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专题11 书面表达
主题01 人与自我——成长与感悟
Passage 1
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having a hard time these days. Here is some advice for you.
First, you can talk to your parents or teachers about your study pressure. They will give you useful suggestions. Second, try to make more friends by joining after-school activities. When you have friends, you can share your problems with them. Third, you should develop a good sleeping habit. Going to bed early and getting up early will help you feel better.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
【答案】例文
Dear Jenny,
My Favorite Singer
My favorite star is Liu Dehua. He is from Hong Kong, China. He is 60 years old now. He is a singer and actor. He is tall and handsome. He has made many records, like the “Chinese People” and “Wangqingshui”. He has won a lot of prizes because of his beautiful songs. What’s more, he has become one of the famous and successful singers in China.
He is very kind. He often gives away money to help others. When I feel tired or angry, I would like to listen to his songs because they make me feel relaxed and peaceful. His music has provided me with inspiration.
Yours,
Jack
Passage 3
【答案】例文
The Best Place I Have Been to
The best place I’ve visited is Guilin, a city famous for its breathtaking landscapes.
Last summer, I took a boat trip along the Li River. The crystal-clear water, green mountains, and peaceful villages left me an unforgettable memory. I also tried local food like Guilin rice noodles, which were delicious!
What makes Guilin special is its natural beauty. The karst mountains look like paintings, and the fresh air makes you feel relaxed. It’s not just a place to see but to experience. That’s why I think Guilin is the best place I’ve been to.
Passage 4
【答案】例文
How to be a sunshine teenager
To be a sunshine teenager, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Let me tell you what I’ve learned in the past year and what I will do in the coming summer vacation.
I have read a lot of classics which have helped me understand the importance of family and country. At the same time, I have visited all kinds of museums and enriched my experience. I often help my parents with chores, such as cooking dinner, washing clothes and so on. I exercise everyday and I have a healthy lifestyle.
I plan to improve my life skills and take part in volunteer activities during the summer holiday. I will work hard to be a sunshine teenager.
Passage 5
【答案】例文
I am Li Hua. I listened to a report from a famous teacher, Mr. Wang. From his report, I learned how we could stay in a good mood.
Firstly, we should do some sports in our daily life, such as running, playing basketball and swimming. Doing sports can make our bodies strong, and it is also a good way to reduce pressure. Secondly, choose so me relaxing activities, such as listening to music and watching movies. Thirdly, communicate with others as much as possible. We can communicate with our parents or teachers when we face some problems. Last but not least, we should pay more attention to our eating habits. We’d better eat more fruit and vegetables. Drink more water and milk instead of Cola and coffee.
I think the advice above can help you.
Passage 6
【答案】范文:
My Favorite Childhood Thing
The thing I love most from my childhood is a teddy bear. I’ve had it for 8 years. My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday. It’s white with a red bow. I like it because it’s always by my side when I’m sad. Once I fell ill, it stayed on my bed, making me feel less lonely. Though it’s old now, it still brings me warmth and happy memories.
主题01 人与自我——成长与感悟
Passage 1
【答案】One possible version:
Less Pressure, Better Life
Many students feel stressed because of heavy schoolwork and problems with friends or parents. Too much homework and exams make us tired, and arguments with friends or parents make us worried.
How can we solve these problems and reduce the stress in the life? We should join interesting after-school activities like sports or art clubs. At the same time, we can listen to music or draw pictures in our free time. Talking with family or teachers can solve many problems. These will help us to be relaxed and feel comfortable.
In our life, some stress is normal, but too much is bad for us. Learning to balance study and life is the key to staying happy and healthy. Life will be better if we try our best.
Passage 2
【答案】例文:
Among all my toys, my favorite one is a toy bear from my best friend Lucy. It was a lovely bear with a sweet smile on its face.
Five years ago, my family moved to another city and I had to go to a new school. Both Lucy and I felt sad because we couldn’t study and play together. Before I left, Lucy came to give me the bear. She said although we couldn’t be together any longer, the toy bear could always stay with me.
I love the toy because when I see it, it seems that Lucy is smiling to me. It always reminds me of Lucy and the happy time we spent together.
Passage 3
【答案】例文
The more books you read, the wiser you are. I like reading books. My favorite book is Journey to the West. It is one of the four classics in China.
In this book, I like the Monkey King best. The Monkey King can make 72 changes and turn himself into different animals and objects. He usually fights against bad people in order to protect Xuanzang. I want to be like him because he is very clever and brave. He keeps fighting to help weak people and never gives up.
To sum up, the book Journey to the West influences me a lot. I will put the lessons that I have learnt from it into use in my daily life.
Passage 4
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
How’s it going? Summer holiday is coming. I’m going to do something meaningful on vacation.
First, I made some study plans. I’m going to the library to read some books after finishing my holiday homework. What’s more, I plan to prepare for the knowledge in the next semester in advance. Secondly, I will take part in some social activities. I’m going to help the old people clean their houses or read some books for them. I’m also going to teach the children to read. I think that these activities can not only cultivate my independence, but also give me more social experience. Finally, it is also very important to communicate well with our parents. So we can spend more time with our parents. We can care about them and help them do some housework. When our parents are free, it is very effective to communicate with them. I think that these are helpful to my study and future.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me some questions in your letter. I hope I can help you. Here is my advice.
If you often finish your homework late, I think you should make a plan. Don’t waste your time. Why don’t you get on with your classmates? Don’t argue with them. You can make friends with them. You should talk with your parents often at home. You can help them do some chores. They are the people who love you most. When you are free, what about doing some reading or doing some sports? I think it’s good for your study and health.
I hope you think my advice is useful to you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Nick
主题02 人与社会——旅行推荐
Passage 1
【答案】范文:
Dear Jenny,
I’m really glad to know you’re coming to China. I’d love to recommend visiting Beijing.
Beijing is in the northern part of China and is the capital city. It has many famous places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, and the Palace Museum. The Great Wall is a must-see—it’s one of the wonders of the world! The Summer Palace is beautiful with its gardens and lake, and the Palace Museum shows China’s long history. You should also try Beijing Duck—it’s delicious! The best time to visit is spring because the weather is warm and comfortable, and the flowers are blooming.
I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time in Beijing. Let me know if you need more help!
Yours,
Li Jing
Passage 2
【答案】 I Have Been to Sanya
Last summer, my family and I visited Sanya, a beautiful coastal city in Hainan. Have you ever been to such a sunny paradise? We stayed there for a week. The places of interest like Tianya Haijiao were amazing! The crystal-clear water and golden beaches were unforgettable. Have you ever tried fresh seafood? We enjoyed delicious local food every day. Additionally, we played water sports like jet skiing, which was exciting! The trip was full of joy and relaxation. If you go to Sanya, I’m sure you will enjoy yourself, and have a great time there.
