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【Passage1】江西省赣州市赣县区20242025学年下学期七年级期末英语考试卷
古人云:“读万卷书,行万里路”。旅行不仅可以开阔视野,还能收获知识。那么,你曾经去过哪
里旅行呢?哪次的旅行最让你难忘?是学校组织的研学旅行?是班级组织的徒步旅行?还是家庭组织的亲
子旅行呢?你校英语报正在举行主题为“An unforgettable Trip”的英语征稿活动,请根据以下提示完成征文。
写作要点:
1.The general introduction of your trip (when,where,weather,activities...).
2.How did you feel about it?
3.What do you learn from it?
要求:
1短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
2短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。
3.词数80-120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
An unforgettable Trip
As a saying goes,"Read thousands of books and travel thousands of miles."
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【Passage2】江西省吉安市井冈山市20242025学年七年级下学期期未考试英语试题
假如你是李华,你正在西安度假,你的朋友Bl给你发了一封邮件,询问你的假期情况。请根据下
面提示,给他回一封邮件。
1、西安的天气。(晴热,有时下雨…);
2、你和你父母正在做什么?(写信,看电视,吃零食…):
3、昨天去了哪里?玩得怎么样?(秦岭野生动物园,很开心…);
4、西安还有什么好地方是你喜欢的?原因是什么?(曲江书城,不远和凉快…):
5、你通常怎样到达你喜欢的地方?(骑自行车,10分钟…)。
参考词汇:秦岭野生动物园:Qinling Wildlife Park,曲江书城:Qujiang Bookstore,不远的:not far,地方:
place,凉快的:cool
要求:1、参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2、语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整:
3、文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(本人姓名、校名等):
4、词数不少于70(开头及结尾已给出,但不记录总词数)。
Dear Bill,
Thank you for your last email.Now I'm in Xi'an with my parents.
Best wishes!
Yours,
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【Pssa3】江西省宜春市高安市20242025学年七年级下学期期末考试英语试卷
一年一度的暑假即将来临,你是否想起了你以前的夏日之旅?请你根据思维导图以A$pecial Summer
Tp为题写一篇英语短文,与大家分享。字数:70词左右。
How was the weather?
Where and when did you go?
A Special Summer Trip
Who did you go with?
What did you do/see?
How did you feel?
What did you learn?
A Special Summer Trip
【Passage4】江西省九江市都昌县20242025学年七年级下学期6月期末英语试题
以“My Weekend'为题,写一篇短文,描述你上周末的活动。
要求:1.内容积极向上,不少于80词:
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【Passag®5】江西省南昌市南昌二中教育集团初中部20242025学年七年级下学期6月期末英语试题
适度出游有助于身心放松,与家人一同旅行还可拉近亲人间的关系。假如你是来自武汉的Hlm,于
上周与家人来到南昌,度过了一个难忘的周末。请根据下列提示内容及要求写一篇日记,介绍你在南昌时
的周末活动以及你的感受。
提示内容:
1.周六上午,阳光明媚,去万寿宫(Wanshou Palace)吃了很多美食,拍了很多照片,看到了许多古老建
筑…
2.周六下午(或晚上),参观了滕王阁(Tengwang Pavilion),站其上还可俯瞰赣江(the Gan River)..
3.周日上午,去了八一广场(Bayi Square).…
4.周日下午…
写作要求:
(1)要点齐全,意思连贯,语句通顺,书写工整,内容可适当发挥;
(2)词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,不计入总词数):
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
参考表达:overlook俯瞰
Qiushui Square秋水广场
Monday,17 June
Last weekend,I had an amazing trip to Nanchang with my parents.
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【Passage6】江西省赣州市经开区校联考20242025学年七年级下学期6月期末英语试题
同学们,在你的生活中肯定也有某一时刻或某一天,因一件事或一个人,幸福感悄然而生。这一天
对你而言一定是特别的一天。请你以“A Special Day'”为题,介绍你特别的一天。在那一天,你做了什么?
学到了什么?
题目:A Special Day
提示:(I)What was your special day?
(2)What happened on that day?(weather,place,activities..)
(3)How did you feel?What did you learn?
要求:1文中不得出现真实的人名,校名:
2.词数在80-120之间,必须包含所有要点。
A Special Day
There is a special day in my life.I will never forget it.Let me tell you something about it.
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【Passage7】江西省新余市20242025学年下学期七年级期末测试英语试卷
中国的传统节日一一端午节刚刚过去,假如你是李华,请给大洋彼岸的笔友To写一封信,介绍中
国人在端午节的习俗和你在端午节的活动,并描述你在端午节这一天的感受。
习俗:1.包粽子
2品尝了不同种类的粽子。
2.赛龙舟
3.晚上在田野间散步。
3.…
4.…
你的活动:1.去乡下看望爷爷奶奶。
你的感受:原来生活也可以如此放松、惬意。
提示词:custom(习俗),make zongzi,,visit,.boat race,.field(田野),go for a walk
要求:1.70词左右,书写工作、规范:
2.参考提示词,可适当发挥;
3.不能出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。
Dear Tom:
About 3 weeks ago,it was the Dragon Boat Festival.
