摘要:
该初中英语单元复习讲义围绕Unit 10话题作文,通过框架搭建与句型分类梳理构建知识体系,将书信和倡议书写作拆解为“开头引入-主体描述-结尾总结”三部分,用示例表格呈现各段落核心句型,如书信用“I’m writing to share...”引出主题,倡议书用“There be...”指出问题,清晰呈现“there be”和“it is + adj + for sb + to do sth”等重难点的内在联系。
讲义亮点在于“情境化写作+分层指导”的创新设计,如书信写作通过仿写范文中“There are both good and bad things...”的“there be”句型引出优缺点,用“It is important for us to...”升华主题,培养语言表达与逻辑思维能力。针对不同学生,基础层可借助句型替换掌握结构,提高层能运用First/However等衔接词拓展内容,配套范文与写作要点支持自主复习,助力教师实施精准分层教学。
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仁爱科普版Unit 10 话题作文
作文一(书信:给老师分享在线学习经历)
假设你是李华,疫情期间你在家上了一段时间的网课。请你给英语老师王老师写一封信,分享你的在线学习经历。内容包括:
说明你上网课的基本情况(每天上几节课、用什么设备等);
谈谈在线学习的优点和缺点(至少各1点);
表达你对返校上课的期待或对未来在线学习的建议。
写作要求:
文中需包含写作提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名;
词数:80—100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
一、教学目标
知识与技能: 学生能够运用“there be”和“it is + adj + for sb + to do sth”两个万能句型,完成一篇分享在线学习经历的作文。
过程与方法: 通过仿写、句型替换和框架搭建,掌握书信体的基本结构和写作要点。
情感态度: 培养学生面对学习方式变化时的适应能力,学会总结和反思自己的学习经历。
二、教学重点
掌握两个万能句型的用法,并能将其用于作文的开头(总起)和结尾(总结)。
能够灵活运用“there be”引出多个要点,并用“it is + adj+for sb.+to do sth”进行主题升华。
三、写作要点分析
第一段:用于开头回应或引出话题
句型一: I’m writing to share my experience of...
用法: 直接说明写信目的,引出主题。
示例:
I’m writing to share my online learning experience with you.
I’d like to tell you how I studied online during the pandemic.
句型二: I hope everything is going well with you.
用法: 书信开头的礼貌问候,自然引出下文。
示例:
I hope everything is going well with you.
I hope you are staying healthy and happy.
第二段:用于描述在线学习的基本情况、优点和缺点
句型三: Here is something about my online learning.
用法: 引出自己在线学习的情况,过渡自然。
示例:
Here is something about my online learning.
Let me tell you how I took online classes.
句型四: There be(用于总起,引出多个要点)
结构: There be + 名词 + 其他.
用法: 用来介绍“有哪些优点/缺点”,适合放在第二段引出下面要写的几点内容。
示例:
There are both good and bad things about online learning.
There are two main advantages of taking online classes.
句型五: 用于介绍优缺点(衔接词)
用法: 引出具体内容,First、Second、However、On the other hand等。
示例:
First, it saves time because I don’t have to travel to school.
On the other hand, it is hard to stay focused at home.
句型六: I have + 数字 + lessons every day.
用法: 说明每天上课的数量。
示例:
I have five online lessons every day.
I take four classes a day, each lasting 40 minutes.
句型七: The advantages include... and the disadvantages include...
用法: 清晰列出优点和缺点。
示例:
The advantages include saving time and learning at my own pace.
The disadvantages include eye strain and less interaction with classmates.
第三段:用于结尾表达期待或建议
句型八: I can’t wait to...
用法: 表达对返校上课的期待。
示例:
I can’t wait to go back to school and see everyone again.
I am looking forward to learning with you in the classroom.
句型九: It is + adj + for us + to do sth
用法: 总结在线学习的建议或感悟。
示例:
It is important for us to take care of our eyes during online learning.
It is helpful to make a daily study plan at home.
句型十: I hope that...
用法: 结尾表达期望或建议。
示例:
I hope we can combine online and offline learning in the future.
I hope my experience can help other students.
四、范文示例
Dear Ms. Wang,
I hope everything is going well with you. I’m writing to share my online learning experience during the pandemic.
I have four online lessons every day. I use my computer to take the classes and do my homework on my phone. There are both good and bad things about online learning. First, it saves time because I don’t need to travel to school. Second, I can watch the videos again if I don’t understand something. However, it is hard to stay focused at home, and my eyes get tired easily after looking at the screen for a long time.
I can’t wait to go back to school and learn with you in the classroom. It is important for us to find a balance between online and offline learning.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
作文二(倡议书:呼吁合理进行在线学习)
假设你是学校学生会成员,很多同学在上网课时出现注意力不集中、眼睛疲劳、沉迷网络等问题。请你以学生会的名义写一份英文倡议书,呼吁同学们合理进行在线学习。内容包括:
指出在线学习中常见的问题(至少2点,如不专心、眼睛累、熬夜等);
说明合理在线学习的重要性(对学习效果和健康的影响);
提出具体建议(至少2条),呼吁大家养成良好的在线学习习惯。
写作要求:
文中需包含写作提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名;
词数:80—100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
五、倡议书写作要点分析
第一段:用于指出问题
句型一: Nowadays, many students have problems with online learning.
用法: 开门见山指出问题。
示例:
Nowadays, many students have problems with online learning.
Some students find it hard to stay focused during online classes.
句型二: There be(用于总起,引出多个问题)
用法: 介绍存在的具体问题。
示例:
There are two common problems with online learning.
There is a growing concern about eye strain and lack of concentration.
第二段:用于说明重要性
句型三: It is + adj + for us + to do sth
用法: 说明合理在线学习的重要性。
示例:
It is important for us to develop good online learning habits.
It is necessary to take care of our health while learning online.
句型四: If we don’t..., we will...
用法: 说明不良习惯的后果。
示例:
If we don’t pay attention in class, we will fall behind.
If we stare at the screen too long, our eyes will get hurt.
第三段:用于提出建议和呼吁
句型五: Here are some suggestions for you.
用法: 引出具体建议。
示例:
Here are some suggestions for you.
Let me offer some advice on how to learn online wisely.
句型六: First,... Second,... Third,...
用法: 分条列出建议。
示例:
First, take a 5-minute break every 30 minutes. Second, keep your phone away during class. Third, go to bed on time.
句型七: Let’s...
用法: 发出呼吁。
示例:
Let’s develop good online learning habits together.
Let’s make online learning fun and healthy.
六、倡议书范文示例
Dear fellow students,
Nowadays, many students have problems with online learning. There are two common problems. First, some students can’t stay focused during class. Second, many students feel tired because they look at the screen for too long.
It is important for us to develop good online learning habits. If we don’t pay attention in class, we will fall behind. If we don’t rest our eyes, our health will be affected.
Here are some suggestions for you. First, take a 5-minute break every 30 minutes. Second, turn off your phone while having class. Third, make a daily study plan and follow it. Let’s develop good online learning habits together!
The Students’ Union
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