Passage 3
【答案】例文
Good afternoon, everyone,
I’m very happy to tell you my experiences. During the last summer vacation, I went to Chengdu with my family.
What impressed me most was the Giant Panda Base. Seeing those cute pandas rolling around and eating bamboo made me feel warm. Their lovely looks and lazy movements were really unforgettable.
I’ve never been to Lijiang. I hear it has beautiful old towns and clear rivers. I plan to go there next winter vacation with my best friend.
Passage 4
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m excited to share my favorite city with you—Hangzhou, a beautiful city in eastern China’s Zhejiang Province.
It’s famous for the West Lake, which looks amazing all year round. You can row a boat on the lake, ride a bike along the path, or just enjoy the peaceful view. Besides the natural beauty, Hangzhou also offers delicious food. Don’t miss Longjing shrimps, made with fresh tea leaves! Beyond nature and food, Hangzhou’s history is also fascinating. The city has a long history—you can visit ancient pagodas like Leifeng Tower and learn about traditional Chinese culture. Whether you love nature, food, or history, Hangzhou won’t let you down.
Thanks for listening. I wish you all a wonderful vacation!
Passage 5
【答案】One possible version:
Beautiful Xinjiang
Hello, everyone. Welcome to Xinjiang! Let me introduce Xinjiang to you.
Xinjiang is located in the west of China. It’s very convenient for people to come here by train or by plane. People here are very kind and friendly. Xinjiang has enough sunshine so it’s home to different kinds of fruits. If you come here, you can enjoy delicious fruits. There are many famous places of interest, such as The Tianshan Mountains and Sayram Lake. They are very beautiful. I suggest you come in summer, which is very cool and you can enjoy beautiful scenery.
Come to Xinjiang! I’m sure you will enjoy yourself.
Passage 6
【答案】例文
Sanya is a beautiful city located in the south of Hainan Province. Every year, tourists from all over the world come to this tourist resort for sightseeing. Here you can not only enjoy the beauty of the blue sea and blue sky, taste delicious seafood, but also walk and play on the beach with family and friends.
The ends of the Earth is a place you must visit. It covers an area of more than 500 mu, the main attractions are Tianya Jiao statue, Tianya stone, South Tianya pillar, Cape No.7 and so on. Into the park, a circle of green trees and red flowers surrounded the whole park. Next is to go to Sanya Haitang Bay, which is also a business center of Sanya City, so it is the most prosperous business area in the whole Sanya. Wuzhizhou Island is the largest island in Sanya, about six kilometers long. Although it is a small island, the scenery is also beautiful.
主题03 人与社会——志愿者活动
Passage 1
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Is everything all right?
Last Sunday, I participated in a volunteer love activity organized by the school. It is very meaningful. I feel very happy. Let me tell you what we did last Sunday.
As soon as our volunteers arrived at the nursing home, they warmly welcomed us. We brought some flowers and fruit to the old people. We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for the old people. When we read the newspaper and took a walk, we sat together and chatted and wished them the best. When our volunteers left, the old people were very excited. They thanked us for our kindness, but I think it is our responsibility to take care of the old people and respect them.
If you have a chance in China, I hope you can join us.
Yours,
Tony
Passage 2
【答案】例文
As is known to everyone, animals are our friends. However, many kinds of animals are in danger now.
The most of animals like to live in the forests, grasslands and where there are no population. But now, to make money, humans cut down trees and pollute the rivers, animals don’t have enough places to live in or enough food to eat. What’s more, humans kill them because they want them for meat or fur.
It’s everyone’s duty to protect endangered animals. As middle school students, what can we do? First, I think we should call on everyone not to kill endangered animals. And then, we should advise the government to protect the homes of endangered animals.
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专题11 书面表达
主题01 人与自我——成长与感悟
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·新疆昌吉回族自治州呼图壁县·期末)
每个人在生活中都会遇到困难和压力。作为一名初二的学生Tom在网上发出一封求助帖。他最近学习压力很大,每天睡眠不足,在学校里朋友很少,遇到困难不知道向谁倾诉。假如你是李华,请给Tom写一封邮件,帮助他走出困境。
注意:
2. 内容必须包含所有信息。
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
4. 词数为80左右。
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Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·新疆吐鲁番市托克逊县·期末)
假如你是Jack,你的美国朋友Jenny给你发来电子邮件,询问你最喜欢的歌手,请你根据提示写一篇以“My Favorite Singer”为题的回复邮件,向她做个简单的介绍,词数80左右。
内容包括:
介绍你最喜欢的歌手的相关信息;
为什么你会喜欢他/她。
My favorite singer... The reason why I like her/him is... It makes me feel...
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Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·新疆乌鲁木齐市第七十中学·期末)
旅行能让我们感受到自然的魅力,历史的积淀和文化的传承,每个人在旅行中都有很多的收获和不同的体会。China Daily杂志正在举办题为“The Best Place I Have Been to”的征文活动,请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍你曾经去过的地方,并向杂志社投稿。
提示问题:(1) What is the best place you have been to?
(2) What did you do there? How did you feel?
(3) Why is it the best place in your opinion?
参考词汇: unforgettable难忘的 impressive印象深刻的 be famous for因……著名
写作要求:(1) 短文应包括以上要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
(2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息。(3) 词数80-100词。
The Best Place I Have Been to
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Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·新疆喀什地区·期末)
“广大青年要厚植家国情怀、涵养进取品格,以奋斗姿态激扬青春,不负时代,不负华年。”习主席对青年一代提出殷切希望,为当代青年的成长指引航向,为此,Kashgar Weekly发起“How to be a sunshine teenager”的主题征文。请根据以下提示写一篇关于自己的征文。
内容提示:
2. Have you read any classics?
3. Have you ever been to some meaningful places?
4. Do you help your parents with chores?
5. Do you have a healthy lifestyle (生活方式)?
要求:
6. 参考所给提示,可适当发挥;
7. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
8. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
9. 词数:80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to be a sunshine teenager
To be a sunshine teenager, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Let me tell you what I’ve learned in the past year and what I will do in the coming summer holiday.
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Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·新疆和田地区·期末)
每年的5月25日是全国学生心理健康日。为帮助学生解决心理问题,保持好的心情,上周你的学校请著名的心理专家王老师开展了一场讲座。假如你是季华,听完讲座后,你学到了很多保持好心情的好方法。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,和同学们分享一下这些好方法。
提示:
2.进行体育锻炼,如跑步、打篮球等;
3.选择令人放松的日常活动,如听音乐、看电影等;
4.多和他人交流;
4….
