to the memory of Daisy and Mom’s favorite flowers.(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Meanwhile, he quietly arranged his things, creating a small, clean space(现在分词短语做结果状语). As the last stroke fell into place(无灵主语句), I clutched the fresh drawing, and with his reassuring nod, I hurried toward the bus that had just arrived. Paragraph 2 Finally, I got home with the new drawing in my hands. Breathless but relieved(adj做主语补语), I pushed open the door and saw Mom waiting anxiously. The moment I handed her the slightly imperfect drawing, I couldn’t help recounting everything—the fall, the ruined picture, and the old man’s kindness. To my surprise, she didn’t notice the imperfections at all. Instead, her eyes softened, and she pulled me into a warm embrace. “This is the best gift I could ever ask for,” she whispered. At that moment, I realized that what truly mattered was not how perfect the drawing looked, but the love and effort behind it, as well as the kindness I had received. The cold, snowy afternoon no longer felt bitter; it had been quietly warmed by a stranger’s gentle heart. Version 2 Paragraph 1 He walked over to me slowly and patted me on the shoulder. Embarrassed and helpless(adj做主语补语), I quickly wiped my tears, unsure of what to say(adj短语做补语). Noticing my distress(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he picked up the damaged drawing and studied it carefully. “You’ve done a great job,” he said, “but maybe we can make a simpler version.” His words sparked a faint hope in me. Taking out a pencil(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he lightly sketched a few guiding lines on a fresh sheet of paper, showing me(现在分词短语做伴随动作) how to capture the key features quickly. Inspired(过去分词做原因状语), I followed his lead, focusing on Daisy’s playful eyes and the outline of the flowers instead of every detail.(现在分词短语做伴随动作分词) Time seemed to race, yet his steady presence kept me from panicking. When the bus lights appeared in the distance, I had just finished the new drawing, and I dashed off with a grateful glance back at him. Paragraph 2 Finally, I got home with the new drawing in my hands. My heart was still pounding as I stepped inside, where warmth and the smell of dinner wrapped around me(无灵主语句). Gathering my courage(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I handed the drawing to Mom and told her the whole story. She listened quietly, her eyes shining with emotion(独立主格). When I finished, she smiled and said, “This drawing is special not because it’s perfect, but because it carries your love and a stranger’s kindness.” Her words echoed deeply within me(无灵主语句). At that moment, I understood that even in the coldest and most difficult situations, a small act of kindness can make a huge difference. The memory of that snowy afternoon, along with the old man’s kindness, stayed with me long after the day had passed. Version 3 Paragraph 1 He walked over to me slowly and patted me on the shoulder. At first, I felt a surge of embarrassment, wishing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) he hadn’t seen my clumsy fall. Yet his kind eyes and calm voice soon eased my anxiety(无灵主语句). “Sometimes things don’t go as planned,” he said, “but that doesn’t mean they’re lost.” His words lingered in my mind(无灵主语句)as he handed me a clean sheet of paper. Taking a deep breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I forced myself to focus and began sketching again, this time with simpler lines but greater determination(独立主格). The snow continued to fall, yet I barely noticed the cold anymore. Standing nearby(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he watched quietly, offering a nod(现在分词短语做伴随动作) whenever I hesitated. By the time I finished, the drawing looked different but still full of warmth. Clutching it tightly(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I caught the last bus, carrying not just a drawing but a renewed sense of confidence(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Paragraph 2 Finally, I got home with the new drawing in my hands. As I stepped into