内容正文:
..Inspired,Nate suggested they visit his Grandpa's farm,Hardly had
they set foot on the farm when a wave of excitement took hotd of
Nate,pointing at the tively sheep,gotden wheat fields and gentle
stream."Look!Everything is so vivid here,"Nate exclaimed,his voice
filled with detight.Having seen the charming farm scenery,sojoyfut
was Nate that he took out his sketchpad at once,drawing the
breathtaking sights carefully,his eyes.twinkling.with joy.tike bright
stars.in the sky..
On the day of the award ceremony,the library.was crowded.At..
the:sight of his painting hanging in the most eye-catching place,Nate
felt a great sense of pride welling up in his heart and surging through.
him,smiting widely at Briana beside him."You won!"Briana said,her..
voice fitted with congratutations.From then on,Nate learned to
discover beauty in ordinary things.Without Briana's inspiration,Nate.
wouldn't have found the hidden beauty of his town.It's the heart of
discovering beauty that made the world brighter.This experience has
kept echoing in his mind ever since
However,it turned out that the voices t was afraid of nevercame.
Hardty had twalked a:short:distance when a wave of warmth.and.
retief took hold of me,my steps steadying and my shoulders relaxing.
And Igradually turned down the loud music in my earphones.Instead
of stares or whispers,Ireceived kind smites and encouraging nods
from strangers."You've got this!"a passer-by called out,his voice
filted with kindness and support.Aware of how farI'd come,.Ifett a
great sense of pride wetting up in my.heart,keeping my head hetd
high and my pace firm.
..Whent finatty crossed the finish tine,I heard someone.calting.my.
name.Having seen my family and friends waving excitedty,so joyfut.
was.lthat tears rotled down.my.cheeks,my hands trembling with
delight.They rushed to me and placed a shiny medat around my neck,
cheering and hugging me tightly.From then on,Ino tonger feared
judgment or doubted myself Without my courage and persistence,1..
wouldn't have had the opportunity to finish the marathon.It's.my
determination that brightened my world,This experience has kept
echoing.in.my mind ever since,reminding me that t can overcome any
difficulty as tong as.I keep going.
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P 1
①前提动作+情绪+动作(链)
②对话:“…”, sb said, his/her voice filled with 情感n.
③前提动作+情绪+动作(链)
P 2
④前提动作+情绪+动作(链)
⑤结尾:近:From then on, ... // 远:Several years later, ... (择一)
⑥升华:Without sb’s assistance/kindness, S wouldn’t have had the opportunity to do sth. It’s... that made the world better/brighter. This experience has kept echoing in sb’s mind ever since. Even now, S am/is/are constantly reminded of the experience, where S got the lesson that...
那么接下来,只需3个前提动作+情绪+动作(链)即可,
前提动作+情绪+动作(链):“看到/想到/听到/意识到……,某人感到开心/难过/……,某人做了……还做了……”
1. At the sight/thought/sound of (sb doing)..., sb felt a great sense of 情绪n. welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb, doing...
注:Aware of “意识到”
2. Having seen/thought of/heard/realized (sb doing)..., so 情绪adj. was/were sb that S V-ed O, doing...
3. Hardly had sb seen/thought of/heard/realized (sb doing)... when a wave of 情绪n. took hold of sb, doing...
注:1和2划线部分可以互换
动作(链)也就是doing...部分实在不会写,给两个参考:
① sb’s eyes twinkling with joy like bright stars in the sky
② sb’s body trembling with sorrow as if sb was about to cry
动词描写考场速记口诀:
恐惧僵住手颤抖,愤怒攥拳咬碎牙。悲伤低头泪模糊,喜悦跳跃笑开花。
决心挺胸深呼吸,惊讶瞪大眼发直。手要伸进口袋掏,脚要踱步或飞奔。
【2026届宁波二模】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
At the library, Nate Jasper noticed a sign for the“First Annual Highland Drawing Contest.” It asked for artwork showing the unique beauty of their town. Noticing his interest, the librarian, Ms. Kim, handed him a flyer.“The winning drawings will be displayed right here in the library,” she added.
Sitting on the library steps outside, Nate was lost in thought. He had always loved art. He could never have too many sketchpads(素描本) and crayons.“I have to enter this contest!” he said to himself.
But something troubled him. Years of living in the small town had convinced him that it was a dull place.“There's nothing special about it—— only ordinary farms, animals, and trees!” he frowned.“What will I draw?”
Just then, Briana Williams, a new girl in his class who had just moved from Houston, a large modern city in Texas, walked out. Spotting Nate, she sat down beside him and noticed the flyer.“A drawing contest? That sounds fun!”