写作要求:
5.必须包含以上要点,可适当增加细节;
6.语句连贯,条理清楚,详略得当,书写工整;
7.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总数)。
I am Li Hua. I listened to a report from a famous teacher, Mr. Wang. From his report, I learned how we could stay in a good mood._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 6
(24-25八年级下·新疆巴音郭楞蒙古自治州·期末)
童年的物品总是充满着回忆,如玩具、书本、礼物等等。你现在仍然保留着的你孩童时代最喜欢的东西是什么呢?请你根据以下提示要点写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍一下吧。
要点:
2. 你孩童时代最喜欢的东西是什么?
3. 你拥有它多久了?你怎样得到它的?
4. 你为什么如此喜欢它?
5. ……
要求:1. 70词左右;
6. 文中须包含所提示的全部要点, 可适当发挥;
7. 语句通顺、行文连贯、书写工整;
8. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名、校名等信息;
9. 不能抄袭试卷原文。
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主题01 人与自我——成长与感悟
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·新疆伊犁·期末)
请你以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为题,写一篇短文,谈谈你是如何面对学习或生活中出现的问题,减少压力并保持积极乐观的生活态度。
写作要点:
2. 存在哪些问题或压力?
3. 减少压力,解决问题的方法,如:参加课外活动、多交朋友、听音乐、读书等。
4. 字数80-100词,不得出现真实的姓名与学校名称。
Less Pressure, Better Life
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Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·新疆喀什地区·期末)
当看到曾经最喜爱的旧玩具时,你想起的一定不只是那个玩具,更多的是与它有关的人和事,还有它所带来的美好回忆。你最喜欢的玩具是什么呢? 请你根据以下提示,用英语写篇短文描述一下。
提示:
2. 你最喜欢的玩具。
3. 你如何拥有它,拥有了多久。
4. 你喜欢它的原因。
要求:
5. 语句通顺,意思连贯,内容详实,语法正确,书写规范。
6. 文中不要出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
7. 词数70左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Among all my toys, my favorit one is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·新疆克孜勒苏柯尔克孜自治州·期末)
为了培养同学们的阅读兴趣,英语周报“My Favorite Book”专栏开展征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的一本书。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数 80 左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
The more books you read, the wiser you are. I like reading books._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·新疆阿克苏·期末)
假如你是李华,暑假即将来临,你打算在假期里做一些有意义的事,请你根据下面的提示,给你的笔友Jack写一封邮件,谈谈你的打算。
要点:
(1)介绍假期学习计划;
(2)利用假期参加一些社会实践(social activities) (如:帮助老人,教小孩阅读……)及理由;
(3)假期里如何与父母沟通?请给出一到两个建议。
要求:词数80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);行文流畅、表达准确、书写规范;短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息, 并可适当发挥。
Dear Jack,
How’s it going? Summer holiday is coming. I’m going to do something meaningful on vacation.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·新疆克孜勒苏柯尔克孜自治州第一中学·期末)
假如你是Nick,你的朋友Jack在成长的过程中遇到了一些问题,他来信向你寻求帮助,请你在回信中给他提以下建议:
2. 如果你经常很晚完成作业,我想你应该制定一个计划,不要浪费时间;
3. 为什么不和同学友好相处呢?不要和他们争吵,你可以和他们交朋友;
4. 在家应经常和父母沟通,你也可以帮他们做一些家务,他们是最爱你的人;
5. 当你有空的时候,看点书或做运动怎么样?我想这样对你的学习和健康有好处。
参考词汇:make a plan, waste, get on with, argue with, talk/communicate with, be good for
请根据以上内容,写一篇80字左右的短文。 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总字数)
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me some questions in your letter. I hope I can help you. Here is my advice.
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I hope you think my advice is useful to you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Nick
主题02 人与社会——旅行推荐
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·新疆维吾尔自治区吐鲁番市实验中学·期末)
假如你是李晶,你的英国朋友Jenny想来中国旅游。她想让你帮忙推荐一个城市,请你按照以下提示,用英语给Jenny写一封电子邮件,向她推荐北京。
location
in the northern part of China
place of interest
the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum,…
food
Beijing Duck
the best time
spring
…
…
要求: 1.电子邮件应包含所有提示,可适当发挥;
2.语言表达准确,语句通顺连贯;
3.词数不少于80词。电子邮件的格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
I’m really glad to know you’re coming to China. I’d love to recommend visiting Beijing. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jing
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·新疆哈密市·期末)
假如你是李华,去年夏天和家人去旅游。请你根据要点和所给句型描述一下你曾经去过的地方。
2. 参考词汇:places of interest, sunny, food, water, sports
3. 提示:Have you ever been to…?
How long have you stayed there?
Have you ever seen/tried/played...?
4. 要求:1. 短文中要包括以上提示信息;
5. 内容可适当发挥,以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅;
6. 词数:80~100。
I Have Been to _________
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Passage 3
假期中你一定有很多有意义的旅游经历吧,请简述一下假期中你认为有意义的一段经历。词数:80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
主要内容包括以下几点
2.你曾去过什么地方?
3.给你留下深刻印象的地方是哪里?为什么?
4.你没去过而又很想去的地方是哪里?打算什么时候去?
Good afternoon, everyone,
I’m very happy to tell you my experiences. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·新疆乌鲁木齐市第七十六中学·期末)
暑假即将来临,同学们都在兴致勃勃地谈论着自己的旅行计划。为了给大家提供更多选择,英语老师将在班级里开展“旅游推荐官”的英文演讲活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿,和大家分享你最喜欢的城市及其理由。
★ What is your favorite city?
★ Where is it?
★What makes it a great place to visit?
要求:
2. 包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
3. 80 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
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Thanks for listening. I wish you all a wonderful vacation!
Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·新疆巴音郭楞蒙古自治州·期末)
随着《我的阿勒泰》的热播,来自新疆的草原、雪山、旷野和森林震撼了无数人的心灵,让新疆再度成为网友心目中旅游的热门地点之一。假如你是李华,你校英语报正在举办以“Beautiful Xinjiang”为主题的英语征稿活动,让更多的朋友了解新疆,请你根据以下提示内容,用英语写一篇文章简单地介绍一下新疆并投稿。
内容包括:
2. 新疆位于我国西部;交通方便;人们热情好客;
3. 日照丰富,因此水果的产量和种类丰富,在这里人们可以品尝各种水果和美食;
4. 有许多著名的旅游景点,如天山(The Tianshan Mountains)、赛里木湖(Sayram Lake);
5. 旅游时间及原因(至少一条)。
要求:
6. 意思连贯,表达准确,书写规范,可适当发挥;
7. 文中不能出现考生真实的人名、校名及所在地等信息;
8. 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数,不得抄袭试卷原文。
Beautiful Xinjiang
Hello, everyone. Welcome to Xinjiang! Let me introduce Xinjiang to you._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 6
(24-25八年级下·新疆农业大学附属中学·期末)
三亚市位于我国海南省南部,是一座美丽的城市。每年都有来自世界各地的游客来到这个旅游胜地观光游玩。在这里,你不仅能欣赏到碧海蓝天的美景,品尝到美味的海鲜,而且还能和家人朋友漫步嬉戏在沙滩上。请你写一篇文章简单介绍一下旅游胜地三亚。
注意:
2. 不少于 80词;
3. 语句通顺,语意连贯,语法正确,书写工整,细节可适当发挥。
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主题03 人与社会——志愿者活动
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·新疆克孜勒苏柯尔克孜自治州·期末)
假如你是Tony,上个星期日参加了一次学校组织的志愿者献爱心活动。请根据以下信息给你的好朋友Mike写一封电子邮件,记录当天的活动,并希望他下一次也能一起参加这样的活动。
写作要点:
2.表达你当一名志愿者的心情。
3.关于活动:
①时间:上个星期日;
②地点:The nursing home/ The old people’s home 敬老院;
③活动内容:给老人们读报纸、散步、聊天、打扫卫生等。
4.说说参加此次活动的感受。
写作要求:
5. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
6. 可以适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
7. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
8. 至少80词。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Tony
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·新疆吐鲁番市·期末)
为了呼吁人们保护濒危动物,某中学英文杂志开设了“保护濒危动物”专栏,现面向广大中学生征稿。假如你对这个话题很感兴趣,请你写一篇英语短文,然后向该杂志投稿。
内容包含:
2.动物濒临灭绝的原因(至少写两条);
3.作为中学生,我们能为保护濒危动物做些什么(至少写两条)?
要求:
4.内容要全面;
5.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
6.词数不少于100,开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:forests, grasslands, endangered, cut down, pollute, kill, meat or fur, call on, advise
As is known to everyone, animals are our friends.
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专题11 书面表达
主题01 人与自我——成长与感悟
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·新疆昌吉回族自治州呼图壁县·期末)
每个人在生活中都会遇到困难和压力。作为一名初二的学生Tom在网上发出一封求助帖。他最近学习压力很大,每天睡眠不足,在学校里朋友很少,遇到困难不知道向谁倾诉。假如你是李华,请给Tom写一封邮件,帮助他走出困境。
注意:
2. 内容必须包含所有信息。
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
4. 词数为80左右。
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【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having a hard time these days. Here is some advice for you.
First, you can talk to your parents or teachers about your study pressure. They will give you useful suggestions. Second, try to make more friends by joining after-school activities. When you have friends, you can share your problems with them. Third, you should develop a good sleeping habit. Going to bed early and getting up early will help you feel better.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:电子邮件应用文,用一般现在时为主;
明确要点:表达理解和同情、给出(关于学习压力很大、每天睡眠不足、在学校里朋友很少和遇到困难不知道向谁倾诉的)建议;
确定人称:第二人称(you/your);
注意事项:词数为80左右。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,表达理解和同情,引出下文建议
主体段:分别给出关于学习压力很大、每天睡眠不足、在学校里朋友很少和遇到困难不知道向谁倾诉的建议
结尾段:总结,表达希望
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:表达理解和同情并引出下文建议
表达理解和同情:I’m sorry to hear that/you’re having a hard time these days/I once had similar problems ...
引出下文建议:Here is some advice for you/My suggestions are...
要点二:给出建议
学习压力很大和遇到困难不知道向谁倾诉方面:talk to your parents or teachers about your study pressure/give you useful suggestions...
在学校里朋友很少方面:try to make more friends by joining after-school activities/share your problems with them/try to help others...
每天睡眠不足方面:develop a good sleeping habit/Going to bed early and getting up early/ask a doctor for help...
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·新疆吐鲁番市托克逊县·期末)
假如你是Jack,你的美国朋友Jenny给你发来电子邮件,询问你最喜欢的歌手,请你根据提示写一篇以“My Favorite Singer”为题的回复邮件,向她做个简单的介绍,词数80左右。
内容包括:
介绍你最喜欢的歌手的相关信息;
为什么你会喜欢他/她。
My favorite singer... The reason why I like her/him is... It makes me feel...
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【答案】例文
Dear Jenny,
My Favorite Singer
My favorite star is Liu Dehua. He is from Hong Kong, China. He is 60 years old now. He is a singer and actor. He is tall and handsome. He has made many records, like the “Chinese People” and “Wangqingshui”. He has won a lot of prizes because of his beautiful songs. What’s more, he has become one of the famous and successful singers in China.
He is very kind. He often gives away money to help others. When I feel tired or angry, I would like to listen to his songs because they make me feel relaxed and peaceful. His music has provided me with inspiration.
Yours,
Jack
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:人物介绍(介绍最喜欢的歌手);
②时态:一般现在时(描述歌手的基本情况、性格、影响等,用一般现在时陈述客观事实);
③提示:围绕favorite singer,从个人基本信息(来自哪里、年龄等)、职业、外貌、作品成就、性格品质、对自己的影响等方面展开介绍。
【写作步骤】
第一步:开篇点题,表明最喜欢的歌手,直接引出写作对象;
第二步:介绍歌手的基本信息,包括来自哪里、年龄、职业、外貌、作品与成就,从多维度展现人物;
第三步:阐述歌手的性格及对自己的影响 ,丰富内容,体现喜欢他的原因。
【亮点词汇】
①give away捐赠
②provide with提供
【高分句型】
①He has won a lot of prizes because of his beautiful songs.(现在完成时)
②When I feel tired or angry, I would like to listen to his songs because they make me feel relaxed and peaceful. (时间状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·新疆乌鲁木齐市第七十中学·期末)
旅行能让我们感受到自然的魅力,历史的积淀和文化的传承,每个人在旅行中都有很多的收获和不同的体会。China Daily杂志正在举办题为“The Best Place I Have Been to”的征文活动,请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍你曾经去过的地方,并向杂志社投稿。
提示问题:(1) What is the best place you have been to?
(2) What did you do there? How did you feel?
(3) Why is it the best place in your opinion?
参考词汇: unforgettable难忘的 impressive印象深刻的 be famous for因……著名
写作要求:(1) 短文应包括以上要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
(2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息。(3) 词数80-100词。
The Best Place I Have Been to
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【答案】例文
The Best Place I Have Been to
The best place I’ve visited is Guilin, a city famous for its breathtaking landscapes.
Last summer, I took a boat trip along the Li River. The crystal-clear water, green mountains, and peaceful villages left me an unforgettable memory. I also tried local food like Guilin rice noodles, which were delicious!