the house, I was greeted by the familiar warmth and the sight of Mom smiling at me. Nervously, I handed her the drawing and explained what had happened. She looked at it carefully, then at me, her expression softening(独立主格). “This means so much to me,” she said gently, pulling me into a hug(现在分词短语做伴随动作). In that instant, I realized that perfection was never the point; it was the love, effort, and growth behind the gift that truly counted(强调句). The snowy afternoon, once filled with frustration(过去分词做后置定语), had turned into a lesson I would always treasure—that kindness and resilience can transform even the worst moments into something meaningful. 地道表达 + 替换词汇表 表达 替换表达 用法说明 wipe my tears brush away my tears / dry my eyes 情绪恢复 a wave of sadness a surge of sorrow / a flood of grief 情绪增强 feel nervous feel uneasy / anxious 心理描写 help sb assist / lend a hand 高级替换 look at gaze at / glance at 动作细化 亮点词汇（动作+情绪 类别 表达 升级替换 联想词 情绪 heart sank be overwhelmed with despair downcast 情绪 relieved reassured / comforted at ease 动作 run dash / rush / hurry sprint 动作 hold clutch / grasp seize 心理 think realize / come to understand recognize 高频语料拓展 短语 含义 例句 be on the verge of 濒临 I was on the verge of giving up. give sb a hand 帮助 He gave me a hand in time. be filled with 充满 My heart was filled with warmth. make one’s way to 前往 I made my way home quickly. a sense of… 一种…感 I felt a sense of relief. 拓展表达 ⭐ kindness 项目 内容 同义词 generosity, warmth, goodwill 例句1 His kindness touched me deeply. 例句2 A small act of kindness can change everything. 例句3 She showed great kindness to strangers. ⭐ encourage 项目 内容 同义词 inspire, motivate, support 例句1 He encouraged me to try again. 例句2 Her words inspired confidence. 例句3 Teachers should motivate students. 官方【参考答案】 He walked over to me slowly and patted me on the shoulder. I wiped my tears and looked up, embarrassed(adj做主语补语). Smiling gently(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he handed me a clean tissue from his pocket and comforted me in a soft voice, "Don't cry, kid. We can fix it." He pointed to his small cleaning cart nearby, where there was a stack of blank paper. He took one out and gave it to me, along with a few colored pens he usually kept for notes. With his gentle encouragement, I wiped my tears and headed towards the bus stop bench, determined to redraw the picture quickly(过去分词做主语补语). Around the corner, the bus stop lights glowed warm amber, his quiet presence making me calm down(独立主格). He swept the snow around me with great care, guarding my work like a silent guardian(现在分词短语做伴随动作) until I caught the last bus. Finally, I got home with the new drawing in my hands. Bursting through the front door(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I found Mom in the kitchen, the aroma of a warm dinner filling the air(独立主格). With a nervous heart, I handed her the simple sketch and recounted the afternoon's misfortune and the street cleaner's unexpected kindness. Her eyes shimmered with unshed tears and pulled me into a tight embrace, stressing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that the drawing was the most precious birthday gift she'd ever received—for it not only showed my love for her, but also that I'd learned to cherish the kindness of others. That cold afternoon taught me that a little kindness from a stranger can light up a dark day, a lesson I'll never forget. 第一部分：原文佳句默写（15句） 根据汉语提示和部分英文，补全空缺的词汇或短语。 1 雪一直下个不停 The snow had been falling _________ outside the art room. 2 把操场覆盖成白色 _________ the playground in white. 3 决心把它画得完美 determined to make it _________. 4 我仔细地画着每一个细节 carefully _________ every detail 5 妈妈最喜欢的花 Mom's _________ flowers 6 我就要在刺骨的寒冷中步行40分钟 I would have to walk 40 minutes through the _________ and falling snow. 7 我刚转过拐角 just as I _________ the corner 8 我的脚在结冰的人行道上滑了一下 my foot _________ on the icy sidewalk 9 我的书包飞开了 my schoolbag _________ open 10 我的心一沉 my heart _________. 11 我几乎认不出那个图像了 I could hardly _________ the image anymore 12 全都毁了 it was all _________. 13 热泪在我眼眶里涌出 hot tears _________ up in my eyes 14 在我悲伤中 In my _________. 15 目睹了这一切 _________ it all 第二部分：中译英句子默写（12句） 根据中文意思和关键词提示，写出完整的英文句子。 