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【Passage8】【来源】江西省上饶市20242025学年七年级下学期6月期末考试英语试题
众所周知,健康的身体是我们有效学习的保证。为了提高同学们的健康意识,学校英语社团将举行
英语征文比赛。请根据下面的思维导图,以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇不少于T0词的英语短文。
keep exercising
keep a healthy diet
How to Keep
keep happy moods
get plenty of sleep
Healthy
spend less time online
要求:1短文须至少包含思维导图中四条信息,可适当表达自己的观点:
2意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范:
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
4开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Keep Healthy
As we all know,it's important for us to keep healthy.
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提升
【Passage1】江西省南昌市20242025学年七年级下学期期末考试英语试题
假设你是李明,请仔细阅读以下两个任务,并根据任务要求写一封信给By,60词左右。
Task 1:What's the weather like today?How do you like today's weather?
Task 2:What are you doing now?What about your family?What are they doing at this moment?
Dear Betty,
How's it going?It's
in Nanchang.
Can you tell me about your family activities?Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【Passage2】江西省赣州市20242025学年七年级下学期期末考试英语试卷
在我们的校园生活中,老师扮演着至关重要的角色。他们不仅传授知识,还给予我们关心和鼓励。
七年级的学习生活即将结束,这一年里,想必有那么一位老师会让你难以忘怀。假设你是李华,请以My
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Favorite Teacher为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一位老师,并分享一个你们之间的温暖小故事。
写作要点
What does he/she look like?
Introduction
◆What is his/her personality(性格)?
◆When did it happen?
A warm story between you
What did he/she do for you?
◆How did you feel?
Why do you love him/her?
Your feelings
What do you want to say to him/her?
要求:
1短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥:
2短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名:
3.词数60~100,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Teacher
Hi,I'm Li Hua.In my first year of junior high school,many teachers helped me.But my favorite teacher is
【Passage3】江西省吉安市青州区20242025学年七年级下学期期末检测英语试题
安全对于我们每个人都很重要。为了进一步增强学生的安全意识,提高学生的自我保护能力,你校
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正在开展以“How to Keep Safe in Our Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,现向同学们征稿。请你根据以下提示内
容,写一份英文演讲稿。
写作要点:1.交通安全:遵守交通规则,骑车不能带人…
2.校园安全:不在走廊奔跑,不和同学打架…
3.食品安全:吃健康的食物,少吃垃圾食品…
4其他…(至少补充一点,如假期人身安全、网络安全等)
写作要求:1.演讲稿内容应涵盖以上所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥:
2.演讲稿中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
3.词数80-120,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and students,
Today,I'm glad to give a speech about how to keep safe in our life.
That's all.Thanks for listening
【Passage4】江西省萍乡市20242025学年七年级下学期期末考试英语试题
你校将举行有关旅行的英语演讲比赛,因为假期旅行让学生既放松了心情,又开阔了视野,学到了
知识。你对旅行怎么看?你有最难忘的旅行经历吗?请你根据写作要点,写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
写作要点:
1.What's your idea about travel?
2.When and where did you take the travel?
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3.How did you feel?What did you get from the travel?
要求:
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥:
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3.词数70左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数:
提示词:open up one's eyes to the outside world开阔视野;
the beauty of nature自然之美
I like travelling because it
【Passage5】2025年江西省中考英语真题
今年是“体重管理年”,为了促进“健康中国”建设,学校校刊英语专栏以“EtWl'为题向学生征
文。请你根据下列提示写一篇短文投稿,介绍你的日常饮食、饮食习惯及改进措施。
写作要点:
1.What do you often have for three meals?
2.What are your good and bad eating habits?
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3.How can you improve your eating habits?
写作要求:
1.短文应包括所有写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥:
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息:
3.短文不少于80词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Eat Well
Eating well is important for health.
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专题09 书面表达
【Passage 1】【答案】例文
My Free Time
I have lots of things to do in my free time.
Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to music for a while, which is a good way to relax. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at weekends, too. When I get tired, I would like to sit by the balcony and read books such as a novel, some science fiction, or even a poem. Reading calms me down and satisfies my thirst for knowledge.
I love my free time because these activities make my free time colorful and meaningful.
【Passage 2】【答案】例文:
Dear classmates,
June 6th is National Eye Care Day, which reminds us to protect our eyes.
Eyes are very important because they help us see the beautiful world, read books, and acquire knowledge. Without good eyesight, our lives will become difficult.
To protect our eyes, we can do the following things. First, don’t read in dim light or on a moving bus. Second, keep a proper distance from screens and take a break every 30 minutes. Third, do eye exercises regularly and spend more time outdoors.
Let’s take action from today. Protect our eyes and enjoy a bright future. Remember, healthy eyes lead to a healthy life.
Thank you!
【Passage 3】 【答案】
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to know you will visit your Chinese professor. To help you fit in, here are some tips.
Firstly, bring a small gift and arrive on time. It shows respect. Secondly, shake hands and keep smiling when you meet them. Thirdly, don’t talk when there is food in your mouth. Also, use chopsticks correctly. Wait for the elders to start eating first. Never stick chopsticks into the bowl.
I hope my advice helps. Enjoy your meal!
Yours,
Li Hua
【Passage 4】【答案】例文
I’d like to share my meaningful volunteer experience with you. Last month, I volunteered to clean up a local park with my classmates. We picked up litter and sorted recyclables. The experience was tiring but meaningful.
I felt proud to make our community cleaner and met new friends. I believe teenagers should do volunteering work. Firstly, it helps us learn teamwork and responsibility. Secondly, we can contribute to society and gain happiness from helping others.
Let’s join more volunteer activities!
【Passage 5】 【答案】例文
Hard time is part of our life.
One year ago, I always got nervous before tests. I studied hard. However, when the tests started, I forgot everything. I didn’t know what to do. I talked to my teacher, Ms Li. She encouraged me to trust myself. She also told me to pay attention to the answers and not to think about my grades. I tried Ms Li’s advice and now I become less and less nervous before tests.
From then on, I learned that believing in ourselves is important. I really want to say thanks to Ms Li.
【Passage 6】【答案】例文
How I Have Changed Entering Grade 8, I’ve noticed big changes in myself. In the past, I was shy and afraid of speaking in class. I seldom raised my hand even when I knew the answers. My grades were just average, especially in English.
Everything changed when my English teacher encouraged me to join the school speech contest. She patiently helped me practice and said, “Believe in yourself!” My parents also supported me by listening to my speeches every evening.
Now, I’ve become more confident. I actively participate in class discussions and even become a group leader. My English improved a lot, and I’m no longer that quiet girl. These changes make me proud!
【Passage 7】【答案】One possible answer:
My Favorite Book: The Little Prince
The Little Prince is a famous novel written by a French author. It tells the story of a young prince who travels from planet to planet, meeting different characters and learning about life, love, and friendship.
The main character, the Little Prince, leaves his small planet and his beloved rose to explore the universe. Along the way, he meets a fox who teaches him the meaning of true friendship and a pilot who becomes his friend on Earth. The story is full of wisdom, such as the famous line: “What is essential is invisible to the eye.”
I love this book because it teaches us to cherish simple things in life, like friendship and kindness. I would highly recommend it to everyone, especially teenagers, because it helps us understand the importance of love and responsibility.
【Passage 8】【答案】例文
Don’t Worry and Be Happy
Good morning, everyone Today, I’d like to share my experience with you. Last month, I failed a math test. I was so worried that I even lost interest in studying. However, I decided to face it bravely.
First, I asked my teacher for help, and she helped me to find out the mistakes and correct them. Then I made a new study plan. I spent 20 minutes every day reviewing and then practicing math problems. Day by day, my grades improved.
From this experience, I have learnt that life is full of trouble, but worrying doesn’t solve problems. As the saying goes,“Every cloud has a silver lining.” Let’s be happy and work hard. We’ll surely deal with all the problems well.
【Passage 9】【答案】例文
Growing Up With Books
It is generally considered that reading does a lot of benefits to us. Not only can it make our after-school life more meaningful and colorful, but also it can also open up our eyes and minds. As a result, by reading more, we would grow into a better person.
However, some students spend much time on short videos or computer games. It takes much of their free time. It is a pity to find that there are fewer and fewer students who are interested in reading or have formed a habit of reading. Therefore, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now, and let it become part of our life!
【Passage 10】【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I know how you feel! First of all, why don’t you share your feelings with your parents calmly? Tell them hobbies help you relax so that you can study better. If you promise to finish homework first, they might agree.
For math, whenever you find it difficult, ask your teacher or classmates. I find it helpful to review notes every day. Besides, you could join a study group—not only can you learn from others, but also make friends!
To sleep better, why not read a book instead of using phones? Everything will be better if you try hard! Believe in yourself!
Yours,
Li Hua
【Passage 1】【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mary,
How’s it going? You want to know how I spend my weekends. Now let me tell you about it.
My weekends are interesting and colorful. I start by finishing my schoolwork on Saturday morning. In the afternoon, I often help with some chores, like cleaning the room or doing the dishes. On Sundays, I usually do some reading or play basketball. Sometimes, I go to the city parks to enjoy the beauty of nature.
To enjoy wonderful weekends, I think you need a plan for your weekends. It’s better for you to finish your schoolwork first so that you can enjoy the rest of your free time. You could also take up something interesting as new hobbies or spend time with friends. Only in this way will your weekends be enjoyable.
I hope my advice will help you get better.
Yours,
Li Ming
【Passage 2】【答案】
Boys and girls,
It is important to make full use of our free time. As students, how can we make our free time meaningful? Here are my suggestions.
We should make good use of our free time to live a better life. First, we can improve ourselves. Doing sports keeps us healthy, and reading books helps us learn more. Second, we can stay with family. Doing housework and talking with family members make us closer. Third, we can do something for society. For example, we can help people in need or protect the environment.
In a word, let’s spend our free time meaningfully. It will make our life more colorful.
【Passage 3】 【答案】例文
Taking care of ourselves is very important. We should pay attention to both physical health and mental health.
For physical health, we need healthy habits. First, eat more fruits and vegetables, and less junk food. Second, exercise regularly, like playing basketball or running for 30 minutes a day. These help us stay strong and full of energy.
For mental health, it’s good to stay positive and learn to relax. When facing problems, try to see the bright side. Also, talk to friends or listen to music when feeling stressed. This makes us happier and helps us deal with difficulties better.
By doing these things, we can feel great every day!
【Passage 4】【答案】例文:
Dear schoolmates,
Books are our best friends. Reading books can provide us with rich knowledge. Reading can also make us wiser. We can improve ourselves by reading.
First, we should read some classics, such as Journey to the West, Little Women and so on. Second, it’s better for us to read at the proper time. We can read either after school or on weekends. Third, reading in a quiet and comfortable place is important for us. We can read in the library. After reading, we should write a book report and share it with our friends. There is no end to learning, let’s enjoy reading and keep reading!
【Passage 5】 【答案】例文
Changes to my classmates
My classmates have changed a lot recently. In the past, it took them a long time to surf on the Internet through mobile phones every day. They seldom talked with their parents. Their grades were getting worse and worse. Now it is a good habit for them to read for half an hour every day. Moreover, they often ask their teachers for advice about some books. So far, they have already read five books. Therefore, reading not only broadens their views but also brings them happiness. They often keep in touch with their parents and friends. At the same time, reading makes them relaxed. I believe they will become better and better by reading more good books.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【Passage 6】【答案】例文
My parents often guide me to overcome difficulties by communicating well with me during my growth. The following is an unforgettable communication my father had with me.
My father is strict with me. He asks me to exercise every day. One morning, I still felt sleepy when I woke up, so I didn’t want to get up and run. I said to my father, “Let me sleep for some more time!” But my father came over and encouraged me to get up and run slowly with him for 30 minutes. After coming home, I felt much more energetic. My father said, “Whenever we feel lazy, we should overcome it quickly. We shouldn’t make any excuses for being lazy.”
My father is strict, right? But because of him, I grew stronger, braver, and more hard-working. What he said has always encouraged me to work hard.
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基础1
材料作文,主题为难忘的旅行征稿。要求介绍旅行基本情况、个人感受与收获,全文以一般过去时为主,词数 80-120。
基础2
应用文(电子邮件),以西安度假为背景回复友人邮件,介绍天气、家人活动、游玩经历、心仪地点及出行方式,混合使用一般现在时、现在进行时、一般过去时,词数不少于 70。
基础3
材料作文,以夏日农场植树之旅为主题分享经历,时态以一般过去时为主,需交代行程、活动与感悟,词数 70 词左右。
基础4
话题作文,题目为 My Weekend,描述上周末的活动,时态以一般过去时为主,要求内容积极向上,词数不少于 80。
基础5
日记类作文,记录武汉至南昌的周末旅行,按时间顺序描写景点、行程与感悟,时态以一般过去时为主,词数不少于 70。
基础6
材料作文,题目 A Special Day,讲述印象深刻的一天,描写事件、感受与收获,时态以一般过去时为主,词数 80-120。
基础7
书信应用文,以李华的身份向笔友介绍端午节习俗、个人节日活动与内心感受,时态以一般过去时为主,词数 70 词左右。
基础8
材料作文,题目 How to Keep Healthy,围绕健康话题,从运动、饮食、作息等方面提建议,使用一般现在时,词数不少于 70。
进阶1
书信作文,以李明的身份给笔友写信,描述当日天气以及自己和家人正在进行的活动,使用一般现在时、现在进行时,词数 60 词左右。
进阶2
材料作文,题目 My Favourite Teacher,介绍最喜欢的老师、师生间的暖心故事以及自身感想,混合使用一般现在时、一般过去时,词数 60-100。
进阶3
英语演讲稿,题目 How to Keep Safe in Our Life,从交通、校园、食品、其他安全维度阐述安全须知,全文使用一般现在时,词数 80-120。
进阶4
英语演讲稿,谈论对旅行的看法,分享旅行经历、感受与收获,结合使用一般现在时和一般过去时,词数 70 左右。
进阶5
材料作文,题目 Eat Well,结合体重管理背景,介绍日常三餐、优缺点饮食习惯以及改善方案,使用一般现在时,词数不少于 80。
【Passage 1】江西省赣州市赣县区2024-2025学年下学期七年级期末英语考试卷
古人云:“读万卷书,行万里路”。旅行不仅可以开阔视野,还能收获知识。那么,你曾经去过哪里旅行呢?哪次的旅行最让你难忘?是学校组织的研学旅行?是班级组织的徒步旅行?还是家庭组织的亲子旅行呢?你校英语报正在举行主题为“An unforgettable Trip”的英语征稿活动,请根据以下提示完成征文。
写作要点:
1. The general introduction of your trip (when, where, weather, activities...).
2. How did you feel about it?
3. What do you learn from it?
要求:
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。
3.词数80-120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
An unforgettable Trip
As a saying goes, “Read thousands of books and travel thousands of miles.”
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【答案】例文
An unforgettable Trip
As a saying goes, “Read thousands of books and travel thousands of miles.” I had an unforgettable trip to Beijing last year. I went there by train with my parents. During the trip, we visited many famous places, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and Tiananmen Square. I took a lot of photos and learned a lot about Chinese history. I also tried some delicious local food. I really enjoyed this trip because it not only broadened my horizons but also made me feel the charm of our country. I hope to have more chances to travel in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据问题提示进行写作,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍旅行的地点和交通方式;
第二步,介绍旅行中的具体活动;
第三步,表述此次旅行的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如 ②learn a lot about学到许多关于…
③not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ④have chances to有机会……
[高分句型]I really enjoyed this trip because it not only broadened my horizons but also made me feel the charm of our country. (because引导原因状语从句)
【Passage 2】 江西省吉安市井冈山市2024-2025学年七年级下学期期末考试英语试题
假如你是李华,你正在西安度假,你的朋友Bill给你发了一封邮件,询问你的假期情况。请根据下面提示,给他回一封邮件。
1、西安的天气。(晴热,有时下雨……);
2、你和你父母正在做什么? (写信,看电视,吃零食……);
3、昨天去了哪里?玩得怎么样? (秦岭野生动物园,很开心……);
4、西安还有什么好地方是你喜欢的?原因是什么? (曲江书城,不远和凉快……);
5、你通常怎样到达你喜欢的地方? (骑自行车, 10分钟……)。
参考词汇:秦岭野生动物园:Qinling Wildlife Park,曲江书城:Qujiang Bookstore,不远的:not far,地方:place,凉快的:cool
要求: 1、参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2、语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3、文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(本人姓名、校名等);
4、词数不少于70(开头及结尾已给出,但不记录总词数)。
Dear Bill,
Thank you for your last email. Now I’m in Xi’an with my parents.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Bill,
Thank you for your last email. Now I’m in Xi’an with my parents. And we are having a really great time here.
The weather in Xi’an is sunny and hot, but sometimes it suddenly rains. It’s raining now, so I’m sitting here and writing to you. My mother is eating snacks and my father is watching TV. Yesterday we went to Qinling Wildlife Park together and we had fun there. Another good place I like in Xi’an is Qujiang Bookstore. It’s not very far, so I usually ride a bike there. It usually takes me 10 minutes. It’s cool in the bookstore and there are many interesting books there.
Next time I hope that you can come to Xi’an with me. I’m sure you will have a good time here.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
时态:时态为一般现在时、现在进行时和一般过去时;
提示:根据提示内容介绍你的假期情况,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:引出话题;
第二步:具体描述天气情况、家庭活动、昨日行程;
第三步:介绍还喜欢西安的什么地方并说明理由及交通方式。
[亮点词汇]
①write to sb.给某人写信 ②have fun玩得开心
[高分句型]
①Another good place I like in Xi’an is Qujiang Bookstore.(定语从句)
②Next time I hope that you can come to Xi’an with me.(宾语从句)
【Passage 3】江西省宜春市高安市2024-2025学年七年级下学期期末考试英语试卷
一年一度的暑假即将来临,你是否想起了你以前的夏日之旅?请你根据思维导图以A Special Summer Trip为题写一篇英语短文,与大家分享。字数:70词左右。
A Special Summer Trip
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【答案】例文
On 13 July, I took a trip to a farm with my family. It’s a sunny day. We went there by car. We had fun that day. Now let me share my amazing trip with you.
On the farm, we experienced how to plant trees. First, we learned to prepare the soil. Next, we worked together to plant a young apple tree. Finally, we watered it and even named it “Apple Star”.
One thing I learned that day: Planting was hard work, but working together made it fun. All my family look forward to enjoying the fruit from our “Apple Star”. As the saying goes, “The fruit of your own hard work is the sweetest.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括思维导图所列要点,适当补充,使文章内容充实;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,引出作者旅行的经历(天气、地点与时间、同行人),并表达想要与读者分享的意愿
第二步,详细叙述具体活动;
第三步,总结全文,表达感受及收获。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物 ②plant trees植树 ③look forward to doing sth.盼望做某事
[高分句型]
①Planting was hard work, but working together made it fun. (but并列句;动名词作主语)
【Passage 4】江西省九江市都昌县2024-2025学年七年级下学期6月期末英语试题
以“My Weekend”为题,写一篇短文,描述你上周末的活动。
要求: 1. 内容积极向上,不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】例文:
My Weekend
Last weekend was wonderful! On Saturday morning, I went to the park with my friends. We rode bikes, played badminton, and enjoyed the fresh air. In the afternoon, I helped my mother cook dinner. It was fun to learn how to make dumplings!
On Sunday, I visited the library and borrowed two interesting books. Reading is my favorite way to relax. Later, I finished my homework and even had time to draw a picture.
I felt happy because my weekend was both fun and meaningful. I hope every weekend can be as great as this one!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,引出话题。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“上周末的活动”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。
第三步,书写结语,表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①Last weekend上周末 ②rode bikes骑自行车
③played badminton打羽毛球 ④ help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It was fun to learn how to make dumplings! (It作形式主语的固定句型)
②I felt happy because my weekend was both fun and meaningful. (because引导的原因状语从句)
③I hope every weekend can be as great as this one! (宾语从句)
【Passage 5】江西省南昌市南昌二中教育集团初中部2024-2025学年七年级下学期6月期末英语试题
适度出游有助于身心放松,与家人一同旅行还可拉近亲人间的关系。假如你是来自武汉的Helen,于上周与家人来到南昌,度过了一个难忘的周末。请根据下列提示内容及要求写一篇日记,介绍你在南昌时的周末活动以及你的感受。
提示内容:
1. 周六上午,阳光明媚,去万寿宫 (Wanshou Palace) 吃了很多美食,拍了很多照片,看到了许多古老建筑…
2. 周六下午(或晚上),参观了滕王阁 (Tengwang Pavilion), 站其上还可俯瞰赣江 (the Gan River)……
3. 周日上午,去了八一广场 (Bayi Square)……
4. 周日下午……
写作要求:
(1)要点齐全,意思连贯,语句通顺,书写工整,内容可适当发挥;
(2)词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
参考表达:overlook 俯瞰 Qiushui Square秋水广场
Monday, 17 June
Last weekend, I had an amazing trip to Nanchang with my parents.
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【答案】例文
Monday, 17 June
Last weekend, I had an amazing trip to Nanchang with my parents.
On Saturday morning, the sun was shining brightly. We went to Wanshou Palace, where we enjoyed lots of delicious food and took many photos. We also saw numerous ancient buildings there. In the afternoon, we visited Tengwang Pavilion. Standing on it, we could overlook the Gan River. It was really wonderful. On Sunday morning, we went to Bayi Square. We learned about some important history. In the afternoon, we headed to Qiushui Square. The beautiful scenery and the relaxing atmosphere made us feel very happy.
This trip not only let me have a great time but also brought my family closer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇日记;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:根据提示梳理内容,搭建框架;
第二步:按时间顺序填充细节,丰富内容;
第三步:收尾总结,升华主题,评价此次旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①headed to前往 ②not only...but also...不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①We went to Wanshou Palace, where we enjoyed lots of delicious food and took many photos. (where引导的定语从句)
【Passage 6】江西省赣州市经开区校联考2024-2025学年七年级下学期6月期末英语试题
同学们,在你的生活中肯定也有某一时刻或某一天,因一件事或一个人,幸福感悄然而生。这一天对你而言一定是特别的一天。请你以“A Special Day”为题,介绍你特别的一天。在那一天,你做了什么?学到了什么?
题目:A Special Day
提示:
(1) What was your special day?
(2) What happened on that day? (weather, place, activities…)
(3) How did you feel? What did you learn?
要求:
1.文中不得出现真实的人名,校名:
2.词数在80-120之间,必须包含所有要点。
A Special Day
There is a special day in my life. I will never forget it. Let me tell you something about it.
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【答案】例文
A Special Day
There is a special day in my life. I will never forget it. Let me tell you something about it.
It was my twelfth birthday. The weather was sunny and warm. My parents took me to a park where we had a picnic. We played games, flew kites, and shared delicious food. Later, my friends surprised me with handmade gifts and a birthday cake.
I felt happy and loved. That day taught me that true happiness comes from spending time with people who care about you. I learned to appreciate the small moments of joy in life, and I will always treasure this memory.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍特别的一天;
第三步,表达感受和介绍学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①had a picnic 去野餐 ②shared delicious food 分享美味的食物
③comes from 来自 ④care about 关心
[高分句型]
①That day taught me that true happiness comes from spending time with people who care about you.(宾语从句)
②I learned to appreciate the small moments of joy in life, and I will always treasure this memory.(并列句)
【Passage 7】江西省新余市2024-2025学年下学期七年级期末测试英语试卷
中国的传统节日——端午节刚刚过去,假如你是李华,请给大洋彼岸的笔友Tom写一封信,介绍中国人在端午节的习俗和你在端午节的活动,并描述你在端午节这一天的感受。
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习俗:1.包粽子
2.赛龙舟
3. ……
你的活动: 1.去乡下看望爷爷奶奶。
2.品尝了不同种类的粽子。
3.晚上在田野间散步。
4. ……
你的感受:原来生活也可以如此放松、惬意。
提示词: custom (习俗), make zongzi, visit, boat race, field (田野), go for a walk
要求: 1 .70词左右,书写工作、规范;
2.参考提示词,可适当发挥;
3.不能出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。
Dear Tom:
About 3 weeks ago, it was the Dragon Boat Festival.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom:
About 3 weeks ago, it was the Dragon Boat Festival. It’s an important traditional Chinese festival. On this day, people have customs like making zongzi and holding boat races to remember Qu Yuan.
I went to the countryside to visit my grandparents. We tasted different kinds of zongzi, which were really delicious. In the evening, I went for a walk in the fields. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made me feel that life could be so relaxing and enjoyable.
Do you have interesting festivals? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:以一般过去时为主,描述过去端午节的情况;
③提示:向笔友Tom介绍中国端午节的习俗、自己在节日的活动及感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头点明端午节时间,引出话题。
第二步,中间先介绍端午节人们的习俗,再阐述自己在节日里去乡下看望祖父母、品尝粽子、田野散步等活动。
第三步,结尾询问对方是否有有趣节日,期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional传统的 ②customs习俗
③different kinds of不同种类的 ④relaxing and enjoyable轻松惬意的
[高分句型]
The fresh air and beautiful scenery made me feel that life could be so relaxing and enjoyable.(that引导宾语从句)
【Passage 8】【来源】江西省上饶市2024-2025学年七年级下学期6月期末考试英语试题
众所周知,健康的身体是我们有效学习的保证。为了提高同学们的健康意识,学校英语社团将举行英语征文比赛。请根据下面的思维导图,以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇不少于70词的英语短文。
要求: 1.短文须至少包含思维导图中四条信息,可适当表达自己的观点;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Keep Healthy
As we all know, it’s important for us to keep healthy.
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【答案】范文:
How to Keep Healthy
As we all know, it’s important for us to keep healthy. As middle school students, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here is some advice.
First, we should do exercise at least one hour a day, such as running and walking. Second, have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Try not to eat junk food. Third, we shouldn’t spend too much time going online. It is bad for our eyes and studies. Fourth, go to bed early and don’t stay up too late, because enough sleep is good for our health. Finally, be happy as possible as we can. Learn to smile at ourselves at any time.
If we do so, I believe we can keep healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意根据思维导图给出的要点阐述如何保持健康,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明保持健康很重要,引出下文;
第二步,从锻炼、饮食、生活习惯及情绪等方面具体阐述如何保持健康;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy 保持健康 ②lifestyle 生活方式 ③junk food 垃圾食品
④spend...doing sth花费…做某事 ⑤stay up too late 熬夜 ⑥as possible as we can 尽可能地
[高分句型]
①As we all know, it’s important for us to keep healthy. (动词不定式作主语)
②If we do so, I believe we can keep healthy. (if引导条件状语从句)
【Passage 1】 江西省南昌市2024-2025学年七年级下学期期末考试英语试题
假设你是李明,请仔细阅读以下两个任务,并根据任务要求写一封信给Betty,60词左右。
Task 1: What’s the weather like today? How do you like today’s weather?
Task 2: What are you doing now? What about your family? What are they doing at this moment?
Dear Betty,
How’s it going? It’s ________________ in Nanchang.
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Can you tell me about your family activities? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文:
Dear Betty,
How’s it going? It’s hot and sunny in Nanchang.
Right now, I’m sitting at my desk writing this email to you. It’s quite relaxing. My mom is busy in the kitchen preparing a delicious lunch. I can smell something wonderful! Meanwhile, my dad is relaxing on the sofa. He’s reading his favorite newspaper and listening to some soft music. My little sister isn’t home right now. She’s playing with her friends at the park nearby.
Can you tell me about your family activities? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生需根据任务要求描述天气或家庭成员的活动,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接问候并描述南昌的天气;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点描述自己当前的活动以及家庭成员的活动;
第三步,书写结语。询问对方的家庭活动并期待回复 (已给出)。
[亮点词汇]
①busy in the kitchen 在厨房忙碌 ②preparing a delicious lunch 准备美味的午餐
③relaxing on the sofa 在沙发上放松
[高分句型]
① Right now, I’m sitting at my desk writing this email to you. (现在进行时描述当前活动)
② Meanwhile, my dad is relaxing on the sofa. (meanwhile表示同时发生的动作)
【Passage 2】江西省赣州市2024-2025学年七年级下学期期末考试英语试卷
在我们的校园生活中,老师扮演着至关重要的角色。他们不仅传授知识,还给予我们关心和鼓励。七年级的学习生活即将结束,这一年里,想必有那么一位老师会让你难以忘怀。假设你是李华,请以My Favorite Teacher为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一位老师,并分享一个你们之间的温暖小故事。
写作要点
Introduction
◆What does he/she look like?
◆What is his/her personality (性格)?
A warm story between you
◆When did it happen?
◆What did he/she do for you?
◆How did you feel?
Your feelings
◆Why do you love him/her?
◆What do you want to say to him/her?
要求:
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数60~100,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Teacher
Hi, I’m Li Hua. In my first year of junior high school, many teachers helped me. But my favorite teacher is
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【答案】例文
My Favourite Teacher
Hi, I’m Li Hua. In my first year of junior high school, many teachers helped me. But my favorite teacher is Ms. Wang, my English teacher.
Ms. Wang isn’t very tall. She has short hair and wears glasses. She always has a kind smile. She is very patient and friendly to us.
One warm story happened last term. After I did badly in an English test, I felt very sad. Ms. Wang saw me and talked with me after class. She helped me find my problems and encouraged me not to give up. She said, “I believe you can do better next time.” Her words made me feel much better and hopeful.
I love Ms. Wang because she really cares about us and always helps us. She makes English interesting. I want to say, “Thank you, Ms. Wang!”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据提示要点进行写作,注意要点齐全,表述清晰并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接点题,介绍最喜欢的是哪位老师;
第二步,介绍这位老师的外貌及性格;
第三步,介绍与老师之间的温暖的故事;
第四步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①talk with sb和某人交谈 ②after class课后 ③care about关心
[高分句型]
①After I did badly in an English test, I felt very sad. (after引导的时间状语从句)
②I love Ms. Wang because she really cares about us and always helps us. (because引导原因状语从句)
【Passage 3】江西省吉安市吉州区2024-2025学年七年级下学期期末检测英语试题
安全对于我们每个人都很重要。为了进一步增强学生的安全意识,提高学生的自我保护能力,你校正在开展以“How to Keep Safe in Our Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,现向同学们征稿。请你根据以下提示内容,写一份英文演讲稿。
写作要点:1. 交通安全:遵守交通规则,骑车不能带人……
2. 校园安全:不在走廊奔跑,不和同学打架……
3. 食品安全:吃健康的食物,少吃垃圾食品……
4. 其他……(至少补充一点,如假期人身安全、网络安全等)
写作要求:1. 演讲稿内容应涵盖以上所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 演讲稿中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
3. 词数80-120,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and students,
Today, I’m glad to give a speech about how to keep safe in our life.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】One possible version:
Dear teachers and students,
Today, I’m glad to give a speech about how to keep safe in our life. As far as we know, safety is the most important thing in our life. First, when we are at school, we can’t run in the hallways and mustn’t fight with others. Second, on our way home, we should follow the traffic rules. Don’t cross the street when the traffic light is red. When we ride a bike, we mustn’t carry classmates on the back. Next, we should eat healthy food and keep away from junk food. Besides, don’t swim in the river. It’s very dangerous.
In a word, safety must come first. Please remember these safety tips.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出演讲主题;
第二步,根据要点提示具体阐述在生活中如何保证安全;
第三步,最后书写小结。
[亮点词汇]
①traffic rules交通规则 ②keep away from远离 ③junk food垃圾食品
[高分句型]
①First, when we are at school, we can’t run in the hallways and mustn’t fight with others. (时间状语从句)
②Don’t cross the street when the traffic light is red. (祈使句)
【Passage 4】江西省萍乡市2024-2025学年七年级下学期期末考试英语试题
你校将举行有关旅行的英语演讲比赛,因为假期旅行让学生既放松了心情,又开阔了视野,学到了知识。你对旅行怎么看?你有最难忘的旅行经历吗?请你根据写作要点,写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
写作要点:
1. What’s your idea about travel?
2. When and where did you take the travel?
3. How did you feel? What did you get from the travel?
要求:
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 词数70左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
提示词:open up one’s eyes to the outside world 开阔视野;
the beauty of nature 自然之美
I like travelling because it
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【答案】例文
I like travelling because it makes me feel relaxed. Travelling can make us open up our eyes to the outside world and learn a lot about the beauty of nature.
Last summer, I travelled to Beijing with my father. It was sunny and hot. First we visited the Great Wall. There were a lot of people there. It is really the longest wall in the world. The next day, we visited the Palace Museum and Tian’anmen Square. We took many photos there. We also visited some other places of interest in Beijing. We visited a Beijing hutong, too.
From the experience, I learned a lot about history. Our country is great. I get to know we should work hard to make our country more beautiful.
All in all, I love travelling!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接上文,用because引出对旅行的看法;
第二步,描述自己的旅行经历;
第三步,总结感悟与收获;
第四步,再次表达对旅行的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb. do sth.使某人做某事 ②take photos拍照
③places of interest名胜古迹 ④all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①I like travelling because it makes me feel relaxed.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②There were a lot of people there.(there be句型)
③I get to know we should work hard to make our country more beautiful.(宾语从句)
【Passage 5】2025年江西省中考英语真题
今年是“体重管理年”,为了促进“健康中国”建设,学校校刊英语专栏以“Eat Well”为题向学生征文。请你根据下列提示写一篇短文投稿,介绍你的日常饮食、饮食习惯及改进措施。
写作要点:
1.What do you often have for three meals?
2.What are your good and bad eating habits?
3.How can you improve your eating habits?
写作要求:
1.短文应包括所有写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3.短文不少于80词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Eat Well
Eating well is important for health.
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【答案】例文
Eat Well
Eating well is important for health. In my daily life, I usually have a bowl of porridge, an egg, and some vegetables for breakfast. For lunch, I prefer rice with fish or chicken, along with a bowl of soup. Dinner is similar to lunch, but I sometimes replace rice with noodles.
I have good habits like drinking plenty of water every day and eating lots of fruits, which helps me stay energetic. I also avoid fast food because I know it’s high in fat and salt. However, I have a bad habit of eating snacks late at night, especially chips and chocolate. Sometimes I eat too quickly, which is bad for digestion.
To improve my eating habits, I plan to cut down on snacks and set a fixed time for dinner. I will also try to add more whole grains and less processed food to my meals. Additionally, I’ll practice eating slowly to enjoy each bite and help my body digest better. I believe these changes will make my diet healthier and keep me in good shape.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的三餐饮食;
第二步,介绍好的和不好的饮食习惯;
第三步,介绍如何改善自己的饮食习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①along with和 ②be similar to与…相似 ③replace...with...用…替代…
④plenty of大量的 ⑤cut down削减
[高分句型]
①I have good habits like drinking plenty of water every day and eating lots of fruits, which helps me stay energetic.(which引导定语从句)
②I also avoid fast food because I know it’s high in fat and salt.(because引导原因状语从句)
③I believe these changes will make my diet healthier and keep me in good shape.(省略引导词that宾语从句)
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