What makes Guilin special is its natural beauty. The karst mountains look like paintings, and the fresh air makes you feel relaxed. It’s not just a place to see but to experience. That’s why I think Guilin is the best place I’ve been to.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:根据提示写作。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点明自己去过的最好的地方是桂林;
第二步:介绍去桂林做了什么以及自己的感受;
第三步:介绍认为桂林是自己去过的最好的地方的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①breathtaking landscapes惊人的风景
②took a boat trip乘船游览
③left me an unforgettable memory给我留下了难忘的回忆
④makes you feel relaxed让你感到放松
[高分句型]
①I also tried local food like Guilin rice noodles, which were delicious! (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②What makes Guilin special is its natural beauty. (What引导的主语从句)
③That’s why I think Guilin is the best place I’ve been to. (why引导的表语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·新疆喀什地区·期末)
“广大青年要厚植家国情怀、涵养进取品格,以奋斗姿态激扬青春,不负时代,不负华年。”习主席对青年一代提出殷切希望,为当代青年的成长指引航向,为此,Kashgar Weekly发起“How to be a sunshine teenager”的主题征文。请根据以下提示写一篇关于自己的征文。
内容提示:
2. Have you read any classics?
3. Have you ever been to some meaningful places?
4. Do you help your parents with chores?
5. Do you have a healthy lifestyle (生活方式)?
要求:
6. 参考所给提示,可适当发挥;
7. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
8. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
9. 词数:80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to be a sunshine teenager
To be a sunshine teenager, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Let me tell you what I’ve learned in the past year and what I will do in the coming summer holiday.
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【答案】例文
How to be a sunshine teenager
To be a sunshine teenager, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Let me tell you what I’ve learned in the past year and what I will do in the coming summer vacation.
I have read a lot of classics which have helped me understand the importance of family and country. At the same time, I have visited all kinds of museums and enriched my experience. I often help my parents with chores, such as cooking dinner, washing clothes and so on. I exercise everyday and I have a healthy lifestyle.
I plan to improve my life skills and take part in volunteer activities during the summer holiday. I will work hard to be a sunshine teenager.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,不可遗漏任何信息提示,适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总领全文,引出下文成为阳光少年的方法;
第二步,从阅读经典、参观有意义的地方、帮助做家务以及健康的生活方式四个方面介绍成为阳光少年的方法;
第三步,呼吁大家成为阳光少年。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of很多
②at the same time同时
③help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
④decide to do sth.决定做某事
⑤get on well with sb.与某人相处融洽
⑥in a word总之
[高分句型]
①First, I have read a lot of classics which have broadened my mind. (which引导定语从句)
②In a word, I will work hard to be an excellent person. (动词不定式作目的状语)
Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·新疆和田地区·期末)
每年的5月25日是全国学生心理健康日。为帮助学生解决心理问题,保持好的心情,上周你的学校请著名的心理专家王老师开展了一场讲座。假如你是季华,听完讲座后,你学到了很多保持好心情的好方法。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,和同学们分享一下这些好方法。
提示:
2.进行体育锻炼,如跑步、打篮球等;
3.选择令人放松的日常活动,如听音乐、看电影等;
4.多和他人交流;
4….
写作要求:
5.必须包含以上要点,可适当增加细节;
6.语句连贯,条理清楚,详略得当,书写工整;
7.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总数)。
I am Li Hua. I listened to a report from a famous teacher, Mr. Wang. From his report, I learned how we could stay in a good mood._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I am Li Hua. I listened to a report from a famous teacher, Mr. Wang. From his report, I learned how we could stay in a good mood.
Firstly, we should do some sports in our daily life, such as running, playing basketball and swimming. Doing sports can make our bodies strong, and it is also a good way to reduce pressure. Secondly, choose so me relaxing activities, such as listening to music and watching movies. Thirdly, communicate with others as much as possible. We can communicate with our parents or teachers when we face some problems. Last but not least, we should pay more attention to our eating habits. We’d better eat more fruit and vegetables. Drink more water and milk instead of Cola and coffee.
I think the advice above can help you.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
时态:一般现在时。
提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容,可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,我们如何保持良好的心情。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,就如何保持好心情提出合理的建议。
第三步,书写结语,希望建议有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
Doing sports can make our bodies strong, and it is also a good way to reduce pressure.(动名词作主语)
Passage 6
(24-25八年级下·新疆巴音郭楞蒙古自治州·期末)
童年的物品总是充满着回忆,如玩具、书本、礼物等等。你现在仍然保留着的你孩童时代最喜欢的东西是什么呢?请你根据以下提示要点写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍一下吧。
要点:
2. 你孩童时代最喜欢的东西是什么?
3. 你拥有它多久了?你怎样得到它的?
4. 你为什么如此喜欢它?
5. ……
要求:1. 70词左右;
6. 文中须包含所提示的全部要点, 可适当发挥;
7. 语句通顺、行文连贯、书写工整;
8. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名、校名等信息;
9. 不能抄袭试卷原文。
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【答案】范文:
My Favorite Childhood Thing
The thing I love most from my childhood is a teddy bear. I’ve had it for 8 years. My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday. It’s white with a red bow. I like it because it’s always by my side when I’m sad. Once I fell ill, it stayed on my bed, making me feel less lonely. Though it’s old now, it still brings me warmth and happy memories.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你孩童时代最喜欢的东西是什么;
第二步,描述你拥有了多久以及得到的方式;
第三步,阐述喜欢的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①childhood孩童时期
②fell ill生病
③warmth温暖
[高分句型]
①The thing I love most from my childhood is a teddy bear. (定语从句)
②Though it’s old now, it still brings me warmth and happy memories. (Though引导的让步状语从句)
主题01 人与自我——成长与感悟
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·新疆伊犁·期末)
请你以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为题,写一篇短文,谈谈你是如何面对学习或生活中出现的问题,减少压力并保持积极乐观的生活态度。
写作要点:
2. 存在哪些问题或压力?
3. 减少压力,解决问题的方法,如:参加课外活动、多交朋友、听音乐、读书等。
4. 字数80-100词,不得出现真实的姓名与学校名称。
Less Pressure, Better Life
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【答案】One possible version:
Less Pressure, Better Life
Many students feel stressed because of heavy schoolwork and problems with friends or parents. Too much homework and exams make us tired, and arguments with friends or parents make us worried.
How can we solve these problems and reduce the stress in the life? We should join interesting after-school activities like sports or art clubs. At the same time, we can listen to music or draw pictures in our free time. Talking with family or teachers can solve many problems. These will help us to be relaxed and feel comfortable.
In our life, some stress is normal, but too much is bad for us. Learning to balance study and life is the key to staying happy and healthy. Life will be better if we try our best.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全,可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出学生面临的压力问题。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“参与有趣的课外活动、在空闲时间听音乐或画画、与家人或老师交谈”几个方面给出减轻压力的方法,并解释原因。
第三步,书写结语。总结生活压力与健康的关系,并鼓励我们尽力过上更好的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①stressed有压力的
②after-school activities课外活动
③balanced平衡的
[高分句型]
①Life will be better if we try our best. (if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·新疆喀什地区·期末)
当看到曾经最喜爱的旧玩具时,你想起的一定不只是那个玩具,更多的是与它有关的人和事,还有它所带来的美好回忆。你最喜欢的玩具是什么呢? 请你根据以下提示,用英语写篇短文描述一下。
提示:
2. 你最喜欢的玩具。
3. 你如何拥有它,拥有了多久。
4. 你喜欢它的原因。
要求:
5. 语句通顺,意思连贯,内容详实,语法正确,书写规范。
6. 文中不要出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
7. 词数70左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Among all my toys, my favorit one is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Among all my toys, my favorite one is a toy bear from my best friend Lucy. It was a lovely bear with a sweet smile on its face.
Five years ago, my family moved to another city and I had to go to a new school. Both Lucy and I felt sad because we couldn’t study and play together. Before I left, Lucy came to give me the bear. She said although we couldn’t be together any longer, the toy bear could always stay with me.
I love the toy because when I see it, it seems that Lucy is smiling to me. It always reminds me of Lucy and the happy time we spent together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇引出话题,说明你最喜欢的玩具;
第二步,具体阐述你如何拥有它,拥有了多久;
第三步,介绍你喜欢它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①remind sb. of sth.提醒某人某事
②not…any longer不再……
③stay with sb.与某人待在一起
[高分句型]
①She said although we couldn’t be together any longer, the toy bear could always stay with me.(although引导的让步状语从句)
②I love the toy because when I see it, it seems that Lucy is smiling to me.(because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·新疆克孜勒苏柯尔克孜自治州·期末)
为了培养同学们的阅读兴趣,英语周报“My Favorite Book”专栏开展征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的一本书。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数 80 左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
The more books you read, the wiser you are. I like reading books._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The more books you read, the wiser you are. I like reading books. My favorite book is Journey to the West. It is one of the four classics in China.
In this book, I like the Monkey King best. The Monkey King can make 72 changes and turn himself into different animals and objects. He usually fights against bad people in order to protect Xuanzang. I want to be like him because he is very clever and brave. He keeps fighting to help weak people and never gives up.
To sum up, the book Journey to the West influences me a lot. I will put the lessons that I have learnt from it into use in my daily life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:本文应该主要用第三人称和第一人称来写;介绍书的内容时,要写得具体、有说服力;同时要把喜爱之情展现出来。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头要直截了当。说明自己最喜欢的书是什么;
第二步,对这本书的地位、自己最喜欢的角色及喜欢的原因等细节进行介绍;
第三步,总结并进行情感升华。表明这本书对自己影响很大。
[亮点词汇]
①one of...……之一
②like...best最喜欢……
③turn...into...把…… 变成……
[高分句型]
① The Monkey King can make 72 changes and turn himself into different animals and objects.(and连接两个分句构成并列句)
②I want to be like him because he is very clever and brave.(because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·新疆阿克苏·期末)
假如你是李华,暑假即将来临,你打算在假期里做一些有意义的事,请你根据下面的提示,给你的笔友Jack写一封邮件,谈谈你的打算。
要点:
(1)介绍假期学习计划;
(2)利用假期参加一些社会实践(social activities) (如:帮助老人,教小孩阅读……)及理由;
(3)假期里如何与父母沟通?请给出一到两个建议。
要求:词数80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);行文流畅、表达准确、书写规范;短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息, 并可适当发挥。
Dear Jack,
How’s it going? Summer holiday is coming. I’m going to do something meaningful on vacation.
__________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
How’s it going? Summer holiday is coming. I’m going to do something meaningful on vacation.
First, I made some study plans. I’m going to the library to read some books after finishing my holiday homework. What’s more, I plan to prepare for the knowledge in the next semester in advance. Secondly, I will take part in some social activities. I’m going to help the old people clean their houses or read some books for them. I’m also going to teach the children to read. I think that these activities can not only cultivate my independence, but also give me more social experience. Finally, it is also very important to communicate well with our parents. So we can spend more time with our parents. We can care about them and help them do some housework. When our parents are free, it is very effective to communicate with them. I think that these are helpful to my study and future.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明这封邮件的目的;
第二步,根据提示材料详细介绍自己的暑期计划。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②not only...but also不但……而且
③communicate with与……交流
[高分句型]
①I think that these activities can not only cultivate my independence, but also give me more social experience. (宾语从句)
②When our parents are free, it is very effective to communicate with them.(when引导时间状语从句)
Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·新疆克孜勒苏柯尔克孜自治州第一中学·期末)
假如你是Nick,你的朋友Jack在成长的过程中遇到了一些问题,他来信向你寻求帮助,请你在回信中给他提以下建议:
2. 如果你经常很晚完成作业,我想你应该制定一个计划,不要浪费时间;
3. 为什么不和同学友好相处呢?不要和他们争吵,你可以和他们交朋友;
4. 在家应经常和父母沟通,你也可以帮他们做一些家务,他们是最爱你的人;
5. 当你有空的时候,看点书或做运动怎么样?我想这样对你的学习和健康有好处。
参考词汇:make a plan, waste, get on with, argue with, talk/communicate with, be good for
请根据以上内容,写一篇80字左右的短文。 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总字数)
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me some questions in your letter. I hope I can help you. Here is my advice.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you think my advice is useful to you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Nick
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me some questions in your letter. I hope I can help you. Here is my advice.
If you often finish your homework late, I think you should make a plan. Don’t waste your time. Why don’t you get on with your classmates? Don’t argue with them. You can make friends with them. You should talk with your parents often at home. You can help them do some chores. They are the people who love you most. When you are free, what about doing some reading or doing some sports? I think it’s good for your study and health.
I hope you think my advice is useful to you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Nick
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“针对Jack遇到的问题给出建议”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表示自己的关心;
第二步,根据题干的要点,介绍自己的建议;
第三步,希望自己的建议有用,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①do chores做家务
②be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①If you often finish your homework late, I think you should make a plan.(if引导的条件状语从句、宾语从句)
②They are the people who love you most.(定语从句)
主题02 人与社会——旅行推荐
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·新疆维吾尔自治区吐鲁番市实验中学·期末)
假如你是李晶,你的英国朋友Jenny想来中国旅游。她想让你帮忙推荐一个城市,请你按照以下提示,用英语给Jenny写一封电子邮件,向她推荐北京。
location
in the northern part of China
place of interest
the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum,…
food
Beijing Duck
the best time
spring
…
…
要求: 1.电子邮件应包含所有提示,可适当发挥;
2.语言表达准确,语句通顺连贯;
3.词数不少于80词。电子邮件的格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
I’m really glad to know you’re coming to China. I’d love to recommend visiting Beijing. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jing
【答案】范文:
Dear Jenny,
I’m really glad to know you’re coming to China. I’d love to recommend visiting Beijing.
Beijing is in the northern part of China and is the capital city. It has many famous places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, and the Palace Museum. The Great Wall is a must-see—it’s one of the wonders of the world! The Summer Palace is beautiful with its gardens and lake, and the Palace Museum shows China’s long history. You should also try Beijing Duck—it’s delicious! The best time to visit is spring because the weather is warm and comfortable, and the flowers are blooming.
I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time in Beijing. Let me know if you need more help!
Yours,
Li Jing
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作意图开头已给出,写作时可直接向Jenny推荐北京。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“地理位置”、“风景名胜”、“食物”以及“北京的最佳旅游时间”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。
第三步,表达期盼。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth很高兴做某事
②would love to do sth 想要做某事
③places of interest风景名胜
④the Great Wall长城
⑤the Summer Palace颐和园
⑥the Palace Museum故宫
⑦have a wonderful time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①The Summer Palace is beautiful with its gardens and lake, and the Palace Museum shows China’s long history.(并列句)
②The best time to visit is spring because the weather is warm and comfortable, and the flowers are blooming. (because引导的原因状语从句)
③I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time in Beijing. (省略that的宾语从句)
④Let me know if you need more help! (祈使句和if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·新疆哈密市·期末)
假如你是李华,去年夏天和家人去旅游。请你根据要点和所给句型描述一下你曾经去过的地方。
2. 参考词汇:places of interest, sunny, food, water, sports
3. 提示:Have you ever been to…?
How long have you stayed there?
Have you ever seen/tried/played...?
4. 要求:1. 短文中要包括以上提示信息;
5. 内容可适当发挥,以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅;
6. 词数:80~100。
I Have Been to _________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 I Have Been to Sanya
Last summer, my family and I visited Sanya, a beautiful coastal city in Hainan. Have you ever been to such a sunny paradise? We stayed there for a week. The places of interest like Tianya Haijiao were amazing! The crystal-clear water and golden beaches were unforgettable. Have you ever tried fresh seafood? We enjoyed delicious local food every day. Additionally, we played water sports like jet skiing, which was exciting! The trip was full of joy and relaxation. If you go to Sanya, I’m sure you will enjoy yourself, and have a great time there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:记叙文,本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时为主(描述经历),少量现在完成时(提问互动) ;
③提示:覆盖所有给定词汇和句型(places of interest/sunny/food/water/sports + Have you ever...?)
[写作步骤]
第一步:确定地点并概述时间/人物;
第二步:用提示句型描述景点、天气、活动(海滩/水上运动/美食);
第三步:加入情感总结,强化互动性。
[亮点词汇]
①crystal-clear water 清澈见底的水
②golden beaches 金色沙滩
[高分句型]
①Additionally, we played water sports like jet skiing, which was exciting!(which引导的非限定性定语从句)
②The crystal-clear water and golden beaches were unforgettable.(含有and的并列句)
③If you go to Sanya, I’m sure you will enjoy yourself, and have a great time there.(if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 3
假期中你一定有很多有意义的旅游经历吧,请简述一下假期中你认为有意义的一段经历。词数:80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
主要内容包括以下几点
2.你曾去过什么地方?
3.给你留下深刻印象的地方是哪里?为什么?
4.你没去过而又很想去的地方是哪里?打算什么时候去?
Good afternoon, everyone,
I’m very happy to tell you my experiences. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Good afternoon, everyone,
I’m very happy to tell you my experiences. During the last summer vacation, I went to Chengdu with my family.
What impressed me most was the Giant Panda Base. Seeing those cute pandas rolling around and eating bamboo made me feel warm. Their lovely looks and lazy movements were really unforgettable.
I’ve never been to Lijiang. I hear it has beautiful old towns and clear rivers. I plan to go there next winter vacation with my best friend.
【来源】新疆维吾尔自治区阿克苏地区2024-2025学年八年级下学期7月期末英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要使用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:向众人简述假期中有意义的旅游经历,包括去过的地方、印象深刻之处及想去的地方。
[写作步骤]
第一步,以问候开头,引出要讲述的经历;
第二步,介绍假期去过的成都,说明印象最深刻的大熊猫基地及原因;
第三步,提及没去过但想去的丽江,说明计划前往的时间和同行者。
[亮点词汇]
①impressed留下深刻印象的
②unforgettable难忘的
③plan计划;打算
[高分句型]
①Seeing those cute pandas rolling around and eating bamboo made me feel warm.(此句使用动名词短语作主语,使句子结构更丰富,生动描述看到的场景及感受。)
②I hear it has beautiful old towns and clear rivers.(运用了省略引导词的宾语从句,简洁表达听说的内容,使叙述更自然。)
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·新疆乌鲁木齐市第七十六中学·期末)
暑假即将来临,同学们都在兴致勃勃地谈论着自己的旅行计划。为了给大家提供更多选择,英语老师将在班级里开展“旅游推荐官”的英文演讲活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿,和大家分享你最喜欢的城市及其理由。
★ What is your favorite city?
★ Where is it?
★What makes it a great place to visit?
要求:
2. 包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
3. 80 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening. I wish you all a wonderful vacation!
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m excited to share my favorite city with you—Hangzhou, a beautiful city in eastern China’s Zhejiang Province.
It’s famous for the West Lake, which looks amazing all year round. You can row a boat on the lake, ride a bike along the path, or just enjoy the peaceful view. Besides the natural beauty, Hangzhou also offers delicious food. Don’t miss Longjing shrimps, made with fresh tea leaves! Beyond nature and food, Hangzhou’s history is also fascinating. The city has a long history—you can visit ancient pagodas like Leifeng Tower and learn about traditional Chinese culture. Whether you love nature, food, or history, Hangzhou won’t let you down.
Thanks for listening. I wish you all a wonderful vacation!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括所有提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第三人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山引出演讲主题,明确推荐城市为杭州,并介绍其地理位置;
第二步,以自然景观、美食文化、历史底蕴为脉络,从三个维度推荐杭州的旅游吸引力;
第三步,总结杭州适合各类游客的特点,以祝福收尾,强化演讲的感染力,呼应开头的“暑假旅行推荐”主题。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for 以……而闻名
②let sb. down 让某人失望
[高分句型]
①Whether you love nature, food, or history, Hangzhou won’t let you down. (whether引导的让步状语从句)
②It’s famous for the West Lake, which looks amazing all year round. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·新疆巴音郭楞蒙古自治州·期末)
随着《我的阿勒泰》的热播,来自新疆的草原、雪山、旷野和森林震撼了无数人的心灵,让新疆再度成为网友心目中旅游的热门地点之一。假如你是李华,你校英语报正在举办以“Beautiful Xinjiang”为主题的英语征稿活动,让更多的朋友了解新疆,请你根据以下提示内容,用英语写一篇文章简单地介绍一下新疆并投稿。
内容包括:
2. 新疆位于我国西部;交通方便;人们热情好客;
3. 日照丰富,因此水果的产量和种类丰富,在这里人们可以品尝各种水果和美食;
4. 有许多著名的旅游景点,如天山(The Tianshan Mountains)、赛里木湖(Sayram Lake);
5. 旅游时间及原因(至少一条)。
要求:
6. 意思连贯,表达准确,书写规范,可适当发挥;
7. 文中不能出现考生真实的人名、校名及所在地等信息;
8. 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数,不得抄袭试卷原文。
Beautiful Xinjiang
Hello, everyone. Welcome to Xinjiang! Let me introduce Xinjiang to you._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Beautiful Xinjiang
Hello, everyone. Welcome to Xinjiang! Let me introduce Xinjiang to you.
Xinjiang is located in the west of China. It’s very convenient for people to come here by train or by plane. People here are very kind and friendly. Xinjiang has enough sunshine so it’s home to different kinds of fruits. If you come here, you can enjoy delicious fruits. There are many famous places of interest, such as The Tianshan Mountains and Sayram Lake. They are very beautiful. I suggest you come in summer, which is very cool and you can enjoy beautiful scenery.
Come to Xinjiang! I’m sure you will enjoy yourself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:题目要求根据提示介绍一下新疆,包括它的位置、交通、特产以及旅游景点,并推荐一下旅游时间。写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题(已给出);
第二步,根据所给要点,依次介绍新疆的位置、交通、特产以及旅游景点,并推荐一下旅游时间;
第三步,最后表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 不同各类的
②such as 比如
③enjoy oneself 玩得开心
[高分句型]
① It’s very convenient for people to come here by train or by plane.(it作形式主语)
② If you come here, you can enjoy delicious fruits.(if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 6
(24-25八年级下·新疆农业大学附属中学·期末)
三亚市位于我国海南省南部,是一座美丽的城市。每年都有来自世界各地的游客来到这个旅游胜地观光游玩。在这里,你不仅能欣赏到碧海蓝天的美景,品尝到美味的海鲜,而且还能和家人朋友漫步嬉戏在沙滩上。请你写一篇文章简单介绍一下旅游胜地三亚。
注意:
2. 不少于 80词;
3. 语句通顺,语意连贯,语法正确,书写工整,细节可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
Sanya is a beautiful city located in the south of Hainan Province. Every year, tourists from all over the world come to this tourist resort for sightseeing. Here you can not only enjoy the beauty of the blue sea and blue sky, taste delicious seafood, but also walk and play on the beach with family and friends.
The ends of the Earth is a place you must visit. It covers an area of more than 500 mu, the main attractions are Tianya Jiao statue, Tianya stone, South Tianya pillar, Cape No.7 and so on. Into the park, a circle of green trees and red flowers surrounded the whole park. Next is to go to Sanya Haitang Bay, which is also a business center of Sanya City, so it is the most prosperous business area in the whole Sanya. Wuzhizhou Island is the largest island in Sanya, about six kilometers long. Although it is a small island, the scenery is also beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题目描述和要点完成本篇书面表达,注意使用正确的时态和连接词,使语句通顺、语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要介绍海南省三亚市;
第二步,介绍海南省三亚市的特色;
第三步,总结。
[亮点词汇]
①tourist resort 旅游胜地
②sightseeing 观光
③surround 围绕
④prosperous business area 繁华商业区
⑤scenery 景色
[高分句型]
①Next is to go to Sanya Haitang Bay, which is also a business center of Sanya City, so it is the most prosperous business area in the whole Sanya. (定语从句)
②Although it is a small island, the scenery is also beautiful. (让步状语从句)
主题03 人与社会——志愿者活动
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·新疆克孜勒苏柯尔克孜自治州·期末)
假如你是Tony,上个星期日参加了一次学校组织的志愿者献爱心活动。请根据以下信息给你的好朋友Mike写一封电子邮件,记录当天的活动,并希望他下一次也能一起参加这样的活动。
写作要点:
2.表达你当一名志愿者的心情。
3.关于活动:
①时间:上个星期日;
②地点:The nursing home/ The old people’s home 敬老院;
③活动内容:给老人们读报纸、散步、聊天、打扫卫生等。
4.说说参加此次活动的感受。
写作要求:
5. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
6. 可以适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
7. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
8. 至少80词。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Tony
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Is everything all right?
Last Sunday, I participated in a volunteer love activity organized by the school. It is very meaningful. I feel very happy. Let me tell you what we did last Sunday.
As soon as our volunteers arrived at the nursing home, they warmly welcomed us. We brought some flowers and fruit to the old people. We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for the old people. When we read the newspaper and took a walk, we sat together and chatted and wished them the best. When our volunteers left, the old people were very excited. They thanked us for our kindness, but I think it is our responsibility to take care of the old people and respect them.
If you have a chance in China, I hope you can join us.
Yours,
Tony
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,包括:注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,表达你当一名志愿者的心情;
②第二步,介绍志愿者活动的时间、地点和活动内容;
③第三步,说说参加此次活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①participate in参加
②take a walk散步
③thank sb for sth为某事感谢某人
[高分句型]
①As soon as our volunteers arrived at the nursing home, they warmly welcomed us.(时间状语从句)
②If you have a chance in China, I hope you can join us.(条件状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·新疆吐鲁番市·期末)
为了呼吁人们保护濒危动物,某中学英文杂志开设了“保护濒危动物”专栏,现面向广大中学生征稿。假如你对这个话题很感兴趣,请你写一篇英语短文,然后向该杂志投稿。
内容包含:
2.动物濒临灭绝的原因(至少写两条);
3.作为中学生,我们能为保护濒危动物做些什么(至少写两条)?
要求:
4.内容要全面;
5.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
6.词数不少于100,开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:forests, grasslands, endangered, cut down, pollute, kill, meat or fur, call on, advise
As is known to everyone, animals are our friends.
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【答案】例文
As is known to everyone, animals are our friends. However, many kinds of animals are in danger now.
The most of animals like to live in the forests, grasslands and where there are no population. But now, to make money, humans cut down trees and pollute the rivers, animals don’t have enough places to live in or enough food to eat. What’s more, humans kill them because they want them for meat or fur.
It’s everyone’s duty to protect endangered animals. As middle school students, what can we do? First, I think we should call on everyone not to kill endangered animals. And then, we should advise the government to protect the homes of endangered animals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出“保护濒临动物”的话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“动物濒临灭绝的原因、如何保护濒危动物”等方面进行介绍;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①however然而
②what’s more更重要的是
③cut down砍倒
[高分句型]
①What’s more, humans kill them because they want them for meat or fur.(because引导的原因状语从句)
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