“Not really,” Nate sighed.“Trust me, this town is a big bore.”
Briana looked surprised.“Well, everything here may seem boring to you, but to me, it's all new! I'd love to see more of it. Show me around sometime. And bring your sketchpad—— you might find something worth drawing.”
The next Saturday, they wandered down a quiet lane together. Briana stopped beneath a large maple and gazed up in awe. Nate paused beside her. At first, it felt strange to admire a tree he’ d passed a hundred times. But as he followed her gaze, the sun was shining through the branches, turning the red and yellow leaves into a sea of burning gold.
“There's nowhere this quiet and pretty in Houston,” Briana said softly.
Nate felt something clicked in his mind. Highland wasn't a big bore—— he was just too used to it. He began to wonder what other hidden beauty was waiting to be discovered.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Inspired, Nate suggested they visit his Grandpa’s farm.
Paragraph 2: On the day of the award ceremony, the library was crowded.
【范文】
Inspired, Nate suggested they visit his Grandpa’s farm. Hardly had they set foot on the farm when a wave of excitement took hold of Nate, pointing at the lively sheep, golden wheat fields and gentle stream. “Look! Everything is so vivid here,” Nate exclaimed, his voice filled with delight. Having seen the charming farm scenery, so joyful was Nate that he took out his sketchpad at once, drawing the breathtaking sights carefully, his eyes twinkling with joy like bright stars in the sky.
On the day of the award ceremony, the library was crowded. At the sight of his painting hanging in the most eye-catching place, Nate felt a great sense of pride welling up in his heart and surging through him, smiling widely at Briana beside him. “You won!” Briana said, her voice filled with congratulations. From then on, Nate learned to discover beauty in ordinary things. Without Briana’s inspiration, Nate wouldn’t have found the hidden beauty of his town. It’s the heart of discovering beauty that made the world brighter. This experience has kept echoing in his mind ever since.
【安徽江南十校2026届5月质检】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
If someone had told me in June that I would take part in a marathon event, I would have laughed. Yet there I was on an October morning with a medal around my neck.
Okay, it was only the 4.2K race, and I walked more than I ran. But I still did it.
Did I mention that I weigh around 300 pounds? I also have asthma, but medication helps. What’s more, I live with four anxiety disorders. Social anxiety makes me deadly afraid of people’s judgment. But in August, I decided that registering for the 4.2K event of our local marathon would be a great motivator to get in shape. So I signed up and started walking every day. I told only a few people — my family and some trusted friends.
Training went well until mid-September, when work got so exhausting that I could barely do anything. Still, I kept going. The real struggle came when I went to pick up my race number. I kept wondering what others would think. I didn’t have the usual runner’s profile. When I saw the T-shirt table, I turned away quickly. There were no shirts that would fit me. That made me doubt myself again. What was I doing here? The 4.2K was the “popular event,” with families and young children. But I was willing to bet that not many obese people had registered.
The night before the race, I had nightmares. When I woke up, I considered not going. Then I realized I had forgotten to wash my best running pants. Walmart opened at 8 a. m., and the race wasn’t until 10 a. m. I drove there, bought a pair, and headed to the starting line.
Once there, I quickly found that people didn’t really care about me; they were focused on their own experience. That relaxed me a little, but not completely. Soon I found myself at the back of the pack. Those real athletes must be wondering what I was doing there. But it was too late to turn back. I started walking, my earphones playing loud music to drown out possible hurtful comments.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150词左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:However, it turned out that the voices I was afraid of never came.
Paragraph 2: When I finally crossed the finish line, I heard someone calling my name.
【范文】
However, it turned out that the voices I was afraid of never came. Hardly had I walked a short distance when a wave of warmth and relief took hold of me, my steps steadying and my shoulders relaxing. And I gradually turned down the loud music in my earphones. Instead of stares or whispers, I received kind smiles and encouraging nods from strangers. “You’ve got this!” a passer-by called out, his voice filled with kindness and support. Aware of how far I’d come, I felt a great sense of pride welling up in my heart, keeping my head held high and my pace firm.
When I finally crossed the finish line, I heard someone calling my name. Having seen my family and friends waving excitedly, so joyful was I that tears rolled down my cheeks, my hands trembling with delight. They rushed to me and placed a shiny medal around my neck, cheering and hugging me tightly. From then on, I no longer feared judgment or doubted myself. Without my courage and persistence, I wouldn’t have had the opportunity to finish the marathon. It’s my determination that brightened my world. This experience has kept echoing in my mind ever since, reminding me that I can overcome any difficulty as long as I keep going.
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