1 老人慢慢地向我走来，轻轻地拍了拍我的肩膀。 old man, walked over, patted 2 他的眼睛里没有一丝催促，只有温暖。 eyes, warm, without rush 3 “别哭，小家伙。”他轻声说道。 Don't cry, softly 4 他从清洁车里拿出一张干净的硬纸板和一些彩色粉笔。 pulled out, clean cardboard, colored chalk 5 “再画一次，”他鼓励道。 Draw again, encouraged 6 你妈妈会喜欢的，因为它出自你的真心。 will love, from your heart 7 我擦干眼泪，拿起了粉笔。 wiped my tears, picked up 8 这一次，我不再担心画得是否完美。 didn't worry about, perfection 9 我颤抖着声音说：“生日快乐，妈妈……对不起，它不完美。” voice trembling, Happy birthday, sorry 10 妈妈看着粉笔画，然后看着我，眼里闪着光。 looked at, then at me, glistened 11 她低声说：“这是最美的礼物。” whispered, most beautiful gift 12 爱不需要完美——它只需要真实。 doesn't need to be, just needs to be 第三部分：动作·环境·心理描写语料库默写（10句） 根据中文提示，补全英文句子。 1 雪还在下，越下越大。 The snow was still falling, _________ and _________. 2 寒冷刺骨的风像刀子一样刮着我的脸。 The _________ wind cut my face like a knife. 3 他慢慢地弯下腰，用粗糙的手捡起那张毁掉的画。 He bent down slowly and _________ the ruined drawing with his _________ hands. 4 泪水模糊了我的视线，我几乎什么也看不见。 Tears _________ my vision, and I could hardly see anything. 5 一种温暖的感觉涌上心头。 A warm feeling _________ over me. 6 妈妈的眼睛湿润了，她的嘴角微微上扬。 Mom's eyes got _________, and the corners of her mouth _________. 7 我的心怦怦直跳，像要跳出胸膛。 My heart was _________ so hard that it seemed to jump out of my chest. 8 雪花轻轻地飘落在他的羊毛帽上，像白糖一样。 Snowflakes _________ gently on his woolen hat, like white sugar. 9 我深吸一口气，鼓足勇气把画递了过去。 I took a deep breath, _________ up my courage and handed over the drawing. 10 他什么也没说，只是微笑着点了点头。 He said nothing, just _________ and _________. 第四部分：高级句式仿写（6句） 句式1：感官先行 + 主句动作 + 即时结果 公式：Hearing/Seeing/Feeling..., sb. did..., and... 原文示例：Seeing the ruined drawing, I felt my heart sink, and tears welled up in my eyes. 仿写（根据语境：妈妈看到画的瞬间）：_________________________ 句式2：无灵主语句 + 现在分词 公式：A wave of + 情绪名词 + washed over sb., doing... 原文示例：A wave of sadness washed over me, making my hands tremble. 仿写（根据语境：老人出现时的感受）：_________________________ 句式3：形容词链 + 动作链 公式：Adj1 and adj2, sb. did A, did B, and did C. 原文示例：Nervous and excited, I stood up, took a deep breath, and walked toward the door. 仿写（根据语境：我拿出画作时的状态）：_________________________ 句式4：独立主格 + 主句 公式：名词 + doing/done, 主句. 原文示例：His eyes fixed on the drawing, the old man smiled gently. 仿写（根据语境：妈妈看画时）：_________________________ 句式5：强调句 公式：It was... that/who... 原文示例：It was the old man's kindness that saved my birthday gift. 仿写（根据语境：这次经历教会我的道理）：_________________________ 句式6：递进句 公式：..., not just..., but also... / ..., not..., but... 原文示例：That night, I learned that love doesn't need to be perfect—it just needs to be real. 仿写（根据语境：对礼物的新理解）：_________________________ 参考答案 第一部分：原文佳句默写 序号 答案 1 steadily 2 blanketing 3 perfect 4 sketching 5 favorite 6 bitter cold 7 turned 8 slipped 9 flew 10 sank 11 recognize 12 ruined 13 welling 14 distress 15 witnessed 第二部分：中译英句子默写 The old man walked over to me slowly and patted me on the shoulder. His eyes were warm, without any rush. "Don't cry, little one," he said softly. He pulled out a piece of clean cardboard and some colored chalk from his cleaning cart. "Draw again," he encouraged. Your mom will love it because it's from your heart. I wiped my tears and picked up the chalk. This time, I didn't worry about perfection. My voice trembling, I said, "Happy birthday, Mom... I'm sorry it's not perfect." Mom looked at the chalk drawing, then at me, her eyes glistening. She whispered, "It's the most beautiful gift." Love doesn't need to be perfect—it just needs to be real. 第三部分：语料库默写 heavier, heavier bitter cold picked up, rough clouded washed wet, lifted slightly pounding landed/fell gathered smiled, nodded 第四部分：高级句式仿写 句式1： Seeing the drawing in my hands, Mom paused for a moment, and her eyes immediately softened. 句式2： A wave of gratitude washed over me, making me realize how kind a stranger could be. 句式3： Shy and nervous, I lowered my head, bit my lip, and handed the drawing to Mom. 句式4： Mom's eyes fixed on the drawing, a gentle smile spreading across her face. 句式5： It was not the perfect drawing but the love behind it that touched Mom's heart. 句式6： A gift is not judged by how beautiful it looks, but by how sincerely it is given. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $