动作链与画面描写 专练-2026届高三英语三轮复习专项

**基本信息** 聚焦读后续写动作链与画面描写，通过5类核心句型的“句型解析-例句示范-仿写实践”体系，系统提升语言表达连贯性与画面感，强化语言能力与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |C01-C05|每模块2例句+5仿写|动作链增强节奏感、非谓语/with结构/独立主格提升画面层次|从基础并列动作到复杂独立主格，形成“简单-复杂”句型递进链，覆盖动作连贯与场景烘托核心需求|

动作链与画面描写 读后续写高分句型训练 · 动作链与画面描写 C01–C05 · 让动作与场景更生动 动作链与画面描写 让动作更连贯、画面更清晰，适合写人物动作、环境伴随和细节补充。 C01 Sb did A, did B and did C 使用提示：动作链表达能增强画面感和节奏感，适合描写连续动作。 【例句1】她拿起画笔，调好颜色，认真地画下第一笔。 英文：She picked up the brush, mixed the colors, and carefully made the first stroke. 【例句2】他停下脚步，转过身，向我露出了鼓励的微笑。 英文：He stopped, turned around, and gave me an encouraging smile. 【仿写1】他推开人群，冲到路边，扶起了摔倒的老人。 难点词提醒：old man 老人；crowd 人群；roadside 路边；pushed ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写2】我合上书本，关掉台灯，轻轻走出了房间。 难点词提醒：lamp 灯；closed；turned；walked ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写3】小女孩抬起头，眨了眨眼，露出了甜甜的笑容。 难点词提醒：smile 微笑；little；raised；blinked ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写4】他深吸一口气，握紧话筒，开始了演讲。 难点词提醒：microphone 话筒；breath；tightly；speech ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写5】我们整理行李，检查地图，踏上了新的旅程。 难点词提醒：packed 整理/打包；luggage；checked；journey ________________________________________________________________________________ C02 Doing sth, sb did sth 使用提示：现在分词作状语，表示伴随或原因，突出动作连贯性和画面感。 【例句1】攥着那张车票，我飞快地跑向站台。 英文：Clutching the ticket, I rushed quickly toward the platform. 【例句2】望着天边的晚霞，我们久久不愿离开。 英文：Watching the sunset on the horizon, we were unwilling to leave for a long time. 【仿写1】望着远处的灯光，她慢慢放松了紧绷的肩膀。 难点词提醒：light 光；distance 远处；shoulders 肩膀；Looking ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写2】忍住笑意，他假装认真地听妹妹解释。 难点词提醒：laughter 笑声；pretended 假装；Holding；listen ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写3】背着沉重的书包，男孩一步步走上山路。 难点词提醒：schoolbag 书包；path 小路；heavy 沉重的；Carrying ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写4】擦干眼泪，她重新抬起头看向老师。 难点词提醒：tears 泪水；Wiping；raised；looked ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写5】听到掌声，我激动地向观众鞠了一躬。 难点词提醒：excited 兴奋的；audience 观众；applause 掌声；Hearing ________________________________________________________________________________ C03 Done by sth, sb did sth 使用提示：过去分词作状语，强调被动、原因或状态，可使表达更简洁高级。 【例句1】被朋友的信任鼓舞，我决定再试一次。 英文：Encouraged by my friend’s trust, I decided to try again. 【例句2】被眼前的美景吸引，孩子们停下脚步欢呼起来。 英文：Attracted by the beautiful view before them, the children stopped and cheered. 【仿写1】被突如其来的消息震住，她一时站在原地。 难点词提醒：shocked 震惊的；sudden；moment ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写2】被温暖的灯光包围，我感到前所未有的安心。 难点词提醒：light 光；surrounded 被包围；safe 安全的 ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写3】被那首歌深深打动，他眼眶湿润了。 难点词提醒：touched 感动的；Deeply ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写4】被失败的阴影困住，他曾经不敢再次尝试。 难点词提醒：failure 失败；trapped 被困住；shadow 阴影 ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写5】被孩子们的笑声感染，老人也露出了笑容。 难点词提醒：laughter 笑声；smile 微笑；old man 老人；Infected ________________________________________________________________________________ C04 With + 名词 + doing/done/to do 使用提示：with复合结构表示伴随、原因或背景，可用于环境描写、动作补充和情绪烘托。 【例句1】他站在门口，双手插在口袋里，眼神里满是犹豫。 英文：He stood at the doorway, with his hands buried in his pockets, hesitation filling his eyes. 【例句2】她站在领奖台上，奖牌挂在胸前，眼里闪着泪光。 英文：She stood on the podium, with the medal hanging around her neck, tears shining in her eyes. 【仿写1】她走过操场，风吹动着她的头发，笑容格外明亮。 难点词提醒：smile 微笑；wind 风；hair 头发；walked ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写2】夜深了，窗户紧闭，只有台灯还亮着。 难点词提醒：lamp 灯；late 迟到；wind 风；windows 窗户 ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写3】比赛开始前，所有选手都屏住呼吸，等待哨声响起。 难点词提醒：whistle 哨声；players；holding；breath ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写4】作业完成后，他靠在椅背上，脸上带着满足的神情。 难点词提醒：hair 头发；homework 作业；satisfied 满足的；finished ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写5】还有很多问题要解决，我们没有时间抱怨。 难点词提醒：solve 解决；problems；complain ________________________________________________________________________________ C05 独立主格结构 使用提示：独立主格结构用于补充背景、原因或伴随状态，逻辑主语与主句不同，使表达更紧凑。 【例句1】太阳升起，薄雾散去，我们继续踏上旅程。 英文：The sun rising and the mist fading, we continued our journey. 【例句2】夕阳西下，鸟儿归巢，我们沿着小路慢慢往回走。 英文：The sun setting and birds returning to their nests, we walked slowly back along the path. 【仿写1】任务完成，大家脸上都带着疲惫却满足的笑容。 难点词提醒：tired 疲惫的；smile 微笑；satisfied 满足的；task 任务 ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写2】双手颤抖，心跳加速，她慢慢打开了盒子。 难点词提醒：hands 手；heart 心；trembling；racing ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写3】风呼啸着，树叶在空中飞舞，我们艰难地向前走。 难点词提醒：difficult 困难的；wind 风；leaves 树叶；howling ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写4】泪水滑落，她仍然努力保持微笑。 难点词提醒：tears 泪水；falling；cheeks；smiling ________________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写5】所有灯光熄灭，整个大厅安静了下来。 难点词提醒：light 光；lights；turned；silent ________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 动作链与画面描写 C01 Sb did A, did B and did C 【例句1】她拿起画笔，调好颜色，认真地画下第一笔。 She picked up the brush, mixed the colors, and carefully made the first stroke. 【例句2】他停下脚步，转过身，向我露出了鼓励的微笑。 He stopped, turned around, and gave me an encouraging smile. 【仿写1】他推开人群，冲到路边，扶起了摔倒的老人。 He pushed through the crowd, rushed to the roadside, and helped the fallen old man up. 【仿写2】我合上书本，关掉台灯，轻轻走出了房间。 I closed the book, turned off the lamp, and walked out of the room quietly. 【仿写3】小女孩抬起头，眨了眨眼，露出了甜甜的笑容。 The little girl raised her head, blinked her eyes, and gave a sweet smile. 【仿写4】他深吸一口气，握紧话筒，开始了演讲。 He took a deep breath, held the microphone tightly, and began his speech. 【仿写5】我们整理行李，检查地图，踏上了新的旅程。 We packed our luggage, checked the map, and set out on a new journey. C02 Doing sth, sb did sth 【例句1】攥着那张车票，我飞快地跑向站台。 Clutching the ticket, I rushed quickly toward the platform. 【例句2】望着天边的晚霞，我们久久不愿离开。 Watching the sunset on the horizon, we were unwilling to leave for a long time. 【仿写1】望着远处的灯光，她慢慢放松了紧绷的肩膀。 Looking at the lights in the distance, she slowly relaxed her tense shoulders. 【仿写2】忍住笑意，他假装认真地听妹妹解释。 Holding back his laughter, he pretended to listen to his sister seriously. 【仿写3】背着沉重的书包，男孩一步步走上山路。 Carrying a heavy schoolbag, the boy walked up the mountain path step by step. 【仿写4】擦干眼泪，她重新抬起头看向老师。 Wiping away her tears, she raised her head again and looked at the teacher. 【仿写5】听到掌声，我激动地向观众鞠了一躬。 Hearing the applause, I bowed to the audience excitedly. C03 Done by sth, sb did sth 【例句1】被朋友的信任鼓舞，我决定再试一次。 Encouraged by my friend’s trust, I decided to try again. 【例句2】被眼前的美景吸引，孩子们停下脚步欢呼起来。 Attracted by the beautiful view before them, the children stopped and cheered. 【仿写1】被突如其来的消息震住，她一时站在原地。 Shocked by the sudden news, she stood still for a moment. 【仿写2】被温暖的灯光包围，我感到前所未有的安心。 Surrounded by the warm light, I felt safer than ever before. 【仿写3】被那首歌深深打动，他眼眶湿润了。 Deeply touched by the song, his eyes grew wet. 【仿写4】被失败的阴影困住，他曾经不敢再次尝试。 Trapped by the shadow of failure, he once dared not try again. 【仿写5】被孩子们的笑声感染，老人也露出了笑容。 Infected by the children’s laughter, the old man also smiled. C04 With + 名词 + doing/done/to do 【例句1】他站在门口，双手插在口袋里，眼神里满是犹豫。 He stood at the doorway, with his hands buried in his pockets, hesitation filling his eyes. 【例句2】她站在领奖台上，奖牌挂在胸前，眼里闪着泪光。 She stood on the podium, with the medal hanging around her neck, tears shining in her eyes. 【仿写1】她走过操场，风吹动着她的头发，笑容格外明亮。 She walked across the playground, with the wind blowing her hair, her smile especially bright. 【仿写2】夜深了，窗户紧闭，只有台灯还亮着。 Late at night, with the windows closed, only the desk lamp was still on. 【仿写3】比赛开始前，所有选手都屏住呼吸，等待哨声响起。 Before the race, with all the players holding their breath, everyone waited for the whistle. 【仿写4】作业完成后，他靠在椅背上，脸上带着满足的神情。 With his homework finished, he leaned back in the chair, a satisfied look on his face. 【仿写5】还有很多问题要解决，我们没有时间抱怨。 With many problems to solve, we had no time to complain. C05 独立主格结构 【例句1】太阳升起，薄雾散去，我们继续踏上旅程。 The sun rising and the mist fading, we continued our journey. 【例句2】夕阳西下，鸟儿归巢，我们沿着小路慢慢往回走。 The sun setting and birds returning to their nests, we walked slowly back along the path. 【仿写1】任务完成，大家脸上都带着疲惫却满足的笑容。 The task completed, everyone wore a tired but satisfied smile. 【仿写2】双手颤抖，心跳加速，她慢慢打开了盒子。 Her hands trembling and her heart racing, she slowly opened the box. 【仿写3】风呼啸着，树叶在空中飞舞，我们艰难地向前走。 The wind howling and leaves flying in the air, we moved forward with difficulty. 【仿写4】泪水滑落，她仍然努力保持微笑。 Tears falling down her cheeks, she still tried to keep smiling. 【仿写5】所有灯光熄灭，整个大厅安静了下来。 All the lights turned off, the whole hall fell silent. — — 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $